| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1340 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1340 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "glinting" | | 7 | "unraveling" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "lurched" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "wavering" | | 16 | "rhythmic" | | 17 | "familiar" | | 18 | "sentinel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 174 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 174 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 175 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 25 | | totalWords | 1333 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "You do not belong here." | | 1 | "Foolish child," | | 2 | "The Grove does not give. It takes." | | 3 | "You cannot escape what you carry," | | 4 | "Next time, you will stay." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1314 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Isolde | 1 | | Heartstone | 7 | | December | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Evan | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.815 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when she blinked" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1333 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 175 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 19.04 | | std | 14.39 | | cv | 0.756 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 40 |
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| 85.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 174 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "been left" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "were blackened" | | 5 | "been burned" | | 6 | "was gone" | | 7 | "was gone" | | 8 | "were torn" | | 9 | "been gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 240 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 175 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove was supposed to be here—Isolde’s grove, hidden between the ancient oaks." | | 1 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter, cloying—like overripe fruit left to rot." | | 2 | "Just the trees, the flowers, the standing stones—rough-hewn oak, their surfaces carved with spirals that seemed to shift when she blinked." | | 3 | "Then she heard it—a whisper." | | 4 | "Another sound—a rustle, like fabric brushing bark." | | 5 | "It had reacted to the standing stones at the entrance, but now—now it was almost hot." | | 6 | "Then—silence." | | 7 | "And the standing stones—" | | 8 | "But their hands—" | | 9 | "And in the distance, from the heart of the grove, came the faintest whisper—" |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1323 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ancient, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.03854875283446712 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0045351473922902496 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 175 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 175 | | mean | 7.62 | | std | 5.06 | | cv | 0.664 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 40.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.25142857142857145 | | totalSentences | 175 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the trees, the flowers," | | 1 | "Then she heard it—a whisper." | | 2 | "Just a breath of sound," | | 3 | "Just the grove, breathing around" | | 4 | "Then it moved again, gliding" | | 5 | "Then it spoke." | | 6 | "Then, from the darkness, came" | | 7 | "Then she saw the gate" | | 8 | "Too many fingers." | | 9 | "Then, from the center of" |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated, her breath curling" | | 1 | "She stepped inside, and the" | | 2 | "It was warm, almost pulsing." | | 3 | "She wasn’t sure." | | 4 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 5 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 6 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 7 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 8 | "She spun, her pulse hammering" | | 9 | "Her voice cracked" | | 10 | "She cleared her throat." | | 11 | "She pulled it free, the" | | 12 | "It had reacted to the" | | 13 | "Its edges blurred, as if" | | 14 | "She took a step back," | | 15 | "They resisted, then sprang back," | | 16 | "She couldn’t see its face." | | 17 | "she demanded, her voice steadier" | | 18 | "It was a vibration in" | | 19 | "*You do not belong here.*" |
| | ratio | 0.226 | |
| 76.13% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 119 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate groaned as" | | 1 | "She hesitated, her breath curling" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove was supposed" | | 3 | "Eva had been vague, but" | | 4 | "She stepped inside, and the" | | 5 | "The trees loomed, their gnarled" | | 6 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 7 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around the" | | 8 | "It was warm, almost pulsing." | | 9 | "A warning, or a comfort?" | | 10 | "She wasn’t sure." | | 11 | "The path beneath her boots" | | 12 | "Wildflowers, Eva had said." | | 13 | "Rory crouched, brushing her fingers" | | 14 | "The petals were velvety, too" | | 15 | "A twig snapped." | | 16 | "The sound had come from" | | 17 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 18 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 19 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, warmer" |
| | ratio | 0.768 | |
| 32.26% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "As if nothing had happened." |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The path beneath her boots was soft, carpeted with petals that shouldn’t have been blooming in December." | | 1 | "The trees stood silent, their leaves trembling as if something had just passed through them." | | 2 | "She didn’t remember moving, but suddenly she was running, her boots pounding the path back to the gate." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "Rory snapped, her fear sharpening into defiance" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "Rory snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |