Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DE8RYF2E94XMTMM5F6HBG

Run Details

Duration:
1m 29s
Cost:
$0.006162
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The cab wouldn't take her past the gate. The driver had looked at the dark seam of the park, at the hour, at her, and quoted a number for the last quarter mile that was less a price than a refusal. She'd paid him and got out anyway, and he'd pulled away fast enough that the gravel spun under his tyres and rattled off the gateposts behind her. Richmond Park at midnight. She'd walked it a hundred times in daylight, with Eva, with a coffee in each hand, the deer grazing like they'd been painted there. None of that was here now. The path was the same path. The trees were the same trees. But the dark had changed the proportions of things, stretched the distance between one lamp and the next until the gaps felt less like night and more like absence. Rory kept her hands in her coat pockets. Her right hand closed around the pendant, warm against her palm, and she told herself again that this was a stupid thing to be doing. The pendant had been warm for three nights. Not hot. Not glowing. Just warm, the way a stone sits after the sun has been on it, and it was warmest when she turned west. She'd tested it. East, north, south — cold as a coin. West, and it beat against her breastbone like a second pulse. She knew what it meant. The thing had a single trick, and she'd learned it the hard way. It woke near a door. There was no door in Richmond Park. There was no door for miles. So she walked west. The sound went first. She didn't notice it leave, only that at some point she'd stopped hearing the city — the long hum of the M25, the planes stacked over Heathrow, the far-off shudder of a train. She stopped and stood still and listened, and there was nothing to listen to. No owls. No foxes. Not even the small, constant ticking of insects in the grass, which you never notice until it's gone. The park had been loud with living things a minute ago. Now it was holding its breath, and she was inside the held breath, and the only sound in the world was her own boots on the path. She walked on. The path bent west. The trees on either side of it were the same trees, and then they were the same trees again, and she had the distinct and unpleasant sense that she was walking on a treadmill made of oaks. The grass gave way to a bridle path, and the bridle path gave way to a stand of oaks she didn't remember. That was the first thing. She knew this park. She knew the oaks at the top of the rise, seven of them, planted in a ring by some Victorian with a taste for symmetry. These were not those. These were older. Their trunks were the grey of old bone, and they grew in a circle so exact that it had to be a making, not an accident. Between them, wildflowers. Rory stopped. It was the second week of November. The frost had come early that year; she'd scraped it off the wing mirror of the Golden Empress's moped three mornings running. And here, in the middle of it, bluebells and foxgloves and something low and white that she couldn't name stood up out of the leaf litter as if it were June, as if the whole clearing had simply declined to be part of the year. The air smelled of cut grass and warm rain. It smelled of summer, and it was wrong the way a photograph of your own face is wrong when the eyes are the wrong way round. The pendant was hot now. Not warm. Hot. She took it out. The little crimson stone hung on its silver chain, and there, in the dark, it glowed — a faint inner light, like a coal under ash, like something breathing. "Okay," she said, out loud, because her voice was a thing she could still control. "Okay." The clearing was empty. She made herself look at all of it, properly, the way she'd been taught to look at a room before she trusted it: corners first, exits second, everything that could hide a person third. The standing stones at the boundary — the oaks — cast no shadows, she noticed, because there was no moon and no light to cast them, and yet she could see them perfectly well, every knot in the bark, every ridge of root. She could see the flowers. She could see her own hands. She looked at her hands for a while. Then she looked up, and the trees were closer. Not much. Not enough to be sure. But the ring felt smaller than it had when she'd stepped into it, the way a room feels smaller when someone has shut the door behind you. She turned around. The path was gone. Not overgrown — gone. There was grass where the path had been, undisturbed grass, silvered and flat, as though nothing had walked it in years. As though she hadn't. "Right," she said. Her voice didn't carry. That was the thing she noticed next: it didn't carry. She was standing in the open air with nothing for a hundred yards but trunks and flowers, and her voice went out of her mouth and stopped, dead, three feet away, like she'd spoken into a coat. The flowers moved. Not the wind — she waited for the wind, and there wasn't any, and the flowers moved anyway, a slow ripple that started at the far edge of the clearing and ran toward her and stopped. All of it at once. A hundred heads turning. Rory did not move. That was her one good habit; Evan had taught her that, in the way that only bad things teach good ones. When you don't know what's happening, don't run. Running tells it where you are. Something breathed. It was a big sound. Not loud — big, the way a cathedral is big, a sound with a room inside it. In, and out. In, and out. Slow. Patient. The kind of breathing that had been going on before she got here and would be going on after. She told herself it was the wind in the oaks. She told herself that for about four seconds. Then the sound came again, and it came from behind her, and the oaks were in front of her, and there was no wind. Her phone was in her left hand. She didn't remember taking it out. The screen said 12:07. She looked at it again. 12:07. She watched the little colon between the numbers, and it did not blink. She watched it for a long time. The pendant beat against her palm. She counted the oaks. She counted them the way she'd counted them coming in, left to right, and there were eleven. She counted again, and there were nine. She counted a third time, and gave up, because the counting was not the point, because the counting was a way of keeping her eyes off the middle of the clearing, where the grass had begun, very slightly, to bend. Not the grass. Something standing on the grass. Something she could not see, exactly, because it was the same colour as the dark — but the dark had a shape in it now, a shape that displaced the flowers and held still and breathed. Rory's hand went to her wrist. The crescent scar there, the one from the swing set when she was seven, had gone cold — cold the way the pendant was hot, cold the way a coin left in a cellar is cold, and she pressed her thumb into it hard enough to hurt, because hurting was something that belonged to her. In, and out. The shape did not come closer. It didn't need to. It was already, she understood, as close as it had ever been. The clearing had simply been arranged around it, the flowers and the stones and the summer air all laid out like a table, and she had walked in and sat down. "Hello," she said. Her voice died three feet from her mouth. And then, from the middle of the dark, something answered. Not in words. In her own name — but not the name she used, not Rory, not the one on her lease or the one in her mother's mouth. A name she had never heard in her life, spoken gently, in a voice that sounded like it had known her longer than she had known herself. Malphora. The pendant went dark.
created_at"2026-09-10T10:22:30.179Z" 9/10/2026, 10:22:30 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1449
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1449
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences123
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1460
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1456
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Park"
discoveredNames
Park2
Eva1
Richmond2
Heathrow1
Victorian1
November1
Golden1
Empress1
June1
Evan1
Rory5
persons
0"Eva"
1"Empress"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like it had known her longer than"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1460
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean35.61
std31.37
cv0.881
sampleLengths
068
175
233
38
471
513
64
7111
844
989
103
112
12109
138
1433
1516
1692
1717
1834
193
2033
2154
2248
2339
242
2549
2642
2717
286
2920
306
3168
3244
3361
343
3553
363
378
3866
391
404
91.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences123
matches
0"been painted"
1"been taught"
2"was gone"
3"been, undisturbed"
4"been arranged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs230
matches
0"was holding"
1"was walking"
2"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences124
ratio0.097
matches
0"East, north, south — cold as a coin."
1"She didn't notice it leave, only that at some point she'd stopped hearing the city — the long hum of the M25, the planes stacked over Heathrow, the far-off shudder of a train."
2"The frost had come early that year; she'd scraped it off the wing mirror of the Golden Empress's moped three mornings running."
3"The little crimson stone hung on its silver chain, and there, in the dark, it glowed — a faint inner light, like a coal under ash, like something breathing."
4"The standing stones at the boundary — the oaks — cast no shadows, she noticed, because there was no moon and no light to cast them, and yet she could see them perfectly well, every knot in the bark, every ridge of root."
5"Not overgrown — gone."
6"Not the wind — she waited for the wind, and there wasn't any, and the flowers moved anyway, a slow ripple that started at the far edge of the clearing and ran toward her and stopped."
7"That was her one good habit; Evan had taught her that, in the way that only bad things teach good ones."
8"Not loud — big, the way a cathedral is big, a sound with a room inside it."
9"Something she could not see, exactly, because it was the same colour as the dark — but the dark had a shape in it now, a shape that displaced the flowers and held still and breathed."
10"The crescent scar there, the one from the swing set when she was seven, had gone cold — cold the way the pendant was hot, cold the way a coin left in a cellar is cold, and she pressed her thumb into it hard enough to hurt, because hurting was something that belonged to her."
11"In her own name — but not the name she used, not Rory, not the one on her lease or the one in her mother's mouth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1446
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.02627939142461964
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.007607192254495159
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean11.77
std11.7
cv0.994
sampleLengths
08
133
227
34
424
56
66
76
829
98
1025
118
122
132
1422
153
168
1711
185
1913
205
217
226
234
244
2533
2614
272
282
2918
3011
3127
323
334
3437
3522
365
374
3825
394
403
4126
423
432
447
4522
4645
479
4826
495
31.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.2926829268292683
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners36
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences108
matches
0"Just warm, the way a"
1"Then she looked up, and"
2"Then the sound came again,"
ratio0.028
79.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences108
matches
0"She'd paid him and got"
1"She'd walked it a hundred"
2"Her right hand closed around"
3"She'd tested it."
4"She knew what it meant."
5"It woke near a door."
6"She didn't notice it leave,"
7"She stopped and stood still"
8"She walked on."
9"She knew this park."
10"She knew the oaks at"
11"Their trunks were the grey"
12"It was the second week"
13"It smelled of summer, and"
14"She took it out."
15"she said, out loud, because"
16"She made herself look at"
17"She could see the flowers."
18"She could see her own"
19"She looked at her hands"
ratio0.352
94.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences108
matches
0"The cab wouldn't take her"
1"The driver had looked at"
2"She'd paid him and got"
3"Richmond Park at midnight."
4"She'd walked it a hundred"
5"None of that was here"
6"The path was the same"
7"The trees were the same"
8"Rory kept her hands in"
9"Her right hand closed around"
10"The pendant had been warm"
11"She'd tested it."
12"West, and it beat against"
13"She knew what it meant."
14"The thing had a single"
15"It woke near a door."
16"The sound went first."
17"She didn't notice it leave,"
18"She stopped and stood still"
19"The park had been loud"
ratio0.731
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"Now it was holding its"
1"As though she hadn't."
ratio0.019
93.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"And here, in the middle of it, bluebells and foxgloves and something low and white that she couldn't name stood up out of the leaf litter as if it were June, as…"
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100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.8925%