"The park at night was a different country from the park by day — the dog walkers and deer gone, the grass silvered and stiff, the trees holding their branches up like something surrendering or supplicating."
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"Not faded — stopped, the way a tap is turned off."
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"Then the trees opened and there it was, exactly as she had dreamt it, and the wrongness of that — that her sleeping mind had already been here, had already reported back — made her stop at the treeline with her breath caught halfway up her throat."
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"Within the ring, the ground was a meadow that had no business existing: wildflowers in riotous, shameless bloom — white and yellow and a blue so deep it looked wet — nodding gently in a breeze she could not feel on her own face."
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"Almost — she would not let herself think the word *hungry*, but the word arrived anyway and sat down in the front of her mind and refused to leave."
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"There was no wind — she was certain now there was no wind, because the branches of the oaks outside the ring were dead still, and only the flowers moved, all of them, all together, a slow synchronized sway, like a crowd turning to look."
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"And beneath those, older still—"
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"\"Don't,\" she said to herself, and stood up too fast, and her left wrist ached — the small crescent scar from the childhood fall she'd never gotten a straight answer about — and she pressed her thumb against it without noticing she was doing it."
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"The sound was unmistakable: the soft double crack of knees, the whisper of fabric — or of petals — against grass."
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"She started counting the stones to steady herself — a thing to do, a thing with numbers in it."
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"When she looked at the ring, at her hands, at the flowers, it was back, closer, or not closer — she couldn't tell, and the not-telling was worse than any distance could have been."
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"Not a mimicry of her mother's — it *was* it, the warm Cardiff lilt of it, singing the lullaby from before the divorce, from before the arguments, from the small good years: *Su o gân* — hush, hush, sleep, my child."
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"Not cooler — cold, cold as the frost outside the ring, cold as iron in January, and the absence of its warmth against her chest was the loneliest thing she had ever felt."
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"It came from everywhere in the grove at once, from the flowers, from the stones, from the warm air against her neck, and it was so kind, so gentle, that Rory fe…"