| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.043 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |
| 75.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1434 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "helplessly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 86.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1434 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 63 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1448 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.44% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1085 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.75 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 19 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Nest | 2 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Silas | 5 | | Tuesdays | 1 | | Carys | 17 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Started | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Tuesday" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Carys" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.624 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as though apologizing to it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1448 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.94% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that look" | | 1 | "worn that look" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 33.67 | | std | 26.02 | | cv | 0.773 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 110 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 101 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 73 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 65 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 75 | | 27 | 76 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 55 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 27 |
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| 96.15% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | |
| 90.11% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "was already moving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "The Carys she'd grown up with — the girl with the dyed-black hair and the doc martens, who'd once climbed the scaffolding outside Cardiff castle on a dare and made the local paper — was gone." | | 1 | "\"Are you?\" Carys looked at her, and for a moment the careful polish slipped, and underneath it Rory saw something that made her stomach fold in on itself — a kind of watchfulness, a flinch held permanently at half-cock." | | 2 | "\"I still have the blood on that jacket somewhere. Never washed it out properly.\" Carys laughed — a real laugh, brief, and then it died as if someone had pressed a hand over her mouth." | | 3 | "Somewhere behind her, Rory could hear the small sounds of Silas existing — glass on wood, the tap of his ring against the counter — and she thought: say it." | | 4 | "Rory watched her rebuild herself in real time — the shoulders straightening, the face smoothing, the brightness coming back up like stage lights." | | 5 | "Silas came down the bar, his limp marking its familiar rhythm, and set down two glasses she hadn't ordered — a fresh pint for her, and a whisky that he kept for himself." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1084 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.023985239852398525 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007380073800738007 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 14.93 | | std | 12.26 | | cv | 0.822 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 39 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 67.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4536082474226804 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 98.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the woman looked up," | | 1 | "Somewhere behind her, Rory could" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, sliding a towel" | | 1 | "She caught it, pressed it" | | 2 | "He had a memory like" | | 3 | "She'd been coming down on" | | 4 | "She was halfway through the" | | 5 | "She counted the seconds until" | | 6 | "She turned the diamond on" | | 7 | "She knew that look." | | 8 | "She had worn that look." | | 9 | "She had spent a year" | | 10 | "she said softly" | | 11 | "Her phone buzzed on the" | | 12 | "She glanced at it, screen" | | 13 | "She was looking at the" | | 14 | "She opened her mouth." | | 15 | "She answered on the third" | | 16 | "She hung up" | | 17 | "She stood, and buttoned her" | | 18 | "She was already moving toward" | | 19 | "It wasn't a question." |
| | ratio | 0.294 | |
| 26.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had followed Rory" | | 1 | "he said, sliding a towel" | | 2 | "She caught it, pressed it" | | 3 | "The silver signet ring on" | | 4 | "He had a memory like" | | 5 | "She'd been coming down on" | | 6 | "She was halfway through the" | | 7 | "Rory knew her before she" | | 8 | "Something in the shape of" | | 9 | "Carys said her full name" | | 10 | "Neither of them moved." | | 11 | "Carys had changed." | | 12 | "That was the thing Rory" | | 13 | "The Carys she'd grown up" | | 14 | "A diamond on her left" | | 15 | "Rory heard herself say" | | 16 | "Silas materialized with a glass" | | 17 | "Carys wrapped both hands around" | | 18 | "Carys smiled, and for a" | | 19 | "Rory turned her pint a" |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Eleven on a Tuesday meant the bar was nearly empty: a man in a rain-dark overcoat nursing a whisky at the far end, the green neon sign outside bleeding its colo…" | | 1 | "Something in the shape of the shoulders, the particular way she ducked under the doorframe as though apologizing to it." | | 2 | "Silas materialized with a glass of white wine before Carys had finished unbuttoning her coat, then withdrew to the other end of the bar with the seamless tact o…" | | 3 | "Three years of not saying it, of changing her number, of telling her father it was for a job in London, of letting the story be told by the only other person wh…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Carys laughed — (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.239 | | leniency | 0.478 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |