Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRKAK6BGTKFN6H30KFY40Z

Run Details

Duration:
20.5s
Cost:
$0.012748
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had washed the grit of Greek Street into the gutters, leaving the tarmac slick and reflective under the green neon sign above the door. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air smelled of damp wool, lemon oil, and the sharp, medicinal tang of rye. Silas was at the far end of the bar, working a linen cloth around the rim of a tumbler. His silver signet ring clicked against the glass, a rhythmic, solitary sound that kept time with the muffled rattle of the Northern line running deep beneath the floorboards. Aurora sat on the low stool by the service hatch, her shift at Golden Empress still clinging to her in a faint mist of sesame oil and cold rain. She had tucked her straight black hair behind her ears, exposing the sharp angle of her jaw and the collar of an oversized knit sweater she had bought for three pounds in a charity shop off Charing Cross Road. On her lap, her left thumb traced the faint, crescent-shaped ridge on her wrist—a white seam from an eight-year-old tumble over a low stone wall in Cathays. A lifetime ago, in another country. The brass bell above the heavy timber door gave a single, hollow strike. Rory did not look up immediately. In Soho, after eight on a Tuesday, the bell usually meant a theatregoer looking for a gin before curtain or an off-duty kitchen hand seeking refuge from the heat of Chinatown. But the footsteps were wrong. They were heavy, deliberate, and hesitant, the leather soles squeaking awkwardly against the uneven floorboards. "Just a half of the bitter, please," a voice said. The accent caught her between the ribs. It was soft around the vowels, pitched with the subtle, musical cadence of South Wales—not the rough lilt of the Valleys, but the scrubbed, polite enunciation of a boy who had grown up in Cyncoed and spent his adolescence wearing pressed blazers to debate tournaments. Rory turned her head. The man standing at the brass rail wore a charcoal overcoat that had never seen the inside of a delivery bag. His hair was damp and parted neatly on the side, just beginning to thin at the temples, and his leather briefcase was tucked securely beneath an elbow. He looked prosperous, slightly tired, and utterly foreign against the backdrop of Silas’s yellowed maritime maps and silver-gelatin prints of mid-century Vienna. "Thomas?" she said, the name slipping out before she could weigh the cost of speaking it. He paused, one hand already reaching inside his coat for a slim leather cardholder. He turned toward the dark corner where she sat, squinting against the dim amber bulbs that hung low over the mahogany. His brow furrowed, clearing slowly as his eyes tracked from the line of her shoulder to the startling, cold blue of her eyes. "Aurora?" The sound of her full name in that room felt like a dropped glass. Silas did not look up from the glass he was drying, but his thumb paused for a fraction of a second against the base. Rory felt the old reflex tighten her shoulder blades, the instinct to calculate exits, distances, and cover. "It’s Rory now," she said quietly. "Has been for a while." Thomas Wynne stared at her, his lips parting slightly. He looked around the narrow, low-ceilinged room as if expecting to find the rest of a stage set, or perhaps a group of people who would explain the joke. "Rory," he repeated, testing it. "Good God. Look at you." He didn't mean it as an insult, but the assessment was there in the dip of his chin. She saw what he saw: the five-foot-six girl who had once stood beside him in the mock courtrooms of Cardiff University, who used to wear tailored skirts and argue statutory interpretation with ruthless, cool precision, now sitting in the shadows of a back-alley drinking hole with grease on the hem of her sleeve and a smear of dark liner smudged beneath one eye. "You look well, Thomas," she lied gently. He looked thirty-five, though she knew he was only twenty-six. There was an early settling in his jowls, the faint gray cast of someone who spent fourteen hours a day under fluorescent tubes in the Temple. "I’m in town for a hearing," he said, taking the stool two seats down, leaving a polite, cautious gulf between them. "Commercial division. Just down at the Rolls Building. I was looking for somewhere quiet to review a brief before dinner and... well. The green light caught my eye." "Silas makes a decent bitter," she said. Silas set the pint on a cardboard coaster with a quiet, measured thud. He caught Rory’s eye for half a beat—hazel eyes steady, unreadable—before giving Thomas a brief nod and moving down the bar with his rolling, slightly hitched gait, his left knee favoring the shift in weight. Thomas watched him go, then leaned an inch closer, lowering his voice to the conspiratorial register they had once used in the library stacks. "Aurora—Rory. Nobody knew where you went. Your father..." Rory’s hand tightened around her glass of soda water. "My father knows I’m in London." "Brendan spent six months telling everyone at the chambers you were taking a sabbatical in Bristol," Thomas said, his tone hovering between pity and the lingering resentment of the abandoned. "Then Jennifer stopped coming to the choir. It was awful, Rory. We all thought..." He stopped, swallowing the rest of the sentence. "We thought Evan had done something." The name dropped between them like lead. The air grew colder. Rory did not flinch; she had trained herself out of flinching three winters ago in a second-floor flat where the door locks had been taken off the hinges. "Evan didn't do anything I couldn't walk away from," she said, her voice flat, devoid of the drama he was clearly fishing for. "And Bristol was boring." Thomas took a long pull from his bitter. When he set the glass down, a small mustache of white foam clung to his upper lip, which he dabbed away with a pristine linen handkerchief. The gesture was so violently reminiscent of her father that a sudden, sour ache flared in the back of her throat. "You were the sharpest of us," Thomas said softly, looking down at his hands. "You remember that moot against Bristol in our second year? The maritime liability case? You found that obscure Privy Council precedent from 1922 and completely tore their lead counsel apart. Old Professor Vaughan said you had the finest legal mind he’d seen since the nineties." "I remember," she said. "We were supposed to pupil together," he said. There was no anger in it now, only the hollow weight of an old grief. "I’m at Crown Office Row now. Junior tenant. I have an office overlooking the gardens. Every time I draft a skeleton argument, I still think about how you used to cross out my adjectives in red ink." Rory looked at the black-and-white photograph framed behind the optics: a ruined street in post-war Berlin, stones piled like bones under a gray sky. She thought of the red ink. She thought of the pristine leather-bound volumes of the All England Law Reports lined up in her father’s study, smelling of calfskin and dry, unyielding expectation. She thought of the night she had packed one rucksack while Evan slept, leaving her degree certificates, her silver-nibbed fountain pen, and her winter coat in the wardrobe, stepping onto the 5:15 National Express coach to Victoria with forty pounds and Eva’s phone number scribbled on the inside of her wrist. "Do you ever miss it?" Thomas asked. "No," she said. He looked at her, searching her face for the girl who used to drink bitter shandies in the student union and talk about reforming the law of torts until dawn. He didn't find her. The girl sitting in front of him had eyes that were too bright, too steady, and a mouth that had learned to stay shut until it had something lethal to say. "You could have come back," he murmured. "After it ended with him. People would have understood." "That's the problem, Thomas," she said, offering him a faint, razor-thin smile that didn't reach her eyes. "They would have understood entirely too much. And they would have been so very kind about it." Thomas looked away, staring into the dark amber depths of his ale. The weight of his silence was familiar—it was the silence of good, respectable people when confronted with a mess that couldn't be filed under a neat statutory heading. He had his neat flat in Clerkenwell, his junior tenancy, his predictable progression toward silk in twenty years. He was safe. And he was looking at her as if she were a ghost who had chosen her own haunting. "I have to get to dinner," Thomas said after a long minute, checking a heavy gold watch that looked absurdly new on his wrist. "A solicitor from Cardiff is in town. At the Delaunay." "Give him my regards," Rory said. Thomas stood, buttoning his charcoal coat. He reached for his cardholder again, hesitated, and then slowly slid it back into his pocket, realizing the futility of leaving an embossed piece of card with a phone number she would never dial. "It was good to see you, Rory," he said, and the sadness in his voice was genuine, uncomplicated, and completely useless to her. "Take care of yourself, Thomas." The brass bell gave its hollow chime again, and the door swung shut behind him, cutting off the draft of cold rain. Silence settled back over the room. Silas limped down the duckboards behind the bar, picked up Thomas’s half-empty glass, and poured it down the drain. He ran the tap, wiped the stainless steel with a rag, and then set a small tumbler of dark rum in front of Rory. "Friend?" Silas asked, his voice low and gravelly like shifting gravel. Rory looked down at the dark, clear liquor, watching the neon green reflection tremble on its surface. She felt the phantom weight of her father’s expectations, the ghost of the life that had been laid out for her like a clean, dry suit, and the dark, tangled freedom of the streets outside. "Someone I used to know," she said, and took a sip.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:51:10.445Z" 9/3/2026, 1:51:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
63.64% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"she lied gently [gently]"
2"Thomas said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.136
68.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1735
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count2
6
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"utterly"
2"slowly"
3"gently"
4"softly"
5"completely"
6"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1735
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"solitary"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"furrowed"
count1
6
word"calculate"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"weight"
count4
10
word"pristine"
count2
11
word"depths"
count1
12
word"silence"
count3
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"predictable"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"solitary"
2"traced"
3"footsteps"
4"lilt"
5"furrowed"
6"calculate"
7"measured"
8"unreadable"
9"weight"
10"pristine"
11"depths"
12"silence"
13"familiar"
14"predictable"
15"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"The weight of his silence"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1729
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1425
uniqueNames36
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Thomas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Thomas"
discoveredNames
Greek1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Northern1
Golden1
Empress1
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Cathays1
Soho1
Tuesday1
Chinatown1
South1
Wales1
Valleys1
Cyncoed1
Silas6
Vienna1
Thomas11
Wynne1
Cardiff1
University1
Temple1
Rory10
Berlin1
England1
Law1
Reports1
Evan1
National1
Express1
Victoria1
Eva1
Clerkenwell1
persons
0"Empress"
1"Silas"
2"Thomas"
3"Wynne"
4"Rory"
5"Reports"
6"Evan"
7"Eva"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Raven"
3"Golden"
4"Charing"
5"Cross"
6"Road"
7"Cathays"
8"Soho"
9"Chinatown"
10"South"
11"Wales"
12"Cyncoed"
13"Vienna"
14"Cardiff"
15"Temple"
16"Berlin"
17"England"
18"Victoria"
19"Clerkenwell"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a dropped glass"
1"as if expecting to find the rest of a stage set, or perhaps a group of people who would explain the joke"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.578
wordCount1729
matches
0"not the rough lilt of the Valleys, but the scrubbed, polite enunciation of a boy who had grown up i"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean38.42
std27.95
cv0.727
sampleLengths
092
1101
213
357
410
552
64
770
816
958
101
1155
1211
1348
1481
1543
1649
177
1848
1932
2015
2158
2239
2327
2455
2559
264
2760
28107
297
303
3165
3216
3334
3479
3534
366
3740
3823
395
4022
4149
4211
4352
4411
92.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences84
matches
0"was tucked"
1"been taken"
2"been laid"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was drying"
1"was clearly fishing"
2"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences98
ratio0.051
matches
0"On her lap, her left thumb traced the faint, crescent-shaped ridge on her wrist—a white seam from an eight-year-old tumble over a low stone wall in Cathays."
1"It was soft around the vowels, pitched with the subtle, musical cadence of South Wales—not the rough lilt of the Valleys, but the scrubbed, polite enunciation of a boy who had grown up in Cyncoed and spent his adolescence wearing pressed blazers to debate tournaments."
2"He caught Rory’s eye for half a beat—hazel eyes steady, unreadable—before giving Thomas a brief nod and moving down the bar with his rolling, slightly hitched gait, his left knee favoring the shift in weight."
3"Rory did not flinch; she had trained herself out of flinching three winters ago in a second-floor flat where the door locks had been taken off the hinges."
4"The weight of his silence was familiar—it was the silence of good, respectable people when confronted with a mess that couldn't be filed under a neat statutory heading."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1450
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"faint, crescent-shaped ridge"
1"narrow, low-ceilinged room"
2"pristine leather-bound volumes"
3"faint, razor-thin smile"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.031724137931034485
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.015172413793103448
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean17.64
std11.87
cv0.673
sampleLengths
026
119
219
328
429
539
627
76
813
96
1031
115
1215
1310
147
1545
164
1721
1827
1922
2016
2114
2221
2323
241
2514
2624
2717
286
295
309
3129
325
335
3418
3563
367
3710
3826
3921
4028
417
4213
4335
4424
458
469
476
4830
4922
56.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3877551020408163
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
43.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences77
matches
0"His silver signet ring clicked"
1"She had tucked her straight"
2"They were heavy, deliberate, and"
3"It was soft around the"
4"His hair was damp and"
5"He looked prosperous, slightly tired,"
6"she said, the name slipping"
7"He paused, one hand already"
8"He turned toward the dark"
9"His brow furrowed, clearing slowly"
10"she said quietly"
11"He looked around the narrow,"
12"he repeated, testing it"
13"He didn't mean it as"
14"She saw what he saw:"
15"she lied gently"
16"He looked thirty-five, though she"
17"he said, taking the stool"
18"He caught Rory’s eye for"
19"He stopped, swallowing the rest"
ratio0.442
18.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences77
matches
0"The rain had washed the"
1"Silas was at the far"
2"His silver signet ring clicked"
3"Aurora sat on the low"
4"She had tucked her straight"
5"A lifetime ago, in another"
6"The brass bell above the"
7"Rory did not look up"
8"They were heavy, deliberate, and"
9"a voice said"
10"The accent caught her between"
11"It was soft around the"
12"Rory turned her head."
13"The man standing at the"
14"His hair was damp and"
15"He looked prosperous, slightly tired,"
16"she said, the name slipping"
17"He paused, one hand already"
18"He turned toward the dark"
19"His brow furrowed, clearing slowly"
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"His silver signet ring clicked against the glass, a rhythmic, solitary sound that kept time with the muffled rattle of the Northern line running deep beneath th…"
1"It was soft around the vowels, pitched with the subtle, musical cadence of South Wales—not the rough lilt of the Valleys, but the scrubbed, polite enunciation o…"
2"He turned toward the dark corner where she sat, squinting against the dim amber bulbs that hung low over the mahogany."
3"He looked around the narrow, low-ceilinged room as if expecting to find the rest of a stage set, or perhaps a group of people who would explain the joke."
4"She saw what he saw: the five-foot-six girl who had once stood beside him in the mock courtrooms of Cardiff University, who used to wear tailored skirts and arg…"
5"There was an early settling in his jowls, the faint gray cast of someone who spent fourteen hours a day under fluorescent tubes in the Temple."
6"He looked at her, searching her face for the girl who used to drink bitter shandies in the student union and talk about reforming the law of torts until dawn."
7"The girl sitting in front of him had eyes that were too bright, too steady, and a mouth that had learned to stay shut until it had something lethal to say."
8"The weight of his silence was familiar—it was the silence of good, respectable people when confronted with a mess that couldn't be filed under a neat statutory …"
9"He reached for his cardholder again, hesitated, and then slowly slid it back into his pocket, realizing the futility of leaving an embossed piece of card with a…"
10"She felt the phantom weight of her father’s expectations, the ghost of the life that had been laid out for her like a clean, dry suit, and the dark, tangled fre…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas asked, his voice low and gravelly like shifting gravel"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"she lied gently (lie)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
73.1308%