| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1413 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1413 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "measured" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 96.55% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 75 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "The外卖 boxes in the bin." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 35 | | totalWords | 1430 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "Come alone. Midnight. Bring nothing you can't lose." | | 1 | "Quick thinking," | | 2 | "Give us one of your out-of-the-box ones, Rory." | | 3 | "a thing I cannot account for has been leaving me objects" | | 4 | "burn" | | 5 | "Near a Hel portal." | | 6 | "arrangement" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1423 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 0.49 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Silas | 3 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Pen | 1 | | Ponds | 1 | | Aldgate | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Welsh-flattened | 1 | | Pontcanna | 1 | | Carter | 2 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Pen" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Pontcanna" | | 6 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.699 | | wordCount | 1430 | | matches | | 0 | "not gaps but doorways she was certain had been narrower" |
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| 0.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "understood that the" | | 1 | "chosen that spot" | | 2 | "decided that whatever" | | 3 | "saw that the" | | 4 | "was that she" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 43.33 | | std | 26.56 | | cv | 0.613 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 88 | | 4 | 79 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 57 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 81 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 90 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 87 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.34% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 221 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was going " | | 2 | "was counting" | | 3 | "was learning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.13 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been here twenty minutes; the screen insisted forty had passed since she'd left the bus stop." | | 1 | "No signal, of course — there was never a signal past the stones — but the clock didn't need one." | | 2 | "Wildflowers stood in the grass well past their season — foxgloves, harebell, something white she couldn't name — all of it unwilted, glossy, faintly luminous in the way of things that have never had to survive a frost." | | 3 | "Not an echo, exactly — more as if the clearing had swallowed the sound and found it uninteresting." | | 4 | "A small, interior throb of warmth, once, against her ribs — the same pulse it gave near the tunnels under Aldgate, near the old service corridors where the air tasted of iron and the compass in her bag had spun like a top." | | 5 | "Not behind her — to her left, out toward the beeches, a measured two-beat on wet leaves, then nothing." | | 6 | "Not an animal's movement; no weight to it, no intent." | | 7 | "Her childhood logic — the barrister's daughter, the girl who argued her way out of detentions — supplied her with reasonable explanations in a calm, useless stream." | | 8 | "She had told no one where she was going — had told no one about the pendant, the windowsill, the message — because explaining it would have required the sentence *a thing I cannot account for has been leaving me objects*, and she had left Cardiff to get away from a life that required her to make herself small inside other people's certainty." | | 9 | "Not warm now — *burn*, a brand-heat that made her teeth ache, and the crimson stone threw a faint light through her shirt, a small red pulse like a second heartbeat showing through the fabric." | | 10 | "Then it changed — became Eva's, became Silas's, became a voice she had never heard that used her name like a key turning in a lock." | | 11 | "It had *arrangement* — a suggestion of a head, of shoulders, of hands hanging at its sides — the way a sentence can have grammar without having meaning." | | 12 | "The screen read 11:59, and beneath it, in digits that were not the clock, 00:00, and 00:00, and 00:00, again, and again, and again, the numbers failing to advance the way a clock in a dream fails to advance, and the thing in the doorway widened — opened — and the last sensible thought she had before she ran was that she had come here for a reason and she could no longer remember whose it was." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1414 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small inside other people's" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.0297029702970297 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006364922206506365 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 14.3 | | std | 13.72 | | cv | 0.96 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 38 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 51.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.37373737373737376 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, without any seam in" | | 1 | "Then foxglove, then harebell, until" | | 2 | "Then it changed — became" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been here twenty minutes;" | | 1 | "She'd been running a double" | | 2 | "She heard the city first:" | | 3 | "It pressed on the eardrums." | | 4 | "Her voice went out and" | | 5 | "She said it again, louder," | | 6 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 7 | "She looked twice, then a" | | 8 | "She'd stopped asking, after a" | | 9 | "She became aware, gradually, that" | | 10 | "She hadn't chosen that spot." | | 11 | "She'd walked in and stopped," | | 12 | "She put her palm flat" | | 13 | "Her childhood logic — the" | | 14 | "Her own pulse in her" | | 15 | "She had told no one" | | 16 | "Her mother's voice." | | 17 | "It came from the treeline." | | 18 | "It was the most welcome" | | 19 | "It tested each of them" |
| | ratio | 0.292 | |
| 77.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant was warm against" | | 1 | "Night in Richmond Park had" | | 2 | "Rory checked her phone again." | | 3 | "She'd been here twenty minutes;" | | 4 | "The message had arrived from" | | 5 | "She'd been running a double" | | 6 | "That was the part that" | | 7 | "The clearing opened around her," | | 8 | "Wildflowers stood in the grass" | | 9 | "The standing stones ringed the" | | 10 | "She heard the city first:" | | 11 | "The silence that replaced it" | | 12 | "It pressed on the eardrums." | | 13 | "Rory stood very still in" | | 14 | "Her voice went out and" | | 15 | "She said it again, louder," | | 16 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 17 | "The oak stones stood where" | | 18 | "Nothing between the trunks." | | 19 | "She looked twice, then a" |
| | ratio | 0.764 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.16% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant was warm against her sternum, which was wrong before anything else was wrong." | | 1 | "Wildflowers stood in the grass well past their season — foxgloves, harebell, something white she couldn't name — all of it unwilted, glossy, faintly luminous in…" | | 2 | "Her childhood logic — the barrister's daughter, the girl who argued her way out of detentions — supplied her with reasonable explanations in a calm, useless str…" | | 3 | "She had told no one where she was going — had told no one about the pendant, the windowsill, the message — because explaining it would have required the sentenc…" | | 4 | "The white ones first, a slow concerted tilt toward the far treeline, the way sunflowers track a sun that wasn't there." | | 5 | "Not warm now — *burn*, a brand-heat that made her teeth ache, and the crimson stone threw a faint light through her shirt, a small red pulse like a second heart…" | | 6 | "The screen read 11:59, and beneath it, in digits that were not the clock, 00:00, and 00:00, and 00:00, again, and again, and again, the numbers failing to advan…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |