Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
75
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"seemed wrong too white, and the light it threw did not fall on her hand properly — it fell a little to the left of her hand, as though the phone were being held by someone standing just behind her shoulder and slightly taller"
"The gap had not been there an hour before; she was fairly certain."
1
"It had been pulling gently all evening — a low, insistent warmth, the way it always did near one of those Hel gates she still did not fully understand — but she had mistaken it for the glow of the kitchen lights at Golden Empress while she boxed the last of Master Yu-Fei's mapo tofu."
2
"But there was another rhythm beneath it, slower, and it was not breathing — it was the grass, or something in the grass, a long patient compression, the sound a mattress makes when someone sits down on the far edge of it."
3
"The standing stones behind her — three of them, leaning at angles that made her teeth ache — were ringed with moss so old it had become structural."
4
"This was important — she noted the reluctance carefully, the way she might note an irregularity in a contract clause — because Rory did not usually refuse herself forward motion."
5
"Something had stepped — she could feel the depression of it, the small apologetic give of the turf — and had not lifted the foot again."
6
"The flowers nearest the trees — the blue scabious ones — began to close."
7
"This was the thing about the Grove — she had heard it from Silas, heard it from Eva, heard it in the particular careful way people said the word *Grove* when they meant something they had not finished describing."
8
"The screen brightness seemed wrong, too white, and the light it threw did not fall on her hand properly — it fell a little to the left of her hand, as though the phone were being held by someone standing just behind her shoulder and slightly taller."
9
"It was no longer the directional pull of the Hel gate; it had become a steady, animal heat, the heat of something that was frightened."
10
"Between her and the treeline, a column of the palest wildflowers — she thought they were pinks, but in this light they were the colour of a mouth — were arranged in a shape that was not a shape, that resolved into a shape when she looked directly at it, and dissolved when she did not."
11
"Not toward the trees, not toward the gap between the leaning oaks where she had come in — but to her right, where a second gap had opened in the boundary she did not remember being continuous."
12
"She felt the clearing open up in her wake like a held breath finally let go — felt it *release* her — and the shape did not follow, and the scooter did not follow, but as she squeezed through the gap between the oaks and her shoulder brushed the bark, she heard it one last time, right beside her ear, at the height of a child who has been carried too long and is too heavy now to be carried:"
13
"The park gate was ahead of her, orange-lit, chained but not locked, and beyond it the wet pavement of the Petersham road, and she walked — she did not run, because running was what the thing wanted — down to the corner where a bus shelter light buzzed its insectiferous hum, and she stood in it, and she looked at her phone."
14
"The Heartstone was cooling against her skin, going quiet, going ordinary, and the wildflowers behind the hornbeams were, she knew, closing, and the scooter had stopped, but the glove — she did not know why the glove was the thing she could not put down — the glove had been left palm-up, the fingers slightly curled, as though the hand it belonged to were still inside it, waiting to be given back."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
57
technicalSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"The wildflowers were blooming at two in the morning, which was the first thing Rory noticed and the last thing she was able to explain."
1
"The standing stones behind her — three of them, leaning at angles that made her teeth ache — were ringed with moss so old it had become structural."
2
"The screen brightness seemed wrong, too white, and the light it threw did not fall on her hand properly — it fell a little to the left of her hand, as though th…"
3
"It was no longer the directional pull of the Hel gate; it had become a steady, animal heat, the heat of something that was frightened."
4
"Between her and the treeline, a column of the palest wildflowers — she thought they were pinks, but in this light they were the colour of a mouth — were arrange…"
5
"The Heartstone flared hot enough to hurt, a single hard throb against her breastbone, and with it came a thought that was not hers, that arrived whole and unbid…"
6
"Every single one of them, every foxglove and anemone and blue scabious, had rotated away from her and toward the shape that stood in the pale column, and the sh…"
7
"She felt the clearing open up in her wake like a held breath finally let go — felt it *release* her — and the shape did not follow, and the scooter did not foll…"
8
"The Heartstone was cooling against her skin, going quiet, going ordinary, and the wildflowers behind the hornbeams were, she knew, closing, and the scooter had …"