Run: 2026-09-24-01M39WWXY6BZJFNT29F2MF8EKN

Run Details

Duration:
2m 32s
Cost:
$0.010866
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The last delivery of the night was still warm in Rory's memory in the way that mattered: Yu-Fei Cheung had pressed a container of dumplings on her at the door and said, in the tone she used for commands rather than gifts, "Eat. You're skin and bone and bad for my reputation." So Rory sat at the end of the bar with the container open in front of her, the smell of ginger and chili oil rising off it into the dim, and watched the rain come down on Frith Street through the fogged window. The green neon above the door turned the puddles outside the color of bottle glass. Inside, the walls were their usual clutter of old maps and black-and-white photographs, men and ships and borders that no longer existed, and Silas moved along the bar behind her, drying glasses one-handed, keeping his weight off the left leg the way he always did when the weather turned. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light each time the cloth passed over it. He had not spoken in twenty minutes. It was one of the things she liked about the place, that silence was allowed to sit down and stay. The door opened at half ten and the cold came in first. Rory knew the walk before she knew the face. She had known that walk across schoolyards and across the campus at Cardiff and across a PI's parking lot in the rain with two suitcases and a borrowed phone pressed to her ear. A woman didn't lose a walk like that. She only wore it differently. Eva stood just inside the door, dripping, in a grey wool coat that had cost more than Rory's monthly rent, and looked at the room the way Rory herself had learned to look at rooms — exits first, then hands, then faces — and Rory felt something turn over in her chest, because ten years ago Eva had walked into every room like she owned the lease on it. Loud coat, painted mouth, a laugh that made strangers turn and wish they'd been included. This woman's hair was cut short and straightened flat. Her face had been rearranged not by age but by subtraction. And her hands, once they'd shut the door, went still at her sides, too still, the stillness of someone who had practiced it. Rory had watched her, she realized, for a full three minutes before she came in. She'd seen her under the neon through the window, hesitating while two smokers huddled past, lifting one hand toward the door and putting it down again. So the story Eva was about to tell — the meeting, the cancellation, the chance of it — was already dead on arrival. "Rory Carter," Eva said, and her voice was lower than the one in Rory's head. "God, look at you." "Eva." Rory stood. They did the half-embrace, the patting, the smell of cold rain on wool and a perfume she didn't recognize. "You're soaked." "It's London. It's contractual." Eva sat on the stool beside hers and looked at the dumplings, the maps, the photographs, the old man drying glasses. "I was meeting someone. They cancelled. I saw the sign and I thought — that's a Rory sort of place." It was a good lie. It had a shape. Silas, without appearing to have listened, set a small glass of red wine in front of her and a fresh napkin, and went back to his glasses. "Two years," Rory said. "October, was it?" "Two years in October." Eva turned the wine by its stem. She didn't drink it. "Amsterdam's fine. Flat's fine. Work's fine." She said fine three times and Rory counted them the way Silas had taught her to count things, without appearing to. "I do due diligence now. Corporate. I check whether companies are what they say they are." "That's a kind of spying, isn't it." "It's a kind of nothing." Eva smiled, and for a second the old smile surfaced through the new face like a fish under ice, and was gone. "You? Still delivering?" "Golden Empress. Gerrard Street. The woman who runs it frightens me more than any person alive." "You never could hold your ground with scary women." Eva said it lightly, and then the lightness failed her, because they both heard what was underneath it, which was every scary woman either of them had ever failed to hold ground against. Rory did not say his name. Neither of them ever had; he was him, the way other people said the war. The bar's radio was playing something low and old. Eva wrapped both hands around the wineglass the way she had once wrapped both hands around the gearstick of a Fiesta with a broken heater, on the A38, in the dark, knuckles white, and Rory was there again for a moment — the two suitcases, the service-station tea tasting of the cup, Eva saying, This is the easy part. The easy part is leaving. She had been twenty-two and hadn't believed her. She believed her now. "You went to the station with me," Rory said. "And then I never—" She stopped. Started again, because Eva deserved better than a stopped sentence. "I had a message half-written to you for two years. I'd open it, add a line, close it. After a while it felt like turning up at a funeral to say sorry for missing a birthday." "I wrote mine every few months," Eva said. "Never sent one either. I kept thinking, she's rebuilding, don't drag her back. And then it had been a year and starting felt more embarrassing than silence." She laughed, a small dry sound. "We're very clever people, Rory. Two years of parallel cowardice." At the far end of the bar, two men came in off the street, loud with the particular loudness of men who want to be overheard. Silas's eyes went to them, then briefly to the bookshelf in the corner, then back. He said something quiet. The men went through the shelf's hidden seam toward the back room like water finding a drain, and the door closed, and the bar was quiet again, and Eva watched all of it with the stillness of a person filing it away. "Friend of yours?" she asked. "My landlord." "He watches a door like—" "Something like that," Rory said, and understood, in the pause that followed, that she could not explain Silas without explaining Prague, could not explain Prague without explaining the last three years, and that Eva was not going to press, and that this — the mutual not-pressing, the polite gap where the whole map of a life should be — was what two years of silence actually looked like from the inside. Eva lifted her left hand into the light and held it there, wry, letting her look. There was a pale stripe of skin on the ring finger, softer than the skin around it, the ghost of a band. "March," Eva said. "I married him and then I left him. In that order. His name was Daniel. He was— fine, for a while. Fine the way I've been saying fine all night." She set the hand back down. "I didn't tell you. I want you to know that I knew, the whole time, that you of all people would have come. That's why I didn't tell you. The last time we stood next to each other in a crisis, I was the one driving. I couldn't stand to be the one in the passenger seat. Asking to be collected." Rory looked at her for a long moment. Somewhere behind the bar, Silas set down a glass with exaggerated care and found something to do with his back to them. "Your hands were shaking so hard that night," Rory said, "I had to work the heater for you. And you said it was the easy part." She turned her own glass a quarter-turn on the wood. "You were right. It was the easy part. I've spent three years doing the hard part and I never once rang you to say so, because I was too busy being the person you made me into instead of the person you could help." She swallowed. "That's the regret, Eva. Not the silence. That I took the thing you did for me and didn't leave the door open for you to need it back." Eva's eyes were bright and she blinked the brightness down with an efficiency that hurt to watch. Then she reached across the bar and took Rory's left hand and turned it over, and pushed the sleeve back from the small crescent scar on her wrist. "You still have it," she said. "Of course I still have it." "The jam jar. Your nan's kitchen in Barry. You were nine and you were showing off and I wrapped it in my school tie because it was closer than the tea towel." Eva's thumb rested on the scar, warm. "You bled on my cardigan. My mum never got the stain out. She kept it anyway. Twenty years in the cupboard with the stain still in it." Rory laughed, and the laugh came out wetter than she'd planned, and Eva laughed too, and for a moment the fish under ice was swimming free, both of them nineteen again at a kitchen table in Cathays with cheap wine and no idea what was coming. It was nearly eleven when Silas began turning bottles face-down along the bar, the wordless ritual of last orders. Eva stood, and shrugged into the grey coat, and paused at the door with her hand on the bar of it — the same hesitation, three minutes' worth, compressed into a breath. "Eva." Rory waited until she turned. "Tomorrow. The Golden Empress, lunch. The dumplings are the best in London and Yu-Fei will interrogate you and you'll be terrified and then she'll love you. Everyone does." "Is that an invitation or a diagnosis?" "Both. Noon." Eva went out into the rain, and through the fogged window Rory watched her stop under the green neon — not hesitating this time, just standing in the light for a moment, face tipped up — and then walk, unhurried, toward the corner. Silas came down the bar and collected the plates without comment. Then, at the till, without looking up: "Saturday, you said. I'll want the flat quiet Sunday morning, so if she's staying over—" "Tomorrow, Si. Lunch." "Mm." He looked at her once, hazel eyes unhurried, having known the whole of it since the door opened, and let it go. "Lock the door when you go up." Rory stayed a while after he'd gone through to the back. She pressed her thumb into the crescent on her wrist, the way you press a bruise to be sure it's yours, and looked out at the green light doubling in the wet street, and thought: the easy part is leaving. The hard part, it turned out, was only this — opening the door you'd let swing shut, and finding the person still standing on the other side of it.
created_at"2026-09-24T14:25:18.806Z" 9/24/2026, 2:25:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1852
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1852
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen96
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1864
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Eva wrapped both hands around the wineglass the way she had once wrapped both hands around the gearstick of a Fiesta wit…"
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1320
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory22
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Frith1
Street1
Silas8
Cardiff1
Eva21
Fiesta1
Started1
Prague2
Cathays1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Cheung"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
places
0"Frith"
1"Street"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"Cathays"
globalScore0.667
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like from the inside"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.536
wordCount1864
matches
0"not by age but by subtraction"
95.74% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"known that walk"
1"followed, that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean44.38
std33.7
cv0.759
sampleLengths
095
1109
212
355
4127
564
619
724
845
936
107
1158
127
1330
1416
1563
1685
1761
1851
1987
205
212
225
2371
2438
25100
2630
27110
2845
296
306
3166
3246
3351
3434
357
362
3743
3833
393
4030
4180
86.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences73
matches
0"was allowed"
1"been included"
2"been rearranged"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs227
matches
0"was playing"
1"was swimming"
2"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences94
ratio0.085
matches
0"Eva stood just inside the door, dripping, in a grey wool coat that had cost more than Rory's monthly rent, and looked at the room the way Rory herself had learned to look at rooms — exits first, then hands, then faces — and Rory felt something turn over in her chest, because ten years ago Eva had walked into every room like she owned the lease on it."
1"So the story Eva was about to tell — the meeting, the cancellation, the chance of it — was already dead on arrival."
2"Neither of them ever had; he was him, the way other people said the war."
3"Eva wrapped both hands around the wineglass the way she had once wrapped both hands around the gearstick of a Fiesta with a broken heater, on the A38, in the dark, knuckles white, and Rory was there again for a moment — the two suitcases, the service-station tea tasting of the cup, Eva saying, This is the easy part."
4"\"Something like that,\" Rory said, and understood, in the pause that followed, that she could not explain Silas without explaining Prague, could not explain Prague without explaining the last three years, and that Eva was not going to press, and that this — the mutual not-pressing, the polite gap where the whole map of a life should be — was what two years of silence actually looked like from the inside."
5"Eva stood, and shrugged into the grey coat, and paused at the door with her hand on the bar of it — the same hesitation, three minutes' worth, compressed into a breath."
6"Eva went out into the rain, and through the fogged window Rory watched her stop under the green neon — not hesitating this time, just standing in the light for a moment, face tipped up — and then walk, unhurried, toward the corner."
7"The hard part, it turned out, was only this — opening the door you'd let swing shut, and finding the person still standing on the other side of it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1205
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03153526970954357
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005809128630705394
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean19.83
std17.48
cv0.882
sampleLengths
095
115
249
318
47
520
612
79
833
98
105
1169
1215
139
1411
1523
1615
1726
1823
1915
204
213
2219
232
2425
2520
265
274
2827
294
303
3111
324
3327
3416
357
3627
373
3816
3942
406
4115
429
4359
445
458
464
479
486
4910
68.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.44680851063829785
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences64
matches
0"Somewhere behind the bar, Silas"
1"Then she reached across the"
2"Then, at the till, without"
ratio0.047
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences64
matches
0"He had not spoken in"
1"It was one of the"
2"She had known that walk"
3"She only wore it differently."
4"Her face had been rearranged"
5"She'd seen her under the"
6"They did the half-embrace, the"
7"It was a good lie."
8"It had a shape."
9"She didn't drink it."
10"She said fine three times"
11"She had been twenty-two and"
12"She believed her now."
13"She laughed, a small dry"
14"He said something quiet."
15"She set the hand back"
16"It was nearly eleven when"
17"He looked at her once,"
18"She pressed her thumb into"
ratio0.297
38.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences64
matches
0"The last delivery of the"
1"The green neon above the"
2"The silver signet ring on"
3"He had not spoken in"
4"It was one of the"
5"The door opened at half"
6"Rory knew the walk before"
7"She had known that walk"
8"A woman didn't lose a"
9"She only wore it differently."
10"Eva stood just inside the"
11"This woman's hair was cut"
12"Her face had been rearranged"
13"Rory had watched her, she"
14"She'd seen her under the"
15"Eva said, and her voice"
16"They did the half-embrace, the"
17"Eva sat on the stool"
18"It was a good lie."
19"It had a shape."
ratio0.844
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Eva stood just inside the door, dripping, in a grey wool coat that had cost more than Rory's monthly rent, and looked at the room the way Rory herself had learn…"
1"And her hands, once they'd shut the door, went still at her sides, too still, the stillness of someone who had practiced it."
2"At the far end of the bar, two men came in off the street, loud with the particular loudness of men who want to be overheard."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Eva said, and her voice was lower than the one in Rory's head"
1"Eva sat, the maps, the photographs, the old man drying glasses"
2"She said, without appearing to"
3"Eva's thumb rested, warm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"warm in (warm in)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.289
leniency0.578
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.089
85.1783%