Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KY243ASGHDFPTSBXN3N8ZV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.024923
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon had been flickering before Aurora was inside, that thin emerald pulse reflected in wet cobbles and the blackened glass of The Raven's Nest. She came in from the Soho rain with a Yu-Fei thermal bag over one shoulder, the smell of scallion oil and charcoal still riding up from the taped cartons, and the first thing she noticed was the silence. Not empty, exactly. The bar held maybe five people, a cellist with a cracked case, two men arguing low over a pool table, a woman reading at the end. But the sound seemed to have been turned down, the way a street does when a car with a flat tire rolls past. The walls wore their old maps and photographs like armor, black-and-white faces looking out of frame, and above the bar, where the maps stopped, a row of bottles caught light from nowhere. Then she saw him. Silas stood behind the counter with his back partly turned, wiping a glass. He wore a dark shirt, sleeves folded, and the slight catch in his step when he reached for the bottle was there before she understood why. Grey-streaked auburn in his beard, hazel eyes under heavy lids, silver signet ring catching the lamplight as he turned. The glass stopped halfway. The change in him was not dramatic, not the way she had expected. It was in the absence of the man she remembered from behind the surface: the limp, the beard, the way his shoulders held the weight of a body that had been repaired badly. “Rory?” he said. Not her name. The old name, the one from Cardiff, from kitchen tables and her mother’s chalk dust and Brendan Carter’s too-large desk. She had not heard it in seven years. She had thought he was dead. “Si.” The syllable sat in her mouth like a bruise. He set the glass down carefully, as if it might tip. “You’re here.” Not a question. His voice was lower than she remembered, rough at the edges, but still carrying that careful control, the voice of a man who had spent years listening for footsteps in dark rooms. “Am I?” She set the thermal bag on a stool. “I’ve been in the flat above for a week. I only just came down.” He looked at her face a long moment, as if checking for a wound. “Eva sent you, I gather.” “Eva found the flat. I didn’t know the landlord was you.” She smiled, but it didn’t reach her blue eyes. “I could have told you.” “You could have.” He reached for a bottle of gin, then stopped, his hand hovering over the glass. “What year was it? When you stopped writing?” “Seven years ago.” “Seven.” He said it plainly. He poured a little gin, then added tonic, then ice. The sounds were too loud in the quiet. He pushed the glass across the counter. “You left without saying why.” “I left because I was alive and breathing and if I stopped, I’d have had to look at what I’d done.” The words came out cooler than she intended. She lifted the glass, wrapped her fingers around it, and the cold pressed into the scar on her left wrist, the small crescent from a childhood accident she had never explained to him. “I was twenty. I thought if I disappeared long enough, it would mean less.” “It meant something to me.” He said it without accusation, but the silence after was not gentle. “Your father asked about me once. After I left for Prague. He said I was a bad influence, but he said it the way you said it when you were small, which meant he was worried.” Aurora laughed, a short, unkind sound. “My father was always worried about the wrong people. He was a barrister, not a detective.” “He was a man who trusted one detective too much.” Silas’s jaw tightened. The limp in his left leg showed when he shifted, a tiny betrayal of the years. “I’m sorry about him. I should have called. I know that’s not a sentence that means anything now, but it’s the truest one I have.” She turned the glass in her hands. “You didn’t call.” “Prague went sideways.” He did not elaborate, but his right hand flexed on the counter, the signet ring gleaming. “I was in a hospital for three weeks, and when I came out, I didn’t know how to tell a twenty-year-old girl that her father’s old friend had broken something in a country with no streetlights. So I didn’t. I opened this place. I tried to keep my head down. And then I heard you had left, and I thought you’d decided you didn’t want a man with a bad knee and a bar full of maps.” “I thought you were gone.” She said it before she could stop it. “After the funeral. I kept meaning to write. I kept thinking if I wrote, I’d have to ask where you were, and if you were dead, I’d be asking for nothing. So I didn’t. That’s all. I wasn’t angry. I was afraid.” Silas looked at her as if she had just admitted a crime. “Afraid of what?” “Of being the person who waits.” She stared at the bar top, at the condensation on the glass. “I was in pre-law. I had lectures and my mother’s voice telling me to be sensible, and I was twenty, and I had already learned that the people who say they’ll call usually don’t. So I stopped counting on it.” He was quiet for a long time. The cellist had left. The two men at the pool table had gone out, one shaking his head, the other holding the door. The woman at the end lowered her book. The bar felt smaller, the photographs more like eyes. “You look tired,” Silas said. “You look old.” He smiled then, a small crooked thing. “Fair. You look like a delivery person.” “I am a delivery person.” She touched the thermal bag. “Golden Empress. Yu-Fei is a decent man. He lets me rest when I need to. It’s better than the flat. Better than London, actually, if you’re willing to be invisible for an hour.” “London is not your enemy,” he said. “It’s just indifferent. That’s all. It doesn’t hate you. It just forgets your name.” “I’m getting better at being forgotten.” He reached for another glass, filled it with water, and placed it near her elbow. “Then don’t be. Not here.” Aurora looked up. For a second the man she remembered surfaced: the broad-shouldered figure in a suit, the one who had taught her to lock a door three ways, who had stood by her mother’s classroom window in Cardiff and said, with great solemnity, that he was the family’s oldest friend and therefore her guardian in all emergencies, which was not strictly true but sounded important enough. Then the present closed over it: the limp, the beard, the grey at his temples, the scar of time in his hands. “Do you miss it?” she asked. “The work.” “Some of it,” he said. “The part where the truth was a shape you could hold. The rest is just a knee that aches when it rains and a back room I haven’t used in years.” He glanced toward the bookshelf, the one that opened, though no one else would know that. “I don’t miss pretending I was better at saying goodbye.” “I didn’t know how to say it either.” She picked up the gin, took a small sip, and let the burn settle. “I should have told you I was leaving. I should have told you it was because I was scared, not because you had done anything. I should have told you I kept your letters in a box under my bed until I didn’t know why I was keeping them.” “They’re gone now?” “I burned them.” The words came out with a shock of honesty. “In the flat in Notting Hill, the one with the broken radiator. I thought if I burned them, I could stop hearing your voice. It didn’t work. I still hear it when I’m angry, and that’s worse.” Silas nodded slowly. He did not offer comfort. He simply let the confession sit between them, a small bright thing on the bar top. The rain had thickened outside. The green neon pulsed through the glass, washing the maps in brief strokes of color. Aurora looked at the thermal bag, at the taped cartons, at the life she had built from small practical pieces: a job, a flat, a name on a delivery route, a scar she had stopped trying to hide. She looked at Silas, who had become a bar owner in Soho, a man with a limp and a secret room, a friend of her father who had carried a wound from Prague like a stone in his pocket. They had both kept going, not toward each other, not away, but sideways, the way people do when the ground under their feet is not quite firm. “I’m off in an hour,” she said. “I’ll be up. The flat is above the stairs. There’s a door in the kitchen that leads to a corridor, and the corridor has a number on it.” “I know where it is,” he said. “I know.” She lifted the thermal bag. “I didn’t want to say anything before. I wasn’t sure which one of us would pretend it hadn’t happened.” “Neither of us,” he admitted. Aurora set the glass down, empty enough to leave a ring on the wood. “If you’re still here at nine, I’ll come back. Not for gin. For the lease. I need to sign it, and I’d rather not knock on the wrong door.” “I’ll be here.” She looked at him then, really looked, and saw the old authority still there, not in the voice but in the way he held the silence: patient, watchful, ready to listen for something no one else could hear. Silas picked up the empty glass from the counter and turned it once in the lamplight, as if he might find a message in the water ring. Aurora left before she could say something that might break the shape of the evening. The door opened with a soft sigh, the neon catching her black hair for a moment, then the street took her again. She did not look back far enough to see him put the glass away, only the wet cobbles, the green blink of the sign, and the small, steady ache of a name she had not used in seven years.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.436
leniency0.873
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1778
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1778
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"footsteps"
4"gleaming"
5"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen80
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1778
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1086
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora6
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Yu-Fei1
Cardiff2
Brendan1
Carter1
Silas7
Prague1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Raven"
2"Brendan"
3"Carter"
4"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if checking for a wound"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords3.375
wordCount1778
matches
0"not a sentence that means anything now, but it’s the truest one I have"
1"not elaborate, but his right hand flexed on the counter, the signet ring gleami"
2"not strictly true but sounded important enough"
3"not toward each other, not away, but sideways, the way people do"
4"not away, but sideways, the way people do"
5"not in the voice but in the way he held the silence: patient, watchful, ready to"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean39.51
std37.3
cv0.944
sampleLengths
0148
14
2108
33
437
510
648
724
819
925
1026
113
1235
1376
1453
1522
1654
1710
1896
1955
2015
2158
2247
235
243
2514
2643
2721
286
2920
3089
318
3262
3371
343
3549
3624
37124
3835
397
4026
415
4243
433
44141
96.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"been turned"
1"been repaired"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences107
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1092
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"present closed over it:"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03205128205128205
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009157509157509158
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean16.62
std13.98
cv0.841
sampleLengths
026
138
23
326
423
532
64
713
826
919
104
1113
1233
133
143
1520
168
176
1810
1911
205
2132
2210
2314
2414
255
2620
275
2818
298
303
315
3210
338
347
355
3629
3733
3814
3917
4036
416
4216
4313
4416
4525
467
473
4819
4977
38.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.32710280373831774
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners35
96.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Then the present closed over"
ratio0.029
28.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences69
matches
0"She came in from the"
1"He wore a dark shirt,"
2"It was in the absence"
3"She had not heard it"
4"She had thought he was"
5"He set the glass down"
6"His voice was lower than"
7"She set the thermal bag"
8"He looked at her face"
9"She smiled, but it didn’t"
10"He reached for a bottle"
11"He said it plainly"
12"He poured a little gin,"
13"He pushed the glass across"
14"She lifted the glass, wrapped"
15"He said it without accusation,"
16"She turned the glass in"
17"He did not elaborate, but"
18"She said it before she"
19"She stared at the bar"
ratio0.478
17.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences69
matches
0"The green neon had been"
1"She came in from the"
2"The bar held maybe five"
3"The walls wore their old"
4"Silas stood behind the counter"
5"He wore a dark shirt,"
6"The glass stopped halfway."
7"The change in him was"
8"It was in the absence"
9"The old name, the one"
10"She had not heard it"
11"She had thought he was"
12"The syllable sat in her"
13"He set the glass down"
14"His voice was lower than"
15"She set the thermal bag"
16"He looked at her face"
17"She smiled, but it didn’t"
18"He reached for a bottle"
19"He said it plainly"
ratio0.884
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His voice was lower than she remembered, rough at the edges, but still carrying that careful control, the voice of a man who had spent years listening for foots…"
1"For a second the man she remembered surfaced: the broad-shouldered figure in a suit, the one who had taught her to lock a door three ways, who had stood by her …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.036
84.6899%