| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1424 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1424 | | totalAiIsms | 37 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "trembled" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "sentinel" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "tension" | | 14 | "silk" | | 15 | "shimmered" | | 16 | "could feel" | | 17 | "weight" | | 18 | "raced" | | 19 | "wavering" | | 20 | "pulsed" | | 21 | "beacon" | | 22 | "shattered" | | 23 | "unraveling" | | 24 | "silence" | | 25 | "sense of" | | 26 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 155 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 162 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 40 | | markdownWords | 61 | | totalWords | 1410 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "Come at the witching hour. Bring the pendant." | | 1 | "Just the wind. Just your imagination." | | 2 | "hungry" | | 3 | "Laila." | | 4 | "hadn’t been there before." | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "Stop playing games," | | 7 | "Malphora." | | 8 | "Malphora." | | 9 | "Who the hell is Malphora?" | | 10 | "twisted" | | 11 | "ripped" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "absence" | | 14 | "sensed" | | 15 | "behind" | | 16 | "Aurora." | | 17 | "wrong" | | 18 | "pulsed" | | 19 | "Malphora." | | 20 | "think" | | 21 | "thing" | | 22 | "alive" | | 23 | "shifted" | | 24 | "No." | | 25 | "yawned" | | 26 | "hand" | | 27 | "falling" | | 28 | "time" | | 29 | "memory" | | 30 | "Malphora" | | 31 | "bargain" | | 32 | "thing" | | 33 | "acted" | | 34 | "slammed" | | 35 | "screamed" | | 36 | "convulsed" | | 37 | "hungry" | | 38 | "her" | | 39 | "Malphora" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1365 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 20 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 13 | | Isolde | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Laila | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Laila" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.767 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if breathing" | | 1 | "seemed woven from moonlight and shadow, her hair a cascade of silver" |
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| 58.16% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.418 | | wordCount | 1410 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the portal, but from *behind* her" | | 1 | "not through the earth but through *time*, through *memory*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 25.64 | | std | 19.7 | | cv | 0.769 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 82 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 46 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 46 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 46 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 54 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 44 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 98.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 231 | | matches | | 0 | "were blooming" | | 1 | "was *falling" | | 2 | "was shaking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 24 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 18 | | totalSentences | 162 | | ratio | 0.111 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove was supposed to be here—Isolde’s grove, hidden between the ancient oaks." | | 1 | "She’d come for answers—about the pendant, about the dreams of a voice whispering her name—but the Grove felt less like a sanctuary and more like a throat, waiting to swallow her whole." | | 2 | "But the air smelled wrong—too sweet, like rotting fruit." | | 3 | "She’d read about the Grove’s oddities—time slipping, the way an hour inside could be days outside—but this was different." | | 4 | "Not since—" | | 5 | "Then—movement." | | 6 | "The figure—if it was a figure—danced at the edge of her vision, always just out of focus." | | 7 | "She barely kept her footing, but the movement broke something—an invisible thread of tension." | | 8 | "And beyond it—" | | 9 | "Her eyes—" | | 10 | "The portal was a way out—or a way in." | | 11 | "But the woman—*thing*—blocked her path." | | 12 | "A root—no, a *hand*—slimy and gray, had emerged from the soil, its fingers twitching as they closed around her scar." | | 13 | "The pain was white-hot, searing up her arm, and suddenly she was *falling*, not through the earth but through *time*, through *memory*—" | | 14 | "A name—*Malphora*—screamed back at her." | | 15 | "The Grove snapped back into focus—the woman, the portal, the grasping roots." | | 16 | "And then—silence." | | 17 | "The Grove was just a Grove again—ancient, yes, and strange, but no longer *hungry*." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1381 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.03475742215785663 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002896451846488052 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 162 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 162 | | mean | 8.7 | | std | 6.05 | | cv | 0.695 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 31.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 30 | | diversityRatio | 0.18518518518518517 | | totalSentences | 162 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 74.07% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the gate, half-swallowed by" | | 1 | "*Just the wind." | | 2 | "Just your imagination.*" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated, her breath curling" | | 1 | "She’d come for answers—about the" | | 2 | "She stepped forward, gravel crunching" | | 3 | "She turned slowly, pulse hammering" | | 4 | "they were blooming in the" | | 5 | "She’d read about the Grove’s" | | 6 | "Her blood turned to ice." | | 7 | "She whirled, heart in her" | | 8 | "Her fingers closed around the" | | 9 | "She barely kept her footing," | | 10 | "It *sensed* her." | | 11 | "She could feel its attention" | | 12 | "Her eyes were black pits," | | 13 | "She extended a hand, her" | | 14 | "She had to move." | | 15 | "She lunged sideways, dodging the" | | 16 | "She hit the dirt hard," | | 17 | "She scrambled for it, her" | | 18 | "She didn’t think." | | 19 | "Its glow had dimmed to" |
| | ratio | 0.178 | |
| 56.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 109 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate groaned as" | | 1 | "She hesitated, her breath curling" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove was supposed" | | 3 | "The note had been clear:" | | 4 | "Something was wrong." | | 5 | "The trees loomed too still," | | 6 | "Rory’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 7 | "She’d come for answers—about the" | | 8 | "She stepped forward, gravel crunching" | | 9 | "The sound echoed, then stretched," | | 10 | "The noise had come from" | | 11 | "She turned slowly, pulse hammering" | | 12 | "they were blooming in the" | | 13 | "Rory’s stomach twisted." | | 14 | "She’d read about the Grove’s" | | 15 | "This was *hungry*." | | 16 | "A whisper slithered past her" | | 17 | "Her blood turned to ice." | | 18 | "Rory spun, scanning the tree" | | 19 | "The oaks stood sentinel, their" |
| | ratio | 0.807 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 76.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "they were blooming in the dark, their colors too vivid, their petals twitching as if breathing." | | 1 | "The wildflowers at her feet *twisted*, their stems elongating, petals curling into grasping fingers." | | 2 | "A sound like tearing silk split the night, and the world in front of her *shimmered*, the trees parting to reveal a yawning blackness that wasn’t darkness but *…" | | 3 | "She could feel its attention like a physical weight, pressing down on her chest, stealing her breath." | | 4 | "Tall, clad in a dress that seemed woven from moonlight and shadow, her hair a cascade of silver." | | 5 | "the Grove was *alive* now, the trees groaning, their roots slithering from the earth like serpents." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "the woman said, her voice the rustle of dead leaves" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |