| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 86.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1118 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "wavering" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "flicked" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 19 | | totalWords | 1110 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "down" | | 1 | "visible" | | 2 | "claws" | | 3 | "\"You shouldn’t be here, little thief.\"" | | 4 | "spoke" | | 5 | "\"You carry something that doesn’t belong to you.\"" | | 6 | "pushed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.69% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1096 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.907 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if urging her to look" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.901 | | wordCount | 1110 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the usual weathered limestone of the park’s boundaries, but something else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 30 | | std | 22.85 | | cv | 0.762 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 55 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 6 |
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| 91.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "been painted" | | 2 | "was swallowed" | | 3 | "were elongated" | | 4 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "were sinking" | | 1 | "was being" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone—no signal." | | 1 | "Not the usual weathered limestone of the park’s boundaries, but something else—ancient oaks, their bark grooved with symbols that made her eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 2 | "And the way they moved—no, not moved." | | 3 | "She wasn’t the type to spook easily, but this—this was different." | | 4 | "She jerked back, a scream tearing from her throat—but the sound was swallowed by the grove, muffled, as if the air itself refused to carry it." | | 5 | "But the pressure on her wrist remained, fingers—no, *claws*—digging into her skin just above the crescent-shaped scar from her childhood." | | 6 | "Then, from the trees, a voice—soft, melodic, and utterly inhuman." | | 7 | "No—a hand." |
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| 94.65% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1106 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.0461121157323689 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0054249547920434 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 8.88 | | std | 6.55 | | cv | 0.737 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 44.27% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.304 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Just silence, heavy and watchful." | | 1 | "Then she saw the standing" | | 2 | "Just the trees, their gnarled" | | 3 | "Then, a sound." | | 4 | "Then, from the trees, a" | | 5 | "Just a smooth, featureless expanse" | | 6 | "Then it *spoke*, and the" |
| | ratio | 0.067 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone—no signal." | | 1 | "She cursed under her breath," | | 2 | "She’d almost forgotten about it" | | 3 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 4 | "They formed a perfect circle," | | 5 | "She hadn’t meant to find" | | 6 | "She stepped forward, her pulse" | | 7 | "She told herself it was" | | 8 | "She turned back toward the" | | 9 | "Their colors were too vivid," | | 10 | "It coiled around her, familiar" | | 11 | "She wasn’t the type to" | | 12 | "She forced herself forward." | | 13 | "She reached for it, her" | | 14 | "It throbbed against her palm," | | 15 | "It was a mirror." | | 16 | "She stood in the same" | | 17 | "She jerked back, a scream" | | 18 | "She knew that laugh." | | 19 | "It was hers." |
| | ratio | 0.276 | |
| 93.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The path through Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory had taken it a" | | 2 | "The streetlights had given way" | | 3 | "She checked her phone—no signal." | | 4 | "The battery icon flickered at" | | 5 | "She cursed under her breath," | | 6 | "The pendant around her neck," | | 7 | "She’d almost forgotten about it" | | 8 | "The trees here were too" | | 9 | "Rory exhaled, her breath curling" | | 10 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 11 | "Silas had warned her about" | | 12 | "They formed a perfect circle," | | 13 | "Wildflowers bloomed there, impossible in" | | 14 | "The Fae Grove." | | 15 | "She hadn’t meant to find" | | 16 | "A place where things got" | | 17 | "She stepped forward, her pulse" | | 18 | "The pendant grew warmer, its" | | 19 | "The air inside the grove" |
| | ratio | 0.733 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "As if something unseen brushed" | | 1 | "To look *down*." | | 2 | "As if it had never" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the usual weathered limestone of the park’s boundaries, but something else—ancient oaks, their bark grooved with symbols that made her eyes ache if she star…" | | 1 | "The grass beneath her feet was soft, too soft, as if she were sinking slightly with each step." | | 2 | "Their colors were too vivid, their shapes too perfect, as if each petal had been painted by a meticulous hand." | | 3 | "The pendant guided her, its warmth a beacon, its glow casting long, wavering shadows that twisted at the edges of her vision." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |