| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 79.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1938 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 74.20% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1938 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "footfall" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 211 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 211 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 214 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1937 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1929 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 17 | | Park | 4 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Richmond | 5 | | May | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "May" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 98.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 146 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite in rhythm" | | 1 | "seemed farther away than when she had entered" | | 2 | "looked like the same two oaks that had le" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1937 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 214 | | matches | | 0 | "gone that way" | | 1 | "found that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 81 | | mean | 23.91 | | std | 19.71 | | cv | 0.824 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 81 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 90 | | 8 | 81 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 59 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 47 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 98.61% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "been swallowed" | | 2 | "being dragged" | | 3 | "been torn" |
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| 96.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 322 | | matches | | 0 | "was gripping" | | 1 | "was opening" | | 2 | "was looking" | | 3 | "was folding" | | 4 | "was coming" |
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| 89.45% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 214 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped; it stopped." | | 1 | "Somewhere near her, a portal to Hel was opening—or had already opened." | | 2 | "She moved it towards the line; the gem heated again." | | 3 | "Eva had said her name a thousand ways since they were children; this was one of them, gentle and impatient, asking her to turn round and listen." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1933 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 71 | | adverbRatio | 0.03673047077082255 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008277289187790998 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 214 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 214 | | mean | 9.05 | | std | 6.09 | | cv | 0.673 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 45.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2830188679245283 | | totalSentences | 212 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she lowered it and" | | 1 | "Even allowing for her nerves," | | 2 | "At least the ground was" | | 3 | "Then a voice behind her" | | 4 | "Somewhere near her, a portal" | | 5 | "Then, as she moved it" | | 6 | "Then the ground sloped beneath" | | 7 | "Somewhere far off, a fox" | | 8 | "Then, very carefully, she took" |
| | ratio | 0.046 | |
| 79.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots pressed into damp" | | 1 | "She heard the soft crush" | | 2 | "She slipped it back into" | | 3 | "She had mistaken it for" | | 4 | "It had lasted the time" | | 5 | "She had waited until a" | | 6 | "She wanted to find out" | | 7 | "She took another step into" | | 8 | "It was a bright, complicated" | | 9 | "she said quietly" | | 10 | "She had meant to walk" | | 11 | "She started along the edge," | | 12 | "They were fresh and open" | | 13 | "She took her torch from" | | 14 | "She kept the light on" | | 15 | "Her torch swung over the" | | 16 | "She waited long enough for" | | 17 | "She stopped; it stopped." | | 18 | "She walked three paces, slowly." | | 19 | "She held the beam there." |
| | ratio | 0.352 | |
| 92.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 144 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "The first thing Rory noticed" | | 1 | "Richmond Park had been noisy" | | 2 | "Wind had worried the bare" | | 3 | "Her boots pressed into damp" | | 4 | "She heard the soft crush" | | 5 | "Rory looked at her phone." | | 6 | "She slipped it back into" | | 7 | "The stone was cool." | | 8 | "That, at least, was what" | | 9 | "She had mistaken it for" | | 10 | "It had lasted the time" | | 11 | "She had waited until a" | | 12 | "She wanted to find out" | | 13 | "She took another step into" | | 14 | "A bird sang." | | 15 | "It was a bright, complicated" | | 16 | "Rory looked up into the" | | 17 | "The song stopped midway through" | | 18 | "she said quietly" | | 19 | "She had meant to walk" |
| | ratio | 0.735 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "If the Heartstone could warn" | | 1 | "By the time she reached" | | 2 | "Now the pair of marker" | | 3 | "If the grove was folding" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, wildflowers nodded in the clearing as if a mild breeze crossed them, though the air against her face was still." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |