Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DGSMEEFE4VTNE4DJHQ04P

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Duration:
23.3s
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$0.002163
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DeepSeek

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain had followed her down Greek Street, and the neon sign pulled her in the way it always had, that green glow bleeding into the wet pavement like something spilled. Aurora stood under the awning for a moment with her collar up and her hair stuck to her temples, reading the words she had read a thousand times. The Raven's Nest. The R had been flickering for as long as she could remember. It was flickering still. She told herself she was only getting out of the rain. Inside, it smelled the same, which undid her more than a change would have. Old paper, lemon polish, the low sweet burn of whiskey that had soaked into the floorboards over decades. The maps still papered the walls, and the black-and-white photographs hung in their crooked rows, all those strangers staring out of the past in grainy grey. Two men sat at the far end of the bar with their heads together, and a woman in a red coat nursed a glass of wine by the window. The place was nearly empty. It was half past nine on a Tuesday. She took the stool nearest the door, out of habit, the one with its back to the wall. The man behind the bar had his back to her, reaching for a bottle on the high shelf, and he did it wrong. He reached with his right hand and leaned his weight onto his left, and even before he turned she saw the hitch in it, the way he favoured the leg going down. Then he came round, and she saw his face, and something in her chest went quietly, irreparably wrong. He was greyer than she remembered. That was to be expected. But it was more than grey. He had gone thin in a way that had nothing to do with appetite, the flesh drawn back from the bones of him, his collar loose, his jaw sharper. The neatly trimmed beard was almost white now. And his hands— She watched his hands. They had always been the steadiest thing about him. He had once fieldstripped a pistol on this bar top while explaining to her the difference between a lie and a story, and his fingers had never once fumbled. Now he set the bottle down and the glass beside it rattled, and he had to steady it with two fingers, and he did it as if it were nothing, as if he hadn't noticed. He looked at her. Looked away. Poured two fingers of something amber into the glass, no ice, and drank it himself. "What can I get you," he said. His voice was the same. That was the cruel part. "Silas." He stopped. His hand rested on the bottle. He didn't look up, and for a long moment she listened to the rain on the windows and the low murmur of the two men at the end of the bar and the tick of the old clock over the door, and she thought, He knows. He knew the second I came in. "You'll want the whiskey," he said. "You always did." "Please." He poured. His hand shook, just slightly, a tremor at the wrist, and he set the glass in front of her and she wrapped her fingers around it and felt the cold of it go up into her palms. He still wore the signet ring. Silver, worn smooth. It looked loose on him now. "You're supposed to say Laila," she said, and tried to smile. "That's the name you gave me." "Not in here." He wiped the bar with a cloth that didn't need it. "In here you're Rory. In here you were always Rory." That landed somewhere under her ribs. She drank. The whiskey was better than she could afford. "How long's it been?" he said. He knew how long. "Four years. Nearly five." "Nearly five." He nodded slowly, as if confirming a figure in a ledger. "You were meant to come back in six weeks." "I know." "Six weeks was the arrangement. You take the name, you take the money, you stay gone until the thing with Evan goes cold, and then you come back and we—" He stopped himself. Picked up his glass. Put it down without drinking. "You didn't call. You didn't write. You didn't use the number." "I couldn't." "You could." "I couldn't," she said again, and heard how thin it was, and hated it. He went quiet. Behind him were the photographs, and she found the one she always looked for without meaning to, a young man in uniform squinting into a sun that had set sixty years ago, and she fixed on it because it was easier than his face. "I kept the room," he said. She looked at him. "Upstairs," he said. "Your room. I kept it. New tenant came in six months after you left, nice girl, pays on time, and I put her in the back one anyway. Said the front needed work." He turned the cloth over in his hands. "It doesn't need work." "Silas." "Don't." "No, I—" "Don't apologise," he said, and now he did look at her, and his eyes were the same hazel they had always been, and that undid her again. "I don't want it, and you don't mean it, and we'll only end up lying to each other, and I've had enough of that for one lifetime." She put the glass down. The scar on her left wrist caught the light, that little crescent, and she turned her arm over and looked at it, and thought about the girl who had got it, and how far away she was now, how much further than a few miles of city. "The bar's closing," he said. The words took a moment to mean anything. "In March. I've sold the lease. It's going to be a cocktail place." He said it without bitterness, which was worse. "They're keeping the sign, if you can believe it. Said it's got character. They'll paint over the maps." "You can't." "I can. I have. It's done." "But the back room—" "Everything's still there." He gestured with his chin at the bookshelf, the one that looked like a bookshelf, that had never fooled anyone who needed fooling because the people who needed fooling had already been fooled by then. "The maps, the files, all of it. I'll burn it in the spring. There's no one to leave it to." She thought about saying: Leave it to me. She thought about it so hard that it sat on her tongue and burned, and she did not say it, because she was forty pounds of rent and a phone that never stopped ringing and a life in Camberwell that she had built out of nothing and could not set down, not even for him. And he didn't ask. That was the thing. He looked at her, and he knew what she was thinking, he always had, and he did not ask. The two men at the end of the bar got up and shrugged into their coats and nodded at Silas and went out into the rain. The woman in red followed them a minute later, and then it was the two of them and the clock and the flickering R. "You look well," he said, which was a lie, and a kindness. "You look ill," she said, which was the truth, and not. He laughed. It was a real laugh, short and dry and surprised out of him, and for a second he was the man who had taught her to read a room in three seconds flat, the man who had told her, on the worst night of her life, that the trick to surviving wasn't running, it was deciding what you were willing to leave behind. She wondered if he'd decided. She wondered what he'd left. "I'm not ill," he said. "I'm just finished. There's a difference, and you're old enough now to know it." "You're fifty-eight." "And the knee's fifty-nine and the liver's seventy and the rest of it's somewhere in the dark. Don't." He held up a hand before she could speak. "I'm not looking for sympathy. I'm telling you so you'll stop looking at me like that." She hadn't known she was looking at him like anything. He poured her another, and one for himself, and this time his hand was steady, or steady enough, and they drank together in the quiet, and it was almost the way it used to be, the two of them at the end of a night, saying nothing, saying everything, the maps on the walls holding the whole world at arm's length. Then he said, "Evan's dead." The glass stopped halfway to her mouth. "Six months ago. Manchester. There was a piece in the paper, but it was a small piece. I would have told you, but you'd made it plain you didn't want telling." She set the glass down. Her hand didn't shake, and she noticed that, and filed it away, and did not know yet what it meant. "How." "His heart. That's what they said." Silas looked into his drink. "I didn't look into it." She sat with that. Out in the street the rain kept coming down, and the neon kept flickering, and somewhere above them was a room that had been hers, with a girl in it now who paid on time, and the past had a door on it that no longer opened, and here they were, the two of them, at the end of everything they'd built, drinking whiskey that was better than she could afford. "You could stay," he said. He said it lightly, as if it were nothing, as if he were offering her the last of the bottle. "I can't." "I know." He nodded, slow. "I know you can't." The clock ticked. The R flickered. He picked up the cloth again and wiped the bar that didn't need it, and she watched his hands, and she thought, So this is what it looks like. This is the end of it. This is the last room. "I'll come back before March," she said. He didn't answer. He just kept wiping the bar, in long, even strokes, the way he did everything, and the signet ring caught the green light from the window, and outside, the rain went on falling, indifferent, over Soho, over all of it, over everything that had ever been.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He nodded slowly [slowly]"
1"she said again [again]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.453
leniency0.906
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.075
91.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1751
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
94.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1751
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1751
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount1381
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.14
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Greek1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Picked1
Leave1
Camberwell1
Silas2
Soho1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Picked"
2"Silas"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Leave"
3"Camberwell"
4"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if confirming a figure in a ledger"
1"looked like a bookshelf, that had never f"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1751
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean26.13
std25.34
cv0.97
sampleLengths
077
111
2100
318
473
557
677
721
87
910
101
1161
129
131
1454
1517
1624
1716
1810
194
2022
212
2253
232
242
2514
2647
276
284
2948
301
311
322
3354
3452
355
368
3739
382
396
404
4158
4263
4327
4450
4512
4611
4765
4810
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"been fooled"
10.30% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs246
matches
0"was flickering"
1"was thinking"
2"was deciding"
3"were willing"
4"wasn't running"
5"was looking"
6"were offering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences131
ratio0.008
matches
0"And his hands—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1383
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.03470715835140998
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.005784526391901663
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean13.37
std14.33
cv1.072
sampleLengths
030
128
23
312
44
511
614
718
826
929
105
118
1218
1323
1432
1518
166
175
186
1929
208
213
224
239
2429
2535
264
272
2815
297
305
315
321
332
346
3546
367
376
383
391
402
4137
426
433
446
4511
466
4714
4810
496
40.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.31297709923664124
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners41
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Then he came round, and"
1"Then he said,"
ratio0.023
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences88
matches
0"It was flickering still."
1"She told herself she was"
2"It was half past nine"
3"She took the stool nearest"
4"He reached with his right"
5"He was greyer than she"
6"He had gone thin in"
7"She watched his hands."
8"They had always been the"
9"He had once fieldstripped a"
10"He looked at her."
11"His voice was the same."
12"His hand rested on the"
13"He didn't look up, and"
14"He knew the second I"
15"His hand shook, just slightly,"
16"He still wore the signet"
17"It looked loose on him"
18"she said, and tried to"
19"He wiped the bar with"
ratio0.568
39.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences88
matches
0"Rain had followed her down"
1"Aurora stood under the awning"
2"The Raven's Nest."
3"The R had been flickering"
4"It was flickering still."
5"She told herself she was"
6"The maps still papered the"
7"The place was nearly empty."
8"It was half past nine"
9"She took the stool nearest"
10"The man behind the bar"
11"He reached with his right"
12"He was greyer than she"
13"That was to be expected."
14"He had gone thin in"
15"The neatly trimmed beard was"
16"She watched his hands."
17"They had always been the"
18"He had once fieldstripped a"
19"He looked at her."
ratio0.841
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Now he set the bottle"
ratio0.011
31.25% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Old paper, lemon polish, the low sweet burn of whiskey that had soaked into the floorboards over decades."
1"Behind him were the photographs, and she found the one she always looked for without meaning to, a young man in uniform squinting into a sun that had set sixty …"
2"It was a real laugh, short and dry and surprised out of him, and for a second he was the man who had taught her to read a room in three seconds flat, the man wh…"
3"Out in the street the rain kept coming down, and the neon kept flickering, and somewhere above them was a room that had been hers, with a girl in it now who pai…"
4"He just kept wiping the bar, in long, even strokes, the way he did everything, and the signet ring caught the green light from the window, and outside, the rain…"
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He nodded slowly, as if confirming a figure in a ledger"
1"He nodded, slow"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.302
leniency0.604
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.9077%