Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KRWJPBRWQEJWPTKV0C55W5

Run Details

Duration:
19.3s
Cost:
$0.002584
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The park was wrong after dark. Aurora had cycled through Richmond Park three times a week for the last two months, once with a thermal bag from Golden Empress strapped to the back of her bike and once without, and she knew the way the paths narrowed under the pines near the Isabella Plantation. She knew the way the deer would watch her pass and then melt back into the bracken. She did not know this. The Heartstone Pendant was warm against her sternum. She had taken it off at the flat above Silas’ bar, hung it on the edge of her chipped mug while she ate noodles, because the faint inner glow had been keeping her awake. It had been steady for weeks, a deep crimson throb she could feel through her shirt when she lay down. Tonight it had flared. Not a pulse. A pull. She had followed it on foot because she didn’t trust the bike on the mud. The pendant had led her off the main bridleway and onto a deer trail she didn’t recognize, through a stand of ancient oaks whose trunks were too thick for their age. The wildflowers were in bloom. In November. She stopped where the trees opened. The standing stones were there. She had read about them in a footnote once, a local myth about Isolde’s grove, but she had never seen them. Five oaks, or stones shaped like oaks, ringed a clearing no bigger than her kitchen. The grass inside was soft and damp, and it smelled sweet, like cut hay and honey. The air was warmer than it should have been. Rory touched the crescent scar on her left wrist without thinking. The pendant was warm now, almost hot, humming against her skin. She lifted the silver chain over her head and held it in her palm. The gemstone, roughly the size of her thumbnail, caught the thin moonlight and threw it back red. She had come because Eva had texted her at 2:14 a.m.: *don’t go there alone*. And because the pendant had been given to her by an unknown benefactor three weeks ago, slipped into her delivery bag at the restaurant with no note, and because she was cool-headed and intelligent and knew how to think out of the box, which meant she knew when she was being stupid. She was being stupid. A sound came from the trees. Not an owl. A soft, wet clicking, like fingernails on bark, and then it stopped. She told herself it was a badger. The clearing was quiet again except for the faint rustle of leaves. The wildflowers shifted though there was no wind. She took a step inside the ring and the light changed. Not dimmer or brighter, just different, as if the night had been filtered through something thicker. The pendant pulsed once, warm against her fingers, and she felt it in her teeth. “Hello?” Her voice sounded flat and too loud. She cleared her throat. “Is someone there?” Nothing answered. The ancient oaks stood sentinel. Between them, the boundary was invisible, but she felt it as a pressure at the edge of her skin, like stepping from warm bathwater into cold. She should have turned back. She had a shift at Golden Empress at seven. She had a flat to pay for. She had an ex named Evan she didn’t want to think about. Instead she walked to the centre of the clearing and set the pendant down on a flat stone. It glowed. The faint inner glow flared, deep crimson, and the warmth rolled out in a slow wave that made the hairs on her arms rise. The flowers around the stone bent toward it, just a fraction, as if listening. Then the clicking came again, closer. Rory crouched, eyes bright blue and narrowed. She didn’t move fast. She watched the edge of vision, the way she had learned to watch the road for cars that weren’t there. Movement at the treeline, a dark shape, gone when she looked directly. She stood. The pendant was still glowing. The air smelled suddenly of iron. A branch snapped behind her. She spun. Nothing. Only the five oaks, and the space between them where shadows pooled too deep for moonlight. The wrongness built in small increments. The temperature dropped a degree. The flowers stopped rustling and held still. Somewhere far off, a dog barked in Richmond, and the sound was swallowed before it reached the grove. The pendant pulsed again, and this time she felt it not in her hand but somewhere behind her ribs. “Okay,” she said, more to herself than to whatever was listening. “Okay. You’re not real. Time moves differently here. That’s the story.” The ancient oaks didn’t move. The stones didn’t move. The wildflowers did. A petal drifted across the clearing and landed on the pendant. It should have been damp. It was dry. The clicking came from all around now, a chorus of soft, wet taps. She could hear breathing. Not hers. Rory’s fingers found the scar on her left wrist, a small crescent from a childhood accident in Cardiff, and she used the pain as an anchor. She counted. One, two, three. The pendant pulsed on four. She lifted it. The moment her skin touched the silver chain the warmth spiked, and the glow flared bright enough to show her own face in the gemstone’s reflection. Behind her reflection there was something else, a smear of movement at the edge of the clearing, tall and thin, with too many joints. She didn’t scream. She was cool-headed. She was intelligent. She turned slowly. The clearing was empty. The flowers were still. The oaks stood unchanged. The pendant was hot in her palm, thrumming like a second heartbeat. The clicking stopped. Silence settled, heavy and absolute. The kind of silence that meant something was holding its breath. Rory took a step back toward the ring of trees. Another step. The boundary tugged at her. She could feel the night outside the grove waiting, normal and cold and full of ordinary sounds. She was not alone. She had never been alone since she stepped in. The certainty of it rose in her chest, slow and inescapable, like water filling lungs. Something moved at the edge of vision again, just a flicker of dark between two trunks. It didn’t watch her. It waited. She slipped the pendant back over her head. The chain settled against her throat, warm. She walked out from under the oaks without looking back, each step careful on the soft ground. She didn’t run until she was past the trees, until the wildflowers were gone and the real November night air hit her skin with a slap of cold. She ran for the path, for the bike, for the lights of the park entrance. She didn’t stop running until she was back on the street outside Silas’ bar, where neon buzzed and a bus exhaled steam on the corner. The pendant was cold now. Rory stood in the doorway of her flat, hands shaking, and pressed her forehead to the cool wood of the doorframe. She could still feel the warmth on her skin where it had been. Behind her, in Richmond Park, the ancient oaks marked a boundary that wasn’t on any map. The clearing breathed. The flowers bloomed year-round. And something in the dark between the trees watched the path, waiting for the next person who followed a pulse in the night.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count3
4
word"sentinel"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count3
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"could feel"
2"pulse"
3"pulsed"
4"sentinel"
5"warmth"
6"silence"
7"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1251
ratio0.003
matches
0"don’t go there alone"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1197
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park2
Golden2
Empress2
Isabella1
Plantation1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
November2
Isolde1
Eva1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Rory5
persons
0"Empress"
1"Pendant"
2"Isolde"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"Isabella"
4"Plantation"
5"November"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if listening"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.799
wordCount1251
matches
0"not in her hand but somewhere behind her ribs"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean25.53
std19.03
cv0.746
sampleLengths
06
170
28
363
451
52
66
766
853
967
104
1121
127
1347
1415
1515
1633
1733
1818
192
2038
216
2243
2313
245
2519
2636
2719
2822
2912
3019
3119
3236
333
3450
359
363
3724
383
3916
4034
4128
4222
4332
4428
4540
465
4734
4846
93.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences117
matches
0"been given"
1"been filtered"
2"was swallowed"
3"were gone"
17.85% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was being"
1"was being"
2"was still glowing"
3"was listening"
4"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences119
ratio0
matches(empty)
84.03% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount103
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.05825242718446602
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.009708737864077669
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean10.51
std8.99
cv0.856
sampleLengths
06
148
217
35
48
534
620
74
83
92
1015
1131
125
132
146
155
1621
1715
1816
199
2011
2111
2214
2317
2415
2552
264
276
283
2912
307
3112
328
3311
3416
3515
368
374
383
392
405
4126
425
439
447
4512
4618
472
4824
4914
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.2184873949579832
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences106
matches
0"Instead she walked to the"
1"Then the clicking came again,"
2"Only the five oaks, and"
3"Somewhere far off, a dog"
ratio0.038
72.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences106
matches
0"She knew the way the"
1"She did not know this."
2"She had taken it off"
3"It had been steady for"
4"She had followed it on"
5"She stopped where the trees"
6"She had read about them"
7"She lifted the silver chain"
8"She had come because Eva"
9"She was being stupid."
10"She told herself it was"
11"She took a step inside"
12"Her voice sounded flat and"
13"She cleared her throat."
14"She should have turned back."
15"She had a shift at"
16"She had a flat to"
17"She had an ex named"
18"She didn’t move fast."
19"She watched the edge of"
ratio0.368
30.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences106
matches
0"The park was wrong after"
1"Aurora had cycled through Richmond"
2"She knew the way the"
3"She did not know this."
4"The Heartstone Pendant was warm"
5"She had taken it off"
6"It had been steady for"
7"Tonight it had flared."
8"She had followed it on"
9"The pendant had led her"
10"The wildflowers were in bloom."
11"She stopped where the trees"
12"The standing stones were there."
13"She had read about them"
14"The grass inside was soft"
15"The air was warmer than"
16"Rory touched the crescent scar"
17"The pendant was warm now,"
18"She lifted the silver chain"
19"The gemstone, roughly the size"
ratio0.858
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"And because the pendant had been given to her by an unknown benefactor three weeks ago, slipped into her delivery bag at the restaurant with no note, and becaus…"
1"Not dimmer or brighter, just different, as if the night had been filtered through something thicker."
2"The faint inner glow flared, deep crimson, and the warmth rolled out in a slow wave that made the hairs on her arms rise."
3"The kind of silence that meant something was holding its breath."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.5951%