Run: 2026-09-23-01M36VSDCAJQQFM0P1HEVBBC1P

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.002123
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The gate to the Grove was not a gate. It was a gap between two oaks whose roots had grown together years ago, decades ago, no one could say, and Rory had to turn sideways to slip through it. The bark caught at the delivery bag still slung across her chest — habit, she'd forgotten to leave it in the van — and tore a thin line in the vinyl before she pulled free. She stopped on the other side and listened. Nothing. That was the first thing. Not the nothing of a quiet park at night, which is never actually quiet, but a nothing with weight to it. No traffic hum bleeding in from the A3. No foxes worrying the bins. No wind, though the branches of Richmond stretched and complained all around the boundary. Here the air sat still and cool and tasted faintly of turned soil and something floral she couldn't name. "Right," she said, to nobody. Her voice came out flat and small. She'd spoken too quietly for the words to find a surface to bounce from. She'd come because of the note. Slipped under the door of the flat above Silas' bar that afternoon, folded twice, no envelope, written in a hand she didn't recognize: *Midnight. The grove. Come alone. I know what the stone is.* Twelve words, no signature. She'd read it four times at the kitchen counter while the kettle screamed at her back and she'd known, with the part of her brain that had got her out of Evan's flat at three in the morning with a rucksack and one shoe, that she should not go. And yet. Somebody had put the Heartstone around her neck in a crowd and vanished before she'd turned around, and since then three weeks had gone by in which she'd slept badly and dreamed of hallways with red light at the end of them. She wanted to know what the stone was. She was aware this was the oldest lever in the world and that it worked on clever people especially well. She started walking. The wildflowers were the second thing. They bloomed everywhere, as she'd been told they did, year-round, defiant of the calendar — foxglove and harebell and some pale trumpet-shaped thing she had no name for, an impossible quantity of them, a carpet under the oaks. But their heads were all turned the same way. Not toward the moon, which was behind her left shoulder and nearly full. Not toward the clearing's center. Toward her. She stopped walking and the flowers kept facing her, and when she turned three-quarters around to look back at the gap between the oaks, the nearest harebells had turned with her, every one of them, with the awful unanimity of sunflowers tracking the sun. She said nothing. She faced forward and kept walking and did not look at the flowers again. The Heartstone sat against her collarbone and it was warm. It had been warm since the gate — a slow, low heat, like something cupped in a palm, the way it had been warm twice before: once in a taxi passing through Elephant and Castle and once, for nearly a full minute, on the Golden Empress run to a house in Tooting where the customer had opened the door and not said anything and Rory had handed over the bag and walked back to the moped with her shoulders up around her ears. *Pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal*, the research had said, though how she knew the word research was generous for what she'd done — three nights on the laptop at the kitchen table and a forum post she'd made and then deleted. Warmth now, in a place with no heat in it. And it was not faint. It was building. She reached the center of the clearing. The standing stones stood there in their broken ring, ancient oak gone to petrified grey, taller than her, taller than two of her, their tops furred with moss that looked black in the moonlight. She counted them. Twelve. She was almost sure there were meant to be eleven and she thought, very calmly, that she did not know where that number came from or why she believed it, and that this was the third thing and the worst one so far. She took out her phone. No signal. Of course. The clock read 11:47 and she had arrived at what felt like five minutes past, which would have meant she'd walked for nearly forty minutes to cross sixty meters of grove. The sound came then. It came from outside the ring, from the trees — the wet slap of bare feet on wet ground. One foot, then another, unhurried, moving at a walking pace along the tree line to her left. She turned to follow it and the sound kept moving with her turning, always at the edge of her hearing, and when she stopped turning, it stopped too. After a long still moment it did not resume. *I know what the stone is.* Whoever had written that had not come. Or had come. Or was already inside. "Hello?" she called. Louder this time, properly, the way her mother had taught her to project in the school hall. The word went out and came back diminished and thin and her own voice returned to her a half-second too late, an echo in a place with nothing to echo from. The pendant's heat climbed. It pulsed now — she could feel the rhythm against her skin, slow as a drowsy heartbeat, and she understood with a cold and certain clarity that the pulse was not the stone's. It was answering something. Between two of the standing stones, the air was not the same color as the rest of the night. She couldn't say how she knew. The moonlight fell one way and the shadows lay another and in that particular gap the darkness was doing neither; it was matte and flat and slightly darker than dark, like a shape cut out of the grove and pasted over. It was the same shape as the gap between the oaks where she'd entered. A gate. Behind her, somewhere in the tree line, a woman began to sing. Rory's hands had gone cold. The song was a lullaby — she knew it, knew it in her teeth, in the flesh of her arms, a Welsh one her mother sang over the running bath when she was small and couldn't sleep, and the voice singing it was not her mother's. It was too close to her mother's. It was a voice that had learned her mother's voice the way you'd learn a song, and it got the tune exactly right and got one word wrong, and then another, and then it stopped pretending to have words at all and went on making the sound of singing with nothing behind it. Rory took a step back. Her heel came down on something soft — a flower, she'd crushed a flower, and the smell that rose was not green or sweet but copper-thick and secret, and she did not look down at it. The pendant was hot now, genuinely hot, a coin pressed into her by someone else's hand. Her fingers went to it instinctively and found the metal of the chain unchanged and the stone itself burning against her palm and she could not make herself let go. The singing stopped. In the silence after, so complete she could hear the blood in her own ears, a voice spoke from the flat dark between the stones. It did not speak loudly. It spoke the way you speak to someone who has already agreed. "You came alone," it said, and it said it in her own voice. Rory stood very still in the ring of eleven — twelve — however many stones there now were, and the wildflowers turned and turned to face her in the dark, and behind her, faint and far off and wrong, wrong in a way she had no word for, a second set of bare feet began to walk slowly toward the gap between the oaks to wait for her to run.
created_at"2026-09-23T10:08:11.663Z" 9/23/2026, 10:08:11 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"echo"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"warmth"
2"echo"
3"pulsed"
4"could feel"
5"pulse"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences83
matches
0"y with warmth"
74.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen82
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords26
totalWords1376
ratio0.019
matches
0"Midnight. The grove. Come alone. I know what the stone is."
1"Pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal"
2"I know what the stone is."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1355
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove1
Rory5
Richmond1
Twelve2
Evan1
Heartstone2
Elephant1
Castle1
Golden1
Empress1
Tooting1
Hel1
Louder1
Welsh1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Heartstone"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Elephant"
3"Tooting"
4"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like five minutes past, which woul"
54.65% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.453
wordCount1376
matches
0"Not the nothing of a quiet park at night, which is never actually quiet, but a nothing with weight to it"
1"not green or sweet but copper-thick"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean50.96
std37.42
cv0.734
sampleLengths
074
18
273
326
493
572
63
7117
817
9138
1018
1188
1240
134
1473
1520
1651
1741
1882
1912
20111
2141
2246
233
2442
2513
2670
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"been told"
1"were meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was building"
1"was answering"
2"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences83
ratio0.12
matches
0"The bark caught at the delivery bag still slung across her chest — habit, she'd forgotten to leave it in the van — and tore a thin line in the vinyl before she pulled free."
1"They bloomed everywhere, as she'd been told they did, year-round, defiant of the calendar — foxglove and harebell and some pale trumpet-shaped thing she had no name for, an impossible quantity of them, a carpet under the oaks."
2"It had been warm since the gate — a slow, low heat, like something cupped in a palm, the way it had been warm twice before: once in a taxi passing through Elephant and Castle and once, for nearly a full minute, on the Golden Empress run to a house in Tooting where the customer had opened the door and not said anything and Rory had handed over the bag and walked back to the moped with her shoulders up around her ears."
3"*Pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal*, the research had said, though how she knew the word research was generous for what she'd done — three nights on the laptop at the kitchen table and a forum post she'd made and then deleted."
4"It came from outside the ring, from the trees — the wet slap of bare feet on wet ground."
5"It pulsed now — she could feel the rhythm against her skin, slow as a drowsy heartbeat, and she understood with a cold and certain clarity that the pulse was not the stone's."
6"The moonlight fell one way and the shadows lay another and in that particular gap the darkness was doing neither; it was matte and flat and slightly darker than dark, like a shape cut out of the grove and pasted over."
7"The song was a lullaby — she knew it, knew it in her teeth, in the flesh of her arms, a Welsh one her mother sang over the running bath when she was small and couldn't sleep, and the voice singing it was not her mother's."
8"Her heel came down on something soft — a flower, she'd crushed a flower, and the smell that rose was not green or sweet but copper-thick and secret, and she did not look down at it."
9"Rory stood very still in the ring of eleven — twelve — however many stones there now were, and the wildflowers turned and turned to face her in the dark, and behind her, faint and far off and wrong, wrong in a way she had no word for, a second set of bare feet began to walk slowly toward the gap between the oaks to wait for her to run."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount193
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.025906735751295335
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.015544041450777202
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean16.58
std16.71
cv1.008
sampleLengths
09
130
235
38
41
55
621
78
85
914
1019
115
127
1314
146
1524
162
172
1810
1949
202
2142
228
2320
243
256
2638
279
2813
295
302
3144
323
3314
3410
3583
3645
3710
385
393
407
4134
423
431
4443
455
462
472
4831
494
48.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.39759036144578314
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences73
matches
0"It was a gap between"
1"She stopped on the other"
2"she said, to nobody"
3"Her voice came out flat"
4"She'd spoken too quietly for"
5"She'd come because of the"
6"I know what the stone"
7"She'd read it four times"
8"She wanted to know what"
9"She was aware this was"
10"She started walking."
11"They bloomed everywhere, as she'd"
12"She stopped walking and the"
13"She said nothing."
14"She faced forward and kept"
15"It had been warm since"
16"It was building."
17"She reached the center of"
18"She counted them."
19"She was almost sure there"
ratio0.479
76.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences73
matches
0"The gate to the Grove"
1"It was a gap between"
2"The bark caught at the"
3"She stopped on the other"
4"That was the first thing."
5"Here the air sat still"
6"she said, to nobody"
7"Her voice came out flat"
8"She'd spoken too quietly for"
9"She'd come because of the"
10"I know what the stone"
11"She'd read it four times"
12"Somebody had put the Heartstone"
13"She wanted to know what"
14"She was aware this was"
15"She started walking."
16"The wildflowers were the second"
17"They bloomed everywhere, as she'd"
18"She stopped walking and the"
19"She said nothing."
ratio0.767
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The standing stones stood there in their broken ring, ancient oak gone to petrified grey, taller than her, taller than two of her, their tops furred with moss t…"
1"It was a voice that had learned her mother's voice the way you'd learn a song, and it got the tune exactly right and got one word wrong, and then another, and t…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.0234%