| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1496 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1496 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "sentinels" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "predator" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1486 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A deer, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1469 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Queens | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | South | 2 | | Circular | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | October | 1 | | Don | 3 | | Rory | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Queens" | | 1 | "Road" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed closer their roots humping up through the earth in patterns she didn’t remember" | | 1 | "felt like her sternum had cracked" |
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| 65.41% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.346 | | wordCount | 1486 | | matches | | 0 | "not the damp green rot of autumn, but something floral" | | 1 | "not panic but certainty" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 53.07 | | std | 37.39 | | cv | 0.705 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 125 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 94 | | 5 | 121 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 70 | | 9 | 121 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 89 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 88 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 93 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 70 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 64 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 25 |
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| 92.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "been chained" | | 1 | "been touched" | | 2 | "was pressed" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 229 | | matches | | 0 | "was calling" | | 1 | "wasn’t looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "The sensible part of her—the part that had passed her pre-law exams and learned to read a room before the shouting started—told her that walking alone into a dark park was not a decision a rational woman made." | | 1 | "The park at night should have been full of noise—foxes, owls, the far-off grind of the South Circular." | | 2 | "No signal, which wasn’t unusual this far into the park, but the screen’s clock flickered—11:47, then 11:12, then 3:08—before settling on 11:58." | | 3 | "Tonight it had dragged her across London, the heat of it rising until she’d found herself here, at the boundary of a place she’d only ever heard about in drunk stories from Eva—whispered tales of standing stones and shifted time and things that wore beautiful faces over hungry mouths." | | 4 | "It smelled sweet—not the damp green rot of autumn, but something floral and cloying, like a garden in high summer." | | 5 | "It was tall, too tall—a pale shape sliding between two oaks at the very edge of her sight, there one second and gone the next, leaving only the faint sway of a branch that hadn’t been touched." | | 6 | "But behind the beam, in the darkness just beyond its edge, something shifted again—closer now, at the edge of the standing stones she hadn’t realized she’d reached." | | 7 | "It didn’t speak words at first—just a sound, low and musical, like wind moving through reeds, except there was no wind." | | 8 | "But the grass just inside the ring was pressed down in a pattern that had not been there a moment before—a wide, flattened oval, as if a body had been lying there, listening to her heartbeat, and had only just risen." |
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| 99.57% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1482 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.04048582995951417 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008771929824561403 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 13.04 | | std | 10.31 | | cv | 0.791 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 41.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.30701754385964913 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Even her own footsteps sounded" | | 1 | "Then she’d begun to notice" | | 2 | "Just the dark and the" | | 3 | "Then it shaped her name" | | 4 | "Somewhere far behind her, beyond" | | 5 | "Instead she backed away one" |
| | ratio | 0.061 | |
| 93.47% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She could still turn back." | | 1 | "She slipped through a gap" | | 2 | "She pulled out her phone." | | 3 | "She locked it and shoved" | | 4 | "She had come because she" | | 5 | "She watched for a long" | | 6 | "She was the intruder." | | 7 | "She walked on." | | 8 | "It smelled sweet—not the damp" | | 9 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 10 | "It was warmer now, almost" | | 11 | "She should not be here." | | 12 | "She straightened, turning back toward" | | 13 | "It wasn’t a deer." | | 14 | "It was tall, too tall—a" | | 15 | "She forced herself to face" | | 16 | "She turned to walk back" | | 17 | "She dug the toe of" | | 18 | "she whispered, and the silence" | | 19 | "She pulled out her phone" |
| | ratio | 0.316 | |
| 92.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The last bus had gone," | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pulled her jacket" | | 2 | "She could still turn back." | | 3 | "The sensible part of her—the" | | 4 | "She slipped through a gap" | | 5 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 6 | "The open grassland that by" | | 7 | "Rory stopped and listened." | | 8 | "That was the first wrong" | | 9 | "The park at night should" | | 10 | "She pulled out her phone." | | 11 | "She locked it and shoved" | | 12 | "The pendant pulsed again, stronger," | | 13 | "She had come because she" | | 14 | "Some unknown benefactor had sent" | | 15 | "Tonight it had dragged her" | | 16 | "Rory walked toward it, keeping" | | 17 | "The first sound came from" | | 18 | "A rustle, low and deliberate," | | 19 | "Rory turned her head slowly." |
| | ratio | 0.735 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 25.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The sensible part of her—the part that had passed her pre-law exams and learned to read a room before the shouting started—told her that walking alone into a da…" | | 1 | "But the pendant under her shirt had been pulsing all evening, a low, steady warmth against her sternum, as if something beneath the city had woken and was calli…" | | 2 | "No signal, which wasn’t unusual this far into the park, but the screen’s clock flickered—11:47, then 11:12, then 3:08—before settling on 11:58." | | 3 | "Tonight it had dragged her across London, the heat of it rising until she’d found herself here, at the boundary of a place she’d only ever heard about in drunk …" | | 4 | "A rustle, low and deliberate, as if something had taken a single step through the undergrowth and then stopped when she did." | | 5 | "Rory crouched and ran her fingers over a cluster of pale blooms beside the path, and the petals were wet and cool and alive, blooming as if the season had forgo…" | | 6 | "It was tall, too tall—a pale shape sliding between two oaks at the very edge of her sight, there one second and gone the next, leaving only the faint sway of a …" | | 7 | "The oak sentinels rose from the mist, huge and rough-barked, arranged in a ring that felt older than the park, older than the city, older than the human habit o…" | | 8 | "But the grass just inside the ring was pressed down in a pattern that had not been there a moment before—a wide, flattened oval, as if a body had been lying the…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, and the silence swallowed the word before it left her lips" | | 1 | "the voice whispered, not unkindly" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |