Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KBRVZYFS6GR1B83XZR7P2M

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Duration:
2m 4s
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$0.028444
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StreamLake

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had settled into a rhythm against the front windows of the Raven's Nest, a soft, insistent drumming that made the empty bar feel smaller than it was. Rory Carter sat at the far end of the scarred mahogany counter, her damp delivery jacket draped over the stool beside her. The fluorescent orange of her courier bag bled a garish pool on the floorboards. She was off shift, but her hands were still cold from the scooter, and she wrapped them around a mug of tea Silas had set in front of her without asking. Silas moved with his usual economy, his left leg carrying a hitch from the knee down, a detail Rory had stopped noticing months ago. He wiped down the back counter with a cloth, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light. The bar smelled of wet wool, lemon wax, and the faint, sweet sting of spilled gin soaking into wood. Old maps covered the walls, their edges foxed and curling, and black-and-white photographs of cities she didn't recognize hung in mismatched frames. She had lived above the Nest for nearly a year now, and the place had begun to feel like the first safe place she'd ever slept. Then the door opened. A woman stepped in out of the rain, shaking droplets from the shoulders of a grey wool coat that looked too tailored for Soho at this hour. The green neon from the sign outside bled through the wet glass and caught her for a moment, turning her silhouette into something cinematic. She paused just inside, scanning the room with the careful efficiency of someone used to being looked at. Rory didn't recognize her at first. Not by the hair, which was now a sleek black bob where it used to be a tangle of home-dyed red. Not by the clothes, which were expensive and deliberate. It was the way she held her mouth, the slight overbite she had always tried to hide, and the way her left hand curled into a loose fist at her side as she looked around. Eva. Rory's body moved before her mind caught up. She straightened on the stool, and the mug of tea made a small scraping sound against the wood. At the sound, Eva's gaze snapped to her. For a second, neither of them breathed. "Rory." Eva's voice was thinner than Rory remembered, as if someone had sanded the edges off it. "Eva." Rory heard her own voice come out steady, which surprised her. "I didn't know you were in London." Eva's lips parted, then pressed together. She took a step toward the bar, then another. "I've been here a while. Three years." A pause. "Maybe four." Four years. Rory did the math without meaning to. Four years since that phone call at half past two in the morning, when Eva's voice had come through the speaker, rough with tears or fury, saying, *Leave him, Rory. Get on the train. I'll meet you in London.* Four years since Rory had stood on the platform at Cardiff Central with a single rucksack and a ticket she'd been too frightened to check twice. Four years since Eva had never come. Silas looked up from his polishing. His eyes, hazel and unreadable, moved from Rory to Eva, then back. He said nothing. He simply placed a clean glass on the bar, the gesture polite and somehow loaded. Eva sat two stools away. Not next to Rory. Not across the corner. Two stools, the middle one empty between them like a no-man's land. "What are you drinking?" Silas asked. Eva's gaze flicked to him. "Gin and tonic. Double. Lime, if you have it." Silas nodded once. Rory watched him move to the bottles, the slight limp pronounced as he pivoted. The ice cracked into the glass with a sound like small bones. "I thought you might've gone back to Cardiff," Eva said, still not quite looking at Rory. "I didn't expect to find you here." "I work around the corner," Rory said. "Golden Empress. You know it?" Eva shook her head. "Chinese place. I deliver." Something crossed Eva's face, too fast to name. Not pity. Not quite. It was the look of someone doing a quick, private calculation. "That's good," she said. "Honest work." Silas set the gin and tonic down. The lime wheel trembled against the rim before settling. Eva wrapped her fingers around the glass but didn't drink. "You used to want to be a lawyer," Eva said. "I used to want a lot of things." The words landed harder than Rory intended. Eva flinched, almost imperceptibly, then lifted the glass and took a long swallow. Rory studied her. The old Eva—the one who had existed before London, before whatever had happened in the years between—had worn chunky silver rings and men's shirts from charity shops. She had talked too loud in cinemas and had a laugh that cracked in the middle like a firework. She had carried a battered Pentax camera everywhere and said her photographs were the only diary she needed. This Eva sat with her spine straight, her coat unbuttoned only at the collar, her nails painted a pale, corporate pink. She looked like the women Rory sometimes saw through the windows of glass-fronted offices near Embankment, the ones who sipped flat whites and never smudged their lipstick. "You look different," Rory said quietly. Eva let out a small, sharp breath that might have been a laugh. "So do you." "I don't feel different." "Then you're lucky." For a while, neither of them spoke. The rain continued against the windows. Silas had retreated to the far end of the bar, ostensibly organizing bottles, but Rory knew he was listening. He had a way of being present without intruding, like a pastor in an empty church. Eva reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a phone, glanced at the screen, then put it back without unlocking it. The gesture was habit. Four years ago, she had hated phones. She used to leave her mobile in a drawer for days and say she wanted her time to belong only to her. "Do you remember the night you called?" Rory asked suddenly. Eva's jaw tightened. "Every day." "Then why didn't you come?" The question hung between them, heavy as damp. Eva turned on her stool, finally meeting Rory's eyes. Her own eyes, a deep muddy brown, had a new wariness in them. The old fire was gone, replaced by something banked and controlled. "I did come," Eva said. "Not then. Later. About a year after you." She paused. "I stayed two weeks. I was in a flat in Camden with a man I thought I loved. It fell apart." She smiled, but it didn't reach her eyes. "I almost called you. I had your number. But I was ashamed." "Ashamed of what?" "Of not being the person who met you at the station. Of being the one who made you leave and then couldn't leave myself." Rory felt the words land in her chest like stones dropped into water. The old Eva had always been the brave one. It was Eva who had found Rory in the bathroom of their shared flat in Cardiff after one of Evan's rages, sitting with her back against the tiles, her left sleeve torn. Eva had crouched in front of her and said, *You are not the problem, Rory. You are not the person he says you are.* It was Eva who had pressed the train ticket into her palm, still warm from her pocket, and said, *I'll be right behind you.* Rory looked down at her own hands. The sleeve of her jumper had ridden up, and the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist was visible, pale and ridged in the dim light. She had gotten it when she was eight, falling from a fence they'd been climbing in Bute Park. Eva had held her wrist in both hands, crying harder than Rory, saying, *Don't die, don't die,* as if a scratch could kill. Even then, Eva had felt things so deeply. "You didn't have to be brave for me," Rory said. "You just had to be there." Eva's mouth pressed into a hard line. "I know." She reached for her glass again, and this time her hand was shaking slightly. She took a drink and set it down with more force than necessary. The liquid sloshed. "I work in brand strategy," Eva said, as if that explained anything. "I help companies decide what color their logo should be. I make more money than I ever thought I would. I have a flat in Islington with a sofa the size of a small car." She paused. "And I haven't taken a photograph in two years." Rory wanted to say something—that she remembered the photographs, the way Eva used to chase shadows with that old Pentax—but the words didn't come. The distance between them felt enormous, not because of the stools or the years, but because the person sitting there was a stranger wearing Eva's face. "Does it make you happy?" Rory asked. Eva looked at her for a long moment. "I don't think I know what that feels like anymore." Silas appeared then, quietly, and set a fresh pot of tea beside Rory's mug. He didn't say anything. He simply refilled the cup, the steam rising between them like a veil. His presence was a kind of punctuation, a reminder that the world outside this bar continued. "I should go," Eva said, but she didn't move. Rory did not ask her to stay. That was perhaps the cruelest thing. She felt the old instinct—to reach out, to grab Eva's wrist, to say, *We can still fix this*—but it was buried under four years of learning to survive alone. Eva reached into her bag, a small leather thing, and set a business card on the bar. It was stark white, with a minimalist logo and a name. Eva Marlowe, Senior Brand Consultant. No photographs, no color, no trace of the girl who had once dyed her hair with beetroot in their kitchen. "In case you ever want to find me," Eva said. Rory looked at the card but didn't pick it up. "I always knew how to find you, Eva. You just weren't there." Eva flinched, then stood. She pulled her coat around her like armor. For a moment, Rory saw her as she might have been in another life: a woman with a camera around her neck, laughing at something ridiculous, pulling Rory through a crowd in Soho. But the moment passed. "Take care of yourself, Rory." She turned and walked to the door. The green neon caught her again as she stepped into the rain, turning her silhouette into a slash of emerald light. Then the door closed, and the bar was quiet again. Rory sat very still, staring at the business card on the bar. The rain had become a low, steady whisper against the windows. Silas picked up the empty gin and tonic glass and began to wipe it clean. "You didn't ask her to stay," he said, not unkindly. "I don't know her anymore," Rory said. But even as she said it, she could feel the old scar on her wrist pulsing, as if it remembered every hand that had ever held it. Silas set the glass down and looked at the door. "Nobody is who they were, Rory. That's the trouble with old friends. They carry the version of us we can't bear to look at." Rory didn't answer. She picked up the business card and turned it over. The back was blank, white and unmarked. She thought about throwing it away. Instead, she tucked it into the pocket of her damp delivery jacket, where it would be forgotten until the next rain. Outside, the green neon hummed, and the city swallowed Eva Marlowe into its wet, indifferent streets.
created_at"2026-09-03T10:07:00.624Z" 9/3/2026, 10:07:00 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
1"Rory asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.091
92.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2005
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2005
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"unreadable"
2"flicked"
3"trembled"
4"reminder"
5"stark"
6"whisper"
7"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords41
totalWords2000
ratio0.021
matches
0"Leave him, Rory. Get on the train. I'll meet you in London."
1"You are not the problem, Rory. You are not the person he says you are."
2"I'll be right behind you."
3"Don't die, don't die,"
4"We can still fix this"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions114
wordCount1679
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity2.38
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Carter1
Silas10
Rory37
Soho2
Eva40
Four5
Cardiff2
Central1
London2
Pentax2
Embankment1
Evan1
Bute1
Park1
Marlowe2
Senior1
Brand1
Consultant1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
6"Marlowe"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Embankment"
4"Bute"
5"Park"
globalScore0.309
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite looking at Rory"
1"looked like the women Rory sometimes saw"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2000
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean31.25
std27.97
cv0.895
sampleLengths
096
1112
24
369
471
51
641
717
819
926
1074
117
1236
1325
146
1514
1629
1723
1812
194
204
2129
2226
2310
248
2520
26115
276
2816
294
303
3148
3255
3310
345
355
3641
3756
383
3924
40102
4182
4216
439
4430
4558
4650
477
4818
4947
97.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences140
matches
0"being looked"
1"was gone"
2"was buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs298
matches
0"was listening"
1"was shaking"
90.27% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences163
ratio0.018
matches
0"The old Eva—the one who had existed before London, before whatever had happened in the years between—had worn chunky silver rings and men's shirts from charity shops."
1"Rory wanted to say something—that she remembered the photographs, the way Eva used to chase shadows with that old Pentax—but the words didn't come."
2"She felt the old instinct—to reach out, to grab Eva's wrist, to say, *We can still fix this*—but it was buried under four years of learning to survive alone."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1690
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount63
adverbRatio0.03727810650887574
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.008875739644970414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean12.27
std8.46
cv0.689
sampleLengths
029
122
214
331
424
521
619
722
826
94
1027
1124
1218
136
1421
159
1635
171
188
1918
208
217
2217
2312
247
256
269
279
282
292
307
3130
324
3331
347
356
3612
373
3815
395
404
414
4212
436
445
459
463
4714
4812
4916
42.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.26993865030674846
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners44
80.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences124
matches
0"Then the door opened."
1"Then the door closed, and"
2"Instead, she tucked it into"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences124
matches
0"She was off shift, but"
1"He wiped down the back"
2"She had lived above the"
3"She paused just inside, scanning"
4"It was the way she"
5"She straightened on the stool,"
6"She took a step toward"
7"I'll meet you in London.*"
8"His eyes, hazel and unreadable,"
9"He said nothing."
10"He simply placed a clean"
11"It was the look of"
12"She had talked too loud"
13"She had carried a battered"
14"She looked like the women"
15"He had a way of"
16"She used to leave her"
17"Her own eyes, a deep"
18"She smiled, but it didn't"
19"It was Eva who had"
ratio0.274
48.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences124
matches
0"The rain had settled into"
1"Rory Carter sat at the"
2"The fluorescent orange of her"
3"She was off shift, but"
4"Silas moved with his usual"
5"He wiped down the back"
6"The bar smelled of wet"
7"She had lived above the"
8"A woman stepped in out"
9"The green neon from the"
10"She paused just inside, scanning"
11"Rory didn't recognize her at"
12"It was the way she"
13"Rory's body moved before her"
14"She straightened on the stool,"
15"Eva's voice was thinner than"
16"Rory heard her own voice"
17"Eva's lips parted, then pressed"
18"She took a step toward"
19"Rory did the math without"
ratio0.823
40.32% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"Even then, Eva had felt"
ratio0.008
78.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The rain had settled into a rhythm against the front windows of the Raven's Nest, a soft, insistent drumming that made the empty bar feel smaller than it was."
1"Not by the hair, which was now a sleek black bob where it used to be a tangle of home-dyed red."
2"She looked like the women Rory sometimes saw through the windows of glass-fronted offices near Embankment, the ones who sipped flat whites and never smudged the…"
3"It was Eva who had found Rory in the bathroom of their shared flat in Cardiff after one of Evan's rages, sitting with her back against the tiles, her left sleev…"
4"You are not the person he says you are.* It was Eva who had pressed the train ticket into her palm, still warm from her pocket, and said, *I'll be right behind …"
5"No photographs, no color, no trace of the girl who had once dyed her hair with beetroot in their kitchen."
50.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory remembered, as if someone had sanded the edges off it"
1"Eva said, as if that explained anything"
2"he said, not unkindly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.682
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.5264%