Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VH5H5BAGKEE7FZS0R7TZ5

Run Details

Duration:
3m 44s
Cost:
$0.005040
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon above the door of the Raven's Nest had been buzzing wrong since Tuesday, a thin insect note that got into the back of the teeth and stayed there. Rory heard it every time the door opened, which was not often at this hour. Soho had gone quiet in the way it only did between the last train and the first delivery vans, and the rain had been working at the windows since Aldgate, a patient grey business that made the whole street smell of wet cardboard and old money. She was on her second whisky, the cheap one Silas kept below the good bottles for people who weren't drinking to be seen. Her delivery bag was propped against the stool leg, the Golden Empress dragon on the flap half-worn away from two years of being dragged up stairwells. Yu-Fei would want the van back by seven. Rory had told her nine. Yu-Fei would accept nine and give her the disappointed silence that was worse than the shouting, and then slip an extra box of dumplings into Rory's bag when she thought nobody was watching. That was the arrangement, the way every arrangement in Rory's life worked now: slightly generous, slightly dishonest, and never discussed. Silas moved down the bar with the careful gait he saved for the last hour of the night, the left knee talking to him. He didn't ask whether she wanted another. He set the bottle down beside her glass and let her decide, which was one of the reasons she slept above his premises instead of in a hostel in Whitechapel. The signet ring on his right hand left a small wet half-moon on the bartop where he leaned. "Bag's still packed," he said. "I've got a nine." "You've got a seven and you've got pride." She smiled at that, briefly. He went back to the maps on the wall, to the black-and-white photographs of people he'd never name and cities he refused to discuss. Somewhere behind the false shelf of books there was a room with a table in it and no record of anyone having sat at it. Rory knew exactly how the shelf swung. She knew where the fire exit dumped out and which window on the first floor opened onto a drainpipe that would hold her weight. You could take the girl out of the escape plan, but the escape plan stayed in the girl. The door opened and let the rain in. The woman who came through shook an umbrella with the particular irritation of someone who owned it and expected better from it. Good coat. Boots that had been resoled rather than replaced, which meant money old enough to have habits. She turned to scan the room, the way people do in bars they don't know, and her eyes went past Rory, came back, and stayed. Rory knew the face before she knew the name, which is how it always works with the people you were young with. Something in the architecture. Then the name arrived and she had to put her glass down. "Nia," she said. "God," said Nia Vaughan. "God. Rory Carter." There is a particular silence that belongs to a first meeting after years, and it is never empty. Nia crossed the room. She did not hug her, which was correct. She took the stool one over, set a small leather bag on the bar, and looked at Rory the way a person looks at a house they grew up in to find the old shape under the new. "You live here now?" Nia said. "London." "Two years." "Two *years*. I'm down in Cardiff twice a month and you've been two hours up the road." "Bit more than that on a bike," Rory said, and then heard herself deflecting and stopped. Silas had come quietly to the far end and was doing something unnecessary with glasses. Nia ordered a wine by name, not by colour, and he poured it without comment and left the bottle. Rory looked at her properly. The scruffy girl who had lived in a denim jacket and a permanent smear of biro ink had been taken away and replaced with someone precise. Hair cut short and severe. A voice that had learned to lower itself. She held herself like a woman who had practised holding herself. "You got tenancy," Rory said. Nia looked down at the wine. "Two years ago. Red Lion Chambers. Crime, mostly, some regulatory when the money's thin. It's—" She stopped. Started again, differently. "I sent letters, you know. To the Cardiff flat. I sent about nine of them." "I know." "They all came back. *Gone away*. In your mother's handwriting." Nia's mouth did something complicated. "Then I found out she'd moved, and I didn't have another address, and after a while I thought — she doesn't want to be found. Some people don't. I told myself that so I could stop." "Don't," Rory said. "I'm not doing anything." "You are. You're being kind about it." Nia laughed, and it was the old laugh, sudden and too loud for the room, and it broke something open. "Right. Fine. I sat in that library for a year waiting for you to come back and finish the reading, Rory. You were the one who was going to take the whole thing apart. Carter the younger, like your dad. You had the run of every moot in the country and you were going to be unbearable about it by thirty." She drank. "And then you were gone in a night and nobody would tell me anything and there's a girl I used to know who works in a chippy on City Road and said she'd seen you in a coat with a hood up, and that is how I found out you were alive. That is the sentence I have been carrying." Rory looked at the bottle Silas had left. The rain ticked at the window in the specific rhythm of a night that intends to last. "Evan," Nia said, very quietly. "It was Evan, wasn't it." It was not a question. Rory's hand had gone to her left wrist and she made it stop and go back to the glass, but not fast enough. The sleeve of her work hoodie rode a centimetre and the little crescent scar showed, the old one, the childhood one, the safe one people were allowed to see. Her pulse sat in it like a small animal. "I can't do this here," Rory said. "You can't do it anywhere. That's what's happened to you. You used to tell me everything, including the stupid things, especially the stupid things. You used to do that thing where you'd work out how everyone in a room would get out if it caught fire. You'd have it done in thirty seconds. Do you remember? You'd make me guess. You were so *fast*, Rory, and now you can't tell me where you live and you're pulling your sleeve down." "I live upstairs," Rory said. "Above here." It came out before she could weigh it. She felt Silas go still at the far end of the bar without turning around. Nia stared at her. Then she looked past Rory's shoulder at the maps and the photographs and the green light from the sign painting one half of the room the colour of pond water, and she looked at the man with the grey-streaked auburn beard who was drying a glass he had already dried, and something in her sharpened. "This isn't just a bar," she said. "It's a good bar," Rory said. "Leave it." "I'm not going to do anything." "I know. Leave it anyway." Silas limped back down. He refilled Rory's glass he hadn't been asked to and set a small bowl of olives between the two women like a border marker, and when he straightened, he and Nia regarded one another with the flat mutual assessment of two people who have both, at some point, been responsible for somebody's safety and neither of whom enjoyed the memory. "She's all right," Silas said to Nia, mildly. "She eats when she's told. She's got work at seven." "It's seven now," Nia said. "I know," said Silas. "She's got work at seven and she's going to be late. She does that. It's how she tells you she's fine." He took himself off to the far room and the bookshelf closed behind him without a sound, which was either careless of him or a kind of permission, and Rory could not decide which. "He's not what I pictured," Nia said. "You didn't picture anything." "No. I did. I pictured a lot of things. I stood in front of Cardiff Crown Court last month and put my first proper closing to a jury and I got an acquittal and afterwards I stood on the steps and I thought, she was meant to be doing this instead of me. That's a hell of a thing to feel on the best day of your life." "Don't do that," Rory said. "Don't give me your career like it's something you stole. You read the cases. You wrote the essays. I did the reading and I did the mooting and I did all of it because my father's chambers had my name on a board before I was born and everybody in that building was very excited about it except me. You were the one who wanted it. You wanted it when it was difficult." "And you were the one who could have had it without trying. That's worse. That's the whole of it, and it's worse." Nia turned the stem of her glass a half-turn. Her hands had stopped being ink-stained. They were clean and quick and the nails were cut for court. "I'm not going to ask you anything else. I want to say that plainly. I'm going to sit here and drink this and then I'll go, and I'll leave you my card, and you can throw it in the bin, and if you do I will understand it and I will not come back and make a scene." "You were always going to make a scene." "I was fourteen once. I've improved." They sat with it. Somewhere in the room a clock moved through the hour. Rory thought about the nine letters and her mother's handwriting on the way back, the same hand that had marked exercise books for twenty-two years, and she thought about the phone in her pocket with a number in it that no one from before had, and she thought about how the girl who used to solve the room in thirty seconds now solved it in five and never for fun. "I don't know how to do this," Rory said. "Yes, you do. You just don't want to want it." Nia reached into the leather bag and put a card on the bar between them, cream card, small embossed name, a mobile number on the back in ink. Rory looked at it the way she looked at any object handed to her: where it could be hidden, how quickly it could be got rid of. Old habits. Out-of-the-box thinking. She had been so proud of that once. Nia finished the wine and stood and put on the good coat. She hesitated, and Rory saw the fourteen-year-old come up through the court polish for a second, uncertain, wanting. "I looked for you," Nia said. "I know," Rory said again, and this time the two words cost her something visible. "Nia. I know." Nia nodded, once. She did not hug her. She went out into the rain and the door let the sound of the street in and then closed it away again, and the green neon buzzed its wrong note over the empty stool and the cream card and the half-bowl of olives nobody had touched. Silas came back through the shelf after a while. He did not look at the card. He took the bottle away and the glass away and wiped the bartop where the wet ring of his signet still showed, and he worked around the card as though it were a small sleeping animal. "She came back for the girl she knew," Rory said. "She came back for you," Silas said. "There's a difference and you'll find it out eventually." He hung the cloth on the rail. "Work at seven." "It's past seven." "Aye." He moved down the bar with the bad knee, patient with it, the way he was patient with everything that would not be fixed. "So you'll be late." Rory sat a while longer. Then she took the card, and she did not put it under the glass or behind the bottle or in the bin. She put it in the pocket with the phone, next to the number nobody from before had, which was not the same as calling, but was not the same as nothing, and she took her bag up the narrow stairs to a flat where the boxes had stood unopened for two years, and outside the green light hummed its one wrong note to the wet street until the sky began to thin over Soho and the delivery vans came.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:03:41.482Z" 9/23/2026, 10:03:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said again [again]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.881
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.034
88.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2212
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2212
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches
0"tends to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen80
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords2213
ratio0.002
matches
0"years"
1"Gone away"
2"fast"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount1485
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Aldgate1
Silas10
Golden1
Empress1
Rory28
Whitechapel1
Nia18
Vaughan1
Started1
Soho2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Nia"
5"Vaughan"
places
0"Whitechapel"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.557
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.452
wordCount2213
matches
0"not the same as calling, but was not the same as nothing"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean34.05
std34.89
cv1.025
sampleLengths
092
1115
279
35
44
58
6103
78
865
938
103
117
1268
137
142
1517
1616
1734
1855
195
2041
212
2251
233
244
257
26143
2725
2810
2966
307
3180
327
3323
3459
357
368
376
385
3964
4018
415
4225
4334
447
454
4668
4778
48107
498
88.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences103
matches
0"was propped"
1"being dragged"
2"been resoled"
3"been taken"
4"were allowed"
5"been asked"
91.60% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs246
matches
0"weren't drinking"
1"was watching"
2"was doing"
3"was drying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences134
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1501
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small wet half-moon"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.02798134576948701
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.0073284477015323115
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean16.51
std17.42
cv1.055
sampleLengths
031
115
246
323
426
58
65
733
820
924
107
1130
1218
135
144
158
165
1724
1825
197
2024
2118
228
2322
242
2516
2625
2722
284
2912
303
314
323
3318
344
358
3638
376
381
392
4017
4116
4215
4319
445
4526
465
478
4811
495
40.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.31343283582089554
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences81
matches
0"Somewhere behind the false shelf"
1"Then the name arrived and"
2"Then she looked past Rory's"
3"Somewhere in the room a"
4"Then she took the card,"
ratio0.062
71.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences81
matches
0"She was on her second"
1"Her delivery bag was propped"
2"He didn't ask whether she"
3"He set the bottle down"
4"She smiled at that, briefly."
5"He went back to the"
6"She knew where the fire"
7"You could take the girl"
8"She turned to scan the"
9"She did not hug her,"
10"She took the stool one"
11"She held herself like a"
12"It was not a question."
13"Her pulse sat in it"
14"It came out before she"
15"She felt Silas go still"
16"He refilled Rory's glass he"
17"He took himself off to"
18"Her hands had stopped being"
19"They were clean and quick"
ratio0.37
9.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences81
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"Rory heard it every time"
2"Soho had gone quiet in"
3"She was on her second"
4"Her delivery bag was propped"
5"Yu-Fei would want the van"
6"Rory had told her nine."
7"Yu-Fei would accept nine and"
8"That was the arrangement, the"
9"Silas moved down the bar"
10"He didn't ask whether she"
11"He set the bottle down"
12"The signet ring on his"
13"She smiled at that, briefly."
14"He went back to the"
15"Rory knew exactly how the"
16"She knew where the fire"
17"You could take the girl"
18"The door opened and let"
19"The woman who came through"
ratio0.901
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The green neon above the door of the Raven's Nest had been buzzing wrong since Tuesday, a thin insect note that got into the back of the teeth and stayed there."
1"Soho had gone quiet in the way it only did between the last train and the first delivery vans, and the rain had been working at the windows since Aldgate, a pat…"
2"She was on her second whisky, the cheap one Silas kept below the good bottles for people who weren't drinking to be seen."
3"Yu-Fei would accept nine and give her the disappointed silence that was worse than the shouting, and then slip an extra box of dumplings into Rory's bag when sh…"
4"The woman who came through shook an umbrella with the particular irritation of someone who owned it and expected better from it."
5"The scruffy girl who had lived in a denim jacket and a permanent smear of biro ink had been taken away and replaced with someone precise."
6"Then she looked past Rory's shoulder at the maps and the photographs and the green light from the sign painting one half of the room the colour of pond water, a…"
7"He refilled Rory's glass he hadn't been asked to and set a small bowl of olives between the two women like a border marker, and when he straightened, he and Nia…"
8"He took himself off to the far room and the bookshelf closed behind him without a sound, which was either careless of him or a kind of permission, and Rory coul…"
9"Rory thought about the nine letters and her mother's handwriting on the way back, the same hand that had marked exercise books for twenty-two years, and she tho…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas said, mildly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.339
leniency0.678
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1673%