Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KCNM54G6X5CFQ2C09PJ888

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Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.026974
Provider:
BaseTen

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of old varnish and spilled stout, a smell Rory had come to associate with the hour before the after-work crowd. She sat at the far end of the bar, her back to the wall of black-and-white photographs, and turned a pint glass in slow circles on the wood. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a wineglass with a cloth that had seen better days. The green neon from the sign outside bled through the front window and caught the edge of his signet ring. Rory had finished her last delivery for Golden Empress an hour ago, and the grease from the takeaway bags still clung to her fingertips. She’d washed her hands twice, but the smell of fried rice lingered. She didn’t mind. It was better than the smell of law books. The door opened, letting in a slice of Soho street noise and a gust of damp air. Rory didn’t look up. She heard heels on the floorboards—sharp, deliberate—and then a voice she hadn’t heard in four years. “Rory?” The pint glass stopped turning. Eva stood just inside the door, one hand still on the handle, her coat beaded with rain. She looked different. Not in the way people look different after a haircut or a new job, but in the way a house looks different after the furniture has been rearranged—same bones, new angles. Her hair was shorter, cropped close to her skull, and she wore a grey wool coat that fit her like it had been made for her. Her face was thinner, the softness around her jaw gone. But her eyes were the same: dark, quick, always a little too observant. Rory’s throat tightened. “Eva.” For a moment neither of them moved. Silas set the wineglass down with a soft clink and glanced between them, his expression unreadable. Eva crossed the room in three strides and stopped two feet from Rory’s stool. She smelled of rain and something floral, expensive. “I didn’t know you were in London,” she said, and there was a question buried in it, a small hurt. Rory forced a smile. “I didn’t know you were either.” “I’m here for work. A conference.” Eva’s gaze flicked to Rory’s hands, to the worn cuffs of her jacket, to the half-empty pint. “You look well.” It was a lie, and they both knew it. Rory looked like someone who’d been running on cheap noodles and late shifts. But she said, “So do you.” Silas cleared his throat. “Can I get you something?” His voice was low, even, the kind of voice that didn’t ask for more than it needed. Eva glanced at him, then back at Rory. “Whatever she’s having.” Silas poured a pint of the same bitter and set it in front of the stool beside Rory. Eva sat, unbuttoned her coat but didn’t take it off, and wrapped both hands around the glass. The silence stretched. Rory could feel the weight of all the unanswered messages, the missed calls, the birthday texts she’d left on read. She’d told herself it was easier that way—cleaner. But sitting next to Eva, she felt the lie of it. “You stopped calling,” Eva said quietly, not looking at her. Rory stared at the bar. “I know.” “Why?” The question was simple, but it opened a door Rory had nailed shut. She took a sip of her beer, let the bitterness coat her tongue. “I didn’t know what to say.” Eva let out a breath that wasn’t quite a laugh. “You could have said anything. ‘I’m alive.’ ‘I’m okay.’ ‘Leave me alone.’ Anything.” Rory turned to face her. “I wasn’t okay.” Eva’s eyes softened, but only a fraction. “I figured that out when you stopped answering. I called your mum. She said you’d moved. Didn’t know where.” Rory’s chest ached. Her mother. She hadn’t spoken to her in months either. The guilt was a familiar weight, like a stone in her pocket. “I’m sorry,” Rory said, and the words felt inadequate, too small for the years between them. Eva shook her head. “Don’t. I didn’t come here to make you apologize.” She took a long drink of her beer, then set the glass down with a little too much force. “I came here to get out of the rain. I didn’t know you’d be here.” The bar was quiet. Silas had moved to the other end, pretending to sort bottles, but Rory knew he was listening. He always listened. “How did you find this place?” Rory asked, trying to shift the ground. Eva shrugged. “I was walking. Saw the green sign. It looked like the kind of place where no one would bother me.” She paused. “And then I saw you.” Rory almost smiled. “The Raven’s Nest. It’s Silas’s place.” She nodded toward the bar owner. “I live upstairs.” Eva’s eyebrows lifted. “You live above a bar?” “It’s cheap.” “You were going to be a barrister.” The words landed like a slap. Rory flinched. “That was a long time ago.” “Four years isn’t that long.” “It is when you’re the one living them.” Eva’s jaw tightened. She looked away, toward the wall of old maps, and Rory saw the muscle in her cheek twitch. “I thought you’d be in a courtroom by now. Or at least a law office. Something with a desk and a salary.” Rory laughed, but there was no humor in it. “I deliver Chinese food on a bicycle.” Eva turned back, and for the first time, her expression cracked. Not with pity, but with something closer to grief. “Rory.” “Don’t.” Rory held up a hand. “Don’t look at me like that. I’m fine. I have a job. I have a place to sleep. I’m not with Evan anymore. That’s what matters.” Eva’s face went still at the name. “He’s still in Cardiff. Last I heard.” “I don’t care where he is.” “You should. He asked about you.” Rory’s blood went cold. “What?” “Last year. I ran into him at a pub. He asked if I’d heard from you. Said he wanted to apologize.” Rory’s grip tightened on her glass. “He can apologize to the wall.” Eva nodded slowly. “I told him I didn’t know where you were. I didn’t tell him about London.” “Thank you.” There was a pause. Silas moved back toward them, refilled Rory’s glass without being asked, and gave Eva a long, assessing look. “You’ll be wanting food, I expect. The kitchen’s not open, but I can heat up some soup.” Eva blinked. “No, thank you. I should go soon.” Silas nodded and retreated, but not before catching Rory’s eye. His message was clear: you’re safe here. Rory turned back to Eva. “Why are you really here, Eva? In London, I mean. You hate London.” Eva’s mouth quirked. “I don’t hate it. I just never saw the appeal.” She paused. “I’m here for a legal conference. I work for a firm in Cardiff now. Corporate law.” Rory felt the irony like a blade. Eva, who had never wanted to be a lawyer, who had studied art history and talked about opening a gallery, was now the one in a grey wool coat attending legal conferences. And Rory, who had been pushed toward law since she could hold a pen, was delivering noodles. “You’re a solicitor,” Rory said, not quite a question. “Junior associate. It’s not glamorous. Lots of paperwork.” Eva’s voice was flat, rehearsed. “But it pays the bills.” “Do you like it?” Eva hesitated. “I’m good at it.” “That’s not the same thing.” “No. It isn’t.” They sat in silence for a moment. The rain had picked up outside, tapping against the window. The green neon buzzed faintly, a low electric hum beneath the sound of the storm. Rory thought about the last time she’d seen Eva. It was the night she’d left Cardiff. Eva had driven her to the train station at two in the morning, had pressed a hundred pounds into her hand and told her to call when she got to London. Rory had promised she would. She’d called once, from a payphone at Paddington, and then never again. “I should have called more,” Rory said. Eva didn’t look at her. “Yes.” “I was ashamed.” “Of what?” “Of this.” Rory gestured at the bar, at herself, at the life she’d cobbled together from tips and borrowed time. “I didn’t want you to see what I’d become.” Eva turned then, and her eyes were bright, not with tears but with anger. “What you became? You survived, Rory. You got out. That’s not something to be ashamed of.” “Then why does it feel like I failed?” “Because you were supposed to be the one who made it.” Eva’s voice cracked. “You were the smart one. The one with the plan. And then you disappeared, and I had to become the one with the plan, and I hate it.” Rory stared at her. “Eva—” “I don’t want to be a solicitor. I wanted to paint. I wanted to travel. But someone had to stay and be the responsible one, and after you left, it was me.” Eva’s hands were shaking. She pulled them into her lap. “I’m not blaming you. I’m just saying, you’re not the only one who changed.” The words hung in the air, heavy and raw. Rory felt the stone in her pocket grow heavier. “I didn’t know,” she whispered. “How could you? You weren’t there.” The accusation was soft, but it cut deep. Rory looked down at her hands, at the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident, a scar Eva had been there for, had helped bandage with a pink plaster. They’d been eight years old, sitting on the curb outside Rory’s house, and Eva had said, “You’ll always have that scar, but it’ll fade.” She’d been right about the fading. Not about the always. “I’m here now,” Rory said. Eva let out a shaky breath. “For how long?” Rory didn’t have an answer. She didn’t know how to promise anything anymore. But she reached out and covered Eva’s hand with her own. Eva’s skin was cold from the rain. “Stay for a while,” Rory said. “Let Silas heat up that soup. It’s not good, but it’s warm.” Eva laughed, a real laugh this time, small and surprised. “You always did know how to sell a meal.” “Golden Empress delivery girl. It’s a skill.” Eva shook her head, but she didn’t pull her hand away. “Fine. But only if you tell me everything. Every stupid detail. The bicycle. The flat. The boss with the restaurant.” Rory smiled, and for the first time in years, it felt almost natural. “Deal.” Silas appeared at the end of the bar, a bowl of soup already steaming in his hands. He set it down in front of Eva without a word, then gave Rory a look that said, I’ll be in the back if you need me. He moved with the slight limp Rory had long stopped noticing, the old knee injury that gave his steps a careful rhythm. Eva picked up the spoon, then paused. “Rory?” “Yeah?” “I’m glad I found you.” Rory looked at her old friend, at the new angles of her face and the old warmth in her eyes, and felt the stone in her pocket shift, just a little. “Me too,” she said. And for a while, the rain fell, and the green neon hummed, and the two of them sat at the bar and began the slow, painful work of remembering who they used to be.
created_at"2026-09-03T10:22:42.867Z" 9/3/2026, 10:22:42 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.253
leniency0.506
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.024
94.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1935
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1935
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"flicked"
2"silence"
3"could feel"
4"weight"
5"familiar"
6"electric"
7"warmth"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"let out a breath"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
1"let out a breath"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences127
matches
0"t with pity"
1"t with anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences127
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1931
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions100
wordCount1317
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory46
Golden1
Empress1
Soho1
Silas8
Eva38
Cardiff1
London1
Paddington1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Paddington"
globalScore0
windowScore0
59.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like someone who’d been running on"
1"quite a laugh"
2"not quite a question"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords2.589
wordCount1931
matches
0"Not in the way people look different after a haircut or a new job, but in the way a house looks different after the furniture has b"
1"Not with pity, but with something closer to grief"
2"not open, but I can heat up some soup"
3"not with tears but with anger"
4"not good, but it’s warm"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences187
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean21.22
std19.62
cv0.924
sampleLengths
088
148
237
31
45
5100
64
723
842
910
1026
1128
1226
1311
1438
1539
1610
177
181
1932
2023
218
2226
2325
2416
2547
2624
2713
2829
2918
308
312
327
3314
345
358
3643
3716
3821
3932
4014
416
426
435
4421
4512
4618
472
4839
499
94.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences127
matches
0"been rearranged"
1"been made"
2"being asked"
3"been pushed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs233
matches
0"was listening"
1"was delivering"
2"were shaking"
97.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences187
ratio0.016
matches
0"She heard heels on the floorboards—sharp, deliberate—and then a voice she hadn’t heard in four years."
1"Not in the way people look different after a haircut or a new job, but in the way a house looks different after the furniture has been rearranged—same bones, new angles."
2"She’d told herself it was easier that way—cleaner."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1326
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03092006033182504
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0030165912518853697
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean10.33
std8.03
cv0.778
sampleLengths
024
128
216
320
424
512
63
79
817
94
1016
111
125
1317
143
1531
1626
1710
1813
193
201
217
2216
2314
248
2520
264
276
2823
293
309
3113
326
334
3422
358
363
3718
3817
393
4020
418
4211
4310
445
452
461
4713
4813
496
45.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2192513368983957
totalSentences187
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences115
matches
0"She sat at the far"
1"She’d washed her hands twice,"
2"She didn’t mind."
3"It was better than the"
4"She heard heels on the"
5"She looked different."
6"Her hair was shorter, cropped"
7"Her face was thinner, the"
8"She smelled of rain and"
9"she said, and there was"
10"It was a lie, and"
11"His voice was low, even,"
12"She’d told herself it was"
13"She took a sip of"
14"She hadn’t spoken to her"
15"She took a long drink"
16"He always listened."
17"She nodded toward the bar"
18"She looked away, toward the"
19"His message was clear: you’re"
ratio0.243
7.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences115
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"She sat at the far"
2"Silas stood behind the bar,"
3"The green neon from the"
4"Rory had finished her last"
5"She’d washed her hands twice,"
6"She didn’t mind."
7"It was better than the"
8"The door opened, letting in"
9"Rory didn’t look up."
10"She heard heels on the"
11"The pint glass stopped turning."
12"Eva stood just inside the"
13"She looked different."
14"Her hair was shorter, cropped"
15"Her face was thinner, the"
16"Rory’s throat tightened."
17"Silas set the wineglass down"
18"Eva crossed the room in"
19"She smelled of rain and"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.27% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a wineglass with a cloth that had seen better days."
1"Eva, who had never wanted to be a lawyer, who had studied art history and talked about opening a gallery, was now the one in a grey wool coat attending legal co…"
2"He moved with the slight limp Rory had long stopped noticing, the old knee injury that gave his steps a careful rhythm."
29.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Eva said quietly, not looking at her"
1"Rory said, and the words felt inadequate, too small for the years between them"
2"Rory asked, trying to shift the ground"
3"Rory said, not quite a question"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.265
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.024
75.3371%