Run: 2026-09-23-01M36S8KC3R0A5JFJJ43D9MB0A

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.002332
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The standing stones smelled wrong. That was the first thing. Rory Carter stopped at the threshold between two of them, one hand still raised against the rough oak bark, and breathed in again through her nose to be sure. Not wrong like decay. Wrong like a room that had been cleaned with the wrong soap by someone who wanted it to smell like a place you'd been before. The Grove beyond always carried wildflowers and green water and something faintly electric, like the air before a storm over Cardiff Bay. Tonight it smelled like all of that, plus underneath, barely there, the sweet chemical lemon of the surface cleaner they used on the counters at the Golden Empress. She took her hand off the stone. The bark was warm. It was past two in the morning and the oak had been sitting in a February night and the bark was the temperature of skin. "Right," she said, to no one, because saying something felt better than standing still. She had come for the pendant. That was the reason and she held onto it the way you hold a handrail on stairs in the dark. Three nights ago the Heartstone had begun to pulse, and not the lazy warmth it gave off when some Hel portal was near enough to bother with. This had been fast and hard, a small red heartbeat against her collarbone, and it had lasted through dinner service and the walk home and her entire attempted sleep. Yu-Fei had noticed her pressing her fist against her sternum over the takeaway bags and told her, in the flat unbothered way she had, that when something under your shirt behaves like a heart that isn't yours, you should probably find out why before it learns the rest of your habits. Then she'd gone back to arguing with the delivery router. So. The Grove. Because the Grove was where things that behaved like this were supposed to be understood, and because Isolde had always been able to read the stones, and because Rory had nowhere else to take it that wouldn't involve explaining the whole mess to a stranger. She stepped through. The wildflowers were blooming, the way they always did, white and violet and that impossible blue that doesn't occur outside of certain cheap inks. They came up past her knees. The clearing opened ahead of her with the standing stones behind her like the ribs of a mouth that had already decided to swallow and was just being polite about it. The pulse in the pendant stopped. Not faded. Stopped, like a switch. And in the sudden absence of it she became aware that the rest of her body was very loud — her breathing, the slide of her jacket, her heartbeat doing the work the gemstone had abandoned. Somewhere to her left, water moved over stone. Somewhere ahead, an owl said something. Twice. Then a third time, in exactly the same rhythm, with exactly the same pitch, and Rory understood that owls don't repeat themselves that precisely, and that whatever was doing it had only bothered to learn one owl and didn't know that wasn't enough. She stood very still in the knee-deep flowers. Time moved strangely here, she reminded herself. That was the known strangeness, the filed and catalogued strangeness. An hour inside could be a minute or a week outside. She'd budgeted for that. Yu-Fei was covering her Friday shift and Eva had been told, obliquely, not to worry if she was hard to reach. Silas would notice the flat was empty but Silas noticed everything and mostly left it alone. That was all handled. That was fine. What was not fine was that she could not tell how long she had been standing in the flowers. It might have been four seconds. It felt like long enough that she should be able to hear the river continue past the stones it usually moved past, and instead the water sounded the way it does when someone upstream has put their hand in it — the same volume, but startled. She walked forward. The flowers parted around her shins with a sound like whispering, and she decided firmly that it was stems brushing nylon and kept deciding it as the sound repeated and repeated with almost enough variation to be natural. The clearing's centre held the flat stone, pale and lichen-blotched, where Isolde would sit with her feet in the moss and talk about boundary-work in that dry instructive voice. The stone was empty. Rory had expected it to be empty; she hadn't sent word. That was fine too. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched. She scratched it with her thumbnail, once, hard, and looked at the treeline. The Grove's trees were oaks and birches and one old yew that had been there before any of them, and between the trunks it was the particular total blackness of woods at night, the kind that eats depth so you can't tell if the darkness goes back four feet or forty. She looked along it the way you look along a shelf for the thing you came in for. Left to right. Nothing. Then, at the very edge of her right eye, where vision is mostly guesswork and the brain fills in whatever it finds convenient: a shape that was taller than the gap between two birches and did not have the decency to be a shadow. She turned her head toward it. Birch trunks, white as bone meal in the moonlight, and behind them black, and nothing that answered to the shape her eye had supplied. She turned her head back to the stone. At the left edge of her vision now, closer, something the height of a man had finished not being a tree. Rory did not run. She had learned, in a flat in Cardiff with a door that Evan stood in front of, that running is only useful when the thing behind you wants you gone. Sometimes it wants the opposite and then running is just a way of telling it you understand. So she stood with her boots in the whispering flowers and she breathed out slowly through her mouth, and she looked at the pale stone and thought about the pendant, which had gone so quiet it might as well have been a bead of coloured glass on a chain. "Isolde," she said. Her voice came out even and she was proud of it. "It's Rory. I'm at the stone." The water stopped. Not the startled version of moving. Stopped. And the owl-thing had stopped with it, she realised, at the same moment, which meant they were the same apparatus and the apparatus had been turned off to listen. The flowers around her shins had stopped whispering too. Every growing thing in the clearing had gone to the specific attentive stillness of a room full of people pretending not to watch one person. Rory felt it along her arms, the prickling certainty of being the thing being thought about. The pendant sat against her sternum and did not help. From somewhere behind the treeline, at a distance she could not fix, a voice that was almost Isolde's said, "Rory." Then, after a pause that was shaped exactly like a question it had forgotten how to ask: "Rory." The same word. The same pitch. Twice, and precisely. Rory's hand closed around the Heartstone and found it cool, dead, ordinary as a pebble. She began, very carefully, to step backwards toward the standing stones, and the flowers said her name again in their whispering, all of them, in a long sibilant thread, and then the moonlight in the clearing changed by a small amount, the way a room changes when someone has come and stood in the doorway behind you. She did not turn around. She looked at the treeline ahead of her and at the dark between the birches, and now she could see it clearly, because it had stopped pretending to be far away: a shape the height of a man, and the wrongness of it was not in its outline, which was ordinary, but in the fact that it was standing on top of the ground without making an impression in the flowers. There were more of them. She found them one at a time as her eyes adjusted, the way you find stars. Six. Nine. Lining the treeline at even intervals like fence posts, all of them the height of a man, none of them making a sound, all of them arranged so that their ordinary outlines faced the pale stone. All of them facing the pale stone. All of them facing the pale stone where she had been standing two minutes ago, and Rory realised, with a cold that came up from her feet in the wet ground, that they had not moved when she moved. The bark of the nearest standing stone was warm against her back. Behind her, between the ribs of that patient mouth, the woods out toward Richmond Park were making the ordinary sounds of a February night — traffic on the far road, the proper owl, wind — and the sounds were coming from too far away, as though the park had been moved several miles off while she was attending to other things. An hour inside could be a minute or a day outside. She had budgeted for that. She had not budgeted for being gone long enough for the trees to notice. The pendant gave one small pulse against her palm. Weak, apologetic, faintly warm, like an ember that has been buried and remembers what it was for. Rory closed her fingers around it and turned sideways through the gap between the two oaks and walked, at exactly the speed of a person with nowhere in particular to be, out of the Fae Grove and along the deer path toward the park road. Behind her, from the clearing she was leaving, something that had learned one sound and did not know that wasn't enough began to say her name in the rhythm of an owl. Four times. Five. Each repetition varied very slightly, improving, and by the seventh it had her mother's intonation exactly. Rory kept walking. She did not run. She did not turn around. The path bent and the trees closed over her and the traffic noise came back by degrees, ordinary and chemical-lemon and safe, and only when she was past the park gate with her phone showing her a date two days later than she'd left did she let herself stop and put her hands on her knees and breathe. The Heartstone hung against her chest and pulsed, once, hard, toward the Grove behind her. Then it went quiet, and stayed quiet, the whole long night bus home, as though it had finally said the thing it had come all this way to say and now intended to keep its mouth shut about the rest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1835
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"very"
count5
1
adverb"precisely"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"precisely"
2"slowly"
3"carefully"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1835
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"firmly"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"firmly"
4"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences109
matches
0"was proud"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1839
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1829
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Grove6
Cardiff2
Bay1
Golden1
Empress1
February2
Heartstone3
Hel1
Isolde3
Rory10
Friday1
Eva1
Silas2
Evan1
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
places
0"Grove"
1"Cardiff"
2"Bay"
3"Golden"
4"February"
5"Richmond"
6"Park"
7"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like all of that, plus underneath"
1"felt like long enough that she should b"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.544
wordCount1839
matches
0"not in its outline, which was ordinary, but in the fact"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"understood that owls"
1"was that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean44.85
std32.44
cv0.723
sampleLengths
010
1108
236
314
4143
548
63
761
86
957
1043
118
1276
1371
1441
1548
168
1786
1844
1938
2021
21100
2220
233
2436
2560
2620
2718
289
2972
3076
3159
327
3339
3489
3514
3671
3751
3870
3915
4040
76.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount9
totalSentences109
matches
0"been cleaned"
1"were supposed"
2"been told"
3"been turned"
4"being thought"
5"was shaped"
6"been moved"
7"being gone"
8"been buried"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount9
totalVerbs283
matches
0"were blooming"
1"was just being"
2"was doing"
3"was covering"
4"was standing"
5"were making"
6"were coming"
7"was attending"
8"was leaving"
38.96% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences110
ratio0.036
matches
0"And in the sudden absence of it she became aware that the rest of her body was very loud — her breathing, the slide of her jacket, her heartbeat doing the work the gemstone had abandoned."
1"It felt like long enough that she should be able to hear the river continue past the stones it usually moved past, and instead the water sounded the way it does when someone upstream has put their hand in it — the same volume, but startled."
2"Rory had expected it to be empty; she hadn't sent word."
3"Behind her, between the ribs of that patient mouth, the woods out toward Richmond Park were making the ordinary sounds of a February night — traffic on the far road, the proper owl, wind — and the sounds were coming from too far away, as though the park had been moved several miles off while she was attending to other things."
94.88% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1832
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount84
adverbRatio0.04585152838427948
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.013646288209606987
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean16.72
std15.98
cv0.956
sampleLengths
05
15
229
34
425
522
628
77
84
925
1014
116
1220
1327
1429
1551
1610
171
182
1945
203
2124
226
2331
246
252
264
2736
288
296
301
3143
328
337
3410
3511
364
3721
3816
394
403
4119
426
4346
443
4538
4629
474
4811
494
53.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.39090909090909093
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences98
matches
0"Then she'd gone back to"
1"Somewhere to her left, water"
2"Somewhere ahead, an owl said"
3"Then a third time, in"
4"Then, at the very edge"
5"Sometimes it wants the opposite"
6"Then, after a pause that"
7"Twice, and precisely."
8"Then it went quiet, and"
ratio0.092
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences98
matches
0"She took her hand off"
1"It was past two in"
2"she said, to no one,"
3"She had come for the"
4"She stepped through."
5"They came up past her"
6"She stood very still in"
7"She'd budgeted for that."
8"It might have been four"
9"It felt like long enough"
10"She walked forward."
11"She scratched it with her"
12"She looked along it the"
13"She turned her head toward"
14"She turned her head back"
15"She had learned, in a"
16"Her voice came out even"
17"She began, very carefully, to"
18"She did not turn around."
19"She looked at the treeline"
ratio0.255
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences98
matches
0"The standing stones smelled wrong."
1"That was the first thing."
2"Rory Carter stopped at the"
3"The Grove beyond always carried"
4"Tonight it smelled like all"
5"She took her hand off"
6"The bark was warm."
7"It was past two in"
8"she said, to no one,"
9"She had come for the"
10"That was the reason and"
11"This had been fast and"
12"Yu-Fei had noticed her pressing"
13"She stepped through."
14"The wildflowers were blooming, the"
15"They came up past her"
16"The clearing opened ahead of"
17"The pulse in the pendant"
18"She stood very still in"
19"Time moved strangely here, she"
ratio0.704
51.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Because the Grove was where"
ratio0.01
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Yu-Fei had noticed her pressing her fist against her sternum over the takeaway bags and told her, in the flat unbothered way she had, that when something under …"
1"Because the Grove was where things that behaved like this were supposed to be understood, and because Isolde had always been able to read the stones, and becaus…"
2"The clearing opened ahead of her with the standing stones behind her like the ribs of a mouth that had already decided to swallow and was just being polite abou…"
3"The Grove's trees were oaks and birches and one old yew that had been there before any of them, and between the trunks it was the particular total blackness of …"
4"Then, at the very edge of her right eye, where vision is mostly guesswork and the brain fills in whatever it finds convenient: a shape that was taller than the …"
5"Birch trunks, white as bone meal in the moonlight, and behind them black, and nothing that answered to the shape her eye had supplied."
6"So she stood with her boots in the whispering flowers and she breathed out slowly through her mouth, and she looked at the pale stone and thought about the pend…"
7"And the owl-thing had stopped with it, she realised, at the same moment, which meant they were the same apparatus and the apparatus had been turned off to liste…"
8"She looked at the treeline ahead of her and at the dark between the birches, and now she could see it clearly, because it had stopped pretending to be far away:…"
9"Behind her, between the ribs of that patient mouth, the woods out toward Richmond Park were making the ordinary sounds of a February night — traffic on the far …"
10"Weak, apologetic, faintly warm, like an ember that has been buried and remembers what it was for."
11"Behind her, from the clearing she was leaving, something that had learned one sound and did not know that wasn't enough began to say her name in the rhythm of a…"
12"Then it went quiet, and stayed quiet, the whole long night bus home, as though it had finally said the thing it had come all this way to say and now intended to…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.0199%