Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AV9V4V94B8ECCCZR0KJ3AP

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Duration:
20.6s
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$0.019212
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Mistral

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered once, twice, as Rory ducked beneath it, shaking rain from her jacket. The downpour had come out of nowhere, turning Soho’s streets into a slick, reflective mess. She wiped her palms on her jeans, the damp denim clinging unpleasantly, and pushed open the heavy wooden door. The familiar scent of aged whiskey and polished wood wrapped around her like an old, well-worn coat. The bar was quiet tonight—just a few regulars hunched over their drinks, the low hum of conversation barely rising above the crackle of the vinyl spinning in the corner. Silas was behind the counter, polishing a glass with the methodical precision of a man who had spent a lifetime perfecting the art of patience. His hazel eyes flicked up, catching hers in the dim light, and he gave her a small, knowing nod. No words needed. She’d been coming here long enough that her presence was as routine as the ticking of the clock behind the bar. She slid onto a stool, the wood smooth beneath her fingers, and sighed. “Rough night for deliveries.” Silas set the glass down and reached for a bottle of bourbon—the good stuff, the kind he only pulled out for her or the occasional high-paying client. “Eva call?” Rory smirked. “She’s convinced I’m wasting my life pedaling noodles across London.” “And what do you think?” She shrugged, watching the amber liquid swirl into her glass. “It’s honest work.” Silas chuckled, low and rough, like gravel underfoot. “Since when have you cared about honesty?” Before she could retort, the door swung open again, letting in a gust of cold, wet air. Rory didn’t look up at first—just another customer, another face in the endless parade of London’s night owls. But then she heard it: the unmistakable creak of a leather jacket, the faint, familiar jingle of keys in a pocket. Her fingers tightened around her glass. She knew that sound. Slowly, she turned. The years had not been kind to Daniel Mercer. Or perhaps they had been too kind, softening the sharp edges of the boy she’d once known into something weary, something resigned. His dark hair was threaded with silver now, his face lined in ways that spoke of sleepless nights and decisions that had carved themselves into his skin. He was thinner, too, his shoulders less broad, as if the weight of whatever he’d been carrying had slowly pressed him down. He froze in the doorway, his eyes adjusting to the dim light, and then—oh, then they found her. His breath hitched, just for a second, before he smoothed his expression into something neutral. But Rory saw it. The flicker of recognition. The ghost of a smile that never quite formed. “Rory,” he said, her name a quiet accusation on his lips. She lifted her glass, as if toasting the absurdity of it all. “Daniel.” He hesitated, then shut the door behind him and stepped further into the bar, his gaze flicking to Silas, who had gone very still, his fingers resting on the edge of the counter. The air in the room shifted, thickened, as if the very walls were holding their breath. Daniel approached slowly, as if she were a wild thing that might bolt at any sudden movement. He stopped a respectful distance away, his hands shoved deep into his pockets. “I didn’t know you were in London.” “Funny,” she said, swirling her drink. “I didn’t know you were, either.” A beat of silence. The vinyl skipped, the needle catching on a scratch in the record, and for a moment, the only sound was the rain tapping against the windows. Daniel’s jaw tightened. “I moved back a few years ago.” “After Prague,” Silas said, his voice low, almost to himself. Daniel’s gaze flicked to him, sharp and assessing. “You know this man?” Rory took a sip of her bourbon, letting the burn ground her. “Silas Blackwood. He owns the place.” Daniel’s eyes narrowed slightly, as if he were piecing together a puzzle only he could see. “Blackwood,” he repeated, as if the name meant something. Then, to Rory: “You’re working here?” She bristled. “I’m drinking here.” He exhaled through his nose, a sound that might have been a laugh if it weren’t so bitter. “Right. Of course.” He pulled out the stool beside her, the legs scraping against the floor, and sat. Up close, she could see the faint scar above his left eyebrow, a relic from some long-ago misadventure she didn’t know about. “You look… the same.” She arched a brow. “You don’t.” That got a real smile out of him, small and tired. “Yeah, well. Time’s a bastard like that.” Silas slid a glass toward Daniel without a word, pouring him two fingers of the same bourbon. Daniel glanced at it, then at Silas, then back at Rory. “You’ve got interesting friends.” “He’s my landlord,” she said. Daniel’s eyebrows lifted. “You live above a bar?” “It’s cheap.” “And convenient,” Silas added dryly. Daniel took a sip, his eyes never leaving Rory’s face. “I always figured you’d end up in some high-rise flat, arguing cases in front of a panel of judges. Your dad would’ve been proud.” Rory’s fingers twitched toward the small scar on her wrist, the old habit of tracing its curve when she was uneasy. “Funny how life doesn’t always go the way we think it will.” Daniel’s expression darkened. “Yeah. Funny.” The silence stretched between them, heavy with all the things they weren’t saying. Rory could feel the weight of it pressing against her chest, the unspoken questions, the regrets, the years that had passed like a river between who they’d been and who they were now. “What happened to you, Daniel?” she asked finally, the words slipping out before she could stop them. He stared into his glass, the amber liquid catching the light. “A lot of things. None of them good.” “That’s not an answer.” “It’s the only one I’ve got.” He swirled his drink, the ice clinking softly. “What about you? Last I heard, you were at Cardiff, pre-law, following in your father’s footsteps.” She laughed, a sharp, humorless sound. “Plans change.” “Or we change,” he countered. She didn’t answer. Instead, she took another sip, letting the bourbon warm her from the inside out. Daniel had always been the one with the grand plans, the big dreams. He’d been the one who talked about changing the world, about making a difference. She’d been the one who followed, who listened, who believed—at least for a while. “Do you ever think about it?” Daniel asked suddenly, his voice quieter now. “About… before?” Rory’s throat tightened. Before. When they were young and stupid and the world felt like it was theirs for the taking. Before Evan. Before the night everything had shattered. Before she’d run. “No,” she lied. Daniel’s gaze dropped to her wrist, to the scar she’d been unconsciously rubbing. His fingers twitched, as if he wanted to reach out, to trace the old mark himself. But he didn’t. “I do.” Silas cleared his throat, breaking the spell. “You two need another round?” Rory shook her head. “I should go. Early delivery tomorrow.” Daniel’s jaw clenched. “Right. Of course.” He downed the rest of his drink in one swift motion and stood, the stool scraping back with a sound like a gunshot in the quiet bar. “It was good seeing you, Rory.” She wanted to say something—anything—to bridge the chasm between them. But the words stuck in her throat, tangled in the years of silence, of distance, of things left unsaid. So she just nodded. “You too, Daniel.” He hesitated for a second, as if he wanted to say more. But then he turned and walked out, the door swinging shut behind him with a quiet click. The bar felt emptier without him, the air colder. Rory stared at her half-finished drink, the ice melting slowly, diluting the bourbon into something weaker, something less potent. Silas wiped down the counter, his movements deliberate. “Old friend?” She exhaled, long and slow. “Something like that.” “He’s MI6.” Rory’s head snapped up. “What?” Silas’ hazel eyes were unreadable. “Recognized the look. The way he carries himself. The way he didn’t answer your questions.” He tapped his signet ring against the counter, a quiet, rhythmic sound. “He’s been in the field a long time. That kind of life… it changes a man.” Rory’s stomach twisted. Daniel, a spy? It made a terrible kind of sense. The secrecy, the distance, the way he’d looked at her like she was a ghost from a past he’d tried to bury. “Why didn’t you say anything?” she asked. Silas shrugged. “Wasn’t my place.” She swallowed hard, the bourbon turning to lead in her gut. “He knew you. Or at least, he knew of you.” Silas’ lips quirked, just slightly. “Blackwood’s not an uncommon name. But if he’s who I think he is…” He trailed off, leaving the thought hanging between them. Rory rubbed her temples, suddenly exhausted. “I don’t want to know.” Silas studied her for a long moment, then nodded. “Fair enough.” He reached beneath the counter and pulled out a fresh glass, pouring her another drink. “But if you ever do…” She took the glass, the weight of it familiar in her hand. “Yeah. I know.” Outside, the rain had stopped, leaving the streets glistening under the flickering glow of the streetlamps. Rory stared at the door, half-expecting Daniel to walk back through it, to laugh and say it had all been some elaborate joke. But the door stayed shut. She finished her drink in one long pull, the burn sharp and clean, and stood. “Night, Silas.” He nodded. “Night, Rory.” She walked to the door, her footsteps echoing in the quiet bar. As she pushed it open, a gust of cold air rushed in, carrying with it the scent of wet pavement and the distant hum of the city. She stepped out into the night, the neon sign of The Raven’s Nest casting a green glow over the slick pavement. And for the first time in years, she felt the old restlessness stir inside her—the same feeling that had once sent her running from Cardiff, from Evan, from the life she’d been expected to live. The feeling that maybe, just maybe, there was more out there than the hand she’d been dealt. She shoved her hands into her pockets and started walking, the city lights blurring slightly in the damp air. Behind her, the door to The Raven’s Nest swung shut with a quiet, final click.
created_at"2026-10-07T09:32:21.027Z" 10/7/2026, 9:32:21 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Silas added dryly [dryly]"
1"she asked finally [finally]"
2"Daniel asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.274
leniency0.548
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.097
66.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1776
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count4
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count3
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1776
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count2
12
word"shattered"
count1
13
word"jaw clenched"
count1
14
word"unreadable"
count1
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count1
17
word"glistening"
count1
18
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"methodical"
3"flicked"
4"weight"
5"flicker"
6"silence"
7"eyebrow"
8"tracing"
9"could feel"
10"unspoken"
11"footsteps"
12"shattered"
13"jaw clenched"
14"unreadable"
15"rhythmic"
16"stomach"
17"glistening"
18"echoing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences121
matches
0"was uneasy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences121
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1768
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1448
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Daniel"
discoveredNames
Raven3
Nest3
Rory17
Soho1
London1
Daniel16
Mercer1
Silas12
Evan2
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Daniel"
4"Mercer"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.913
windowScore0.333
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if toasting the absurdity of it all"
1"felt like it was theirs for the taking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1768
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences167
matches
0"knew that sound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean24.56
std20.69
cv0.843
sampleLengths
072
197
217
329
412
55
613
715
862
94
103
1180
1250
1311
1413
1549
1637
1712
1840
1910
2012
2118
2231
235
2462
256
2618
2732
285
298
302
315
3234
3333
345
3546
3617
3719
384
3930
408
415
4258
4315
4432
453
4634
4712
4810
4939
96.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences121
matches
0"was threaded"
1"been expected"
2"been dealt"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs248
matches
0"were holding"
1"were piecing"
2"weren’t saying"
23.10% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences167
ratio0.042
matches
0"The bar was quiet tonight—just a few regulars hunched over their drinks, the low hum of conversation barely rising above the crackle of the vinyl spinning in the corner."
1"Silas set the glass down and reached for a bottle of bourbon—the good stuff, the kind he only pulled out for her or the occasional high-paying client."
2"Rory didn’t look up at first—just another customer, another face in the endless parade of London’s night owls."
3"He froze in the doorway, his eyes adjusting to the dim light, and then—oh, then they found her."
4"She’d been the one who followed, who listened, who believed—at least for a while."
5"She wanted to say something—anything—to bridge the chasm between them."
6"And for the first time in years, she felt the old restlessness stir inside her—the same feeling that had once sent her running from Cardiff, from Evan, from the life she’d been expected to live."
86.57% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1196
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"occasional high-paying client."
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.048494983277591976
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.01254180602006689
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean10.59
std7.92
cv0.749
sampleLengths
021
115
219
317
429
525
619
73
821
913
104
1127
122
132
1410
155
1610
173
188
197
2017
2118
2221
236
244
253
269
2722
2827
2922
3018
3115
324
334
349
3511
3612
371
3833
3916
4017
4113
427
436
446
454
4626
473
487
4910
45.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2754491017964072
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners46
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences111
matches
0"Slowly, she turned."
1"Then, to Rory:"
2"Instead, she took another sip,"
ratio0.027
68.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences111
matches
0"She wiped her palms on"
1"His hazel eyes flicked up,"
2"She’d been coming here long"
3"She slid onto a stool,"
4"She shrugged, watching the amber"
5"Her fingers tightened around her"
6"She knew that sound."
7"His dark hair was threaded"
8"He was thinner, too, his"
9"He froze in the doorway,"
10"His breath hitched, just for"
11"he said, her name a"
12"She lifted her glass, as"
13"He hesitated, then shut the"
14"He stopped a respectful distance"
15"she said, swirling her drink"
16"he repeated, as if the"
17"He exhaled through his nose,"
18"He pulled out the stool"
19"She arched a brow."
ratio0.378
54.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences111
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"The downpour had come out"
2"She wiped her palms on"
3"The familiar scent of aged"
4"The bar was quiet tonight—just"
5"Silas was behind the counter,"
6"His hazel eyes flicked up,"
7"She’d been coming here long"
8"She slid onto a stool,"
9"Silas set the glass down"
10"She shrugged, watching the amber"
11"Silas chuckled, low and rough,"
12"Rory didn’t look up at"
13"Her fingers tightened around her"
14"She knew that sound."
15"The years had not been"
16"His dark hair was threaded"
17"He was thinner, too, his"
18"He froze in the doorway,"
19"His breath hitched, just for"
ratio0.811
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences111
matches
0"Before she could retort, the"
1"When they were young and"
2"Before the night everything had"
3"Before she’d run."
ratio0.036
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Silas was behind the counter, polishing a glass with the methodical precision of a man who had spent a lifetime perfecting the art of patience."
1"His dark hair was threaded with silver now, his face lined in ways that spoke of sleepless nights and decisions that had carved themselves into his skin."
2"He was thinner, too, his shoulders less broad, as if the weight of whatever he’d been carrying had slowly pressed him down."
3"He hesitated, then shut the door behind him and stepped further into the bar, his gaze flicking to Silas, who had gone very still, his fingers resting on the ed…"
4"Rory could feel the weight of it pressing against her chest, the unspoken questions, the regrets, the years that had passed like a river between who they’d been…"
5"And for the first time in years, she felt the old restlessness stir inside her—the same feeling that had once sent her running from Cardiff, from Evan, from the…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he said, her name a quiet accusation on his lips"
1"Silas said, his voice low, almost to himself"
2"he repeated, as if the name meant something"
3"He pulled out, the legs scraping against the floor, and sat"
4"she asked finally, the words slipping out before she could stop them"
5"He swirled, the ice clinking softly"
6"Daniel asked suddenly, his voice quieter now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"Silas added dryly (add)"
2"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.161
leniency0.323
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.097
80.7055%