Run: 2026-09-23-01M36S9BCKMMYVN5FVEVEF53EN

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.002096
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory slipped between the standing stones at a minute past midnight, and the park fell away behind her like a held breath released. She didn't look back. Looking back felt like a bad idea, the way it feels like a bad idea to glance over your shoulder on a dark stairwell — not because anything is there, but because you are afraid of confirming it. She kept her torch low, aimed at the ground, and walked the last few meters into the Fae Grove with her jaw set and her heart doing something quick and stupid behind her ribs. The wildflowers were out. Of course they were. They were always out here, even in January, even with frost silvering the rest of Richmond Park. Foxgloves and cornflowers and something like campion, all of them blooming in the dark with their faces turned up toward her as she passed. The torch caught the wet shine of petals and the flowers seemed to lean. Rory stopped in the center of the grove and set down her bag. "Right," she said. Her voice sounded small and dry. "Right. Let's get this done." She'd come for Isolde. That was the reason, the good sensible reason she'd built out of the mess of the past three weeks. Isolde had answers — about the pendant, about Evan's shadow turning up in places it shouldn't, about the door in the basement of Silas' bar that smelled faintly of sulphur when the wind was wrong. Isolde had said: come to the grove, come alone, come at midnight. She had said it in a voice like water over stones and had smiled in a way that made Rory's stomach tilt. But Rory had survived a barrister father with opinions, a law degree she'd never wanted, and two years with a man who checked her phone, so she knew how to walk into a room she didn't want to enter and keep her face steady. She unfastened the top button of her coat. The Heartstone hung against her sternum on its silver chain, and even through two layers of fabric she could feel it — a small, steady warmth, like holding a coin that had been sitting in the sun. A comfort. She'd started thinking of it as a comfort, which was probably a mistake. The grove was quiet. That was the first wrongness, though it took her a moment to name it. Not silence — the grove was never silent. Usually there was birdsong at impossible hours and the hum of insects in the dead of winter and, underneath it, a low harmonic tone she'd always assumed was the boundary itself, the ancient oak standing stones singing in the wind the way telephone wires sing. Tonight there was none of that. The quiet had a texture to it. It pressed against her eardrums the way water pressure presses on a diver, and when she swallowed, her ears did not pop. Rory swept the torch slowly across the treeline. Oak, beech, yew. The standing stones — not stone at all in the daylight, but the trunks of oaks so old they had petrified in place, black and smooth and faintly warm to the touch — stood in their ring around her. Twelve of them. She counted them by torchlight. Twelve. Good. Then the torch beam swung past the eleventh and she kept moving and her hindbrain snagged on something and she brought the beam back. Twelve. Yes, twelve. She counted again. Twelve. But between the ninth and the tenth, the spacing was wrong. The gap was wider by a stride or two. She was sure of it. She had walked this ring twice before, in daylight, measuring it with the particular pedantic thoroughness of a girl who'd been raised to cross-examine everything, including the weather. The spacing had been even. It was even now, she told herself. It was a trick of the light and the fact that she'd been awake for nineteen hours and had eaten nothing since a box of leftover chow mein at four o'clock. She took a breath. The air tasted of wet green things and, very faintly, of the sweet rot smell of flowers past their best. "Isolde," she said. Nothing. The flowers didn't stir. "Isolde, I'm here. As asked. Alone." She paused, then added, because she couldn't help herself: "As you can bloody see." Somewhere behind the stones, a sound. Not a footstep. A long soft dragging, like a heavy silk hem pulled slowly over grass. It went on for three or four seconds and then stopped, and the silence rushed back into the space it had left, thicker than before. Rory's hand went to the pendant without her thinking about it. Her thumb found the little gem — thumbnail-sized, deep crimson, its edges worn smooth — and rubbed it the way you rub a talisman. Warm. It was always warm. Except now it was warmer. Not the sun-warmed-coin warmth she was used to. A pulsing warmth, faint and rhythmic, ticking against her thumb like a second pulse. The codex of half-truths she'd assembled from Isolde and Silas and a very drunk man in a pub in Soho said that the Heartstone answered to doors. To thresholds. To places where one thing became another thing. There was no door in the grove. "Isolde," she said again, and hated how her voice had gone thin and breathy, like Eva's voice went when she talked about her mother. "This isn't funny." The torch flickered. Not a dying-battery flicker — a slow, deliberate dimming, as if something had passed between the bulb and the ground, something with the general shape of a hand. Rory looked at the beam and saw nothing in it but grass and crushed petals and the small dead moths that always littered the grove floor. When the light came back to full it was a slightly different colour. Cooler. Bluer. The flowers it fell on looked almost grey. She should leave. That thought arrived in her head clean and reasonable and fully formed, the way her best ideas did. She should leave, because Isolde was not coming, because the grove was wrong tonight in a way it had never been wrong before, because a woman who has learned the hard way to trust the prickle at the back of her neck should bloody well trust it. She picked up her bag and slung it over her shoulder and turned toward the gap between the stones where she'd come in. It was still there. The gap was still there. Good. She walked toward it. She had taken perhaps five steps when she realized she could not see Richmond Park through it. Before, the gap had framed the familiar dark slope of the hill and the distant orange smear of London's light pollution low on the horizon. Now it framed more trees — the same oaks, the same beeches, the same yew, going on and on into a dark that her torch couldn't reach the bottom of. Rory stopped. She stood very still and she listened to her own breathing and she did not swear, because swearing was a kind of panic and she had promised herself years ago, in a flat in Cardiff with a man who was beginning to raise his voice in the next room, that she would not panic. Panic was a luxury. Panic was for people who had somewhere to run to. The pendant pulsed against her thumb. Warm. Warm. Warm. She backed up slowly until the small of her back touched the trunk of one of the standing stones. It was warm too, she realized. All of them would be. They were marking a boundary and the boundary had moved. "Okay," she said aloud, because the sound of her own voice was better than the sound of that silence. "Okay. That's — okay." The dragging sound came again. Closer. It circled her at a distance of maybe twenty meters, on the far side of the flowers, and she could see the tops of the foxgloves moving as something passed through them — a ripple, slow and languid, travelling around the ring of stones in the direction of the sun. A hem. Or a body dragging itself on its front. Or roots, moving under the soil. It stopped when it reached the gap. And then, very softly, it began to come inward. Rory swung the torch at it. The beam cut through the dark and found flowers. Just flowers, parting and closing again in a slow tide. But between one heartbeat and the next the tide changed direction, and the flowers turned their faces, and she saw that the pale undersides of them were the wrong shape. Not petals. Something flatter and more numerous, arranged in rings around a dark center, and they were all of them angled toward her, and the center of each one was open and wet and the size of a fingertip. She cut the torch. Darkness slammed down on her like a dropped shutter and she stood in it with her hand clamped over her mouth and her back against the warm stone and her heart slamming so hard she was certain — she was *certain* — that whatever was out there could hear it. Quiet. Total quiet. The pressure in her ears increased. Somewhere very close, at about the height of her own head, she heard a sound that she would think about later, in Silas' bar with a large whisky and her hands wrapped around the glass to stop them shaking. It was a small, soft sound. It was the sound a person makes when they are trying very hard not to laugh. The pendant burned against her thumb. Not faint anymore. Not a pulse. A steady, insistent heat, the heat of something held in a fire, and it meant *door, door, door*, and there was a door here, there had always been a door here, the grove was a door, and it had opened and she had walked through it alone at midnight on the invitation of something that wore a voice like water over stones. Rory slid her hand down to the chain. Her fingers closed around the gem. Somewhere in the dark, the flowers were turning. She thought of the crescent scar on her wrist, the one from the childhood fall, the one Evan had once traced with his thumb and told her he liked. She thought of her father's voice, unhurried and merciless, dismantling a witness. She thought: *first you find out where you are. Then you decide what to do.* She let out her breath, slowly, through her nose. And something across the grove exhaled at the same time, in perfect unison, matching her breath exactly, in a voice that was not Isolde's and had never been anyone's. Rory opened her eyes in the dark and began, very quietly, to count to twelve again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She paused then [then]"
1"she said again [again]"
2"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.875
leniency1
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.429
64.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1812
totalAiIsmAdverbs13
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count4
1
adverb"very"
count7
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1812
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"could feel"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"silk"
5"rhythmic"
6"pulse"
7"flickered"
8"flicker"
9"familiar"
10"pulsed"
11"traced"
12"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences137
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords17
totalWords1826
ratio0.009
matches
0"certain"
1"door, door, door"
2"first you find out where you are. Then you decide what to do."
97.22% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"It was even now, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1770
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Twelve"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
January1
Richmond2
Park2
Isolde6
Evan2
Rory11
Heartstone2
Silas1
Soho1
Eva1
London1
Cardiff1
Twelve4
Warm4
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Evan"
2"Rory"
3"Heartstone"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"January"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
5"Soho"
6"London"
7"Cardiff"
8"Twelve"
globalScore1
windowScore1
92.53% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a bad idea, the way it feels"
1"something like campion, all of them blooming"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.548
wordCount1826
matches
0"not stone at all in the daylight, but the trunks of oaks so old they had petrified in place, black"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences140
matches
0"said that the"
1"saw that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean41.5
std31.59
cv0.761
sampleLengths
023
176
263
313
414
5136
660
74
8102
960
1024
117
1296
1324
143
155
1620
1747
1840
1964
207
2127
2257
2323
2468
2523
2614
2772
2870
299
3040
3123
3272
3316
3494
354
3650
3770
3874
3922
4056
419
4229
4316
97.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences137
matches
0"been raised"
1"been even"
2"was used"
99.37% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs265
matches
0"was not coming"
1"was beginning"
2"were marking"
3"were turning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences140
ratio0.071
matches
0"Looking back felt like a bad idea, the way it feels like a bad idea to glance over your shoulder on a dark stairwell — not because anything is there, but because you are afraid of confirming it."
1"Isolde had answers — about the pendant, about Evan's shadow turning up in places it shouldn't, about the door in the basement of Silas' bar that smelled faintly of sulphur when the wind was wrong."
2"The Heartstone hung against her sternum on its silver chain, and even through two layers of fabric she could feel it — a small, steady warmth, like holding a coin that had been sitting in the sun."
3"Not silence — the grove was never silent."
4"The standing stones — not stone at all in the daylight, but the trunks of oaks so old they had petrified in place, black and smooth and faintly warm to the touch — stood in their ring around her."
5"Her thumb found the little gem — thumbnail-sized, deep crimson, its edges worn smooth — and rubbed it the way you rub a talisman."
6"Not a dying-battery flicker — a slow, deliberate dimming, as if something had passed between the bulb and the ground, something with the general shape of a hand."
7"Now it framed more trees — the same oaks, the same beeches, the same yew, going on and on into a dark that her torch couldn't reach the bottom of."
8"It circled her at a distance of maybe twenty meters, on the far side of the flowers, and she could see the tops of the foxgloves moving as something passed through them — a ripple, slow and languid, travelling around the ring of stones in the direction of the sun."
9"Darkness slammed down on her like a dropped shutter and she stood in it with her hand clamped over her mouth and her back against the warm stone and her heart slamming so hard she was certain — she was *certain* — that whatever was out there could hear it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount236
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.029661016949152543
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean13.04
std13.16
cv1.009
sampleLengths
023
14
238
334
44
54
617
724
814
913
103
116
125
134
1419
1535
1612
1722
1844
198
2037
212
2213
234
2414
258
2645
276
287
2922
308
313
3239
333
345
351
361
3724
381
392
403
411
4211
439
445
4528
465
477
4831
494
42.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.32142857142857145
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences114
matches
0"Of course they were."
1"Usually there was birdsong at"
2"Then the torch beam swung"
3"Somewhere behind the stones, a"
4"Just flowers, parting and closing"
5"Somewhere very close, at about"
6"Somewhere in the dark, the"
7"Then you decide what to"
ratio0.07
72.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences114
matches
0"She didn't look back."
1"She kept her torch low,"
2"They were always out here,"
3"Her voice sounded small and"
4"She'd come for Isolde."
5"She had said it in"
6"She unfastened the top button"
7"She'd started thinking of it"
8"It pressed against her eardrums"
9"She counted them by torchlight."
10"She counted again."
11"She was sure of it."
12"She had walked this ring"
13"It was even now, she"
14"It was a trick of"
15"She took a breath."
16"She paused, then added, because"
17"It went on for three"
18"Her thumb found the little"
19"It was always warm."
ratio0.368
91.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences114
matches
0"Rory slipped between the standing"
1"She didn't look back."
2"She kept her torch low,"
3"The wildflowers were out."
4"They were always out here,"
5"Foxgloves and cornflowers and something"
6"The torch caught the wet"
7"Rory stopped in the center"
8"Her voice sounded small and"
9"She'd come for Isolde."
10"That was the reason, the"
11"Isolde had answers — about"
12"Isolde had said: come to"
13"She had said it in"
14"She unfastened the top button"
15"The Heartstone hung against her"
16"She'd started thinking of it"
17"The grove was quiet."
18"That was the first wrongness,"
19"Tonight there was none of"
ratio0.737
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences114
matches
0"To places where one thing"
1"Before, the gap had framed"
2"Now it framed more trees"
ratio0.026
48.52% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The Heartstone hung against her sternum on its silver chain, and even through two layers of fabric she could feel it — a small, steady warmth, like holding a co…"
1"She had walked this ring twice before, in daylight, measuring it with the particular pedantic thoroughness of a girl who'd been raised to cross-examine everythi…"
2"Not a dying-battery flicker — a slow, deliberate dimming, as if something had passed between the bulb and the ground, something with the general shape of a hand…"
3"She should leave, because Isolde was not coming, because the grove was wrong tonight in a way it had never been wrong before, because a woman who has learned th…"
4"She stood very still and she listened to her own breathing and she did not swear, because swearing was a kind of panic and she had promised herself years ago, i…"
5"A steady, insistent heat, the heat of something held in a fire, and it meant *door, door, door*, and there was a door here, there had always been a door here, t…"
6"And something across the grove exhaled at the same time, in perfect unison, matching her breath exactly, in a voice that was not Isolde's and had never been any…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.2249%