Run: 2026-09-23-01M36SK8E2VZSPAN7DJ3MEH6MK

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Duration:
53.0s
Cost:
$0.000626
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The path through Richmond Park had not been there an hour ago. Rory knew this the way she knew the slip of her own keys in her palm — not because she'd mapped it, but because the gap between the oak trunks had been solid hedge when she'd last walked past it, and now it was a seam of dark, and the hedge leaned apart just wide enough for a person. She went through anyway. She was beginning to recognise the shape of her own reasons. Beyond the boundary the air changed temperature. Not colder — wrong. Warmed in patches, as though something beneath the soil were breathing slow heat up through the grass, then cooling again where she stood. The standing stones rose ahead of her in a broken ring, ancient oak rather than granite, their surfaces black and wet-looking even though nothing had rained. Between them the clearing opened, and the wildflowers were out. All of them. Foxglove and yarrow and a drift of red campion so bright it looked lit from inside, blooming out of season, out of month, out of any order she understood. The Heartstone at her throat had been cold all evening. Now it stirred, a faint warmth against her collarbone that she felt more than saw, the deep crimson of it dull in the starlight. Rory stopped at the outermost stone and listened. Richmond at night had a sound — traffic on the far roads, the scrape of bottles, the siren that was always somewhere and never arriving. Here none of it reached her. The silence wasn't absence. It was held, the way a room goes quiet when someone has just stopped speaking. "Silas said the boundary would be obvious," she murmured, more to hear her own voice than for any answer. She'd wanted the barman's opinion on the pendant, and he'd given it in that careful way of his: look at the stones, don't pass them, don't stay past midnight. Rory had thanked him, gone up to her flat above the bar, and then come back out again. The first sound arrived while she was deciding whether to step between the stones. It was small. A dry click, like a fingernail on wood, somewhere behind her and to the left. She did not turn. She looked instead at the clearing and made herself count the flowers, the way her father had taught her to stead her voice before a moot: three foxgloves, seven yarrow, a long low bank of campion that ran to the far stones and stopped as if cut with a blade. The click came again, closer, then a run of them, quick and even, moving along the hedge line. Dryad, said the practical part of her mind. Fox.branches. She had lived above Silas' bar for seven months now and had learned that the world accommodated more than she'd been raised to allow. She stepped through. The moment both feet were inside the ring the quality of the dark changed. Not darker — deeper. It had thickness now, and weight, and the flowers gave off a smell so sweet it was almost a taste, honey and rot in the same breath. The warmth beneath the soil rose to meet her ankles. Rory walked to the centre of the clearing and crouched, pressing her left palm flat to the ground. The scar on her wrist — the small crescent her mother still traced with a fingertip at Christmas — pressed into the grass. The soil was warm as skin. Warmer. The Heartstone pulsed once, gently, against her throat. That was when the second sound came, and it was not a click. It was breathing. Low, unhurried, at the far edge of hearing — the kind of sound that might be wind in the canopy, except the canopy was still. Every leaf above her hung motionless in air that had no direction. The breathing continued anyway, rhythmic, patient, coming from everywhere and therefore from nowhere, and Rory realised with a slow cold drop in her stomach that she had been hearing it since she arrived. She had simply not yet had a word for it. She stood. The pendant had gone warm enough to feel deliberate, a small pressure of heat against her breastbone, and she understood without knowing how she understood that it was not warning her of a Hel portal. It was responding to this place. The Grove was touching it back. "Hello," she said. Her voice went out and did not come back. No echo, no fade — simply ended, as though the clearing had swallowed the shape of the word and kept it. At the north edge of the ring, between two of the black oaks, the dark had thickened further. It was not quite a figure. It was a region where the stars had been removed. Rory watched it and it did not move, and because it did not move she found she could not look away, the way you cannot look away from a face you've half-seen in a crowd. Then it moved the way a reflection moves when the glass does — sideways, without crossing the space between. Between one breath and the next it was at the eastern stone. Rory stepped back. The grass gave under her heel with a sound like a wet intake. *Do not stay past midnight.* She looked up. There was no moon, and no clock, and she had stopped trusting the hour the moment she crossed the boundary. The pendant pulsed again, quicker now, and she thought of Yu-Fei's kitchen at closing, of the folded receipt in her jacket pocket, of Eva's voice on the phone in March telling her to leave and meaning it. Ordinary things. Things with weight. She held them and felt the clearing press in. The breathing changed rhythm. It had been slow. Now it hitched — one skipped beat, a catch, like a sleeper surfacing — and resumed at a different pace, faster, and this time it was unmistakably coming from directly behind her, close enough that if she'd had long hair she would have felt it stir. Rory had shoulder-length black hair and felt nothing move, and that was worse, because nothing moved and the breath was still there, landing warm and damp against the back of her neck. She did not turn around. She thought about turning around. The thought moved through her with great clarity: *turn, look, name it.* Pre-Law had trained her to face the thing across the table. But every instinct she had — the ones Evan had taught her, the ones that had kept her upright in a flat with the curtains shut in daylight — those instincts said no. They said that some things gained by being acknowledged. So she stood very still in the centre of the Fae Grove with the wildflowers blooming their impossible bloom all around her, and she said, aloud, to whatever was breathing at her neck: "I'm not staying." The flowers wilted. Not all of them. A ring of them, a neat radius of about a metre around her boots, folded inward and darkened as she watched — foxglove bells drooping, campion going the colour of old ash — while the outer blooms stayed bright and untouched, as though the wrongness had a boundary of its own and it centred precisely on her. Something at the edge of vision — the northern dark, the eastern dark, both, neither — drew a long slow sound that might have been satisfaction. The pendant blazed warm against her sternum, sudden and fierce, and the flowers at her feet snapped upright again, green and vivid, as if the heat had reached down through her and into the soil. Rory walked. She did not run. Running would have been a statement, and she was no longer certain the clearing would accept it. She walked north, straight toward the black oak where the stars had been removed, and as she passed through the space where the dark had been, the dark closed behind her and she felt it look at her back with something that was not eyes. The gap in the hedge was where she had left it. She slipped through, and the branches drew shut behind her with a sound almost like relief, and she was standing on the path in Richmond Park with traffic somewhere distant and a bottle rolling in the gutter and the ordinary terrible noise of a city at night. Rory put her hand over the Heartstone. It was cooling, but slowly, and she could still feel it pulsing — not fast now, not warning, but a steady metronome of warmth, as if the pendant were counting something for her. She checked her phone. She had been gone four minutes. Behind her, through the hedge, very faintly, breathing.
created_at"2026-09-23T09:29:52.84Z" 9/23/2026, 9:29:52 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she stood very [very]"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
82.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1458
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
2"precisely"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1458
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"traced"
4"pulsed"
5"rhythmic"
6"stomach"
7"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords9
totalWords1476
ratio0.006
matches
0"Do not stay past midnight."
1"turn, look, name it."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1445
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park2
Heartstone3
Christmas1
Rory10
Hel1
Grove2
Yu-Fei1
Eva1
March1
Pre-Law1
Evan1
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a figure"
64.50% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.355
wordCount1476
matches
0"not fast now, not warning, but a steady metronome of warmth, as if the pendant were countin"
1"not warning, but a steady metronome of warmth, as if the pendant were countin"
95.74% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"understood that it"
1"said that some"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean36
std28.05
cv0.779
sampleLengths
071
115
2102
334
48
550
666
714
872
918
1033
113
1255
1348
148
1513
163
1780
1849
193
2030
2169
2231
2316
245
2574
264
2782
285
2970
3036
313
3261
3326
3435
352
3666
3758
3840
3910
408
90.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences94
matches
0"was held"
1"been removed"
2"been removed"
3"been gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount12
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was beginning"
1"were breathing"
2"was deciding"
3"was breathing"
4"was not warning"
5"was responding"
6"was touching"
7"was unmistakably coming"
8"was breathing"
9"was standing"
10"was cooling"
11"were counting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences94
ratio0.138
matches
0"Rory knew this the way she knew the slip of her own keys in her palm — not because she'd mapped it, but because the gap between the oak trunks had been solid hedge when she'd last walked past it, and now it was a seam of dark, and the hedge leaned apart just wide enough for a person."
1"Not colder — wrong."
2"Richmond at night had a sound — traffic on the far roads, the scrape of bottles, the siren that was always somewhere and never arriving."
3"Not darker — deeper."
4"The scar on her wrist — the small crescent her mother still traced with a fingertip at Christmas — pressed into the grass."
5"Low, unhurried, at the far edge of hearing — the kind of sound that might be wind in the canopy, except the canopy was still."
6"No echo, no fade — simply ended, as though the clearing had swallowed the shape of the word and kept it."
7"Then it moved the way a reflection moves when the glass does — sideways, without crossing the space between."
8"Now it hitched — one skipped beat, a catch, like a sleeper surfacing — and resumed at a different pace, faster, and this time it was unmistakably coming from directly behind her, close enough that if she'd had long hair she would have felt it stir."
9"But every instinct she had — the ones Evan had taught her, the ones that had kept her upright in a flat with the curtains shut in daylight — those instincts said no."
10"A ring of them, a neat radius of about a metre around her boots, folded inward and darkened as she watched — foxglove bells drooping, campion going the colour of old ash — while the outer blooms stayed bright and untouched, as though the wrongness had a boundary of its own and it centred precisely on her."
11"Something at the edge of vision — the northern dark, the eastern dark, both, neither — drew a long slow sound that might have been satisfaction."
12"It was cooling, but slowly, and she could still feel it pulsing — not fast now, not warning, but a steady metronome of warmth, as if the pendant were counting something for her."
92.69% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount455
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.04835164835164835
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean15.7
std13.62
cv0.867
sampleLengths
012
159
24
311
47
54
623
726
810
93
1029
1110
1224
138
1425
156
164
1715
1819
1929
2018
2114
223
2315
244
2550
2618
278
281
2924
303
3114
324
3327
3410
3518
3623
376
381
398
4013
413
4225
4312
4433
4510
462
4735
486
496
55.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3829787234042553
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners36
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Then it moved the way"
ratio0.011
88.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences88
matches
0"She went through anyway."
1"She was beginning to recognise"
2"It was held, the way"
3"she murmured, more to hear"
4"She'd wanted the barman's opinion"
5"It was small."
6"She did not turn."
7"She looked instead at the"
8"She had lived above"
9"She stepped through."
10"It had thickness now, and"
11"It was breathing."
12"She had simply not yet"
13"It was responding to this"
14"Her voice went out and"
15"It was not quite a"
16"It was a region where"
17"She looked up."
18"She held them and felt"
19"It had been slow."
ratio0.33
67.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences88
matches
0"The path through Richmond Park"
1"Rory knew this the way"
2"She went through anyway."
3"She was beginning to recognise"
4"The standing stones rose ahead"
5"Foxglove and yarrow and a"
6"The Heartstone at her throat"
7"Rory stopped at the outermost"
8"Richmond at night had a"
9"Here none of it reached"
10"The silence wasn't absence."
11"It was held, the way"
12"she murmured, more to hear"
13"She'd wanted the barman's opinion"
14"Rory had thanked him, gone"
15"The first sound arrived while"
16"It was small."
17"A dry click, like a"
18"She did not turn."
19"She looked instead at the"
ratio0.784
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Now it stirred, a faint"
1"Now it hitched — one"
ratio0.023
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Warmed in patches, as though something beneath the soil were breathing slow heat up through the grass, then cooling again where she stood."
1"Richmond at night had a sound — traffic on the far roads, the scrape of bottles, the siren that was always somewhere and never arriving."
2"She looked instead at the clearing and made herself count the flowers, the way her father had taught her to stead her voice before a moot: three foxgloves, seve…"
3"Low, unhurried, at the far edge of hearing — the kind of sound that might be wind in the canopy, except the canopy was still."
4"Every leaf above her hung motionless in air that had no direction."
5"A ring of them, a neat radius of about a metre around her boots, folded inward and darkened as she watched — foxglove bells drooping, campion going the colour o…"
6"Something at the edge of vision — the northern dark, the eastern dark, both, neither — drew a long slow sound that might have been satisfaction."
7"The pendant blazed warm against her sternum, sudden and fierce, and the flowers at her feet snapped upright again, green and vivid, as if the heat had reached d…"
8"She walked north, straight toward the black oak where the stars had been removed, and as she passed through the space where the dark had been, the dark closed b…"
9"It was cooling, but slowly, and she could still feel it pulsing — not fast now, not warning, but a steady metronome of warmth, as if the pendant were counting s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
74.4768%