Run: 2026-09-10-01M25DVTMWGH5HYJ2GWHE52EVN

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Duration:
25.5s
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$0.002212
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had followed her in, and Silas didn't look up from the glass he was polishing. He never did. Rory liked that about him. She hung her jacket on the hook by the door, where the smell of duck fat and sesame would sit all evening, and took her usual stool at the far end of the bar, where the maps on the wall were oldest and the light from the green neon sign outside leaked in and gave everything a drowned, underwater colour. "Shift?" Silas said. "Twenty-two deliveries. One dog." She flexed her hands. "Let me guess. Mr. Okafor's usual." "Fourteen-forty." She dug the notes out of her wallet and slid them across the bar. Silas took them without counting. He wore the signet ring on his right hand, as always, and the polish cloth moved in his fingers with the same unhurried rhythm you'd want from a man doing something a great deal more serious. Rory had learned, over the eleven months of living above his bar, that Silas was never not paying attention. He simply chose what to attend to. He set a glass in front of her. Water. He knew she didn't drink on work nights, and he knew she liked the ice chipped, and it irritated her slightly that she was so legible to him. Then the door opened again, and the rain came in a second time, and Eva walked through it. It took Rory four seconds. She had a long history of not recognising people fast — she'd once walked past her own father outside a courtroom in Cardiff and smiled at him as though he were a stranger — but that wasn't what happened here. She recognised her immediately. That was the problem. She recognised her the way you recognise a word in a language you used to speak fluently and have now lost. Eva had cut her hair. It was short now, sharp at the jaw, and it had been dyed the kind of unflashy dark that costs money. She wore a grey coat that had never been rained on before, or at least had never looked it. She held her bag with both hands, perched, as if she might need to leave. She saw Rory. Stopped. "Oh," she said. "Oh, God." "Eva." They did the thing people do. The half-step forward, the half-step back. Rory got off her stool. They embraced, briefly, awkwardly, the way two people embrace when neither is sure whether the other has forgiven them for anything. Eva smelled of a perfume Rory didn't know. Underneath it, faintly, of cigarettes. "You look —" Eva said, and then didn't finish it, because whatever she'd been about to say would have had to be a lie. "You too." Rory sat back down. "Sit. Sit down. What are you doing here?" "I was meeting someone." Eva glanced at the door, then at her watch — a man's watch, heavy, real gold, loose on her wrist. "For work. They're late." She sat, two stools over, which is a strange distance to choose. Close enough to talk. Far enough that no part of them touched. "You live around here?" "Upstairs." "In the *bar*?" "Above it. Yeah." Silas appeared, silent as a rumour, and set down a glass of water and the bottle of the good whisky without being asked, which Rory found so presumptuous on so many levels that she couldn't decide whether to be grateful or furious. Eva looked at him once, took his measure the way she'd always taken people's measure, and something in her face went careful. She'd seen it too, then, the thing about Silas. Whatever it was that made men in expensive coats decide to be polite to him. "Thanks," Eva said, and her voice had lost Cardiff. Not lost it exactly — she could still have found it if she'd wanted to. It was more like a coat taken off and folded and put away in a cupboard somewhere, for a house that no longer has the room. Rory put her thumb on the scar on her left wrist. She didn't mean to. It was the crescent shape from the broken bottle on the beach at Barry Island, the summer they were eleven, and Eva had been the one who ran for her mother, and it was, when you thought about it, the beginning of every story Rory had about Eva: Eva running for help on Rory's behalf. She pressed it flat with her thumb and left it there. "So," Rory said. "You're a lawyer now." "Solicitor. Yes." "I heard." "You heard?" "Your mum told mine. It got all the way to Dublin." Rory turned the glass on the bar. "It's funny. My dad's a barrister. I did two years of Pre-Law at Cardiff. And now you're the one." She said it lightly. It came out not light. "Weren't you going to be a photographer?" Eva laughed, one syllable. "God. That was a very long time ago." "It was three years ago." "Two and a half." Eva's eyes went to the door again. "You know I came to see you. When you first came to London. Before it got — I came to see you twice, and you weren't answering. And then you moved and you didn't send anyone the address. I found out you were here from Laila. Six months late." "You could have found out sooner if you'd asked." "I did ask." Rory had nothing to say to that. The rain picked up against the window, and the green neon flickered, and the photographs on the wall — Prague, Berlin, a street in Beirut that Silas had never once explained — looked down on them with the flat, uninterested curiosity of places that had outlived everyone in them. "How's your mother?" Rory said finally. "Fine. Same. How's Evan?" The name landed in the room like a dropped plate. Rory had not heard it said out loud in eleven months. She heard Silas turn a page, three feet away, in the way a man turns a page when he is not reading. "Gone," Rory said. "Rory —" "No, it's fine. Gone. He's gone. It's — I left." She heard the way she said it, the childishness of it, *I left*, as though leaving were an achievement, as though it hadn't taken her four years and a phone call from another woman. "You told me to. You told me to and I didn't, and then I did. And I never —" She stopped. Adjusted the glass. "Anyway." Eva looked at her for a long moment. It was the look of a person who has prepared something for years and now can't remember whether it was an apology or an accusation. "I should have come to Cardiff," Eva said. "You did come to Cardiff." "I came once, at Christmas. I stood outside your flat for twenty minutes in the car park. That's not coming to Cardiff, that's — driving through it." She turned her watch on her wrist, once, twice, a small mechanical tic. "I didn't get out." "Why not?" "Because I was angry with you." "With *me*." "Yes." Eva's voice was quiet and level, a professional voice. "Because I called you, and I got you here, and I gave you my key, and my flat, and my friends, and I cancelled things, and I sat on the floor of that awful room with you for three weeks and I watched you not leave. And you wouldn't leave. And every time I said it, you found a reason. And I thought —" She breathed. "I thought, if I stay, I'll have to hate you. Or I'll have to be the person who keeps you alive. And I didn't want to be either. So I left London. And I didn't tell you. And that is what I did, and I know what it was." The rain was the only thing moving. "What was it?" Rory said. "Abandonment." Eva said the word the way a lawyer says a word she has read in a file. Flat, correct, and nowhere near adequate. "It's what my own father did, is what it was, and I did it, to you, because it was easier than watching. And I told myself you'd be fine. And you *were* fine. That's the — that's the thing that's hardest, actually. That you were fine." Rory's hand had closed around her wrist again, thumb on the crescent. She thought about the car park at Christmas, the wet tarmac, the headlights she'd assumed belonged to someone visiting the launderette. She thought about the twenty minutes. It made a shape in her chest, an ugly one, and she didn't know whether it was fury or grief or just the recognition of a debt that could never be squared off. "I was not fine," she said. "No." Eva's eyes had gone bright, but she did not look away, and Rory had to give her that, had to give her the whole thing. "No. I don't imagine you were." The door opened. A man came in with rain on his shoulders, looking around at the maps and the photographs, and Eva stood up, and she took her coat, and she did not put it on. "That's mine," she said. "I know." "It's a merger. It's — eleven hours, and then it's done, and then I'm back in Cardiff for a fortnight." She hesitated, and then she did something Rory had not expected, which was to write her number on the corner of a beer mat, in the same horrible looping handwriting she'd had at eleven. She put it on the bar between them, nearer Rory. "The flat's the same flat. If you're ever — it's the same flat." "All right." "[Eva]," Silas said, from behind the bar, and Eva looked over, startled, because she had not told him her name. He didn't explain. He simply tipped his head, a small gesture, the kind that in another life had meant get down or go now, and then he went back to his glasses and his cloth. Eva left. The bell above the door rang, and settled. Rory sat with the beer mat and the whisky she hadn't touched and the water that had gone warm. After a while she picked the mat up and turned it over. On the other side, in the same handwriting, older, faded, printed in biro and rained on and dried and kept for two and a half years in a coat pocket: *Come to London. E.* She put it down. She put her thumb back on the scar, and pressed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.383
leniency0.767
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.033
91.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1762
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lightly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
94.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1762
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
67.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"watch — watch"
1"decide"
2"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords9
totalWords1774
ratio0.005
matches
0"bar"
1"I left"
2"me"
3"were"
4"Come to London. E."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1267
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Silas9
Eva19
Rory23
Cardiff2
Close1
Barry1
Island1
Prague1
Berlin1
Beirut1
Adjusted1
Flat1
Christmas1
London1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Barry"
2"Island"
3"Prague"
4"Berlin"
5"Beirut"
6"Christmas"
7"London"
globalScore0.592
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared, silent as a rumour, and set down a glass of water and the bottle of the good whisky without being asked, which Rory found so presumptuous on so many levels that she couldn't decide whether to be grateful or furious"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1774
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean28.61
std30.77
cv1.075
sampleLengths
085
13
214
31
481
537
618
774
860
94
105
111
1251
1324
1414
1556
161
173
183
1988
2050
2181
227
232
242
252
2653
2712
285
2960
309
313
3256
336
344
3543
363
372
3869
3933
408
415
4244
432
446
452
46125
477
485
4970
94.18% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences95
matches
0"been dyed"
1"been rained"
2"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs213
matches
0"was polishing"
55.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences131
ratio0.031
matches
0"She had a long history of not recognising people fast — she'd once walked past her own father outside a courtroom in Cardiff and smiled at him as though he were a stranger — but that wasn't what happened here."
1"\"I was meeting someone.\" Eva glanced at the door, then at her watch — a man's watch, heavy, real gold, loose on her wrist."
2"Not lost it exactly — she could still have found it if she'd wanted to."
3"The rain picked up against the window, and the green neon flickered, and the photographs on the wall — Prague, Berlin, a street in Beirut that Silas had never once explained — looked down on them with the flat, uninterested curiosity of places that had outlived everyone in them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1027
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.033106134371957155
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009737098344693282
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean13.54
std14.21
cv1.05
sampleLengths
017
13
25
360
43
58
66
71
814
95
1036
1119
127
138
141
1528
1618
175
1840
194
204
2121
225
2321
2419
2515
263
271
283
292
301
316
326
335
3421
358
365
3724
386
398
4024
4116
424
438
444
451
463
473
4842
4922
58.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.4122137404580153
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners54
80.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then the door opened again,"
1"Flat, correct, and nowhere near"
ratio0.024
32.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences83
matches
0"He never did."
1"She hung her jacket on"
2"She flexed her hands"
3"She dug the notes out"
4"He wore the signet ring"
5"He simply chose what to"
6"He set a glass in"
7"He knew she didn't drink"
8"It took Rory four seconds."
9"She had a long history"
10"She recognised her immediately."
11"She recognised her the way"
12"It was short now, sharp"
13"She wore a grey coat"
14"She held her bag with"
15"She saw Rory."
16"They did the thing people"
17"They embraced, briefly, awkwardly, the"
18"She sat, two stools over,"
19"She'd seen it too, then,"
ratio0.47
14.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences83
matches
0"The rain had followed her"
1"He never did."
2"Rory liked that about him."
3"She hung her jacket on"
4"She flexed her hands"
5"She dug the notes out"
6"Silas took them without counting."
7"He wore the signet ring"
8"Rory had learned, over the"
9"He simply chose what to"
10"He set a glass in"
11"He knew she didn't drink"
12"It took Rory four seconds."
13"She had a long history"
14"She recognised her immediately."
15"That was the problem."
16"She recognised her the way"
17"Eva had cut her hair."
18"It was short now, sharp"
19"She wore a grey coat"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She had a long history of not recognising people fast — she'd once walked past her own father outside a courtroom in Cardiff and smiled at him as though he were…"
1"The rain picked up against the window, and the green neon flickered, and the photographs on the wall — Prague, Berlin, a street in Beirut that Silas had never o…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She heard (hear)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.467
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.033
84.0659%