| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the voice said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 94.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1768 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 77.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1768 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 217 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 217 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 224 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1767 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1745 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Rory | 25 | | Eva | 1 | | Three | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.784 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like Eva, soft and amused, the way" | | 1 | "seemed narrower now, the trees pressed close around it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1767 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 224 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 106 | | mean | 16.67 | | std | 15.59 | | cv | 0.935 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 47 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 38 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "been given" | | 1 | "being tapped" | | 2 | "was lit" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 285 | | matches | | 0 | "was speaking" | | 1 | "were tapping" | | 2 | "was still holding" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 224 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled of stones after rain and something else—something stale and close, like breath trapped inside a cupboard." | | 1 | "She was still holding the pendant; the chain had tightened around her fingers, cutting into the skin." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1747 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.03777904979965655 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005724098454493417 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 224 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 224 | | mean | 7.89 | | std | 5.27 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 44.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.24553571428571427 | | totalSentences | 224 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "Just flowers, stones and trees." | | 1 | "Then its head tipped a" | | 2 | "Only the shape of a" | | 3 | "Then the vibration stopped." | | 4 | "Even the flowers had gone" | | 5 | "Somewhere in the park, a" | | 6 | "Then at the empty grove." |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "It had started on the" | | 1 | "She stood at the boundary" | | 2 | "They had no business blooming" | | 3 | "Their whiteness caught what little" | | 4 | "She pulled the pendant from" | | 5 | "She didn’t know what she" | | 6 | "It had been given to" | | 7 | "She’d felt it on a" | | 8 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 9 | "It smelled of wet soil" | | 10 | "Her heel sank slightly into" | | 11 | "She listened, one hand closed" | | 12 | "Her voice seemed to travel" | | 13 | "It crossed the clearing and" | | 14 | "She walked into the grove." | | 15 | "It made the place visible" | | 16 | "She stopped at nineteen." | | 17 | "She took out her phone." | | 18 | "She checked the time again." | | 19 | "She saw nothing now but" |
| | ratio | 0.291 | |
| 59.49% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 157 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had come to the" | | 1 | "It had started on the" | | 2 | "She stood at the boundary" | | 3 | "The stones rose among the" | | 4 | "Wildflowers filled it, pale heads" | | 5 | "They had no business blooming" | | 6 | "Their whiteness caught what little" | | 7 | "Rory looked over her shoulder." | | 8 | "The path behind her ran" | | 9 | "Richmond was there somewhere, full" | | 10 | "She pulled the pendant from" | | 11 | "The crimson stone rested in" | | 12 | "A faint light stirred inside" | | 13 | "She didn’t know what she" | | 14 | "It had been given to" | | 15 | "She’d felt it on a" | | 16 | "A sharp, sudden heat." | | 17 | "Tonight it had woken again," | | 18 | "That was the reason." | | 19 | "She stepped between the stones." |
| | ratio | 0.801 | |
| 25.51% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been given to her by an unknown benefactor, which was exactly the sort of thing that sounded exciting until you were alone in a park at night with no ide…" | | 1 | "It smelled of wet soil and flowers, sweet enough to make her think of a room that had been shut too long." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |