Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KS04JR7MVDF3RN0ARXNKZJ

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Duration:
28.9s
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$0.004265
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DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon above the door was buzzing again. It had been buzzing for as long as Rory had lived above the Nest, a thin high whine that settled behind her teeth when she came down the stairs after her shift. She pushed through the door with a thermal bag balanced against her hip, the clatter of the bell swallowed by the low hum of the bar. The Raven's Nest smelled the same as ever: old wood, spilled beer, and the faint metallic tang of the maps that papered the walls. Black-and-white photographs leaned in their frames, men and women with hard eyes and softer cigarettes, and the bar itself was a long dark island under a single row of amber bulbs. Silas was behind it, sleeves rolled to his forearms, polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better years. His hair was still that grey-streaked auburn, neatly trimmed, and the beard matched it. The silver signet ring caught the light when he set the glass down, always on his right hand. He had a slight limp when he moved, the left leg dragging a fraction longer than the right, and he didn't look up at first. "You're late," he said, as if she came down every night. "I had a flat on Kingsland," Rory said. "Driver quit. You want your usual?" She set the bag down on the bar. The bag was from Golden Empress, Yu-Fei Cheung's place where she worked part-time, the thin paper still warm from the kitchen. She had her delivery jacket zipped to the throat, black hair falling straight to her shoulders, and the small crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light when she reached for a receipt. Silas was about to answer when the woman at the far end of the bar shifted, and the amber light caught her face. Rory stopped. Eva was sitting on a stool with her back to the room, a glass halfway to her lips, the same way she used to sit in the library at Cardiff with her feet tucked up. The hair was different. Shorter, cut sharp around her jaw, dyed a dark copper that didn't suit her. She wore a coat that was too big, sleeves pushed up, and there were lines around her mouth Rory didn't remember. She looked older than twenty-five, older than the both of them, and she turned at the sound of the bell. Their eyes met. Rory's bright blue eyes, the ones Eva used to tease her for being the color of a cheap swimming pool, widened. She felt the familiar cool-headedness slip. For a half second she was sixteen again, on a train platform with a duffel bag, Eva promising London would be different. Eva's hand froze around her glass. "Rory," she said. Not a question. "Hey." Silas watched them both with the quiet authority he carried like a coat. He didn't move, didn't offer introductions. He just set the cloth down. "You didn't tell me you were coming back," Rory said. "I didn't know I'd be." Eva slid off the stool, and Rory saw how she moved, careful, as if her joints hurt. "I'm in town for two days. Court thing." The word landed hard. Court. Rory thought of her father, Brendan Carter, Irish barrister, the way he used to talk about cases over tea. She thought of Pre-Law at Cardiff University, the textbooks she had left behind. She thought of Evan, the name that still sat like a stone in her throat, and how she had fled to London at Eva's behest after leaving him. "I heard you were here," Eva said, softer. "Silas said you lived upstairs." "He says a lot of things." Rory tried for lightness and it came out thin. "You look well." "You look..." Eva stopped. She looked at Rory's hair, at the scar on her wrist that she must have seen a hundred times before. "Different. Good." Rory's fingers found the edge of the bar. "You look different too." A silence settled between them, the kind that had weight. The bar was quiet for a Thursday. A couple at a table near the maps were laughing about something, and the green neon buzzed. "I thought you'd be a lawyer," Eva said finally. Rory laughed, a short sound. "I thought you'd be... I don't know. Happier?" Eva's mouth tightened. "I am happy. I'm just tired." Silas poured a whisky without being asked and set it in front of Eva, then a water for Rory. He didn't sit. He just stood there, ring catching light, watching. "I didn't know where else to go," Eva said, not looking at Rory, looking at the whisky. "Mum's ill. The house sold. I came to find you." The words unspooled slowly. Jennifer Carter née Ellis, Welsh teacher mother. Rory had not spoken to her in months. The house in Cardiff gone. She felt the familiar out-of-the-box thinking kick in, the cool head that had gotten her through the worst nights, and it did nothing to stop the prick at the back of her eyes. "You could have called," Rory said. "Would you have answered?" Rory didn't answer. She thought about the flat above the bar, the thin walls, the way Silas sometimes knocked with soup when she hadn't eaten. She thought about the delivery route that kept her moving, the hours at Golden Empress, the way she had built a life out of being useful and invisible. "I was scared," Eva admitted. "After you left. You didn't tell me what happened with Evan. I just heard bits. I thought... I thought you'd hate me for dragging you here." The regret hung between them, unspoken and thick. They had been childhood friends, the kind who shared secrets in dorm rooms and promised they'd never let the other disappear. And then one had disappeared, and the other had stayed, and time had done what time does. "I didn't hate you," Rory said quietly. "I was angry. For a while. Then I was just tired." Eva reached out, then pulled her hand back, as if touching Rory might be a mistake. "I'm sorry I didn't check in. I kept telling myself you were fine. You always were fine." "You didn't know," Rory said. Her voice was steady. "I didn't tell anyone." Silas limped around the bar then, set a coaster down between them. "Ladies," he said, low. "It's late. You can shout at each other upstairs or you can have a drink and be civil." Eva smiled, a real smile this time, cracked at the edges. "He's always been like this." "He's the reason I'm still in London," Rory said. Eva looked at her then, really looked. "You're smaller. Or I got bigger." "I'm five-six," Rory said automatically. "Same." They both laughed, a little wetly. The tension didn't break, but it shifted. "Do you still think about Cardiff?" Eva asked. "Every time it rains," Rory said. "The way the light hits the university. I think about the library." "I think about the kitchen," Eva said. "Mum making tea. Your dad reading briefs at the table." The bar felt smaller. The photographs on the walls watched. Rory thought about the hidden back room behind the bookshelf, the clandestine meetings Silas still hosted. She thought about how she had come down for a delivery and found the past sitting on a stool. "You should come up," she said. "I have tea." Eva shook her head. "I can't. I have a train." "Then I'll walk you out." Silas nodded once, the small movement of approval. He picked up the cloth again. They stood together under the green neon, the buzz louder out on the street. Eva was shorter than Rory remembered, or Rory had grown in other ways. The copper hair was damp at the temples. She didn't ask for forgiveness, and Rory didn't offer it. They said goodbye like people who knew they might not see each other again, with the weight of all the years they had not spoken sitting in the space between the words. "You kept your hair," Eva said, almost a smile. "You kept your laugh," Rory said, not sure it was true. Eva hugged her then, awkward and brief, careful not to press too hard. Rory felt the coat, the thinness of her friend's shoulders, and the crescent scar on her wrist brushed against Eva's sleeve. "Take care of yourself, Rory," Eva whispered. "Try you," Rory said. The door closed behind her with the same bell. Silas was already wiping down the bar. The neon buzzed. Rory stayed a moment longer, hands in the pockets of her delivery jacket, watching the green light paint the photographs on the wall, thinking about how time didn't just pass, it changed the people who survived it, and how regret was the quiet thing that lived in the space between who they had been and who they'd become, and how sometimes the only honest thing you could do was stand in a dim bar and not look away.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:58:10.27Z" 9/3/2026, 1:58:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Eva said finally [finally]"
1"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
2"Rory said automatically [automatically]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.51
leniency1
rawRatio0.12
effectiveRatio0.12
93.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"clandestine"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"unspoken"
4"tension"
5"clandestine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen78
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1509
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions88
wordCount1222
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity2.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory31
Nest2
Raven1
Golden2
Empress2
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Cardiff3
Eva24
London2
Brendan1
Carter2
Irish1
Pre-Law1
University1
Evan1
Thursday1
Ellis1
Welsh1
Silas9
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nest"
2"Raven"
3"Eva"
4"Brendan"
5"Carter"
6"Evan"
7"Ellis"
8"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Cheung"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
globalScore0.232
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if touching Rory might be a mistake"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1509
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean26.02
std26.77
cv1.029
sampleLengths
067
1132
211
314
463
523
62
794
83
949
106
116
121
1325
1410
1530
1665
1713
1818
1926
2012
2134
229
2313
249
2530
2627
2757
286
294
3053
3131
3246
3318
3433
3513
3634
3716
389
3913
405
411
4213
438
4418
4517
4645
479
4810
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"being asked"
70.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was buzzing"
1"was sitting"
2"were laughing"
3"was already wiping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences128
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1230
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03414634146341464
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0065040650406504065
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean11.79
std10.08
cv0.855
sampleLengths
09
132
226
324
431
520
614
718
825
911
108
116
128
1321
1434
1523
162
1735
184
1914
2021
2120
223
2321
246
2522
266
273
283
291
3013
316
326
3310
3422
358
364
371
3819
3913
4028
418
425
4315
443
454
4620
472
488
494
41.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.265625
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.64% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences88
matches
0"It had been buzzing for"
1"She pushed through the door"
2"His hair was still that"
3"He had a slight limp"
4"he said, as if she"
5"She set the bag down"
6"She had her delivery jacket"
7"She wore a coat that"
8"She looked older than twenty-five,"
9"Their eyes met."
10"She felt the familiar cool-headedness"
11"He didn't move, didn't offer"
12"He just set the cloth"
13"She thought of Pre-Law at"
14"She thought of Evan, the"
15"She looked at Rory's hair,"
16"He didn't sit."
17"He just stood there, ring"
18"She felt the familiar out-of-the-box"
19"She thought about the flat"
ratio0.341
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences88
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"It had been buzzing for"
2"She pushed through the door"
3"The Raven's Nest smelled the"
4"Silas was behind it, sleeves"
5"His hair was still that"
6"The silver signet ring caught"
7"He had a slight limp"
8"he said, as if she"
9"She set the bag down"
10"The bag was from Golden"
11"She had her delivery jacket"
12"Silas was about to answer"
13"Eva was sitting on a"
14"The hair was different."
15"She wore a coat that"
16"She looked older than twenty-five,"
17"Their eyes met."
18"Rory's bright blue eyes, the"
19"She felt the familiar cool-headedness"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled the same as ever: old wood, spilled beer, and the faint metallic tang of the maps that papered the walls."
1"Silas was behind it, sleeves rolled to his forearms, polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better years."
2"She felt the familiar out-of-the-box thinking kick in, the cool head that had gotten her through the worst nights, and it did nothing to stop the prick at the b…"
3"She thought about the delivery route that kept her moving, the hours at Golden Empress, the way she had built a life out of being useful and invisible."
4"Rory stayed a moment longer, hands in the pockets of her delivery jacket, watching the green light paint the photographs on the wall, thinking about how time di…"
45.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, as if she came down every night"
1"Eva said, softer"
2"Eva said, not looking at Rory, looking at the whisky"
3"he said, low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva admitted (admit)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.449
leniency0.898
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.082
78.1760%