| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1106 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1106 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "charged" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1102 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.36% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1086 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 8 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Didn | 5 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.994 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 83.33% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a world away" | | 1 | "felt like this, suspended in its own ti" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 30.61 | | std | 21.91 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 44 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 50 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 10 |
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| 97.35% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 55.07% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | | 0 | "was leading" | | 1 | "were breathing" | | 2 | "was sitting" | | 3 | "was waiting" |
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| 17.73% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 137 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "She passed the standing stones—rough-hewn trunks of petrified oak, their surfaces carved with spirals and knots that made her eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 1 | "The wildflowers beneath her boots were impossible—vibrant blues and purples, their petals dewy under the moonlight." | | 2 | "Then she heard it—a whisper." | | 3 | "Just the shadows, just the—" | | 4 | "Just the empty clearing, the wildflowers, the—" | | 5 | "The thing—*the thing*—took a step forward." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1092 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.039377289377289376 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0027472527472527475 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 137 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 137 | | mean | 8.04 | | std | 6.24 | | cv | 0.776 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 39.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.23357664233576642 | | totalSentences | 137 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the standing stones, silent" | | 1 | "Then she heard it—a whisper." | | 2 | "Then, from the corner of" | | 3 | "Just the shadows, just the—" | | 4 | "Then the whispers started again." | | 5 | "Just the empty clearing, the" | | 6 | "Then the whispers sharpened, a" |
| | ratio | 0.064 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She passed the standing stones—rough—hewn" | | 2 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 3 | "She told herself it was" | | 4 | "She pressed on, her boots" | | 5 | "It was leading her deeper," | | 6 | "She turned her head, but" | | 7 | "It stood between the trunks" | | 8 | "She didn’t breathe." | | 9 | "It was just…" | | 10 | "Her skin prickled, the fine" | | 11 | "She could feel it still," | | 12 | "She reached the oak and" | | 13 | "She knew this trick." | | 14 | "She spun around." | | 15 | "It wasn’t human." | | 16 | "She gritted her teeth." | | 17 | "She gasped, stumbling back against" | | 18 | "She didn’t know what it" | | 19 | "she said, voice steadier than" |
| | ratio | 0.218 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The crimson gem had been" | | 3 | "That was why she’d come." | | 4 | "The Fae Grove called to" | | 5 | "The pendant had led her" | | 6 | "The ancient oaks loomed, their" | | 7 | "She passed the standing stones—rough—hewn" | | 8 | "The air shifted, cooler, charged" | | 9 | "The wildflowers beneath her boots" | | 10 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 11 | "The Grove always felt like" | | 12 | "A twig snapped." | | 13 | "The sound had come from" | | 14 | "She told herself it was" | | 15 | "She pressed on, her boots" | | 16 | "The pendant’s warmth seeped through" | | 17 | "It was leading her deeper," | | 18 | "The bark was smooth here," | | 19 | "A sigh, maybe, or the" |
| | ratio | 0.691 | |
| 45.45% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "As if it were breathing." |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She passed the standing stones—rough-hewn trunks of petrified oak, their surfaces carved with spirals and knots that made her eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 1 | "A language that slithered at the edges of understanding, like a half-remembered dream." | | 2 | "Close enough that she could see the hollows of its eyes, the way its limbs bent at angles that made her vision swim." | | 3 | "She yanked the chain free, the crimson gem flaring to life in her palm, casting jagged shadows across the clearing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |