Run: 2026-09-03-01M1M1TVTQ6R20GEJTGYWB8YBA

Run Details

Duration:
4m 27s
Cost:
$0.044537
Provider:
Tencent

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door buzzed like a trapped wasp, casting a sickly glow onto the wet pavement of Soho. Rory shifted the insulated bag of Golden Empress takeout higher on her shoulder, her straight black hair plastered to her cheeks from the rain. It was only mid-afternoon, but the Raven’s Nest was already dim, the windows fogged with condensation and the smell of lemon polish and spilled bitter. She pushed the door open. A little bell chimed, cheerful and incongruous in the gloom. The bar was empty save for the man behind the counter. He stood with his back to her, reaching for a bottle on a high shelf, and the movement was wrong. Not the easy stretch of a man in his prime, but a careful, shifting motion, a slight falter on his left leg as he came down. He set the bottle on the counter and turned. He was six-one, she remembered, a giant to her fifteen-year-old self, though the years and the injury had stooped him slightly. Now he was fifty-eight, with grey-streaked auburn hair and a neatly trimmed beard to match. He wore a silver signet ring on his right hand; it caught the low light as he stilled. His hazel eyes, sharp as broken glass, missed nothing. “Delivery,” Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt. She set the bag on the polished wood. “Golden Empress. Yu-Fei said you’d have cash ready.” The man didn’t reach for the bag. He was looking at her, really looking, and something in his face loosened, then tightened again. “Aurora?” he said. No one had called her Aurora in a long time. In London she was Rory; in Cardiff, Evan had snarled it like a curse. But this man said it like a key turning in a lock. “Si?” she breathed. He smiled, a rueful, sideways thing. “In the flesh, such as it is. Though I answer to Silas now. Silas Blackwood, proprietor of this fine establishment.” He swept a hand out, indicating the empty room. The walls were covered with old maps—yellowed charts of coastlines and cities she didn’t recognize—and black-and-white photographs of men in trench coats. In the back, a bookshelf stood slightly ajar, revealing a sliver of darkness that didn’t look like it held any books. Silas followed her gaze and gave a fractional shake of his head. “Don’t mind that. Just a place to keep the good stock.” “I didn’t know this was your place,” Rory said. She unzipped the bag, pulling out cartons, keeping her hands busy. She was aware of her left wrist, the small crescent-shaped scar there, pale against her skin. “I thought you were still in Prague. Or dead.” “Not dead,” he said. “Though Prague came close.” He moved to the till, and she saw the limp clearly now, a hitch in his step he didn’t bother to hide. “The knee, mostly. A botched operation, they called it. I called it a bloody mess. The Foreign Office pensioned me off, and I bought a bar. One cliché at a time, eh?” He pushed the cash across the counter, his signet ring clicking against the wood. His eyes dropped to her hands as she took the money, and she knew he’d seen the scar. “You still have it,” he said. She covered her left wrist with her right hand, then stopped herself. Pride. He would see the flinch for what it was. “It doesn’t fade.” “No,” he agreed. “The important ones don’t.” He held her gaze. Ten years fell away, and she was fifteen again, sitting in his study in Cardiff while he told her stories about the ports on his maps. He had been clean-shaven then, without the grey at his temples, and he had moved like a man who had never been shot. Now he was a stranger wearing her old friend’s face. “You left without saying goodbye,” she said. Something moved behind his eyes—regret, raw and unguarded. He picked up a glass and began to polish it, though it was already clean. “I got a call. Three weeks, they said. It turned into three years. By the time I got out, I thought it was too late to write. You don’t send postcards to a girl who’s already grown up.” “I wasn’t grown up. I waited for you to write. I thought you’d forgotten me.” “I never forgot you, Rory.” The cloth stilled on the glass. “Your mother Jennifer wrote to me. She said you were at Cardiff, reading Pre-Law. Brendan’s idea, I’d wager. The old barrister wanting his daughter in the law. Is she still teaching?” “Still teaching,” Rory said. “Dad retired from the bench, does consultancy now.” She leaned against the counter, the fight going out of her. The rain drummed on the window. Outside, the green neon sign flickered, then steadied. “I hated every second. I wanted to be an explorer. I wanted to trace the maps, remember?” “I remember.” His voice was soft. “You had a fingerprint like a compass. North, always north.” He set the glass down. “What happened to her? The girl who wanted to sail to every port on that wall?” Rory thought of Evan’s hand closing around her wrist, the way he’d laughed when she talked about leaving, the suitcase she’d packed in the dark while he slept off the whisky. She thought of the bruises she’d hidden under cardigans, the way she’d learned to walk softly and speak softer. She shoved the memories down, but not fast enough. Silas saw it. Of course he saw it—he had spent a lifetime reading people, and she was an open book compared to the marks he used to run. He didn’t ask. He reached beneath the counter and pulled out a bottle of amber whiskey and a glass. He poured two fingers and slid it toward her. “On the house. Yu-Fei doesn’t need to know.” “I’m working.” “You’re soaked to the skin and you flinch when the door bangs. Drink the damn whiskey, Rory.” She drank. It burned going down, a welcome heat in her chest. When she opened her eyes, Silas was watching her with an expression she couldn’t decipher. “We were friends once, you and I,” she said, the words slipping out before she could stop them. “The best kind,” Silas replied. “The kind that doesn’t need a reason.” He paused, and the weight of the years settled in the silence between them. “There’s a flat above the bar. Second floor. It’s empty. Previous tenant did a runner owing me two months’ rent I’ll never see. It needs a coat of paint and someone to water the fern by the window. Very cheap, if you want it.” Rory stared at him. She thought of the hostel in Brixton, six bunks to a room and a lock that didn’t work. She thought of Evan, and how he would never think to look for her above a spy’s bar in Soho. “Why?” she asked. He shrugged, a fluid lift of one shoulder. “Call it an old man’s regret. Call it insurance. A friend living above the bar keeps the riffraff out.” His hazel eyes crinkled at the corners. “Or maybe I just want someone around who remembers me before I was the sad bastard with the limp.” The unspoken thing hung in the air: *and I can see you’re running, and I couldn’t save the people in Prague, and I couldn’t save you from whatever happened in Cardiff, but I can give you a room with a lock that works.* “I can pay rent,” she said. “Not much, but I’ll pay.” “We’ll argue about the rent later.” He reached under the counter and produced a key on a plain brass ring. He set it beside the cash. “Top of the stairs, second door on the left. Key’s under the mat, but don’t tell anyone I told you that. I have a reputation.” She laughed, and it felt like something unknotting in her chest. She pocketed the key, the metal warm from his hand. “Thanks, Si.” “Silas,” he corrected, but he was smiling. “And Rory?” She paused, the empty delivery bag in her hand. “Lock the door behind you,” he said. “And if anyone comes looking for you—anyone at all—you tell them you’re the niece of the Spymaster, and you sleep with a shotgun under the bed. They’ll believe it. I certainly would.” She met his gaze, the bright blue of her eyes steady now, the fear pushed down into some deep, cold place where it couldn’t touch her. “I don’t have a shotgun.” “Then borrow mine,” Silas said, nodding at the umbrella stand by the door. “Just don’t tell the police.” Rory pushed open the door. The bell chimed again, cheerful in the gloom. Outside, the rain had eased to a drizzle, and the green neon sign painted the wet pavement the color of old money. She stepped out into it, the key heavy in her pocket, the whiskey warm in her belly, and for the first time since she’d left Cardiff, she wasn’t looking over her shoulder.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.521
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"gloom"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"flickered"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords36
totalWords1518
ratio0.024
matches
0"and I can see you’re running, and I couldn’t save the people in Prague, and I couldn’t save you from whatever happened in Cardiff, but I can give you a room with a lock that works."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1039
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Golden1
Empress1
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora1
London1
Rory8
Cardiff4
Evan3
Ten1
Silas5
Brixton1
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Brixton"
4"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like something unknotting in her c"
68.25% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.318
wordCount1518
matches
0"Not the easy stretch of a man in his prime, but a careful, shifting motion, a slight falter on his left leg"
1"Not much, but I’ll pay"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean36.14
std24.85
cv0.688
sampleLengths
071
181
263
325
423
53
636
73
8101
945
1062
1132
126
1325
1470
157
1661
1715
1842
1954
2037
2159
2256
238
242
2517
2627
2718
2870
2942
303
3153
3243
3311
3451
3523
369
379
3839
3931
4018
4167
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"been shot"
96.91% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was looking"
1"was watching"
2"wasn’t looking"
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences110
ratio0.045
matches
0"He wore a silver signet ring on his right hand; it caught the low light as he stilled."
1"In London she was Rory; in Cardiff, Evan had snarled it like a curse."
2"The walls were covered with old maps—yellowed charts of coastlines and cities she didn’t recognize—and black-and-white photographs of men in trench coats."
3"Something moved behind his eyes—regret, raw and unguarded."
4"Of course he saw it—he had spent a lifetime reading people, and she was an open book compared to the marks he used to run."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1053
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02564102564102564
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008547008547008548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean13.8
std9.33
cv0.676
sampleLengths
022
124
225
35
410
511
620
726
89
921
1015
1118
129
139
148
158
167
1716
183
1910
2014
2112
223
236
2429
2522
2621
2712
2811
299
3011
3116
329
334
3426
3532
3614
3718
386
3912
401
419
423
433
448
4526
4623
4710
487
498
55.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.39090909090909093
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners43
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Of course he saw it—he"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences74
matches
0"It was only mid-afternoon, but"
1"She pushed the door open."
2"He stood with his back"
3"He set the bottle on"
4"He was six-one, she remembered,"
5"He wore a silver signet"
6"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
7"She set the bag on"
8"He was looking at her,"
9"He smiled, a rueful, sideways"
10"He swept a hand out,"
11"She unzipped the bag, pulling"
12"She was aware of her"
13"He moved to the till,"
14"He pushed the cash across"
15"His eyes dropped to her"
16"She covered her left wrist"
17"He would see the flinch"
18"He held her gaze"
19"He had been clean-shaven then,"
ratio0.595
41.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences74
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rory shifted the insulated bag"
2"It was only mid-afternoon, but"
3"She pushed the door open."
4"A little bell chimed, cheerful"
5"The bar was empty save"
6"He stood with his back"
7"He set the bottle on"
8"He was six-one, she remembered,"
9"He wore a silver signet"
10"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
11"Rory said, her voice steadier"
12"She set the bag on"
13"The man didn’t reach for"
14"He was looking at her,"
15"He smiled, a rueful, sideways"
16"He swept a hand out,"
17"The walls were covered with"
18"Silas followed her gaze and"
19"She unzipped the bag, pulling"
ratio0.838
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Now he was fifty-eight, with"
1"Now he was a stranger"
ratio0.027
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He had been clean-shaven then, without the grey at his temples, and he had moved like a man who had never been shot."
1"Rory thought of Evan’s hand closing around her wrist, the way he’d laughed when she talked about leaving, the suitcase she’d packed in the dark while he slept o…"
65.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"She leaned, the fight going out of her"
2"she said, the words slipping out before she could stop them"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
2"he corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.125
84.5277%