Run: 2026-09-24-01M39VMRH31G5NN60HSDQVSYHB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.006928
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling since four, not falling so much as hanging, and by the time Rory came up out of the Underground her delivery bag smelled of wet cardboard and ginger. The order was for the Raven's Nest: two portions of salt-and-pepper ribs, one vegetarian mapo tofu, pay on delivery, no rush. She had been delivering to the Nest for three months and had never once seen the owner. Dev said he traveled. Dev said a lot of things. The green neon sign buzzed above the door, its light lying across the puddles in a long broken ribbon. She let herself in with the shoulder of the bag, out of habit, and the warmth of the place closed over her like water. The bar smelled of hops and beeswax and old paper, the particular smell of a room that had decided decades ago what it was going to be. Maps on the walls. Photographs in black and white, their subjects gone grainy and anonymous. Stools upturned on two of the tables, and Dev wiping glasses at the tap with the unhurried air of a man who had already counted the till in his head. One customer left. A man at the far end of the counter, sitting with his back half to the door, a cane hooked over the edge of the bar beside him. Big through the shoulders still, going soft at the edges, hair the color of old rust shot through with grey, a beard trimmed close and neat. He was not reading the paper folded beside his glass. He was watching the mirror behind the bottles, which meant he had been watching the door. "Delivery," she said, and set the bag on the counter. "You're late," the man said, without turning. Then he turned, and said, "Aurora." The name arrived from a room she had sealed shut years ago, and for a moment she couldn't do anything with it. She stood with her hand still on the bag and let the face assemble itself out of pieces — the voice first, that low unhurried voice, then the shape of him, then, last and worst, the eyes. Hazel. They had always been the part of him that looked back at you like he was memorizing you for evidence. "Silas," she said. "Hello, love." He turned on his stool, and she saw the hitch in the movement, the way he planted his left leg and brought the rest of him around it, careful as a man crossing ice. "Dev, two more of whatever this is. Put it on my account, which is to say, on the house." "I'm working," she said. "You're finished," Dev said, already reaching for a cloth. "I'll see the cash. Go sit down, Carter." Nobody here called her Carter. Nobody here called her anything but Laila, and even that only when they bothered. She pulled off the wet jacket anyway, because her body had made the decision before the rest of her could object, and sat down two stools away from him, which was as close as she could manage. "You're supposed to be dead," she said. "I was. For about a year." He slid a glass toward her. Whiskey, two fingers, no ice, the way her father used to take it. "It didn't suit me. Terrible hours. Nobody writes to the dead, so the post was excellent, but the conversation was thin." "You went to Prague." "Prague happened to me," he said. "There's a difference, and it took me a long time to learn it." He tapped the cane without looking at it. "You knew about Prague." "Everyone knew about Prague. My father talked about you the way other men talk about footballers. Nobody knew what happened." "Neither did I. For a while." He said it lightly, and she understood that the lightness was load-bearing, that the whole structure of the man was held up by it. She had been thirteen the winter he stayed with them. Her father's colleague from the Foreign Office, which was what everyone said and nobody believed, sleeping in the spare room that smelled of her grandmother's lavender and old snow. He had spread ordnance survey maps across the kitchen table and taught her dead reckoning over her mother's objections and her father's laughter. Start from a point you trust, he'd said, and count what you spend getting to the next one. She had thought he was talking about maps. "You still do that," he said. "Do what." "Your wrist." He nodded at her left hand, where her thumb was moving over the small crescent scar, back and forth, back and forth. She stopped. "St. Fagans. The wall by the yew trees. You fell out of the tree, not off the wall, though you've told it the other way for twenty years." "There was a wall involved." "There was a great deal of screaming involved. I drove you to A&E and told you about the Hungarian countess who hid her jewels in a beehive, and you stopped crying out of pure indignation because you didn't believe me." "I still don't believe you." "Good girl." He raised his glass a half inch. "It was true. That's the trouble with the world. It keeps being true when nobody checks." She looked at him properly then, and the looking hurt in a way she hadn't prepared for. He had been a man that rooms arranged themselves around — her father's kitchen, the school gates, the whole street had bent slightly toward him. Now he sat at the end of a bar in Soho like furniture, like something poured into place, and when his eyes swept the room it was not hunger in them anymore but habit, an old dog turning three times before lying down. "When did he die?" Silas asked. "Your father." "Three years ago." She watched the words land. Watched him receive them the way you receive a blow you'd been expecting for a long time and had begun, secretly, to hope would never come. "I read the notice," he said. "I cut it out. I carried it in my coat for a month. I kept meaning to write." "You meant to." "I did mean to." "I know," she said. "That was always the trouble with you. You meant beautifully." He turned the silver ring on his right hand, once, all the way around, and said nothing, and the nothing between them was the loudest thing in the room. Outside, the neon hummed. Dev found something to do in the cellar, which was a kindness, or an instinct, or both. "I didn't write either," she said at last. "Not to anyone. I left Cardiff with a suitcase and I let the number go dead and I — there was a man." "You don't owe me the story," Silas said. "You never did." "I go by Laila here." "Laila." He repeated it once, politely, the way you repeat a password you have no intention of using. Then, softer, deliberately: "Aurora." "Nobody here knows that name." "I know. I signed your lease." She stared at him. "Which — the flat above the—" "Small world," he said. "Patient one," she said, and he laughed, a real laugh, brief and rusty, and something in her chest that had been clenched for years loosened one notch, not all the way, but enough to notice. She drank. The whiskey was good, and warm, and it tasted like a kitchen table in Cardiff with the rain going sideways outside. On the wall near the door, among the maps and the strangers, hung a black-and-white photograph she had walked past a hundred times without seeing: some function, men in bad suits, glasses raised. Her father, young, laughing at something a dark-haired man was saying, his head thrown back, caught at the exact moment before the laugh. "He hated that suit," Silas said, following her eyes. She didn't touch the photograph. She was afraid of what the paper would feel like, whether it would be warm. "Start from a point you trust," he'd told her at thirteen, "and count what you spend." She had spent ten years trying to start from nowhere, telling herself nowhere was safer, and all she'd bought with it was distance, and the distance hadn't even held. "First one's on the house," Silas said, refilling her glass. "It's the ones after that cost." "How long have you been back?" "Long enough," he said, "to know my tenant always sends the tofu back without coriander." "That's surveillance." "That's hospitality." He settled onto his stool, and the room, without meaning to, bent slightly toward him again, and she let it. Outside, the rain went on hanging in the green light, and for the first time in years, someone in the room knew her real name, and the ceiling did not fall.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.518
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1472
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slightly"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1472
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"structure"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"structure"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences75
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1476
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1088
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.46
worstName"Dev"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Dev"
discoveredNames
Rory1
Underground1
Raven1
Nest2
Dev5
Carter1
Laila1
Whiskey1
Foreign1
Office1
Soho1
Watched1
Silas4
Cardiff1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Dev"
3"Carter"
4"Laila"
5"Silas"
places
0"Nest"
1"Foreign"
2"Soho"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like a kitchen table in Cardiff wi"
64.50% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.355
wordCount1476
matches
0"not hunger in them anymore but habit, an old dog turning three times before lying down"
1"not all the way, but enough to notice"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"understood that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean28.94
std28.47
cv0.984
sampleLengths
081
1115
283
310
413
580
63
755
84
917
1056
117
1246
134
1431
1520
1630
1788
186
192
2054
215
2240
235
2425
2585
268
2734
2824
293
304
3114
3250
3331
3411
355
3622
375
386
3910
404
4135
4279
439
4420
4545
4616
476
4815
492
91.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"was held"
1"been thirteen"
2"been clenched"
14.81% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was not reading"
1"was watching"
2"was memorizing"
3"was talking"
4"was saying"
86.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences101
ratio0.02
matches
0"She stood with her hand still on the bag and let the face assemble itself out of pieces — the voice first, that low unhurried voice, then the shape of him, then, last and worst, the eyes."
1"He had been a man that rooms arranged themselves around — her father's kitchen, the school gates, the whole street had bent slightly toward him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1092
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.031135531135531136
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007326007326007326
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean14.61
std11.07
cv0.758
sampleLengths
033
121
217
34
46
519
624
727
84
911
1030
113
1228
1326
1410
1516
1610
177
186
1922
2037
211
2220
233
2436
2519
264
279
288
295
3014
3137
327
3312
3413
3521
364
376
3821
394
4020
4130
4210
4329
4423
4518
468
476
482
4924
66.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.45544554455445546
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"Then he turned, and said,"
1"Then, softer, deliberately:"
ratio0.033
16.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences61
matches
0"She had been delivering to"
1"She let herself in with"
2"He was not reading the"
3"He was watching the mirror"
4"she said, and set the"
5"She stood with her hand"
6"They had always been the"
7"He turned on his stool,"
8"She pulled off the wet"
9"He slid a glass toward"
10"He tapped the cane without"
11"He said it lightly, and"
12"She had been thirteen the"
13"Her father's colleague from the"
14"He had spread ordnance survey"
15"She had thought he was"
16"He nodded at her left"
17"He raised his glass a"
18"She looked at him properly"
19"He had been a man"
ratio0.508
41.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences61
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"The order was for the"
2"She had been delivering to"
3"Dev said he traveled."
4"Dev said a lot of"
5"The green neon sign buzzed"
6"She let herself in with"
7"The bar smelled of hops"
8"Maps on the walls."
9"Photographs in black and white,"
10"Stools upturned on two of"
11"A man at the far"
12"He was not reading the"
13"He was watching the mirror"
14"she said, and set the"
15"the man said, without turning"
16"The name arrived from a"
17"She stood with her hand"
18"They had always been the"
19"He turned on his stool,"
ratio0.836
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Now he sat at the"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her father's colleague from the Foreign Office, which was what everyone said and nobody believed, sleeping in the spare room that smelled of her grandmother's l…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the man said, without turning"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
1"he'd (would)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.071
87.9971%