| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the voice said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 92.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1925 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1925 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 239 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 239 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 246 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1923 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.94% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1903 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.869 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 146 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed farther away than it should" | | 1 | "seemed thicker now" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.52 | | wordCount | 1923 | | matches | | 0 | "not literally, but the light dulled before it touched the figure, swallowed in" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 246 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 108 | | mean | 17.81 | | std | 16.43 | | cv | 0.923 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 41 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 55 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 45 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 41 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 239 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 321 | | matches | | 0 | "was looking" | | 1 | "was folding" | | 2 | "was not getting" | | 3 | "were pressing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 246 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Just different—thick, as if she had walked beneath water without getting wet." | | 1 | "The phone’s beam reached it and stopped—not literally, but the light dulled before it touched the figure, swallowed in a patch of shadow that clung to its outline." | | 2 | "She had crossed through them once; she could find the opening and cross again." |
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| 93.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1906 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same low silver light." |
| | adverbCount | 78 | | adverbRatio | 0.040923399790136414 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0062959076600209865 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 246 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 246 | | mean | 7.82 | | std | 5.42 | | cv | 0.694 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 42.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.2073170731707317 | | totalSentences | 246 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 213 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind her, beyond the" | | 1 | "Instead, there were the standing" | | 2 | "Just different—thick, as if she" | | 3 | "Then something moved at the" | | 4 | "Only a tree." | | 5 | "Maybe twenty yards." | | 6 | "Maybe twice that." | | 7 | "Instead, the grove waited." | | 8 | "Then a knock sounded beneath" | | 9 | "Then she started walking toward" | | 10 | "Only flowers, all turned toward" | | 11 | "Then the pendant pulsed again." | | 12 | "Somewhere inside the grove, three" | | 13 | "Only when she saw the" |
| | ratio | 0.066 | |
| 81.03% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 213 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped on the path" | | 1 | "It pressed close between the" | | 2 | "She had come because the" | | 3 | "It had led her through" | | 4 | "She’d expected some obvious source" | | 5 | "They rose from the earth" | | 6 | "She couldn’t tell where the" | | 7 | "They seemed to travel into" | | 8 | "She waited for an answer." | | 9 | "She could just make out" | | 10 | "Their white faces turned toward" | | 11 | "She could see the faint" | | 12 | "She stepped through the stones." | | 13 | "She pulled out her phone." | | 14 | "She pocketed it and moved" | | 15 | "They grew in unruly patches," | | 16 | "It felt dry, almost papery." | | 17 | "She drew back." | | 18 | "She turned slowly, trying to" | | 19 | "It showed branches, bark, the" |
| | ratio | 0.347 | |
| 30.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 183 | | totalSentences | 213 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant warmed against Rory’s" | | 1 | "She stopped on the path" | | 2 | "The little crimson gem rested" | | 3 | "A faint glow seeped through" | | 4 | "Richmond Park stretched black around" | | 5 | "Here, the darkness had weight." | | 6 | "It pressed close between the" | | 7 | "Rory checked her phone." | | 8 | "The time read 12:17." | | 9 | "She had come because the" | | 10 | "It had led her through" | | 11 | "She’d expected some obvious source" | | 12 | "A gap in the trees." | | 13 | "Something she could point to" | | 14 | "They rose from the earth" | | 15 | "She couldn’t tell where the" | | 16 | "The shadows there were darker" | | 17 | "The pendant gave a small," | | 18 | "Rory let it fall back" | | 19 | "The words sounded too loud." |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 23.47% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 213 | | matches | | 0 | "If the grove was folding" |
| | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind her, beyond the trees, London carried on without her: traffic hissing over wet roads, late trains grinding through stations, people turning key…" | | 1 | "She had come because the pendant had begun to pulse in her flat above Silas’s bar, warming against her skin with a steady insistence that had left her unable to…" | | 2 | "Just different—thick, as if she had walked beneath water without getting wet." | | 3 | "She listened, breathing through her nose, forcing her pulse to slow." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "the voice said again, closer" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |