Run: 2026-09-03-01M1KY9BVMSM9B284JZKC8EX79

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Duration:
3m 41s
Cost:
$0.035001
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Tencent

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain had turned the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven's Nest into a smeared green bruise on the wet pavement. Aurora Carter shouldered the delivery satchel higher on her hip, shoved wet strands of straight shoulder-length black hair out of her bright blue eyes, and pushed the door open with a jangle of brass bells. Inside, the bar was dimly lit, the kind of gloom that felt earned rather than designed. Old maps curled on the walls—coastlines that had since been renamed, borders that no longer held—and black-and-white photographs crowded the panelling: men in raincoats on foreign streets, a younger Silas with a cigarette and a hard, unreadable stare. The air smelled of lemon polish, spilled bitter, and something older, the sediment of smoke and secrets. A bookshelf stood at the back, crammed with ledgers and novels, its spine titles too uniform to be accidental. Rory gave it no more than a glance as she scanned the room for a customer foolish enough to order Golden Empress takeaway at this hour. Then she saw the man behind the bar, and the bottom fell out of the evening. He was tall—six-one, she remembered, though eight years had stooped his shoulders and streaked his auburn hair with grey. He had a beard now, neatly trimmed, the same colour as his hair, and it did nothing to soften the quiet authority of his face. Hazel eyes lifted from the glass he was polishing. On his right hand, the silver signet ring caught the low light. He set the glass down and moved toward the till, and that was when she saw the limp—a slight, unmistakable drag of his left leg, as if the knee had been remade by a surgeon who hadn't finished the job properly. Rory's breath stopped. The last time she had seen Silas Blackwood, he had been standing in her father's study in Cardiff, a glass of Brendan's good whiskey in hand, laughing at something her mother had said from the kitchen. He had not limped then. He had not owned a bar. He had not had grey in his hair, and he had carried the faint, clean scent of the sea and whatever trouble her father's old friend always brought in from wherever he had been. "Aurora?" he said. His voice was lower than she remembered, roughened at the edges. Then, softer, disbelieving: "Rory?" She managed a nod. "Hello, Silas." He came around the end of the bar, moving carefully, the limp more pronounced on the flagstones. Up close, she saw the lines around his eyes—fifty-eight years, and most of them spent looking over his shoulder—and the faint scar near his temple she didn't remember. He stopped an arm's length away, as if unsure whether she would bolt. "Christ," he said. "Look at you." She almost laughed. Look at her—soaked to the skin, black hair plastered to her skull, the shoulder-length ends dripping onto the collar of her jacket. She was five-six and felt about three inches tall under his gaze. "I'm delivering," she said, and held up the satchel with its Golden Empress logo. "Someone here ordered Yu-Fei's special. I just—" "To hell with the order." A flicker of the old Silas, the one who used to sneak her sips of sherry when her parents weren't looking. He took the satchel from her as if it weighed nothing and set it on the bar. "You're shaking." "I'm wet." "You're shaking," he repeated, with the quiet certainty of a man who had spent a lifetime reading people and knew the difference between cold and fear. He reached for a bottle and poured two fingers of amber into a glass. "Sit." "I'm on shift." "Yu-Fei won't mind." He inclined his head toward the photographs on the wall. "She and I go back. Sit, Rory." She sat. The stool felt solid under her, the bar smooth and worn. She wrapped her hands around the glass and felt the warmth seep into her palms. Across the room, the green neon pulsed against the window glass, and the bookshelf at the back seemed to lean inward, listening. Silas watched her. "How long has it been?" "Eight years," she said. "You came to Dad's fiftieth. I was seventeen." "Seventeen." He smiled faintly. "You had a mouth on you and no fear. You told my old CO to go to hell in your father's hallway, and he laughed so hard he spilled his drink." "I remember." She took a sip; the whisky burned a clean line down her throat. "He deserved it." "And now?" Silas asked. The word hung between them, gentle and unyielding. "Now you watch doors." Her fingers tightened on the glass. On the bar, his right hand rested, the silver ring a dull gleam. She saw the way his thumb moved over the metal, a habitual gesture. "People change," she said. "Not that much." She didn't answer. Outside, a motorbike snarled past; inside, a man at the far end of the bar laughed, and the sound was too loud, too sudden. Rory flinched—a full-body flinch, shoulders hitching up toward her ears—and her right hand flew to her left wrist, fingers finding the small crescent-shaped scar there, the one she'd had since she was a child and a broken swing in Roath Park had laid her open on a summer afternoon. She stilled, heat creeping into her cheeks. When she dared look up, Silas's hazel eyes had not moved from her face. "Who did that to you?" he asked. The question was quiet, but it landed with the weight of a closing door. Not *what happened*. Not *are you alright*. Who. Rory set the glass down. Her cool-headed core—the part of her that had planned the leaving, that had packed a bag while Evan slept, that had counted out her savings and called Eva from a payphone at Victoria—reasserted itself. "No one," she said. "Not anymore." Silas didn't look away. "Evan?" She hadn't said his name aloud in months, and hearing it in this dim room, in this voice that belonged to her childhood, loosened something behind her ribs. She nodded once. His jaw tightened. He reached for the bottle, then thought better of it and set it down. "And you came to London." "Eva said I could stay with her." The lie was thin, and they both knew it; Eva's flat was a shoebox with a boyfriend who hated guests. "I got the job with Yu-Fei. Deliveries. Enough to keep moving." "Enough to keep moving," he echoed. He was quiet for a moment, his gaze distant, fixed on something past her shoulder—a black-and-white photograph of two young men in uniform, decades ago, both of them still whole. "Your father thought I was dead, you know. After Prague, when the letters stopped." "I know." Rory touched the scar on her left wrist again, then forced her hand flat on the bar. "He wrote to you. For years. Then he stopped. He thought—" She hesitated. "We all thought you'd decided we weren't worth the trouble." Silas's mouth twisted. He looked at his left leg, at the knee that had been shattered in a botched operation in another city under another sky, the injury that had ended his career and started this bar. "I meant to write. I meant to come and see you. After the operation, after... the retirement, I told myself I'd wait until I was fit company. Then the bar. Then the network." He shrugged, a small, unpracticed gesture. "The years have a way of closing over a man's good intentions. I'm sorry, Rory." The regret in his voice was a living thing, and it made her chest ache. She had carried her own: the letters she'd started in her head and never sent, the way she'd let the silence grow because she'd been ashamed of the woman she'd become, of the way she'd stayed with Evan far longer than she should have, of the frightened thing in the mirror. "I should have written too," she said. "I was... busy surviving." He looked at her then, really looked, and she saw the assessment in his hazel eyes soften into something else. "You're here now," he said. "That's the part that matters." A log shifted in the grate; the fire spat. Somewhere behind the bookshelf, she knew now, there was a hidden room where men like Silas met and decided things. She didn't need to know what. She only needed the flat upstairs, if he still had it, and the job across town, and the certainty—temporary, fragile—that she could breathe. Silas seemed to read the thought. He turned the glass slowly on the bar, the signet ring clicking once against the wood. "The flat above the Nest is empty," he said. "It's not much. One bedroom, a view of the alley, and the boiler makes a noise like a dying seagull. But it's safe. And Yu-Fei's always short a driver." Rory's throat closed. She thought of Eva's sofa, of the way Evan's shadow still stretched long across her sleep, of the girl in her father's study who had told a room full of spies to go to hell and meant it. "Why?" she asked. "Because your father would never forgive me if I let his daughter sleep on a stranger's sofa," Silas said. "And because I've had enough of losing people to silence." She looked at the crescent scar on her left wrist, at the silver ring on his hand, at the green neon bleeding through the rain on the window. The tension between who they had been—the careless girl and the untouched spymaster—and who they were now—a woman learning to be unafraid and a bar owner with a bad knee and worse regrets—settled over the bar like the smoke in the photographs. "Okay," she said. Silas nodded, once, and poured them both another drink. Outside, the rain kept falling, and the green sign kept buzzing, and for the first time in a long time, Rory Carter let herself imagine that morning might come.
created_at"2026-09-03T15:30:35.521Z" 9/3/2026, 3:30:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He smiled faintly [faintly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.04
91.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1695
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1695
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"unreadable"
2"scanned"
3"flicker"
4"warmth"
5"pulsed"
6"weight"
7"echoed"
8"shattered"
9"silence"
10"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1675
ratio0.003
matches
0"what happened"
1"are you alright"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1366
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter2
Silas12
Golden2
Empress2
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
Brendan1
Roath1
Park1
Evan3
Eva3
Victoria1
Rory7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Brendan"
5"Evan"
6"Eva"
7"Victoria"
8"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Roath"
2"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1675
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"imagine that morning"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean38.95
std29.59
cv0.76
sampleLengths
059
1116
216
3106
484
518
66
758
86
958
1045
112
1241
133
1420
1550
168
1712
1835
1918
2016
2136
223
2397
247
2522
2645
275
2831
2922
3038
3150
3242
3391
3477
3530
3658
3760
3844
3929
4070
413
4238
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences96
matches
0"been renamed"
1"been remade"
2"been shattered"
3"been ashamed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs233
matches
0"was polishing"
1"weren't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences121
ratio0.116
matches
0"Old maps curled on the walls—coastlines that had since been renamed, borders that no longer held—and black-and-white photographs crowded the panelling: men in raincoats on foreign streets, a younger Silas with a cigarette and a hard, unreadable stare."
1"He was tall—six-one, she remembered, though eight years had stooped his shoulders and streaked his auburn hair with grey."
2"He set the glass down and moved toward the till, and that was when she saw the limp—a slight, unmistakable drag of his left leg, as if the knee had been remade by a surgeon who hadn't finished the job properly."
3"Up close, she saw the lines around his eyes—fifty-eight years, and most of them spent looking over his shoulder—and the faint scar near his temple she didn't remember."
4"Look at her—soaked to the skin, black hair plastered to her skull, the shoulder-length ends dripping onto the collar of her jacket."
5"\"I remember.\" She took a sip; the whisky burned a clean line down her throat."
6"Outside, a motorbike snarled past; inside, a man at the far end of the bar laughed, and the sound was too loud, too sudden."
7"Rory flinched—a full-body flinch, shoulders hitching up toward her ears—and her right hand flew to her left wrist, fingers finding the small crescent-shaped scar there, the one she'd had since she was a child and a broken swing in Roath Park had laid her open on a summer afternoon."
8"Her cool-headed core—the part of her that had planned the leaving, that had packed a bag while Evan slept, that had counted out her savings and called Eva from a payphone at Victoria—reasserted itself."
9"\"Eva said I could stay with her.\" The lie was thin, and they both knew it; Eva's flat was a shoebox with a boyfriend who hated guests."
10"He was quiet for a moment, his gaze distant, fixed on something past her shoulder—a black-and-white photograph of two young men in uniform, decades ago, both of them still whole."
11"A log shifted in the grate; the fire spat."
12"She only needed the flat upstairs, if he still had it, and the job across town, and the certainty—temporary, fragile—that she could breathe."
13"The tension between who they had been—the careless girl and the untouched spymaster—and who they were now—a woman learning to be unafraid and a bar owner with a bad knee and worse regrets—settled over the bar like the smoke in the photographs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1396
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.02650429799426934
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0057306590257879654
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean13.84
std11.72
cv0.846
sampleLengths
024
135
216
338
417
519
626
716
819
925
109
1112
1241
133
1436
155
166
1734
183
1911
204
214
222
2317
2428
2513
263
273
283
2922
3012
3114
327
3326
3417
352
362
3726
3814
391
403
4113
427
432
4411
4515
4622
473
485
494
58.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.39669421487603307
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then she saw the man"
1"Then, softer, disbelieving:"
2"Somewhere behind the bookshelf, she"
ratio0.038
22.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences79
matches
0"He was tall—six—one, she remembered,"
1"He had a beard now,"
2"He set the glass down"
3"He had not limped then."
4"He had not owned a"
5"He had not had grey"
6"His voice was lower than"
7"She managed a nod."
8"He came around the end"
9"He stopped an arm's length"
10"She almost laughed."
11"She was five-six and felt"
12"she said, and held up"
13"He took the satchel from"
14"he repeated, with the quiet"
15"He reached for a bottle"
16"He inclined his head toward"
17"She wrapped her hands around"
18"He smiled faintly"
19"She took a sip; the"
ratio0.494
54.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences79
matches
0"Rain had turned the distinctive"
1"Aurora Carter shouldered the delivery"
2"The air smelled of lemon"
3"A bookshelf stood at the"
4"Rory gave it no more"
5"He was tall—six—one, she remembered,"
6"He had a beard now,"
7"Hazel eyes lifted from the"
8"He set the glass down"
9"Rory's breath stopped."
10"The last time she had"
11"He had not limped then."
12"He had not owned a"
13"He had not had grey"
14"His voice was lower than"
15"She managed a nod."
16"He came around the end"
17"He stopped an arm's length"
18"She almost laughed."
19"She was five-six and felt"
ratio0.81
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Old maps curled on the walls—coastlines that had since been renamed, borders that no longer held—and black-and-white photographs crowded the panelling: men in r…"
1"Her cool-headed core—the part of her that had planned the leaving, that had packed a bag while Evan slept, that had counted out her savings and called Eva from …"
2"She hadn't said his name aloud in months, and hearing it in this dim room, in this voice that belonged to her childhood, loosened something behind her ribs."
3"She thought of Eva's sofa, of the way Evan's shadow still stretched long across her sleep, of the girl in her father's study who had told a room full of spies t…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.04
85.4429%