Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KY0EMRPRVKMSXWF4F435X0

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Duration:
5m 58s
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$0.043169
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Reka

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green sign above the door hummed like a trapped fly, and Aurora Carter stood in the rain with the last of her shift still in her bag, trying to decide whether a place called The Raven’s Nest was a threat or a promise. The neon threw a sickly light across the wet pavement of Soho, catching the gold pin on her Golden Empress vest, the water at the hem of her trousers, the pale crescent scar on the inside of her left wrist where a bracelet she no longer wore might have hidden it. Yu-Fei had pressed the address into her palm after the final tray. “If it gets too loud,” the owner had said, not looking up from the abacus she was not using, “go where the birds do not sing.” Aurora had thought she was being dismissed. Now, under the buzz of the sign, she thought she might have been sent to the edge of a cliff. She pushed the door open. The bar was dim, older-looking than the street, its walls papered with old maps and black-and-white photographs in which faces seemed to be waiting for captions. The air smelled of gin, dust, and cold stone. A few tables held men and women too tired to argue, and at the far end of the bar stood a man with grey-streaked auburn hair and a beard trimmed to precision. He had his back to her, turning a glass in a slow circle, and when he turned, Aurora felt the room narrow. Hazel eyes. A silver signet ring on his right hand. A stillness that was not calm but trained. Silas Blackwood. She had not thought of him by his full name in years, not since Cardiff, not since the kitchen where the barometer had talked about rain and he had let her win at chess by pretending the move was difficult. “You used to sit on that stool,” he said, “and fold your arms as if you were eight instead of five.” Aurora’s throat closed. “Si.” “Aurora.” He said her full name the way other people said the names of rooms. “You are later than the rain.” “That was a metaphor, I hope.” “It was a warning.” He moved along the bar to the stool where she had once sat, and his left leg took the distance in two parts, a small negotiation with the floor. “Coffee or gin?” “Coffee, if it is not an insult.” “It will be an insult, but a warm one.” She sat. The stool was lower than she remembered, or she was taller, or the years had compressed her into a smaller person. Her black hair had begun to curl at the edges from the rain, and under the low light her blue eyes looked too bright, as if the bar had caught them before she could. Silas went behind the counter and the maps swayed in the light as he passed. The black-and-white photographs held her gaze: faces she did not know, streets she might have walked, a woman in a coat whose face was blurred by age. She wondered if one of them was her. “You found the note,” Silas said, not as a question. “Yu-Fei said the birds do not sing.” “Yu-Fei says many strange things. She also says the fish remember the net.” He set a glass of water in front of her, then a mug so dark it looked like a hole in the table. “You drink this black.” “You used to say I had the palate of a horse.” “I said you had the taste of a person who was being asked to be reasonable.” He lowered himself to the other side of the bar, and for a moment he was not the man from the kitchen table, not the man who had once carried the chessboard to the window and let her believe the game mattered more than the weather, but something older, more carefully folded. “How long have you been in London?” “Two days.” “Two days and one delivery bag.” “It pays.” “It pays,” he agreed, as if that were both an answer and a verdict. Aurora wrapped her hands around the mug. The heat made her honest. “I did not expect to see you here.” “Expected is a dangerous word in this city. People use it when they would prefer surprise, or when they would prefer nothing at all.” “Do you own this place?” “I rent the walls. The rest belongs to people who do not ask questions.” He touched the silver ring on his right hand, once, like a pulse check. “You are thinking about the name.” “It is a bar.” “It is a house with a front door.” She laughed, but it came out thin, and he did not pretend not to hear it. That was the thing about Silas: he never pretended not to hear the small pieces fall. In Cardiff he had been the quiet man who came to her parents’ house when Brendan Carter had too much wine and too little patience, the man who knew where the spare key was and how much the barometer had fallen in the last hour. He had been forty when she was seven, and fifty when she had been seventeen and still thought he was merely a friend of the family, which was not true, because friends did not remember the exact year a girl stopped laughing in her own home. “You look different,” she said. “Different from the last time you left without saying so?” “Don’t do that.” “I don’t do anything. I am fifty-eight. I have a knee that files complaints and a bar that requires more patience than I have.” He smiled, but it did not reach his eyes. “You look like you have been delivered somewhere and not unpacked.” “I deliver. It is not the same.” “No. One carries things for other people. The other lets other people carry the weight.” He poured himself a measure of gin and did not drink it. “What else are you carrying?” Aurora looked at the map on the nearest wall, a faded chart of streets she did not know. “The flat above,” she said. “Eva said there was a flat above.” Silas’s hand stopped on the glass. “Upstairs.” “You know?” “I keep the key.” He said it plainly, and the plainness was worse than any lie. “The room has a window over the courtyard. It is cold in the mornings and dry in the rain. There is a stove, though I do not trust the stove. The previous tenant left a suitcase and a debt. I did not find either. There is a back room with a bookshelf that opens further than it looks; do not go there unless someone you trust is on the other side.” Aurora set the mug down. “You have been waiting for me.” “I have been keeping a door open.” “That is what waiting is.” “No. Waiting is sitting in a room and listening for a sound that may not come. Keeping a door open is deciding that if the sound comes, it will find a place to land.” He turned the glass once more. “Your mother called me three weeks ago.” The name entered like a key. Rory had not let herself think Jennifer Ellis without pain. “She told you I was coming.” “She told me you were coming whether you were ready or not. She used the phrase ‘enough London rain’ in a way that suggested she had been counting it.” Rory’s eyes burned, and she hated the weather for it. “Is she well?” “Your mother carries trouble like a coat. She says it keeps her warm.” Silas pushed the mug toward her. “Drink.” She did. The coffee was terrible, as promised, and good. “Why did she call you?” “Because I am the only person she trusts who has not made her feel small.” He said it without pride. “And because you have a way of disappearing into other people’s lives without leaving footprints.” “I don’t disappear.” “You leave. There is a difference, though I have used the words interchangeably for twenty years.” He leaned on the bar, and the green light from the sign outside caught the auburn in his beard. “When your mother told me about Evan, I told her to take you to the police.” Aurora’s hands tightened around the mug. The scar on her left wrist ached under the sleeve. “I know,” she said. “You knew.” “I knew what he was. I did not know what to do with it.” “I should have known better than to ask a girl of nineteen to be reasonable.” The words came out low, as if he had been carrying them in his pocket for years and had finally found the table. “I told her to be patient. I told you were strong. I told myself that strength was the same as safety. I was wrong.” Rory looked at him. “You were in Prague.” “Yes.” “I heard.” “Prague is a long way from a kitchen table, and the knee is worse in wet weather.” He held up the glass, not to drink, but to show the small tremor in his hand that the gin did not cause. “You think I am here because of the bar.” “Are you?” “A bar is a good excuse to be near people and not belong to them. A front door is easier to close than a promise.” He set the glass down. “I did not go into Prague because I wanted a limp. I went because someone told me it was necessary. When I came back, I found I had become useful in a way I did not like. This room is useful. It listens. It does not judge. It does not ask a woman why she is afraid of a man who brings her flowers.” The last sentence landed like a hand on her chest. Rory looked at the photographs on the wall, at the blurred faces, at the maps that promised all the world and none of it. “I am not afraid of flowers.” “No. You are afraid of the person who decides which flowers to send and which ones to wither.” She wanted to say he did not know. He knew. He had known the shape of Evan in her face before she had given him a name. He had known it in the way she stopped answering her phone, in the way she smiled too quickly, in the way she apologized for taking up space in her own house. He had known it and had chosen the easy line, the responsible line, the line that kept him from being the man who had to take a girl by the arm and put her in a car. “Take the coffee,” he said. “I did.” “Take the key.” From inside his coat he took a brass key on a leather cord and laid it on the bar between them. It was old, worn to a dull gold, and it looked as if it had been handled often. “The lock sticks if you lift before you turn. The window latch is on the left. Do not trust the stove. Do not trust the man in the flat next door who says he is a photographer and leaves lights on at odd hours. If you need anything, ask for Si. If you need nothing, that is also acceptable.” Aurora stared at the key. “You are giving me a flat.” “I am giving you a roof that does not ask you to be grateful for it.” “I don’t want charity.” “You do not want my charity. You want to be allowed to be tired without being punished for it.” He said it gently, and that was why it hurt. “I have spent twenty years making rooms for people who needed to disappear. This is one of them.” Outside, the rain changed its mind, softening from a slap to a whisper. The green sign hummed above the door, less angry now, more like a reminder. Aurora looked at the key, then at Silas. He was not the man from the kitchen table. He was older, more damaged, more careful with his words than with his hands. She was not the girl who had folded her arms on a stool and pretended the world was a game with rules. They had been old friends before either of them knew what the word meant, and the years had not erased that; they had only shown its cost. “You wanted to be a barrister,” he said. “I wanted to be someone who could make a room listen.” She touched the gold pin at her collar. “I have not found the room yet.” “This one listens.” “You talk too much.” “Only when you are small enough to ignore.” He almost smiled, and this time it reached the corners of his eyes. “Take the key, Rory.” She had not heard him use that name in years. It sat in her palm before she took the key, warm from his coat. She slipped the cord through the buttonhole of her Golden Empress vest, over the gold pin, so it hung where she could feel it against her chest. The bar seemed to exhale. Silas watched her, and for the first time since she had entered, his shoulders dropped a fraction, as if some weight he had been carrying without naming had finally been set down. “Thank you,” she said, and then, before she could stop herself, “for not asking what I did in London before I came.” He picked up the glass of gin he had not been drinking and finally raised it to his mouth. “You did not come to London. You came here. London is a country that pretends to be a city. This is a bar that pretends to be a refuge. The difference is important.” Aurora almost smiled. It was not much, but it was hers. “Coffee’s terrible,” she said. “It is,” Silas agreed. “It was worth it.” He nodded, as if she had said something both true and dangerous. “Next time, bring an umbrella.” “I don’t have one.” “Then learn to carry the rain like something you own.” He turned back to the bar, his limp easy now, almost invisible, and the green light from outside made the maps on the wall look like roads that had not yet decided where they led. Aurora stayed seated a little longer, the key warm in her hand, the bad coffee still warm in the mug, and for once the room did not feel like it might eat her. It felt like it had been waiting, and had not blamed her for arriving late.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences97
tagDensity0.33
leniency0.66
rawRatio0.031
effectiveRatio0.021
93.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2461
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"quickly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2461
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"weight"
2"whisper"
3"reminder"
4"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
83.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"think"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2461
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions35
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1419
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora12
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Golden2
Empress2
Blackwood1
Cardiff2
Silas9
Jennifer1
Ellis1
Rory4
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Raven"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Jennifer"
6"Ellis"
7"Rory"
8"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a hole in the table"
1"felt like it had been waiting, and had"
78.10% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.219
wordCount2461
matches
0"not calm but trained"
1"not to drink, but to show the small tremor in his hand"
2"not much, but it was hers"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences163
matches
0"erased that; they"
1"use that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean27.65
std33.25
cv1.203
sampleLengths
0160
15
289
318
442
521
64
721
86
936
107
119
12107
1310
147
1540
1611
1775
182
196
202
2114
2220
2324
245
2534
264
278
28123
295
3010
313
3244
337
3432
3530
367
372
3887
3911
407
415
4247
4322
4429
4513
4620
4715
4835
493
87.18% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences97
matches
0"being dismissed"
1"been sent"
2"was blurred"
3"been seventeen"
4"been handled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs234
matches
0"was not using"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences163
ratio0.012
matches
0"“The room has a window over the courtyard. It is cold in the mornings and dry in the rain. There is a stove, though I do not trust the stove. The previous tenant left a suitcase and a debt. I did not find either. There is a back room with a bookshelf that opens further than it looks; do not go there unless someone you trust is on the other side.”"
1"They had been old friends before either of them knew what the word meant, and the years had not erased that; they had only shown its cost."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1500
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.029333333333333333
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean15.1
std14.22
cv0.942
sampleLengths
044
151
212
333
420
55
626
79
832
922
102
118
128
132
1440
1521
163
171
1815
196
206
2133
223
237
249
252
2621
2734
2815
2927
308
3110
327
3336
344
3511
3668
377
382
396
402
4114
427
435
448
4524
465
4728
486
494
38.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.294478527607362
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences84
matches
0"She pushed the door open."
1"He had his back to"
2"She had not thought of"
3"He said her full name"
4"He moved along the bar"
5"Her black hair had begun"
6"She wondered if one of"
7"He set a glass of"
8"He lowered himself to the"
9"he agreed, as if that"
10"He touched the silver ring"
11"She laughed, but it came"
12"He had been forty when"
13"He smiled, but it did"
14"He poured himself a measure"
15"He said it plainly, and"
16"He turned the glass once"
17"He said it without pride"
18"He leaned on the bar,"
19"He held up the glass,"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences84
matches
0"The green sign above the"
1"The neon threw a sickly"
2"Yu-Fei had pressed the address"
3"the owner had said, not"
4"She pushed the door open."
5"The bar was dim, older-looking"
6"The air smelled of gin,"
7"He had his back to"
8"A silver signet ring on"
9"A stillness that was not"
10"She had not thought of"
11"Aurora’s throat closed."
12"He said her full name"
13"He moved along the bar"
14"The stool was lower than"
15"Her black hair had begun"
16"Silas went behind the counter"
17"The black-and-white photographs held her"
18"She wondered if one of"
19"Silas said, not as a"
ratio0.94
59.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Now, under the buzz of"
ratio0.012
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Her black hair had begun to curl at the edges from the rain, and under the low light her blue eyes looked too bright, as if the bar had caught them before she c…"
1"He had been forty when she was seven, and fifty when she had been seventeen and still thought he was merely a friend of the family, which was not true, because …"
2"He had known it and had chosen the easy line, the responsible line, the line that kept him from being the man who had to take a girl by the arm and put her in a…"
3"He nodded, as if she had said something both true and dangerous."
78.13% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he agreed, as if that were both an answer and a verdict"
1"He said, and the plainness was worse than any lie"
2"The words came out, as if he had been carrying them in his pocket for years and had finally found the table"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"the owner had (have)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
2"Silas agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences97
tagDensity0.165
leniency0.33
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.062
82.6320%