Run: 2026-09-23-01M36T4DZ8QYQCKV1M0CFNYD4Z

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.000648
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The pendant was warm against her sternum, which was wrong before anything else was wrong. Night in Richmond Park had a chill to it, late October, the sort that worked up through the soles of her boots, and the silver chain around her neck had taken the temperature of her skin hours ago. But since she'd ducked through the oak stones at the edge of the clearing, the Heartstone had been sitting against her like a swallowed mouthful of tea. Rory checked her phone again. 11:47. She'd been here twenty minutes; the screen insisted forty had passed since she'd left the bus stop. No signal, of course — there was never a signal past the stones — but the clock didn't need one. *Come alone. Midnight. Bring nothing you can't lose.* The message had arrived from a number with no digits she recognised, three days after the pendant had appeared on her windowsill above Silas's bar, tucked under a stone, no note. She'd been running a double shift for Yu-Fei that week, braising pork belly at midnight and out on the scooter by noon, and she'd slept through whoever climbed the fire escape. That was the part that sat in her like a stone of its own. Four floors, a drainpipe, and a dog that barked at delivery drivers. The clearing opened around her, cupped and quiet. Wildflowers stood in the grass well past their season — foxgloves, harebell, something white she couldn't name — all of it unwilted, glossy, faintly luminous in the way of things that have never had to survive a frost. The standing stones ringed the far edge, eight of them, ancient oak rather than granite, their bark worn smooth and pale as bone where hands had held them for a long, long time. She heard the city first: distant, thin, the usual wash of traffic beyond the treeline. Then, without any seam in it, she didn't. The silence that replaced it had texture. It pressed on the eardrums. Rory stood very still in the middle of it and understood that the birds had stopped some time ago and she had not noticed when. "Hello," she said. Her voice went out and did not come back. Not an echo, exactly — more as if the clearing had swallowed the sound and found it uninteresting. She said it again, louder, and felt the word leave her mouth and die about three feet away, like a moth hitting glass. *Quick thinking,* Eva would have said. *Give us one of your out-of-the-box ones, Rory.* She turned a slow circle. The oak stones stood where they'd always stood. Beyond them, the dark of the park: bare beeches, the long fall of grass toward Pen Ponds. Nothing between the trunks. She looked twice, then a third time, because on the second look one of the trees had been closer than on the first, and on the third she could not convince herself it was a tree at all. The Heartstone pulsed. A small, interior throb of warmth, once, against her ribs — the same pulse it gave near the tunnels under Aldgate, near the old service corridors where the air tasted of iron and the compass in her bag had spun like a top. She'd stopped asking, after a while, what a Hel portal was. Asking had required believing the answers. Footsteps. Not behind her — to her left, out toward the beeches, a measured two-beat on wet leaves, then nothing. Rory's hand went to the pendant without deciding to. The silver had gone hot. "Someone said midnight," she called. "It's midnight." Something in the grass near the foxgloves moved. Not an animal's movement; no weight to it, no intent. A fold of shadow shifting the way a face shifts under water, and when she looked directly at it the shape was only a shape, and when she looked away it completed itself. She became aware, gradually, that she was standing exactly in the centre of the clearing. She hadn't chosen that spot. She'd walked in and stopped, and now every one of the eight stones had her in its sightline, and the gaps between them were not gaps but doorways she was certain had been narrower when she came through. A sound like someone breathing, low and wet, from inside the trunk of the nearest oak. She put her palm flat against the bark to prove it was wood, and it was, and it was warm, and it rose and fell. Rory took her hand back. Her childhood logic — the barrister's daughter, the girl who argued her way out of detentions — supplied her with reasonable explanations in a calm, useless stream. Foxes. Wind. The acoustics of a bowl-shaped clearing. Underground water. Her own pulse in her ears, made panicky by a text message from a stranger. The breathing stopped. Time, she thought. The Grove kept its own. An hour here could be a minute outside, or days. She had told no one where she was going — had told no one about the pendant, the windowsill, the message — because explaining it would have required the sentence *a thing I cannot account for has been leaving me objects*, and she had left Cardiff to get away from a life that required her to make herself small inside other people's certainty. The wildflowers turned their heads. Not all at once. The white ones first, a slow concerted tilt toward the far treeline, the way sunflowers track a sun that wasn't there. Then foxglove, then harebell, until the whole clearing leaned in one direction like an audience. Rory did not turn around. Some animal part of her, older than thought, had already decided that whatever had arranged itself behind her was counting on her turning. The pendant burned. Not warm now — *burn*, a brand-heat that made her teeth ache, and the crimson stone threw a faint light through her shirt, a small red pulse like a second heartbeat showing through the fabric. *Near a Hel portal.* Near something that opened. "Rory." Her mother's voice. Soft, Welsh-flattened, exactly as it sounded through the kitchen doorway in Pontcanna at half six, calling her in. It came from the treeline. It was the most welcome sound she had heard in years and her body moved toward it before she caught it by the shoulder and hauled it back. Jennifer Carter had not called her that in two years. Jennifer Carter did not know she was in London. The voice came again, closer, patient. Then it changed — became Eva's, became Silas's, became a voice she had never heard that used her name like a key turning in a lock. It tested each of them in turn. It was learning. Between the fourth stone and the fifth, where the gap had been a yard wide, there was now a person-shaped absence of light. It did not have features. It had *arrangement* — a suggestion of a head, of shoulders, of hands hanging at its sides — the way a sentence can have grammar without having meaning. It stood in the doorway that was not a gap and did not cross the line of the stones, and it waited, and its patience had a texture she could feel against her teeth. Rory thought, with startling clarity, of the flat above Silas's bar. The gas ring she left on. The外卖 boxes in the bin. The half-written email to her father she would never send. Ordinary things, arranged in a shape like a life. The shape in the doorway tilted its head. The wildflowers leaned further. The breathing started again, all around her now, in the grass and the bark and the spaces between the stones, as if the whole clearing were a lung filling slowly. She backed up one step. The pendant blazed, and in its red light she saw that the grass beneath her boots had no shadow, and that the thing in the gap had taken a half-inch closer without any part of it having moved. Midnight, the message had said. She looked at her phone. The screen read 11:59, and beneath it, in digits that were not the clock, 00:00, and 00:00, and 00:00, again, and again, and again, the numbers failing to advance the way a clock in a dream fails to advance, and the thing in the doorway widened — opened — and the last sensible thought she had before she ran was that she had come here for a reason and she could no longer remember whose it was.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1413
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1413
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count3
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"silence"
2"echo"
3"pulsed"
4"throb"
5"warmth"
6"pulse"
7"footsteps"
8"measured"
9"weight"
10"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
96.55% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen75
ratio0.01
matches
0"The外卖 boxes in the bin."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords35
totalWords1430
ratio0.024
matches
0"Come alone. Midnight. Bring nothing you can't lose."
1"Quick thinking,"
2"Give us one of your out-of-the-box ones, Rory."
3"a thing I cannot account for has been leaving me objects"
4"burn"
5"Near a Hel portal."
6"arrangement"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1423
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
October1
Heartstone2
Silas3
Yu-Fei1
Eva2
Pen1
Ponds1
Aldgate1
Hel2
Grove1
Cardiff1
Welsh-flattened1
Pontcanna1
Carter2
London1
Rory7
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Grove"
4"Carter"
5"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Pen"
3"Hel"
4"Cardiff"
5"Pontcanna"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.699
wordCount1430
matches
0"not gaps but doorways she was certain had been narrower"
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount5
totalSentences100
matches
0"understood that the"
1"chosen that spot"
2"decided that whatever"
3"saw that the"
4"was that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean43.33
std26.56
cv0.613
sampleLengths
080
143
28
388
479
523
637
73
850
914
1072
1163
1234
137
1451
1558
1641
1757
183
1981
205
2140
2228
2346
241
2554
2619
2742
2890
2941
3042
3143
3287
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
79.34% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was standing"
1"was going "
2"was counting"
3"was learning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences100
ratio0.13
matches
0"She'd been here twenty minutes; the screen insisted forty had passed since she'd left the bus stop."
1"No signal, of course — there was never a signal past the stones — but the clock didn't need one."
2"Wildflowers stood in the grass well past their season — foxgloves, harebell, something white she couldn't name — all of it unwilted, glossy, faintly luminous in the way of things that have never had to survive a frost."
3"Not an echo, exactly — more as if the clearing had swallowed the sound and found it uninteresting."
4"A small, interior throb of warmth, once, against her ribs — the same pulse it gave near the tunnels under Aldgate, near the old service corridors where the air tasted of iron and the compass in her bag had spun like a top."
5"Not behind her — to her left, out toward the beeches, a measured two-beat on wet leaves, then nothing."
6"Not an animal's movement; no weight to it, no intent."
7"Her childhood logic — the barrister's daughter, the girl who argued her way out of detentions — supplied her with reasonable explanations in a calm, useless stream."
8"She had told no one where she was going — had told no one about the pendant, the windowsill, the message — because explaining it would have required the sentence *a thing I cannot account for has been leaving me objects*, and she had left Cardiff to get away from a life that required her to make herself small inside other people's certainty."
9"Not warm now — *burn*, a brand-heat that made her teeth ache, and the crimson stone threw a faint light through her shirt, a small red pulse like a second heartbeat showing through the fabric."
10"Then it changed — became Eva's, became Silas's, became a voice she had never heard that used her name like a key turning in a lock."
11"It had *arrangement* — a suggestion of a head, of shoulders, of hands hanging at its sides — the way a sentence can have grammar without having meaning."
12"The screen read 11:59, and beneath it, in digits that were not the clock, 00:00, and 00:00, and 00:00, again, and again, and again, the numbers failing to advance the way a clock in a dream fails to advance, and the thing in the doorway widened — opened — and the last sensible thought she had before she ran was that she had come here for a reason and she could no longer remember whose it was."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1414
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small inside other people's"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.0297029702970297
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006364922206506365
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean14.3
std13.72
cv0.96
sampleLengths
015
138
227
35
41
517
620
72
81
95
1031
1131
1214
1312
148
1538
1633
1715
188
197
205
2125
223
239
2418
2523
266
278
285
298
3017
314
3238
333
3443
3511
366
371
3819
399
405
415
422
438
4410
4533
4615
475
4838
4916
51.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.37373737373737376
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then, without any seam in"
1"Then foxglove, then harebell, until"
2"Then it changed — became"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences89
matches
0"She'd been here twenty minutes;"
1"She'd been running a double"
2"She heard the city first:"
3"It pressed on the eardrums."
4"Her voice went out and"
5"She said it again, louder,"
6"She turned a slow circle."
7"She looked twice, then a"
8"She'd stopped asking, after a"
9"She became aware, gradually, that"
10"She hadn't chosen that spot."
11"She'd walked in and stopped,"
12"She put her palm flat"
13"Her childhood logic — the"
14"Her own pulse in her"
15"She had told no one"
16"Her mother's voice."
17"It came from the treeline."
18"It was the most welcome"
19"It tested each of them"
ratio0.292
77.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences89
matches
0"The pendant was warm against"
1"Night in Richmond Park had"
2"Rory checked her phone again."
3"She'd been here twenty minutes;"
4"The message had arrived from"
5"She'd been running a double"
6"That was the part that"
7"The clearing opened around her,"
8"Wildflowers stood in the grass"
9"The standing stones ringed the"
10"She heard the city first:"
11"The silence that replaced it"
12"It pressed on the eardrums."
13"Rory stood very still in"
14"Her voice went out and"
15"She said it again, louder,"
16"She turned a slow circle."
17"The oak stones stood where"
18"Nothing between the trunks."
19"She looked twice, then a"
ratio0.764
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The pendant was warm against her sternum, which was wrong before anything else was wrong."
1"Wildflowers stood in the grass well past their season — foxgloves, harebell, something white she couldn't name — all of it unwilted, glossy, faintly luminous in…"
2"Her childhood logic — the barrister's daughter, the girl who argued her way out of detentions — supplied her with reasonable explanations in a calm, useless str…"
3"She had told no one where she was going — had told no one about the pendant, the windowsill, the message — because explaining it would have required the sentenc…"
4"The white ones first, a slow concerted tilt toward the far treeline, the way sunflowers track a sun that wasn't there."
5"Not warm now — *burn*, a brand-heat that made her teeth ache, and the crimson stone threw a faint light through her shirt, a small red pulse like a second heart…"
6"The screen read 11:59, and beneath it, in digits that were not the clock, 00:00, and 00:00, and 00:00, again, and again, and again, the numbers failing to advan…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.6709%