Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DVJTPJGE4AHP960PCDP2X

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Duration:
30.0s
Cost:
$0.002813
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DeepSeek

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon over the door of the Raven's Nest bled onto the wet pavement in a long smear, so that anyone crossing Wardour Street at a jog looked briefly like they were wading through something radioactive. Inside, the rain was a rumor. The bar smelled of old wood and spilled gin and the faint chemical sweetness of the lilies Silas replaced every Monday whether they needed it or not. Rory sat at the far end of the bar, where the ceiling dropped and the photographs hung thickest. Prague, mostly, though she hadn't known that at first. Budapest. A man in a wool coat feeding pigeons in a square she'd never been able to identify, and had never asked about, because Silas's answers were like his whiskey — poured short and never watered. She still had her coat on. She'd come down from the flat to put the day's receipts in the till for Yu-Fei and had stayed for the quiet, and for the second half of a whiskey she was no longer drinking. Her hair was damp at the ends from the walk back from the last delivery, a flat off Old Compton Street where a man in a dressing gown had taken his noodles without looking at her once. Silas worked the other end of the bar, unhurried, drying a glass that was already dry. The silver ring on his right hand caught the light each time he turned it. His limp showed only when he thought no one was watching, and he thought that now, moving down the bar to check the till tape, favoring the left leg the way he always did when the weather turned. The door opened. Cold came in like something with intentions. The woman in the doorway was soaked through — a good coat ruined, hair plastered flat against her temples, a leather holdall held up like a shield against weather she'd already escaped. She blinked twice, letting the low light resolve into bar, and bar resolve into people, and people resolve into Rory. Neither of them moved. The rain ran off the woman's coat and made a small dark ring on the floorboards. "You have got to be *joking*," the woman said. Rory set her glass down very carefully, as though it were full. "Bethan." "Three years." Bethan Rees crossed the room in four strides, and Rory stood, and they hugged the way people hug when they are deciding whether to. Bethan smelled of rain and expensive shampoo and something underneath it, wine. She pulled back and held Rory at arm's length and looked at her the way people look at a house they used to live in. "You cut your hair," Bethan said. "It was always this length." "No, it was — " Bethan stopped. "It was longer. At the moots. You had it in that braid the whole week, the one you kept redoing in the toilets at the Union, and I said it made you look like a — " "I remember." Silas had already produced a bar towel, and Bethan took it and blotted at her face with the brisk, contained movements of someone who had decided not to be embarrassed. She ordered white wine, then, when Silas shook his head, a whiskey, then immediately revised it to a whiskey with ice, then to a whiskey neat, as if negotiating down through her own better judgment. They sat. Behind Bethan, the rain had turned the window into a blurred grey sheet, and the neon sign above the door hummed its green into the room. "God, Rory." Bethan turned her glass a quarter turn. "Three years. I looked for you, you know. After. I asked your mother. She said you needed time, and then she stopped answering, and then I got the pupillage and — " She shrugged, a small, finished movement. "Life." "Congratulations," Rory said. "Chambers?" "Strand. Family law." Bethan said it the way you say a thing you're proud of and slightly afraid of. "Second six now. I'm in court most weeks. It's — " She laughed, short. "It's relentless. I'm tired all the time. I'm actually — " She held up her left hand. A ring. Pale gold, a small stone. "Eight months. His name's Tom. He's a planner. Traffic infrastructure." "Tom the traffic planner." "He's *wonderful*." "I'm sure he is." "He really is, though." Bethan drank. "He's kind. He's the kindest man I've ever met, and I keep telling people that, and they keep looking at me like I'm protesting too much, which I'm not. It's just that when you've had the other kind, you notice. You know?" Rory didn't answer. The scar on her wrist had begun to itch the way it did when she thought about Cardiff, and she pressed her thumb against it under the bar, out of sight. Across the room, Silas had found a reason to be polishing the shelves. He wasn't listening. He was simply present, in the way of a man who had once spent a career being present in rooms where people lied to each other, and had never quite stopped. "You disappeared," Bethan said. "End of Hilary term, you just — I asked around. Nobody knew. Your dad wouldn't — I saw him, once, at the Temple. I said hello, and he looked at me for about four seconds like he was deciding whether to, and then he did. He was very polite. He asked after my mother." She turned the glass again. "He didn't ask about you. I don't think he could." "He doesn't know where I live," Rory said. "That's not a tragedy. It's just a fact." "Rory." "Don't." "I'm not — " Bethan put her hands up, palms out. "I'm not here to. I just — I sat in that moot court with you for four days when we were nineteen, and you took the bench apart like it was a thing you'd done in a past life, and every single person in that room knew they were watching someone who was going to be — " She stopped. "And then you were gone. And I never got to ask why." The jukebox had run out. The bar was very quiet. Rory could hear the rain and the neon and, faintly, the pipes ticking in the wall as the old building settled into the cold. "I got involved with someone," Rory said. "Badly. And when I left him, I had to leave everything, because he'd made everything his." Bethan's hands went still around the glass. "I can't tell you more than that," Rory said. "Not because I don't trust you. Because it doesn't get smaller by being said. It gets bigger." Bethan looked at her for a long time. Then she nodded, once, and didn't ask. That was the thing about Bethan — she'd always known when a question was a door and when it was a wall. It was why she'd been so good at the moots. "All right," she said. "All right." "I'm still going to be angry at you." "That's fine." "I'm going to be angry at you for the rest of the night." Bethan wiped her eyes with the heel of her hand, quick and annoyed, and laughed. "God. Look at me. I'm a barrister. I'm about to be married. I have a direct access brief on Monday and I'm crying into whiskey in a — " She looked around properly for the first time. "What *is* this place? There are maps on the wall." "I live upstairs." Bethan looked at her. "You live in a *bar*." "I live above a bar. I deliver noodles, mostly. It's — " Rory turned her glass, mirroring her. "It's quiet. It's mine. I can hear the front door from my bed, which I thought I'd hate." They talked for another hour, and it was almost easy. Bethan told her about the pupillage interview, the one she'd botched, and the one she hadn't, and about Tom's mother's opinions on the seating plan. Rory told her about Yu-Fei, who had once chased a man down Berwick Street for a five-pound note and returned with the note and his wallet, which she had also returned, having first photographed his driving licence. They laughed. Twice, Bethan reached for her phone, and twice she turned it face down without answering, and the second time she said, too casually, "Tom worries," and Rory watched her not look at it and said nothing. When Bethan finally pulled on her ruined coat, she took a pen out of the holdall — an old one, a cheap blue biro, the same kind they'd both used to annotate casebooks in the library at Cardiff — and wrote her number on the back of a receipt. "Chambers," she said. "And then my flat. And the flat's a mess, and Tom's mother is staying from Thursday, but come anyway. Come on Sunday. Or don't come on Sunday. Come whenever the door's open." Rory took the receipt. Bethan paused in the doorway with the rain behind her. The green light came in around her, and for a second she looked nineteen again, and so did Rory, and then neither of them did. "You should call your father," Bethan said. "I know." "I'm not saying you have to. I'm saying you should." "I know." Bethan nodded, and went out into it, and the door swung shut and took the cold with it. Silas came down the bar with the bottle and topped up Rory's glass without being asked. He put the bottle down and leaned his elbows on the wood, an inch short of comfortable, and looked at the receipt on the bar. "That one knew you before," he said. "Everyone knew me before." "Mm." He took the bottle away and put it back on the shelf, in its place, the label facing out, the way he kept everything. Then he picked up the cloth again and went back to a glass that was already dry.
created_at"2026-09-10T10:29:46.461Z" 9/10/2026, 10:29:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0.037
effectiveRatio0.035
81.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1645
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1645
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"resolve"
count3
1
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"resolve"
1"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords1671
ratio0.002
matches
0"joking"
1"wonderful"
2"is"
3"bar"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1112
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Bethan"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Bethan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Wardour1
Street3
Silas7
Monday1
Yu-Fei2
Old1
Compton1
Rory17
Rees1
Bethan22
Cardiff2
Tom1
Berwick1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Rees"
5"Bethan"
6"Tom"
places
0"Wardour"
1"Street"
2"Old"
3"Compton"
4"Cardiff"
5"Berwick"
globalScore0.511
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if negotiating down through her own better judgment"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1671
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean28.81
std27.43
cv0.952
sampleLengths
070
163
278
369
410
552
620
79
812
91
1063
116
125
1344
142
1565
1628
1748
184
1967
204
212
224
2348
2434
2547
2673
2716
281
291
3083
3134
3223
337
3426
3547
364
372
388
392
4075
413
429
4336
44110
4549
4635
474
4835
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"being asked"
97.44% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs195
matches
0"were wading"
1"was watching"
2"wasn't listening"
39.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences111
ratio0.036
matches
0"A man in a wool coat feeding pigeons in a square she'd never been able to identify, and had never asked about, because Silas's answers were like his whiskey — poured short and never watered."
1"The woman in the doorway was soaked through — a good coat ruined, hair plastered flat against her temples, a leather holdall held up like a shield against weather she'd already escaped."
2"That was the thing about Bethan — she'd always known when a question was a door and when it was a wall."
3"When Bethan finally pulled on her ruined coat, she took a pen out of the holdall — an old one, a cheap blue biro, the same kind they'd both used to annotate casebooks in the library at Cardiff — and wrote her number on the back of a receipt."
96.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1110
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.044144144144144144
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.00990990990990991
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean15.05
std13.4
cv0.89
sampleLengths
037
16
227
318
49
51
635
76
835
937
1016
1115
1238
133
147
1532
1620
174
1816
199
2012
211
2226
2312
2425
256
265
277
2837
292
3030
3135
322
3326
349
3538
361
373
381
3919
4014
4117
422
435
4410
454
462
474
486
4942
57.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3963963963963964
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then she nodded, once, and"
1"Twice, Bethan reached for her"
2"Then he picked up the"
ratio0.047
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences64
matches
0"She still had her coat"
1"She'd come down from the"
2"Her hair was damp at"
3"His limp showed only when"
4"She blinked twice, letting the"
5"She pulled back and held"
6"She ordered white wine, then,"
7"She shrugged, a small, finished"
8"She laughed, short"
9"She held up her left"
10"He wasn't listening."
11"He was simply present, in"
12"She turned the glass again"
13"It was why she'd been"
14"She looked around properly for"
15"They talked for another hour,"
16"He put the bottle down"
17"He took the bottle away"
ratio0.281
30.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences64
matches
0"The green neon over the"
1"The bar smelled of old"
2"Rory sat at the far"
3"Prague, mostly, though she hadn't"
4"A man in a wool"
5"She still had her coat"
6"She'd come down from the"
7"Her hair was damp at"
8"Silas worked the other end"
9"The silver ring on his"
10"His limp showed only when"
11"The door opened."
12"The woman in the doorway"
13"She blinked twice, letting the"
14"Neither of them moved."
15"The rain ran off the"
16"the woman said"
17"Rory set her glass down"
18"Bethan Rees crossed the room"
19"Bethan smelled of rain and"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Silas worked the other end of the bar, unhurried, drying a glass that was already dry."
1"Silas had already produced a bar towel, and Bethan took it and blotted at her face with the brisk, contained movements of someone who had decided not to be emba…"
2"She ordered white wine, then, when Silas shook his head, a whiskey, then immediately revised it to a whiskey with ice, then to a whiskey neat, as if negotiating…"
3"Rory told her about Yu-Fei, who had once chased a man down Berwick Street for a five-pound note and returned with the note and his wallet, which she had also re…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She laughed, short"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.228
leniency0.456
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.035
86.1246%