Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KS1T7V23EHCN9406ANAVNT

Run Details

Duration:
19.1s
Cost:
$0.013059
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon outside the front window bled into the October drizzle, turning the puddles on the Soho pavement the color of bruised absinthe. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air was warm and smelled of damp wool, spilled stout, and the faint, sweet resin of old wood polish. Rory sat on the third stool from the brass draught taps, her delivery jacket draped over the back of the seat, still carrying the lingering ghost of toasted sesame oil from her afternoon shift at the Golden Empress. Behind the bar, Silas moved with his familiar, unhurried cadence, his left leg dragging just enough to produce a rhythmic scuff against the floorboards. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked sharply against a tumbler as he set down a neat pour of Bushmills in front of her. "Shift was quiet?" he asked, his voice a low rumble beneath the muted jazz drifting from the corner speaker. "Traffic on Charing Cross was a nightmare," Rory said. She turned the glass by its rim, her bright blue eyes tracking the amber ring of liquid. Her thumb brushed the pale crescent of scar tissue on her left wrist—a habit as ingrained as breathing whenever the damp got into the room. "Yu-Fei had four orders backed up before six. The grease trap in the kitchen gave out again." Silas gave a dry huff that might have been sympathy, his hazel eyes already shifting past her shoulder toward the entrance. His neatly trimmed beard caught the amber glow of the Edison bulbs overhead. "Company," he murmured, before taking a polishing cloth to a pint glass with practiced detachment. The bell above the heavy oak door gave a dull brass chime. A gust of wet air cut through the tavern, bringing with them a man shaking out a dripping black umbrella. He wore an immaculate charcoal overcoat, a silk scarf tucked beneath the lapels, and leather oxfords that had clearly never seen a council estate. Rory didn’t turn around until the man spoke. "Pint of the bitter, please. Whatever’s local." The accent was unmistakable—the soft, rounded vowels of Cyncoed, tailored smooth by three years of Cardiff Law Society chambers. Rory’s fingers froze against the cold glass. She turned her head slowly. "Julian?" The man paused mid-reach for his wallet. He looked up, squinting slightly in the dim, amber-tinted light, his gaze passing over the framed navigational charts and yellowed black-and-white portraits of post-war London before settling on the girl in the faded ribbed sweater. The breath went out of him all at once. "Aurora?" The full name sounded foreign to her now, heavy with the weight of oak-paneled lecture halls, her father’s heavy leather briefcases, and a life she had abandoned in the dead of a November night three years ago. Julian stood frozen between the bar stools, his umbrella shedding a small, dark pool onto the floorboards. He had grown into his features; the boyish softness of his jaw had sharpened into the severe lines of a junior barrister who worked seventy-hour weeks, but his eyes were the same pale, earnest grey that had once argued the fine points of tort law with her over lukewarm coffee in the Cathays library. "My God," he said, taking two cautious steps forward, as if she might dissipate like steam if he moved too quickly. "It’s really you. I thought... God, someone said you were in Edinburgh. Then someone else said you’d gone to Galway with your father’s people." "London," she said simply. Her voice was level, stripped of the cadence he would remember. "I’ve been here a while." Julian pulled out the stool beside her, glancing instinctively at Silas, who was pulling the bitter with an impassive, steady hand. Silas slid the dark ale across the mahogany, caught Rory’s eye for a fraction of a second, and then retreated toward the far end of the bar, his limp barely audible over the hum of the ice machine. "You look..." Julian trailed off, his eyes cataloging the changes. Her straight black hair, which she used to keep long and pinned meticulously back for moot court competitions, now fell blunt and loose to her shoulders. The softness had been carved out of her cheeks, replaced by the lean, watchful stillness of someone who spent her days navigating city alleyways on a battered scooter. "You look different, Rory." "You look the same," she replied, though it wasn't entirely true. The lines around his eyes were new, etched by the quiet compromise of staying where you were expected to stay. "Pupillage with your uncle’s firm?" A faint, self-conscious flush rose above his collar. "Associate now, actually. Commercial litigation. We’re in town for a hearing at the Rolls Building tomorrow morning. I just... I slipped out for some air. Walked half a mile looking for somewhere that didn't have a queue around the block." He shook his head, staring into his beer. "I can’t believe you’re sitting here. Brendan told my father you were taking time out. A sabbatical, he called it." A bitter little smile touched the corner of her mouth. "That’s what my father would call it." The silence settled between them, thick and fraught with the names they weren't saying. Julian picked at the condensation on his glass, his knuckles white. "He was looking for you, you know," Julian said, his voice dropping an octave. "For months. He came to my flat twice. Demanded to know if I had your number." Rory didn't ask which *he* Julian meant. The chill that ran through the small of her back gave her the answer before logic did. She took a slow sip of the Bushmills, letting the burn anchor her to the stool, to the solid wooden bar, to the floorboards beneath her feet. "Did you give it to him?" she asked softly. "I didn't have it," Julian said, looking directly at her now. His brow furrowed with a mixture of confusion and an old, curdled hurt. "You vanished, Aurora. No message, no note. You just emptied your room on Richmond Road and ceased to exist. I thought we were friends. I thought after everything..." "We were," she said. "Then why didn't you tell me?" His voice strained, pitched low against the background chatter of the bar. "If things were bad with Evan—if he was—" "Julian," she interrupted, the single word dropping like an iron bar between them. "Don't." He stopped, his mouth half-open. "You would have tried to fix it," she said, her bright blue eyes fixing him with a clarity that made him recoil slightly. "You would have mediated. You would have told me to file a report, to let my father talk to his father, to sit down in a tearoom and draft an amicable separation like it was a breach of contract." She glanced down at her wrist, where the crescent scar caught the light. "You didn't see him when the door was closed. You only saw the boy who made law review." Julian looked at the polished wood between his hands. The regret on his face was genuine, but it was the regret of an archivist looking at a ruined manuscript—sad, theoretical, and utterly useless after the fire had already burned itself out. "I was your friend," he said quietly. "I would have helped." "You couldn't have," Rory replied, without malice. "The only way out was to burn the bridge while I was still standing on the other side." She looked past him toward the wall, where a faded 1940s map of the Thames estuary was framed behind smudged glass. She thought of the life Julian still inhabited: the Sunday lunches in Penarth, the polite gossip about who made partner, the suffocating safety of a world where everyone agreed to pretend that cruelty was just bad manners. She had wanted that world once, fiercely, until it had nearly broken her in half. Julian finished half his pint in one long, heavy swallow. He reached into his breast pocket and drew out a heavy, cream-colored business card, setting it delicately next to her glass. "I’m at the firm’s London office once a month," he said, though the momentum had completely drained from his voice. The realization that they were no longer peers—that they inhabited entirely different geographies of the spirit—hung in the cold air between their shoulders. "If you ever need... if you ever just want to have dinner. Talk about Cardiff." Rory looked at the embossed lettering: *Julian Vance, LLB*. "I don't think about Cardiff much," she said gently. Julian stared at her for a long moment, searching for a trace of the girl who used to laugh until she cried over cold chips on Queen Street. Finding none, he gave a slow, defeated nod. He pulled a ten-pound note from his clip, dropped it on the counter, and stood, buttoning his charcoal coat with mechanical precision. "Take care of yourself, Rory." "You too, Julian." He picked up his wet umbrella and walked toward the door. The brass bell chimed once as he stepped out into the dark, the green neon flashing against his back before the heavy oak swung shut, sealing the damp cold outside once more. Silas moved back up the bar, his limp quiet on the floorboards. Without a word, he picked up the ten-pound note, counted out the change from the brass register, and laid it neatly beside the business card. "Old life?" Silas asked, his hazel eyes resting briefly on the cream cardstock. Rory reached out, picked up the card, and let her thumb test the sharp, clean edge of the paper. Then she dropped it into the glass ashtray beside the taps. "Dead life," she said. Silas gave a single, understanding nod, picked up a fresh bottle, and topped off her glass.
created_at"2026-09-03T13:59:05.217Z" 9/3/2026, 1:59:05 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said simply [simply]"
1"she asked softly [softly]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"she said gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
69.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1637
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"utterly"
count1
7
adverb"completely"
count1
8
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"quickly"
4"really"
5"softly"
6"utterly"
7"completely"
8"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1637
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"navigating"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"rhythmic"
2"silk"
3"weight"
4"navigating"
5"etched"
6"silence"
7"chill"
8"furrowed"
9"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1631
ratio0.002
matches
0"he"
1"Julian Vance, LLB"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1266
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
October1
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas7
Bushmills2
Rory9
Edison1
Cyncoed1
Cardiff1
Law1
Society1
London1
November1
Cathays1
Julian12
Thames1
Sunday1
Penarth1
Vance1
Queen1
Street1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Bushmills"
2"Rory"
3"Edison"
4"Cyncoed"
5"Julian"
6"Vance"
7"Queen"
places
0"October"
1"Soho"
2"Raven"
3"Golden"
4"London"
5"Cathays"
6"Thames"
7"Penarth"
8"Street"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1631
matches(empty)
64.63% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"pretend that cruelty"
1"wanted that world"
2"peers—that they"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean33.29
std24.65
cv0.741
sampleLengths
086
150
219
368
449
556
68
77
826
95
101
1142
1210
1337
1471
1545
1620
1759
1868
1936
2076
2117
2225
2330
2451
259
2652
274
2826
2914
305
3193
3241
3311
3425
3573
3631
3758
389
399
4058
415
423
4343
4437
4513
4630
474
4816
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"been carved"
1"were expected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was pulling"
1"weren't saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences98
ratio0.051
matches
0"Her thumb brushed the pale crescent of scar tissue on her left wrist—a habit as ingrained as breathing whenever the damp got into the room."
1"The accent was unmistakable—the soft, rounded vowels of Cyncoed, tailored smooth by three years of Cardiff Law Society chambers."
2"He had grown into his features; the boyish softness of his jaw had sharpened into the severe lines of a junior barrister who worked seventy-hour weeks, but his eyes were the same pale, earnest grey that had once argued the fine points of tort law with her over lukewarm coffee in the Cathays library."
3"The regret on his face was genuine, but it was the regret of an archivist looking at a ruined manuscript—sad, theoretical, and utterly useless after the fire had already burned itself out."
4"The realization that they were no longer peers—that they inhabited entirely different geographies of the spirit—hung in the cold air between their shoulders."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1283
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"dim, amber-tinted light,"
1"faint, self-conscious flush"
2"heavy, cream-colored business"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.036632891660171474
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.018706157443491817
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean16.64
std10.91
cv0.656
sampleLengths
024
124
238
324
426
519
69
717
825
917
1021
1113
1215
1312
1420
1524
168
177
1819
197
205
211
227
2335
249
251
2637
2717
2854
2921
3024
314
3211
335
3421
3538
3610
3726
3828
394
4011
4120
425
438
4448
4520
4610
477
4814
4911
55.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3673469387755102
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners36
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then she dropped it into"
ratio0.013
49.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences75
matches
0"he asked, his voice a"
1"She turned the glass by"
2"Her thumb brushed the pale"
3"His neatly trimmed beard caught"
4"he murmured, before taking a"
5"He wore an immaculate charcoal"
6"She turned her head slowly."
7"He looked up, squinting slightly"
8"He had grown into his"
9"he said, taking two cautious"
10"she said simply"
11"Her voice was level, stripped"
12"Her straight black hair, which"
13"she replied, though it wasn't"
14"He shook his head, staring"
15"She took a slow sip"
16"she asked softly"
17"His brow furrowed with a"
18"His voice strained, pitched low"
19"she interrupted, the single word"
ratio0.427
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences75
matches
0"The green neon outside the"
1"Rory sat on the third"
2"The silver signet ring on"
3"he asked, his voice a"
4"She turned the glass by"
5"Her thumb brushed the pale"
6"Silas gave a dry huff"
7"His neatly trimmed beard caught"
8"he murmured, before taking a"
9"The bell above the heavy"
10"A gust of wet air"
11"He wore an immaculate charcoal"
12"Rory didn’t turn around until"
13"The accent was unmistakable—the soft,"
14"Rory’s fingers froze against the"
15"She turned her head slowly."
16"The man paused mid-reach for"
17"He looked up, squinting slightly"
18"The breath went out of"
19"The full name sounded foreign"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Silas gave a dry huff that might have been sympathy, his hazel eyes already shifting past her shoulder toward the entrance."
1"He wore an immaculate charcoal overcoat, a silk scarf tucked beneath the lapels, and leather oxfords that had clearly never seen a council estate."
2"He looked up, squinting slightly in the dim, amber-tinted light, his gaze passing over the framed navigational charts and yellowed black-and-white portraits of …"
3"He had grown into his features; the boyish softness of his jaw had sharpened into the severe lines of a junior barrister who worked seventy-hour weeks, but his …"
4"Julian pulled out the stool beside her, glancing instinctively at Silas, who was pulling the bitter with an impassive, steady hand."
5"The softness had been carved out of her cheeks, replaced by the lean, watchful stillness of someone who spent her days navigating city alleyways on a battered s…"
6"Julian stared at her for a long moment, searching for a trace of the girl who used to laugh until she cried over cold chips on Queen Street."
56.82% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Julian trailed, his eyes cataloging the changes"
1"Julian said, his voice dropping an octave"
2"she interrupted, the single word dropping like an iron bar between them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.095
74.0255%