Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRSS97ZN5FBAJE49W7XTG2

Run Details

Duration:
17.8s
Cost:
$0.012538
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of the sign bled down the rain-slicked glass of the front window, tinting the Soho pavement in bilious emerald. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air held the dry, comfortable smell of aged mahogany, cold draft ale, and the yellowing paper of the ordnance maps Silas had tacked along the south wall. Aurora sat on the low barstool at the corner where the counter met the partition, a position that afforded an uninterrupted view of both the front door and the narrow hallway leading toward the back stairs. Her hair, straight and shoulder-length, was still damp at the ends from the evening drizzle, black strands clinging to the collar of her worn denim jacket. She ran the tip of her index finger over the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—an old habit, absent and rhythmic. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with the measured economy of a man who measured rooms in exit vectors. When he turned to reach for a bottle of Glenfarclas, his left knee caught slightly, the familiar hitch in his stride barely noticeable to anyone who hadn't watched him walk a hundred times before. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked softly against the heavy base of the tumbler. He set the glass in front of her without asking. "Shift finish early at the Empress?" "Yu-Fei had six drivers on and no orders past nine," Rory said, her voice quiet beneath the low murmur of the jazz record spinning behind the till. "Told me to clear off before I took up space in her kitchen." Silas gave a dry huff that passed for amusement, wiping down the polished wood with a linen rag. He was about to speak when the brass latch on the front door clattered. A blast of wet autumn air cut into the bar, carrying with it the smell of exhaust and damp wool. A man stepped across the threshold, shaking an expensive telescoping umbrella over the mat. He wore an immaculate charcoal overcoat, cut precisely across broad shoulders, and a silk tie tucked tight against a crisp spread collar. He looked thirty going on fifty, the exhaustion of seventy-hour billable weeks etched into the fine skin beneath his eyes. Rory went still. The glass of scotch remained halfway to her lips. The man scanned the dim interior, his gaze skipping past the framed black-and-white prints of 1960s London, sliding over Silas’s imposing frame, before snagging on the corner stool. His brow furrowed in the half-light. He took a hesitant step forward, his leather-soled shoes silent on the floorboards. "Aurora?" The name sounded strange in the room—too formal, too heavy with vowels she hadn't heard spoken aloud with that specific South Wales cadence in nearly three years. "Tomos," she said, keeping her voice level, letting the glass touch the wood again without a sound. Tomos Jenkins stopped two paces away, staring at her as if she were a projection cast against the wood paneling. He looked down at his own wet hands, then back up, taking in the black hair she used to wear long and curled, the hollows beneath her cheekbones, the sharp alertness in her bright blue eyes that hadn't been there when they used to share notes in the law library at Cathays Park. "Good God," he breathed. "It is you. I thought—someone told me they thought they saw you in London six months ago, but I didn't..." He trailed off, gesturing vaguely toward the street outside. "What are you doing here?" "I live here," Rory said simply. Silas didn't look at them directly, but he shifted half a step closer down the bar, his hazel eyes drifting over Tomos’s tailoring with the casual scrutiny of an archivist cataloging an anomaly. Tomos pulled out the stool beside her, hesitating before he sat. He unbuttoned his coat, revealing the understated silver cufflinks of a junior partner. "I’m in town for a hearing at the Rolls Building. Judicial review on an environmental injunction. Chambers put me up at the hotel on Dean Street." He managed a tight, self-conscious smile. "I only stepped in here to get out of the downpour." "Small world," Rory said. "Is it?" Tomos asked. The polite warmth in his face cracked, just enough to show the hurt beneath it. "You vanished, Rory. You handed in your keys, left your mobile on the kitchen table, and didn't even sit the Trinity term exams. Your father wouldn't say a word. Brendan acted like asking after you was a breach of national security." At the mention of her father, Rory’s jaw tightened. She didn't look away, but the distance in her posture widened, an invisible pane of reinforced glass sliding down between them. "My father didn't know anything," she said coolly. "Still doesn't." Silas reached down, picked up an empty highball glass, and set it on the bar in front of Tomos. "Can I get you something, sir?" The older man's voice carried a low, gravelly authority that made Tomos blink and sit up straighter. "Pint of bitter, please. Whatever's on tap." Silas nodded once and moved down to the pulls, his limp subtle, giving them the illusion of privacy while remaining squarely within arm's reach. Tomos watched Silas go, then turned back to Rory, lowering his voice. "We thought he did something to you. When you disappeared, Carys and I went to the house in Roath. Evan was there. He was smashed, throwing things against the wall, swearing you’d taken half his money. The police came twice." Rory looked down at her scotch. The amber liquid caught the green glare of the window sign. "Evan always was dramatic." "Dramatic?" Tomos’s voice rose, frayed at the edges. "He nearly put you in the Heath hospital after your twenty-second birthday, Rory. We all knew. We tried to tell you to go to the dean, to go to the police. And then you just... evaporated. No forwarding address. No social media. Nothing. You let us think you were in a ditch somewhere." "I was twenty-two," she said, her voice dropping an octave, flat and devoid of the easy charm Tomos would have remembered from mock trial competitions. "If I had stayed to pack a bag, I wouldn't have made it out of Cardiff. You know that. Don't pretend you don't." Tomos exhaled slowly, the anger leaking out of him to leave only a hollow, grey fatigue. Silas returned, setting a pint of amber ale on a cardboard coaster with a soft thud. Tomos didn't touch it. He looked at Rory's hands—the short, unpainted nails, the faint calluses from the handlebars of a delivery scooter, the old childhood scar on her wrist that he had seen a thousand times over open textbooks. "You were the smartest person in our year," Tomos said quietly, the regret in his tone heavier than the rain outside. "You had a first lined up. Henderson Chambers had already offered you a pupillage before we even finished our second year. Now look at you." "Look at me," she agreed. Her chin rose slightly. "I'm alive." The words sat between them on the dark wood, blunt and unyielding. Tomos looked around the room, taking in the low ceiling, the quiet gloom, the solitary figure of Silas polishing glasses with mechanical precision. "Is this what you do now? Work in a pub?" "I deliver food. I help out where I'm needed. I pay my rent." "Your father’s taking silk in the spring," Tomos said, almost pleading. "He looks ten years older than he is. He sits in the Cardiff lounge and doesn't talk to anyone. If you just sent a letter—" "No." The word was absolute. "Brendan made his choices. He thought Evan was from a good family. He told me to stop causing scenes in the driveway because the neighbors might talk. He can have his silk." Tomos stared at her for a long moment. In the silence, the needle reached the end of the vinyl, clicking softly as the tone arm lifted and returned to its cradle. The quiet of the bar settled in around them, dense and unyielding. "I don't know who you are," Tomos whispered. It wasn't an insult; it was a realization that sounded like grief. "I know," Rory said softly. "That was the point." Tomos reached into his coat, pulled out a twenty-pound note, and laid it flat next to his untouched pint. He buttoned his coat to the neck, gathered his umbrella, and slid off the stool. He lingered for two seconds, his lips parting as if searching for an argument that could rewind four years of silence, then thought better of it. "Take care of yourself, Rory," he said. "Good luck with the injunction, Tom," she replied. The front door clicked shut behind him, the small brass bell giving a single, muffled chime. Through the wet window, she watched the dark silhouette of his umbrella open and vanish into the Soho gloom. Silas moved back down the bar, swept the twenty-pound note into the register, and picked up Tomos's full pint. Without a word, he dumped the bitter down the drain, rinsed the glass, and placed it on the rack to dry. "Friend of yours?" Silas asked, his hazel eyes steady. Rory turned her glass between her palms, feeling the cold weight of the cut crystal. "From another lifetime." Silas reached across the counter, topped her scotch up with two fingers of amber spirit, and nodded toward the ceiling above them. "Go get some sleep, Carter. You've got the lunch run tomorrow." Rory looked at the glass, then up at the quiet, grey-bearded man who never asked about her father, never asked about Cardiff, and never expected her to be anyone other than the person who locked the door behind her. "Right," she said, downing the whiskey in one clean swallow. "Lunch run."
created_at"2026-09-03T13:54:42.095Z" 9/3/2026, 1:54:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory said simply [simply]"
1"she said coolly [coolly]"
2"Tomos said quietly [quietly]"
3"Rory said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.182
75.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1648
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count3
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"coolly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"precisely"
3"coolly"
4"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Henderson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1648
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"measured"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"silk"
count3
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"imposing"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"charm"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count2
12
word"solitary"
count1
13
word"mechanical"
count1
14
word"silence"
count2
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"rhythmic"
2"measured"
3"familiar"
4"silk"
5"etched"
6"scanned"
7"imposing"
8"furrowed"
9"warmth"
10"charm"
11"gloom"
12"solitary"
13"mechanical"
14"silence"
15"weight"
16"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1644
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1188
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Tomos"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Tomos"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven1
Nest1
Silas13
Blackwood1
Glenfarclas1
London1
South1
Wales1
Tomos18
Jenkins1
Cathays1
Park1
Rory11
Cardiff1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Blackwood"
2"Tomos"
3"Jenkins"
4"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"South"
4"Wales"
5"Cathays"
6"Park"
7"Cardiff"
globalScore0.742
windowScore0.167
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like grief"
1"as if searching for an argument that could rewind four years of silence, then thought better of it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1644
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean33.55
std21.7
cv0.647
sampleLengths
054
184
270
316
440
532
676
712
847
91
1027
1117
1273
1338
146
1533
1667
174
1860
1930
2010
2125
2224
2324
2452
2521
2661
2748
2871
2946
3011
3112
3233
3313
3436
3537
3643
3720
389
3960
407
418
4235
4340
449
4518
4633
4739
4812
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences100
ratio0.04
matches
0"She ran the tip of her index finger over the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—an old habit, absent and rhythmic."
1"The name sounded strange in the room—too formal, too heavy with vowels she hadn't heard spoken aloud with that specific South Wales cadence in nearly three years."
2"He looked at Rory's hands—the short, unpainted nails, the faint calluses from the handlebars of a delivery scooter, the old childhood scar on her wrist that he had seen a thousand times over open textbooks."
3"It wasn't an insult; it was a realization that sounded like grief."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1203
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"tight, self-conscious smile."
2"quiet, grey-bearded man"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.029093931837073983
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.014962593516209476
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean16.44
std11.06
cv0.673
sampleLengths
022
132
236
326
422
519
634
717
810
96
1027
1113
1218
1314
1420
1514
1622
1720
183
199
2028
216
2213
231
2427
2517
2620
2753
284
2929
305
316
3233
3311
3413
3532
3611
374
384
3915
4041
419
4221
438
442
4519
466
4717
487
4924
69.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.46
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her hair, straight and shoulder-length,"
1"She ran the tip of"
2"He set the glass in"
3"He was about to speak"
4"He wore an immaculate charcoal"
5"He looked thirty going on"
6"His brow furrowed in the"
7"He took a hesitant step"
8"she said, keeping her voice"
9"He looked down at his"
10"He trailed off, gesturing vaguely"
11"He unbuttoned his coat, revealing"
12"He managed a tight, self-conscious"
13"She didn't look away, but"
14"she said coolly"
15"she said, her voice dropping"
16"He looked at Rory's hands—the"
17"Her chin rose slightly."
18"It wasn't an insult; it"
19"He buttoned his coat to"
ratio0.314
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences70
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Aurora sat on the low"
2"Her hair, straight and shoulder-length,"
3"She ran the tip of"
4"The silver signet ring on"
5"He set the glass in"
6"Rory said, her voice quiet"
7"Silas gave a dry huff"
8"He was about to speak"
9"A blast of wet autumn"
10"A man stepped across the"
11"He wore an immaculate charcoal"
12"He looked thirty going on"
13"Rory went still."
14"The glass of scotch remained"
15"The man scanned the dim"
16"His brow furrowed in the"
17"He took a hesitant step"
18"The name sounded strange in"
19"she said, keeping her voice"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Aurora sat on the low barstool at the corner where the counter met the partition, a position that afforded an uninterrupted view of both the front door and the …"
1"Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with the measured economy of a man who measured rooms in exit vectors."
2"When he turned to reach for a bottle of Glenfarclas, his left knee caught slightly, the familiar hitch in his stride barely noticeable to anyone who hadn't watc…"
3"Silas gave a dry huff that passed for amusement, wiping down the polished wood with a linen rag."
4"The man scanned the dim interior, his gaze skipping past the framed black-and-white prints of 1960s London, sliding over Silas’s imposing frame, before snagging…"
5"Tomos Jenkins stopped two paces away, staring at her as if she were a projection cast against the wood paneling."
6"He looked down at his own wet hands, then back up, taking in the black hair she used to wear long and curled, the hollows beneath her cheekbones, the sharp aler…"
7"The older man's voice carried a low, gravelly authority that made Tomos blink and sit up straighter."
8"He lingered for two seconds, his lips parting as if searching for an argument that could rewind four years of silence, then thought better of it."
9"Rory looked at the glass, then up at the quiet, grey-bearded man who never asked about her father, never asked about Cardiff, and never expected her to be anyon…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
81.82% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"she agreed (agree)"
2"Tomos whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.773
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.136
71.9842%