| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he asked quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.386 | | leniency | 0.773 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |
| 91.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1709 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1709 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "tension" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "unreadable" | | 8 | "practiced ease" | | 9 | "glinting" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "eyebrow" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 142 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 167 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1696 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1367 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Evan" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Evan" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Silas | 9 | | Evan | 18 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.842 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 93.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if bracing against an unseen wind" | | 1 | "as if sensing her presence like a shift in the air, he turned" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1696 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that jacket" | | 1 | "shattered that safety" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 29.24 | | std | 22.02 | | cv | 0.753 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 102 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 65 | | 14 | 66 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 72 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 49 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 55 | | 38 | 47 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 61 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 49 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 244 | | matches | | 0 | "was seeing" | | 1 | "was breathing" |
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| 5.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 167 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual suspects—regulars hunched over their drinks, the hum of low conversation, the clink of glass—filled the space, but her gaze snagged on a figure at the far end of the bar." | | 1 | "But it was the way he held himself—like a man who had learned, the hard way, that the world was not a kind place—that made her stomach twist." | | 2 | "His gaze locked onto hers, and for a heartbeat, the bar, the noise, the years—all of it—fell away." | | 3 | "“I’ll give you two a moment.” He clapped Evan on the shoulder—just once, a gesture that was both greeting and warning—before limping toward the back of the bar, his signet ring glinting under the muted light." | | 4 | "Close enough to smell the faint trace of his cologne—something woodsy, familiar." | | 5 | "A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—from a childhood accident, he remembered—peeked out from under the sleeve of her delivery jacket." | | 6 | "“Aren’t you?” She studied him—the set of his shoulders, the way his fingers tapped restlessly against the wood." | | 7 | "But standing here, looking at the man in front of her—the man with the tired eyes and the weight of the world on his shoulders—she couldn’t." |
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| 91.70% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1384 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.04263005780346821 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006502890173410405 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 167 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 167 | | mean | 10.16 | | std | 7.94 | | cv | 0.782 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 39.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.30538922155688625 | | totalSentences | 167 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 53.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, as if sensing her" | | 1 | "Dark, intense, the kind of" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 65.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled, rolling her neck" | | 1 | "She hadn’t seen him in" | | 2 | "It was the man beside" | | 3 | "She knew that jacket." | | 4 | "Her breath hitched." | | 5 | "She should leave." | | 6 | "His hazel eyes, sharp as" | | 7 | "he murmured, just loud enough" | | 8 | "His gaze locked onto hers," | | 9 | "His eyes were the same." | | 10 | "His voice was rough, as" | | 11 | "He clapped Evan on the" | | 12 | "She stopped a few feet" | | 13 | "He trailed off, as if" | | 14 | "she supplied, trying for lightness" | | 15 | "It came out brittle." | | 16 | "She did look older." | | 17 | "Her black hair was still" | | 18 | "His jaw tightened" | | 19 | "His habit of collecting broken" |
| | ratio | 0.387 | |
| 64.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign of" | | 1 | "The bar smelled of aged" | | 2 | "She exhaled, rolling her neck" | | 3 | "The usual suspects—regulars hunched over" | | 4 | "A man with grey-streaked auburn" | | 5 | "She hadn’t seen him in" | | 6 | "It was the man beside" | | 7 | "A leather jacket draped over" | | 8 | "She knew that jacket." | | 9 | "Her breath hitched." | | 10 | "Time had carved him into" | | 11 | "The years had etched lines" | | 12 | "She should leave." | | 13 | "Silas turned his head slightly," | | 14 | "His hazel eyes, sharp as" | | 15 | "A slow, knowing smile tugged" | | 16 | "he murmured, just loud enough" | | 17 | "His gaze locked onto hers," | | 18 | "His eyes were the same." | | 19 | "His voice was rough, as" |
| | ratio | 0.79 | |
| 80.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, they were guarded, wary." | | 1 | "Because the past had a" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 38.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "A man with grey-streaked auburn hair, his back to her, sat with the quiet authority of someone who knew he didn’t need to prove himself." | | 1 | "Tall, broad-shouldered, his posture rigid as if bracing against an unseen wind." | | 2 | "Silas watched them both, his expression unreadable, then slid off his stool with the practiced ease of a man who knew how to make an exit without drawing attent…" | | 3 | "The years had taken the softness from her face, replaced it with something leaner, something that had learned to flinch before it fought." | | 4 | "Her black hair was still straight, still shoulder-length, but there was a tiredness in her bright blue eyes that hadn’t been there before." | | 5 | "The anger that had festered, then dulled into something quieter, something sadder." | | 6 | "That was a word for people who hadn’t spent years looking over their shoulder, waiting for the past to catch up with them." |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He trailed, as if the words had caught in his throat" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "She laughed (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.182 | | leniency | 0.364 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |