Run: 2026-09-23-01M36SE50FTEWFRXP9JEBNK08Q

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.002220
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory ducked between the standing stones at 11:40, phone torch cutting a weak yellow seam through the dark, and the first thing that struck her was the silence. Not quiet — quiet had texture, quiet had owls and the distant complaint of traffic along the A3 and the breathing of a city that never properly slept. This was silence with the sound taken out of it, as though someone had pressed cotton wool into her ears. She stood still and waited for her hearing to adjust. It didn't. The Grove opened out ahead of her, moonlight lying in pale slabs across the grass. Wildflowers nodded in a breeze she couldn't feel — clover and cornflower and something with fat purple heads she couldn't name, blooming in a Richmond Park October like it was midsummer. She'd read about that in Isolde's notes. The notes had also said, in a cramped sideways hand in the margin of a page about boundary-wards: *do not cross alone after dark.* Rory had underlined it. Then she'd come anyway, because Eva had stopped answering her phone four hours ago, and the last message she'd sent had been three words and a photograph. *In the grove.* The photograph was a smear of green light and what might have been a face at the edge of the frame, but not a face she could look at for long. "Ev?" she called. Her voice came out flat and small, and nothing carried it anywhere. The Heartstone hung against her collarbone and it was warm. Not warm like a coin left in the sun — warm like a hand, warm in patches, a faint throb of heat against her skin that she was trying not to think about as a rhythm. It had been cool when she left the flat. It had been cool all the way up the hill. It had gone warm the moment she stepped through the stones. She walked out into the grass. The oaks stood in their broken ring behind her, black and massive, and ahead the Grove sloped gently down to a hollow where Isolde had once held her gatherings. That was where Eva would be, if Eva was anywhere. Rory kept the torch moving in slow sweeps and counted the wildflowers without meaning to, some reflex of a mind that wanted to be doing something other than listening to that impossible silence. Twenty paces in, the sound came back. It wasn't sound returning. It was a new sound arriving — a low wet noise from somewhere behind and to her left, like a mouth closing slowly on something soft. Rory stopped. The torch beam jittered across a stand of bracken and found nothing. The sound didn't repeat. The silence reassembled itself around her, seamless, and she stood with her heart hammering a double beat against the warm stone at her throat. "Ev!" Louder this time. Louder than she'd intended. "Eva, if you're here, say something. Please." A bird called. One note, high and thin, from somewhere in the canopy. Except it wasn't right. It took her three seconds to understand why, and when she did, the skin along her forearms prickled up hard enough that the fine hairs caught the torchlight. It had been two notes. The second one had been lower. Birds don't answer themselves in a different key. She started walking again, faster. The hollow lay ahead — she could see the shape of it now, the grass bending in that odd circle where the ground dipped. Her phone buzzed against her palm and she nearly threw it. A message from Eva. She fumbled the passcode twice before the screen opened. *stay where you are* Rory looked up. The hollow was empty. No — not empty. There was something in it. She raised the torch and her beam caught on a shape about forty metres out, low to the ground, and her brain offered *fallen branch* and *folded coat* and *deer*, and then refused to offer anything else, because the shape was the wrong colour. The wrong colour for any of those. It was pale, but pale the way the underside of something is pale, pale the way flesh is where light has never touched it. It wasn't moving. She lowered the torch. She took one step back toward the stones. "Rory." Eva's voice. From the hollow. From directly behind the shape that wasn't a branch. Rory's breath caught and she swung the torch back and the shape was gone. The grass was just grass, a faint depression where something had lain, and beyond it only darkness and the black ragged lip of the trees. "You came alone," said Eva's voice. It sounded pleased. It sounded the way Eva sounded when Rory did something clever, that bright surprised lift on the last syllable. It was the wrong shape of pleased for standing in a field at midnight. "I came to find you," Rory said. She kept her voice level. She was good at level; it was the first thing she'd learned, that if you keep the voice level, the rest of you can follow. "Where are you?" "Here." The Heartstone pulsed. Not throbbed — pulsed, once, sharply, like a lamp surging, and the warmth of it flared against her breastbone and then died to a dull ember. She knew that feeling. She'd felt it once before, standing in the back of Yu-Fei's kitchen while the tile behind the freezer shimmered and the air tasted of struck matches and old meat. Isolde had told her what it meant. *The stone knows Hel. That is its one gift. When it burns, you are near a door, and you should not be.* "Where is here, Eva?" A giggle. Off to her right now, maybe thirty metres, near the tree line. Her torch snapped across and found nothing but oak trunks and the pale discs of fungus clinging to bark. Then a second giggle, close — so close it should have been at her shoulder — and then a third, far away and fading, as though the sound were being carried off through the trees by something running. Rory turned in a slow circle. The standing stones waited behind her, grey and patient, and between her and them the grass stretched out unmarked and innocent. Something was wrong with the ring. She'd counted seven stones on the way in. That was what Isolde had always said — *seven old men standing in a circle, and one of them's drunk*, because the seventh leaned. Rory counted now and got eight. She counted again. Eight. One of them was closer to the others than it had been. It stood slightly forward of the arc, at an angle none of the others held, and it was shorter. She stared at it across forty metres of moonlit grass and tried to remember the leaning one's exact position and could not, could not make her memory produce anything but an impression of *right, always the drunk one's on the right.* "Rory," said Eva's voice, and it was at her ear. Not near her ear. *At* it, close enough that she should have felt breath, and there was no breath. "Don't go back through them. They've moved. They moved while you weren't looking." Rory did not turn around. The warmth at her throat had gone cold, entirely cold, which was its own message and worse than the burning, because Isolde had written nothing about cold. She looked at the eight stones and thought, clearly and with the strange calm that had always frightened her mother: *the ring didn't grow a stone. The ring grew a gap and something filled it, and now it's standing in the circle pretending it belongs there.* She thought of Evan, too — thought of him with no particular reason, except that she'd learned the shape of a thing that stands in the doorway of your life and smiles and says *where are you going?* She'd learned to recognise it by its stillness first, before anything else. How it held perfectly, perfectly still while it waited for you to relax. The eighth stone was perfectly still. The wildflowers all around her turned their faces toward it. "Eva," Rory said, "I need you to tell me what you told me on the roof of Silas' place. The night in June. What did you tell me." Nothing. The giggle again, further off now, almost amused. She unclasped the Heartstone with two fingers and held it out at arm's length, and the moment she turned it toward the stones it flared so hot she nearly dropped it, a bright crimson glow spilling over her knuckles and lighting the grass in a red tide, and she could see them clearly now, all eight, and she could see that the eighth one had no moon shadow. The others threw long blue shadows west across the grass. The eighth stood in the dark as though light fell through it. "I know what you are," Rory said, and her voice was not level after all. It was shaking on the consonants. She said it again anyway. "I know what you are. That's not the boundary. The boundary's the seven." The eighth stone leaned. Slowly, with the grinding patience of something that had waited a very long time and could wait longer. It leaned toward her and its surface ran with a sudden wet sheen, and far off in the trees the bird called again, three notes now, and the third note was Eva's voice, and it was screaming. Rory turned and ran. Not for the stones. For the hollow, for the deep place in the Grove where Isolde's power had sunk into the soil and where, the notes said, the boundary grew thin enough to slip through in either direction. Thin enough was not safe. Thin enough was a coin toss. Behind her something came after her with the sound of a heavy wet mouth closing, over and over, and the grass whipped past her ankles and the wildflowers turned and turned their little faces as she went, tracking her the way sunflowers track the sun. The Heartstone burned in her fist like a coal. It burned like a warning, and it burned like a door.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:27:05.493Z" 9/23/2026, 9:27:05 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1701
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count3
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"sharply"
3"slightly"
4"perfectly"
5"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1701
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"silence"
count4
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"throb"
2"pulsed"
3"throbbed"
4"warmth"
5"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.69% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans12
markdownWords91
totalWords1712
ratio0.053
matches
0"do not cross alone after dark."
1"In the grove."
2"stay where you are"
3"fallen branch"
4"folded coat"
5"deer"
6"The stone knows Hel. That is its one gift. When it burns, you are near a door, and you should not be."
7"seven old men standing in a circle, and one of them's drunk"
8"right, always the drunk one's on the right."
9"At"
10"the ring didn't grow a stone. The ring grew a gap and something filled it, and now it's standing in the circle pretending it belongs there."
11"where are you going?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1628
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove3
Richmond1
Park1
October1
Isolde6
Rory14
Eva9
Heartstone4
Louder2
Yu-Fei1
Hel1
Evan1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Heartstone"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Evan"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"October"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.584
wordCount1712
matches
0"not, could not make her memory produce anything but an impression of *right, always the drunk one's on the right"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences128
matches
0"knew that feeling"
1"see that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean38.91
std31.02
cv0.797
sampleLengths
076
112
2108
33
431
515
676
778
87
972
1015
1145
1219
1353
144
1591
163
1712
181
1914
2039
2142
2240
231
2491
254
2671
2727
2844
294
3072
3142
3278
3363
346
3510
3628
379
3868
3922
4039
4159
4298
4320
99.46% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"was gone"
1"being carried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs271
matches
0"was trying"
1"was shaking"
2"was screaming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences128
ratio0.086
matches
0"Not quiet — quiet had texture, quiet had owls and the distant complaint of traffic along the A3 and the breathing of a city that never properly slept."
1"Wildflowers nodded in a breeze she couldn't feel — clover and cornflower and something with fat purple heads she couldn't name, blooming in a Richmond Park October like it was midsummer."
2"Not warm like a coin left in the sun — warm like a hand, warm in patches, a faint throb of heat against her skin that she was trying not to think about as a rhythm."
3"It was a new sound arriving — a low wet noise from somewhere behind and to her left, like a mouth closing slowly on something soft."
4"The hollow lay ahead — she could see the shape of it now, the grass bending in that odd circle where the ground dipped."
5"No — not empty."
6"She was good at level; it was the first thing she'd learned, that if you keep the voice level, the rest of you can follow."
7"Not throbbed — pulsed, once, sharply, like a lamp surging, and the warmth of it flared against her breastbone and then died to a dull ember."
8"Then a second giggle, close — so close it should have been at her shoulder — and then a third, far away and fading, as though the sound were being carried off through the trees by something running."
9"That was what Isolde had always said — *seven old men standing in a circle, and one of them's drunk*, because the seventh leaned."
10"She thought of Evan, too — thought of him with no particular reason, except that she'd learned the shape of a thing that stands in the doorway of your life and smiles and says *where are you going?* She'd learned to recognise it by its stillness first, before anything else."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1619
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"hollow lay ahead — she"
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.034589252625077206
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.009882643607164917
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean13.38
std12.13
cv0.907
sampleLengths
028
128
220
310
42
515
631
77
828
927
103
1131
123
1312
1410
1536
169
1710
1811
196
2029
2110
2233
237
244
2526
262
2712
284
2924
304
314
327
333
3410
354
3628
375
386
398
405
4124
4211
434
449
454
463
474
484
495
39.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners40
89.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then she'd come anyway, because"
1"Then a second giggle, close"
2"Slowly, with the grinding patience"
ratio0.027
84.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences112
matches
0"She stood still and waited"
1"She'd read about that in"
2"Her voice came out flat"
3"It had been cool when"
4"It had been cool all"
5"It had gone warm the"
6"She walked out into the"
7"It wasn't sound returning."
8"It was a new sound"
9"It took her three seconds"
10"It had been two notes."
11"She started walking again, faster."
12"Her phone buzzed against her"
13"She fumbled the passcode twice"
14"She raised the torch and"
15"It was pale, but pale"
16"It wasn't moving."
17"She lowered the torch."
18"She took one step back"
19"It sounded pleased."
ratio0.339
89.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences112
matches
0"Rory ducked between the standing"
1"This was silence with the"
2"She stood still and waited"
3"The Grove opened out ahead"
4"Wildflowers nodded in a breeze"
5"She'd read about that in"
6"The notes had also said,"
7"The photograph was a smear"
8"Her voice came out flat"
9"The Heartstone hung against her"
10"It had been cool when"
11"It had been cool all"
12"It had gone warm the"
13"She walked out into the"
14"The oaks stood in their"
15"That was where Eva would"
16"Rory kept the torch moving"
17"It wasn't sound returning."
18"It was a new sound"
19"The torch beam jittered across"
ratio0.741
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory ducked between the standing stones at 11:40, phone torch cutting a weak yellow seam through the dark, and the first thing that struck her was the silence."
1"Rory kept the torch moving in slow sweeps and counted the wildflowers without meaning to, some reflex of a mind that wanted to be doing something other than lis…"
2"She thought of Evan, too — thought of him with no particular reason, except that she'd learned the shape of a thing that stands in the doorway of your life and …"
3"Slowly, with the grinding patience of something that had waited a very long time and could wait longer."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, and her voice was not level after all"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.9572%