| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 82.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1458 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "precisely" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 58.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1458 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 58 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1476 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "Do not stay past midnight." | | 1 | "turn, look, name it." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1445 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Christmas | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | March | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 64.50% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.355 | | wordCount | 1476 | | matches | | 0 | "not fast now, not warning, but a steady metronome of warmth, as if the pendant were countin" | | 1 | "not warning, but a steady metronome of warmth, as if the pendant were countin" |
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| 95.74% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "understood that it" | | 1 | "said that some" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 36 | | std | 28.05 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 102 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 80 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 69 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 74 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 82 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 70 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 61 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 66 | | 37 | 58 | | 38 | 40 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 8 |
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| 90.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "was held" | | 1 | "been removed" | | 2 | "been removed" | | 3 | "been gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 12 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "was beginning" | | 1 | "were breathing" | | 2 | "was deciding" | | 3 | "was breathing" | | 4 | "was not warning" | | 5 | "was responding" | | 6 | "was touching" | | 7 | "was unmistakably coming" | | 8 | "was breathing" | | 9 | "was standing" | | 10 | "was cooling" | | 11 | "were counting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.138 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory knew this the way she knew the slip of her own keys in her palm — not because she'd mapped it, but because the gap between the oak trunks had been solid hedge when she'd last walked past it, and now it was a seam of dark, and the hedge leaned apart just wide enough for a person." | | 1 | "Not colder — wrong." | | 2 | "Richmond at night had a sound — traffic on the far roads, the scrape of bottles, the siren that was always somewhere and never arriving." | | 3 | "Not darker — deeper." | | 4 | "The scar on her wrist — the small crescent her mother still traced with a fingertip at Christmas — pressed into the grass." | | 5 | "Low, unhurried, at the far edge of hearing — the kind of sound that might be wind in the canopy, except the canopy was still." | | 6 | "No echo, no fade — simply ended, as though the clearing had swallowed the shape of the word and kept it." | | 7 | "Then it moved the way a reflection moves when the glass does — sideways, without crossing the space between." | | 8 | "Now it hitched — one skipped beat, a catch, like a sleeper surfacing — and resumed at a different pace, faster, and this time it was unmistakably coming from directly behind her, close enough that if she'd had long hair she would have felt it stir." | | 9 | "But every instinct she had — the ones Evan had taught her, the ones that had kept her upright in a flat with the curtains shut in daylight — those instincts said no." | | 10 | "A ring of them, a neat radius of about a metre around her boots, folded inward and darkened as she watched — foxglove bells drooping, campion going the colour of old ash — while the outer blooms stayed bright and untouched, as though the wrongness had a boundary of its own and it centred precisely on her." | | 11 | "Something at the edge of vision — the northern dark, the eastern dark, both, neither — drew a long slow sound that might have been satisfaction." | | 12 | "It was cooling, but slowly, and she could still feel it pulsing — not fast now, not warning, but a steady metronome of warmth, as if the pendant were counting something for her." |
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| 92.69% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 455 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.04835164835164835 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 15.7 | | std | 13.62 | | cv | 0.867 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 55.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3829787234042553 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 37.88% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 88.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She went through anyway." | | 1 | "She was beginning to recognise" | | 2 | "It was held, the way" | | 3 | "she murmured, more to hear" | | 4 | "She'd wanted the barman's opinion" | | 5 | "It was small." | | 6 | "She did not turn." | | 7 | "She looked instead at the" | | 8 | "She had lived above" | | 9 | "She stepped through." | | 10 | "It had thickness now, and" | | 11 | "It was breathing." | | 12 | "She had simply not yet" | | 13 | "It was responding to this" | | 14 | "Her voice went out and" | | 15 | "It was not quite a" | | 16 | "It was a region where" | | 17 | "She looked up." | | 18 | "She held them and felt" | | 19 | "It had been slow." |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 67.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The path through Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory knew this the way" | | 2 | "She went through anyway." | | 3 | "She was beginning to recognise" | | 4 | "The standing stones rose ahead" | | 5 | "Foxglove and yarrow and a" | | 6 | "The Heartstone at her throat" | | 7 | "Rory stopped at the outermost" | | 8 | "Richmond at night had a" | | 9 | "Here none of it reached" | | 10 | "The silence wasn't absence." | | 11 | "It was held, the way" | | 12 | "she murmured, more to hear" | | 13 | "She'd wanted the barman's opinion" | | 14 | "Rory had thanked him, gone" | | 15 | "The first sound arrived while" | | 16 | "It was small." | | 17 | "A dry click, like a" | | 18 | "She did not turn." | | 19 | "She looked instead at the" |
| | ratio | 0.784 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it stirred, a faint" | | 1 | "Now it hitched — one" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Warmed in patches, as though something beneath the soil were breathing slow heat up through the grass, then cooling again where she stood." | | 1 | "Richmond at night had a sound — traffic on the far roads, the scrape of bottles, the siren that was always somewhere and never arriving." | | 2 | "She looked instead at the clearing and made herself count the flowers, the way her father had taught her to stead her voice before a moot: three foxgloves, seve…" | | 3 | "Low, unhurried, at the far edge of hearing — the kind of sound that might be wind in the canopy, except the canopy was still." | | 4 | "Every leaf above her hung motionless in air that had no direction." | | 5 | "A ring of them, a neat radius of about a metre around her boots, folded inward and darkened as she watched — foxglove bells drooping, campion going the colour o…" | | 6 | "Something at the edge of vision — the northern dark, the eastern dark, both, neither — drew a long slow sound that might have been satisfaction." | | 7 | "The pendant blazed warm against her sternum, sudden and fierce, and the flowers at her feet snapped upright again, green and vivid, as if the heat had reached d…" | | 8 | "She walked north, straight toward the black oak where the stars had been removed, and as she passed through the space where the dark had been, the dark closed b…" | | 9 | "It was cooling, but slowly, and she could still feel it pulsing — not fast now, not warning, but a steady metronome of warmth, as if the pendant were counting s…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |