Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KS409QVF4KEGQ692Y1TCW0

Run Details

Duration:
18.5s
Cost:
$0.012991
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of the sign outside cut through the wet glass of the front window, bleeding emerald across the scarred mahogany of the bar top. It was nearly eleven on a Tuesday, and The Raven’s Nest smelled of damp wool, draught bitter, and the cedar oil Silas used to polish the tables. Rory sat on the end stool near the draft taps, her thumbs tracing the small crescent scar on her left wrist. Her shoulders still carried the dull ache of six hours hauling cartons of braised pork and egg noodles through Soho’s alleyways for Yu-Fei, the grease and rain having settled into the weave of her dark jacket. Behind the bar, Silas moved with his slow, deliberate economy. His left knee hitched with every step, an old ruin from a colder city, but his hands were steady as he dried a highball glass with a linen towel. The silver signet ring on his right hand flashed under the low amber pendant lights. The door swung open with a wet rattle of brass, letting in the exhaust-heavy air of Greek Street and a gust of drizzle. Silas didn’t look up immediately, though his hazel eyes shifted toward the mirrored shelf beneath the bottles. Rory caught the motion in the glass first: a dark cashmere overcoat, an expensive umbrella shaken once with meticulous care, and a pair of polished brogues that had no business walking the sticky floorboards of a back-alley pub. The man stepped up to the rail, shaking water from the collar of his coat. He was tall, his brown hair parted with the sharp precision of a barrister who billed by the quarter-hour. Rory went very still. "A gin and tonic, please," the man said. His voice was smooth, carrying the faint, rounded cadence of suburban Cardiff—the clipped vowels of Roath Park and the university quad. "Whatever dry gin you have." Silas set down his cloth. "Tanqueray do?" "Fine, thank you." Rory kept her head down, staring into the dregs of her half-pint of cider. It had been four years. Four years since she had packed one canvas duffel bag in the dead of a November night, turned off her phone, and caught the five-fifteen train out of Cardiff Central with bruised ribs and forty-eight pounds in cash. "Rory?" The word hung in the air, foreign and sharp against the low murmur of the radio in the corner. She lifted her chin, meeting the gaze in the mirror before turning her head. Her bright blue eyes gave her away before her face could settle into neutral indifference. "Julian," she said. Julian Powell stared at her, the polite, hurried mask of a London commuter melting into sheer, unvarnished shock. He took a half-step back, taking in her oversized corduroy jacket, the scuffed work boots, the blunt, shoulder-length straight black hair she had shorn herself over a sink. "God," Julian breathed. "It is you. Aurora." "Nobody calls me that here," she said quietly. "I... I can't believe it." He looked around the dim room, taking in the faded navigational maps tacked to the plaster, the black-and-white photographs of dockyards and foreign railway stations, the old man limping past with a bottle of gin. "What are you doing here?" "I live here," she said. "Upstairs." Silas set the tumbler down in front of Julian with a soft, heavy clink. The old operative’s gaze lingered on Julian for a fraction of a second, measuring the width of his shoulders, the cut of his collar, the nervous flinch in his jaw, before he stepped down the counter to give them an illusion of privacy. Julian pulled a ten-pound note from a slim leather wallet, dropped it on the wood, and forgot about it. He reached out as if to touch her shoulder, but Rory shifted back on her stool, just an inch, and his hand dropped back to the rail. "Your father thought you were dead for six months," Julian said, his voice dropping to an urgent, ragged whisper. "Brendan came to my chambers in tears, Rory. He looked like an old man. He still thinks you're in Bristol or Glasgow. He still checks the court rosters." "My father knows I'm alive," Rory said evenly. "I send a postcard on the first of every month. No return address, but he gets them." "A postcard." Julian shook his head, a bitter crease forming between his eyebrows. "You were top of our class. You had pupillage lined up at Crown Chambers. Brendan had your name penciled into the firm before we even finished our third-year jurisprudence papers. And you vanished into thin air because of..." He hesitated, catching himself. "Because of Evan," Rory supplied without a tremor. Julian looked down at his drink. The ice cubes shifted, melting into the clear liquor. "We didn't know how bad it was. You never said anything." "You knew," Rory said softly. "Everyone at the law society knew. You saw the foundation on my collarbone at the Michaelmas dinner. You saw him take my keys out of my bag during revision week. You all just decided it was passionate. You told me he was under a lot of pressure with the bar exams." Julian’s face went pale under the low amber bulb. He picked up his glass, took a long swallow, and didn't look at her. "He's a partner now," he said after a long silence. "At Davies & Cole. Married a girl from Swansea. They bought a place in Penarth." "Good for him." "He asked about you. For a year, maybe two. Then people stopped bringing it up." Julian turned fully toward her, his eyes searching her face with an intensity that bordered on painful. "You threw your entire life away, Rory. Look at you. You're... what are you doing with yourself? You haven't touched a brief in years, have you?" Rory looked down at her hands. The nails were trimmed short, unvarnished. The faint yellow stain of turmeric lingered on the cuticle of her index finger from an accidental tear in a curry lid at the restaurant three hours ago. There were no leather-bound statute books, no Wig and Pen lunches, no mahogany desks. Just the stairs up to a cold flat, the quiet hum of Silas’ radio through the floorboards, and the safety of being entirely, perfectly unknown. "I deliver food," she said. "On a bicycle. And I help Silas when he needs an extra pair of hands." Julian stared at her as if she were speaking Greek. "You're twenty-five years old. You had a first-class mind. Brendan sacrificed thirty years at the bar so you wouldn't have to scramble the way he did, and you're hauling takeout in Soho?" The words had the sharp, heavy bite of truth, the kind of truth Rory kept locked behind the iron doors of her own discipline. There were nights, alone in the narrow bed upstairs, when she could still recite the precedent cases from contract law, word for word, the rhythm of them beating against her skull like a phantom limb. The regret wasn't for the law, and it wasn't for the grey stone courts in Cardiff. It was for the girl who had believed the world was an orderly place governed by rules, logic, and fairness. "I don't have to be afraid of anyone here, Julian," Rory said, her voice dropping so low he had to lean in to catch it over the hum of the neon. "I don't check the locks four times before I can sleep. I don't apologize when someone else drops a glass. That’s worth more than a junior tenancy." Julian’s throat bobbed. He opened his mouth, perhaps to argue, perhaps to offer the easy, well-rehearsed pity of the comfortable, but the cold clarity in her blue eyes stopped him. He had come to London to be a success, to wear the sharp wool coats and take cabs through the West End, but standing beside her, he looked suddenly fragile—a boy playing at being an adult in a world whose violence he had never actually touched. "I'm getting married in June," Julian said abruptly. The non sequitur sounded desperate, an anchor tossed into deep water. "Carys and I. We're having the reception at the Manor House in St. Fagans." Rory looked at him, and for the first time, a small, genuine smile touched the corner of her mouth. It was wistful, stripped of malice. "Carys was always too good for you. Give her my love." "She'd want you there." "No," Rory said gently. "She wouldn't. And neither would you." Julian stood in silence for another minute, the glass empty in his hand. The weight of everything left unsaid—the shared library desks, the rainy walks across Cathays Park, the life they had both assumed they would share in the comfortable enclosure of the Welsh legal elite—settled between them like silt. He set the empty tumbler on the counter. He reached into his coat, pulled out a small, heavy business card with embossed gold lettering, and laid it beside the damp ten-pound note. "If you ever... if you change your mind," Julian said. "Or if you just want to let your father know you're alright through someone else. I won't tell him where you are. I swear." Rory didn't touch the card. "Take care of yourself, Julian." He hesitated, then turned and walked toward the door. The brass bell chimed once, sharp and bright, and the Soho drizzle swallowed him whole. The bar fell back into its quiet rhythm. Silas limped down the counter, picking up the empty glass and the ten-pound note. He picked up the business card, his hazel eyes flicking across the embossed address in Temple before his thumb casually flipped it over. "Friend of yours?" Silas asked, his voice gravelly and neutral. Rory watched the door where the green neon still reflected in the dark puddles outside. "Someone from before," she said. Silas gave a single, understanding nod. He slid the business card beneath the base of the brass register, out of sight, and reached under the counter to pull out an unlabelled bottle of amber whiskey. He poured a single finger into a clean tumbler and slid it across the wood until it rested against Rory's hand. "Drink that," Silas said softly. "Then go get some sleep, kid." Rory wrapped her fingers around the heavy glass, feeling the cold weight of the night settle into place, and took a drink.
created_at"2026-09-03T14:00:16.958Z" 9/3/2026, 2:00:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount8
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"He looked around [around]"
2"Rory said evenly [evenly]"
3"Rory said softly [softly]"
4"Julian turned fully [fully]"
5"Julian said abruptly [abruptly]"
6"Rory said gently [gently]"
7"Silas said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.348
82.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1745
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
2"perfectly"
3"suddenly"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1745
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"comfortable"
count2
5
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"tracing"
1"whisper"
2"silence"
3"intensity"
4"comfortable"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1741
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1279
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas9
Soho2
Yu-Fei1
Greek2
Street1
Cardiff3
Roath1
Park2
November1
Central1
Julian15
Powell1
London2
Rory17
Wig1
Pen1
West1
End1
Cathays1
Welsh1
Temple1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Julian"
4"Powell"
5"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"Cardiff"
4"Roath"
5"Park"
6"London"
7"West"
8"End"
9"Cathays"
10"Temple"
globalScore0.835
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1741
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean32.24
std22.78
cv0.707
sampleLengths
053
157
254
378
434
54
634
77
83
957
101
1119
1229
133
1446
157
168
1745
186
1957
2046
2147
2225
2355
248
2526
2656
2748
283
2958
3079
3120
3242
3395
3458
3530
3646
3733
3836
394
4010
4150
4232
4334
4410
4524
468
4737
4810
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs197
matches
0"were speaking"
63.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences108
ratio0.028
matches
0"His voice was smooth, carrying the faint, rounded cadence of suburban Cardiff—the clipped vowels of Roath Park and the university quad."
1"He had come to London to be a success, to wear the sharp wool coats and take cabs through the West End, but standing beside her, he looked suddenly fragile—a boy playing at being an adult in a world whose violence he had never actually touched."
2"The weight of everything left unsaid—the shared library desks, the rainy walks across Cathays Park, the life they had both assumed they would share in the comfortable enclosure of the Welsh legal elite—settled between them like silt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount930
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.024731182795698924
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0064516129032258064
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean16.12
std11.39
cv0.707
sampleLengths
026
127
221
336
410
529
615
723
817
938
1015
1119
124
138
1421
155
165
172
183
1914
205
2138
221
2319
2414
2515
263
2718
2828
293
304
318
3240
335
345
351
3614
3743
3819
3927
4019
4128
428
4317
4413
4542
468
476
489
4911
54.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.37962962962962965
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners41
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Just the stairs up to"
ratio0.013
91.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences78
matches
0"It was nearly eleven on"
1"Her shoulders still carried the"
2"His left knee hitched with"
3"He was tall, his brown"
4"His voice was smooth, carrying"
5"It had been four years."
6"She lifted her chin, meeting"
7"Her bright blue eyes gave"
8"He took a half-step back,"
9"she said quietly"
10"He looked around the dim"
11"He reached out as if"
12"He hesitated, catching himself"
13"He picked up his glass,"
14"he said after a long"
15"It was for the girl"
16"He opened his mouth, perhaps"
17"He had come to London"
18"It was wistful, stripped of"
19"He set the empty tumbler"
ratio0.321
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences78
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"It was nearly eleven on"
2"Rory sat on the end"
3"Her shoulders still carried the"
4"His left knee hitched with"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"The door swung open with"
7"Silas didn’t look up immediately,"
8"Rory caught the motion in"
9"The man stepped up to"
10"He was tall, his brown"
11"Rory went very still."
12"the man said"
13"His voice was smooth, carrying"
14"Silas set down his cloth."
15"Rory kept her head down,"
16"It had been four years."
17"The word hung in the"
18"She lifted her chin, meeting"
19"Her bright blue eyes gave"
ratio0.936
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.27% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory caught the motion in the glass first: a dark cashmere overcoat, an expensive umbrella shaken once with meticulous care, and a pair of polished brogues that…"
1"He was tall, his brown hair parted with the sharp precision of a barrister who billed by the quarter-hour."
2"She lifted her chin, meeting the gaze in the mirror before turning her head."
56.82% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Julian said, his voice dropping to an urgent, ragged whisper"
1"Julian shook, a bitter crease forming between his eyebrows"
2"Silas asked, his voice gravelly and neutral"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Julian breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.739
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.043
79.8802%