"Aurora didn't turn around immediately; three years in the city had cured her of looking up at every stranger."
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"Then came the sound of heels on the floorboards—brisk, purposeful, the particular rhythm of someone who wore tailored coats and caught the seven-fifteen train."
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"The maps on the walls, the framed black-and-white portraits of forgotten diplomats, the low hum of Silas scraping an orange peel—everything seemed to recede into a thick, suffocating silence."
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"Your mother—"
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"She was Brendan Carter's prize pupil before Rory dropped out; they had spent two years competing for the top marks in Constitutional Law in the drafty lecture halls of Park Place."
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"The unspoken horror of that final summer in Cathays lingered between them—the bruised collarbone Rory had hidden beneath high-neck sweaters, the shattered crockery that Eva had helped sweep into bin bags while Evan was at squash practice, the suffocating terror that had finally driven Rory onto a late-night National Express coach with two carrier bags and eighty pounds in cash."
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"Behind the counter, Silas moved with the measured, economical grace of a man who treated every square foot of floorboards like a perimeter."
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"His left knee gave its customary dull click on the pivot toward the ice well, the limp subtle to anyone who didn't know how to look for it."
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"Then came the sound of heels on the floorboards—brisk, purposeful, the particular rhythm of someone who wore tailored coats and caught the seven-fifteen train."
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"Rhiannon stopped a foot from the stool, her hands hesitating in the air as if debating an embrace before retreating into the deep pockets of her coat."
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"She looked at Rory with an expression that shifted rapidly between disbelief, hurt, and an awkward, well-bred sympathy that made Rory's teeth ache."
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"The unspoken horror of that final summer in Cathays lingered between them—the bruised collarbone Rory had hidden beneath high-neck sweaters, the shattered crock…"
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"You were the best of us, Rory, Rhiannon said, her voice dropping the courtroom polish, softening into the girl who used to share bags of chips on Queen Street a…"
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"Rory looked at the elegant lines of Rhiannon's coat, the diamond studs in her ears, the pristine briefcase that held briefs for high-court chambers."
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"She remembered a version of herself that used to care about moot courts and Latin maxims, a girl who thought intelligence was a shield against cruelty."
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"Rory looked up, past Rhiannon's shoulder to Silas, who was methodically aligning bottles on the high shelf, his posture steady and unyielding."