Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AV7HDJF121BRKQ1CMFQF82

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Duration:
19.3s
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$0.018162
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Mistral

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered once, twice, then steadied as Rory pushed through the door, the weight of the evening’s deliveries still clinging to her shoulders. The bar smelled of aged whiskey and polished wood, the kind of scent that settled into the bones of a place and refused to leave. She exhaled, rolling her neck to ease the tension, and scanned the dimly lit room. The usual suspects—regulars hunched over their drinks, the hum of low conversation, the clink of glass—filled the space, but her gaze snagged on a figure at the far end of the bar. A man with grey-streaked auburn hair, his back to her, sat with the quiet authority of someone who knew he didn’t need to prove himself. Silas. Of course. She hadn’t seen him in weeks, not since he’d handed her a key to the flat above the bar with a gruff, “Don’t burn the place down.” But it wasn’t Silas who made her pause. It was the man beside him. Tall, broad-shouldered, his posture rigid as if bracing against an unseen wind. Dark hair, threaded with silver at the temples, cut short. A leather jacket draped over the stool beside him, worn at the elbows. She knew that jacket. Knew the way the collar had always curled at the edges, the way the zipper had stuck if you didn’t tug it just right. Her breath hitched. Evan. No, not Evan. Not anymore. Time had carved him into something sharper, something harder. The years had etched lines around his mouth, deepened the groove between his brows. But it was the way he held himself—like a man who had learned, the hard way, that the world was not a kind place—that made her stomach twist. She should leave. Turn around, walk out, pretend she hadn’t seen him. But her feet refused to move. Silas turned his head slightly, catching her in his peripheral vision. His hazel eyes, sharp as ever, flicked toward her, then back to his companion. A slow, knowing smile tugged at the corner of his mouth. “Speak of the devil,” he murmured, just loud enough for her to hear. Evan stiffened. Then, as if sensing her presence like a shift in the air, he turned. His gaze locked onto hers, and for a heartbeat, the bar, the noise, the years—all of it—fell away. His eyes were the same. Dark, intense, the kind of eyes that had once made her feel like the only person in the room. Now, they were guarded, wary. Like he wasn’t sure he trusted what he was seeing. “Rory?” His voice was rough, as if he hadn’t used it in a while. Or maybe he just hadn’t said her name in a long time. She swallowed. “Evan.” Silas watched them both, his expression unreadable, then slid off his stool with the practiced ease of a man who knew how to make an exit without drawing attention. “I’ll give you two a moment.” He clapped Evan on the shoulder—just once, a gesture that was both greeting and warning—before limping toward the back of the bar, his signet ring glinting under the muted light. The silence between them stretched, thick and suffocating. Rory forced herself to move, to walk toward him, though every instinct screamed at her to run. She stopped a few feet away, close enough to see the faint scar above his left eyebrow, the one he’d gotten playing rugby in uni. Close enough to smell the faint trace of his cologne—something woodsy, familiar. Close enough to remember. “You look…” He trailed off, as if the words had caught in his throat. “Older?” she supplied, trying for lightness. It came out brittle. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “I was going to say the same.” She did look older. The years had taken the softness from her face, replaced it with something leaner, something that had learned to flinch before it fought. Her black hair was still straight, still shoulder-length, but there was a tiredness in her bright blue eyes that hadn’t been there before. A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—from a childhood accident, he remembered—peeked out from under the sleeve of her delivery jacket. “What are you doing here?” she asked. Evan exhaled, running a hand through his hair. “Silas and I go way back. He called, said he had a job. Needed someone with my… particular skills.” His jaw tightened. “I didn’t know you’d be here.” Of course. Silas and his network. His connections. His habit of collecting broken things and putting them to use. She should have guessed Evan would resurface in his orbit eventually. The intelligence world was smaller than people thought. “Part-time delivery for Yu-Fei’s place,” she said, nodding toward the Golden Empress logo on her jacket. “Pays the bills.” Evan’s eyes flicked to the logo, then back to her. “You left Cardiff.” It wasn’t a question. She crossed her arms. “Had to.” He flinched, just slightly, as if the words had struck him. “Because of me.” She didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The air between them was heavy with everything unsaid. The apologies that had never come. The anger that had festered, then dulled into something quieter, something sadder. The love that had curdled into regret. Evan broke the silence first. “I looked for you, you know. After… after everything.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her own arms. “Did you?” “Yes.” His voice was low, rough. “I went to your flat. Your parents’ house. The university. No one would tell me where you’d gone.” “Maybe they knew me better than you did.” The words hung between them, sharp as a blade. Evan’s face darkened. “That’s not fair.” “No?” She laughed, a short, bitter sound. “You think fairness had anything to do with it? You think it was fair when you—” She cut herself off, shaking her head. Some wounds were too deep to pick at, even now. Evan’s hands curled into fists on the bar. “I know what I did. I know what I was. And I know I don’t deserve your forgiveness. But I’m not that man anymore, Rory.” “Aren’t you?” She studied him—the set of his shoulders, the way his fingers tapped restlessly against the wood. He was still Evan. Still the man who had made her feel safe, then shattered that safety with his own hands. Time didn’t erase that. It just made the edges blur. Silas reappeared, sliding a glass of whiskey toward Evan and a pint toward Rory without a word. He knew better than to interfere. Some conversations needed to happen without an audience. Evan took a sip of his drink, his throat working as he swallowed. “I got help. Therapy. After you left, I… I hit rock bottom. Lost my job. My flat. Almost lost my mind.” He set the glass down. “I spent a year in a treatment program. Learned to… to unlearn the things I’d become.” Rory stared at him. This was the part she hadn’t expected. The remorse. The change. She had spent so long painting him as the villain in her story that she hadn’t left room for the possibility that he might have changed. That he might have suffered, too. “Why now?” she asked. “Why come back into my life after all this time?” Evan’s gaze was steady. “Because I owe you an apology. And because Silas said you were here, and I… I needed to see for myself that you were okay.” She wanted to laugh. Or cry. Or both. Okay was a relative term. She was alive. She was breathing. She had a roof over her head and a job that paid enough to keep her fed. But okay? That was a word for people who hadn’t spent years looking over their shoulder, waiting for the past to catch up with them. “And are you?” he asked quietly. “Okay?” Rory took a long pull from her pint, the bitterness of the ale grounding her. “I’m not the girl you knew, Evan. I’m not that scared, broken thing you left behind.” “I know.” His voice was soft. “I can see that.” She wanted to hate him. Wanted to hold onto the anger, the betrayal, the way he had made her feel small. But standing here, looking at the man in front of her—the man with the tired eyes and the weight of the world on his shoulders—she couldn’t. Not entirely. “What do you want from me?” she asked. Evan didn’t hesitate. “Nothing. Just… to say I’m sorry. To say I wish things had been different. To say I hope, one day, you can find it in yourself to forgive me.” The words settled over her like a shroud. She had spent so long running, so long building walls, that she didn’t know how to let them down. Not even for this. Silas cleared his throat, breaking the tension. “You two can have your reunion later. Evan, we’ve got a situation that needs your attention.” Evan nodded, but his eyes never left Rory’s. “Can I see you again? Just to talk.” She should say no. Should walk away, leave the past where it belonged. But the truth was, she was tired. Tired of running. Tired of pretending she didn’t still wonder, sometimes, what might have been. “Maybe,” she said at last. “But not tonight.” Evan dipped his chin, accepting the small victory. “That’s enough.” Silas clapped him on the shoulder again. “Come on, old chap. Duty calls.” Evan stood, hesitating for just a second before he turned away. As he followed Silas toward the back of the bar, toward the hidden room behind the bookshelf, Rory watched him go. The man who had once been her everything. The man who had broken her. The man who, for better or worse, was still a part of her. She finished her pint in one long swallow, the ale burning its way down her throat. The bar was quiet now, the hum of conversation a distant murmur. She was alone again, but not really. Not anymore. Because the past had a way of catching up. And now, it had found her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.773
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.045
91.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1709
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1709
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"tension"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count2
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"practiced ease"
count1
9
word"glinting"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"eyebrow"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"tension"
3"scanned"
4"etched"
5"stomach"
6"flicked"
7"unreadable"
8"practiced ease"
9"glinting"
10"silence"
11"eyebrow"
12"familiar"
13"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences142
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1696
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1367
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory8
Silas9
Evan18
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.842
windowScore0.667
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if bracing against an unseen wind"
1"as if sensing her presence like a shift in the air, he turned"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1696
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences167
matches
0"knew that jacket"
1"shattered that safety"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean29.24
std22.02
cv0.753
sampleLengths
0102
163
26
363
43
51
656
718
849
916
1057
1126
123
1365
1466
1514
1610
1715
1872
197
2036
2138
2219
2313
2410
2514
267
2734
2814
299
3024
318
3215
3340
3433
3549
3631
3755
3847
3914
4029
4161
427
4331
4410
4549
468
4732
4831
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs244
matches
0"was seeing"
1"was breathing"
5.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences167
ratio0.048
matches
0"The usual suspects—regulars hunched over their drinks, the hum of low conversation, the clink of glass—filled the space, but her gaze snagged on a figure at the far end of the bar."
1"But it was the way he held himself—like a man who had learned, the hard way, that the world was not a kind place—that made her stomach twist."
2"His gaze locked onto hers, and for a heartbeat, the bar, the noise, the years—all of it—fell away."
3"“I’ll give you two a moment.” He clapped Evan on the shoulder—just once, a gesture that was both greeting and warning—before limping toward the back of the bar, his signet ring glinting under the muted light."
4"Close enough to smell the faint trace of his cologne—something woodsy, familiar."
5"A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—from a childhood accident, he remembered—peeked out from under the sleeve of her delivery jacket."
6"“Aren’t you?” She studied him—the set of his shoulders, the way his fingers tapped restlessly against the wood."
7"But standing here, looking at the man in front of her—the man with the tired eyes and the weight of the world on his shoulders—she couldn’t."
91.70% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1384
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.04263005780346821
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006502890173410405
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean10.16
std7.94
cv0.782
sampleLengths
030
125
215
332
425
51
62
735
86
912
1010
1113
124
1324
143
151
163
172
189
1914
2028
213
229
236
2411
2514
2611
2713
282
2914
3018
315
3219
335
3410
3514
3612
372
381
3929
4036
418
4217
4325
4412
454
4614
476
484
498
39.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.30538922155688625
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners51
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"Then, as if sensing her"
1"Dark, intense, the kind of"
ratio0.016
65.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences124
matches
0"She exhaled, rolling her neck"
1"She hadn’t seen him in"
2"It was the man beside"
3"She knew that jacket."
4"Her breath hitched."
5"She should leave."
6"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
7"he murmured, just loud enough"
8"His gaze locked onto hers,"
9"His eyes were the same."
10"His voice was rough, as"
11"He clapped Evan on the"
12"She stopped a few feet"
13"He trailed off, as if"
14"she supplied, trying for lightness"
15"It came out brittle."
16"She did look older."
17"Her black hair was still"
18"His jaw tightened"
19"His habit of collecting broken"
ratio0.387
64.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences124
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"The bar smelled of aged"
2"She exhaled, rolling her neck"
3"The usual suspects—regulars hunched over"
4"A man with grey-streaked auburn"
5"She hadn’t seen him in"
6"It was the man beside"
7"A leather jacket draped over"
8"She knew that jacket."
9"Her breath hitched."
10"Time had carved him into"
11"The years had etched lines"
12"She should leave."
13"Silas turned his head slightly,"
14"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
15"A slow, knowing smile tugged"
16"he murmured, just loud enough"
17"His gaze locked onto hers,"
18"His eyes were the same."
19"His voice was rough, as"
ratio0.79
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"Now, they were guarded, wary."
1"Because the past had a"
ratio0.016
38.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"A man with grey-streaked auburn hair, his back to her, sat with the quiet authority of someone who knew he didn’t need to prove himself."
1"Tall, broad-shouldered, his posture rigid as if bracing against an unseen wind."
2"Silas watched them both, his expression unreadable, then slid off his stool with the practiced ease of a man who knew how to make an exit without drawing attent…"
3"The years had taken the softness from her face, replaced it with something leaner, something that had learned to flinch before it fought."
4"Her black hair was still straight, still shoulder-length, but there was a tiredness in her bright blue eyes that hadn’t been there before."
5"The anger that had festered, then dulled into something quieter, something sadder."
6"That was a word for people who hadn’t spent years looking over their shoulder, waiting for the past to catch up with them."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He trailed, as if the words had caught in his throat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.091
84.4768%