| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "beacon" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "searing" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "porcelain" | | 10 | "grave" | | 11 | "synchronized" | | 12 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.84% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1304 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.74% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1290 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 2 | | Aurora | 14 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | November | 1 | | Szechuan | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Cardiff | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Morse | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Carter | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Eva" | | 7 | "Silas" | | 8 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.957 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like packed ash" | | 1 | "something like it" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.067 | | wordCount | 1304 | | matches | | 0 | "not to Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress, nor to the flat above Silas’ bar, but to a coordinate" | | 1 | "not violent but wrong" | | 2 | "not with force but with terrible gentleness" | | 3 | "not the root-fingers from the ground, but something slender" |
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| 0.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "explain that she" | | 1 | "learned that running" | | 2 | "saw that its" | | 3 | "breathed, that pulsed" | | 4 | "gone, that time passed, that she" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 39.52 | | std | 31.43 | | cv | 0.795 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 110 | | 2 | 83 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 91 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 93 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 64 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 72 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 87 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 73 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 1 |
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| 99.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "been, drawn" | | 1 | "been gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 214 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come because the pendant had started screaming three days ago—a silent vibration that rattled her teeth, a heat that burned through the silver chain and her fleece jacket." | | 1 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of her messenger bag—still smelling of Szechuan pepper and cardboard—and stepped over the threshold." | | 2 | "The transition was not violent but wrong—a pressure change, like diving deep underwater, though her ears remained clear." | | 3 | "The path beneath her boots—trainers scuffed from ten thousand deliveries across London—should have been mud, but felt like packed ash." | | 4 | "It pulsed in a pattern—three quick beats, a pause, two slow throbs—Morse code for help me, or perhaps run." | | 5 | "The pendant’s warmth spiked, and Aurora felt the familiar vertigo of temporal displacement—the knowledge, cellular and certain, that she had stepped into a place where an hour might be a day, or a minute a decade." | | 6 | "It came from her left—wet, labored, the respiration of something with too many lungs or none at all." | | 7 | "Her breath clouded in the air, white and real, but the temperature was wrong; the Grove held the chill of deep winter despite the blooming flowers." | | 8 | "The sound didn’t carry; it died at her lips, swallowed by the velvet silence." | | 9 | "Not wilting—recoiling." | | 10 | "It moved like a marionette with cut strings—jerky, wrong, joints bending backward." | | 11 | "Her pre-law training failed her; this was not a contract to be negotiated, not a tort to be litigated." | | 12 | "She could smell it—petrichor and decay, the scent of a grave opened after rain." | | 13 | "Aurora burst back into the clearing—or what she thought was the clearing—and found herself standing before the standing stones again." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 119 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay heavy against Aurora’s" |
| | adverbCount | 2 | | adverbRatio | 0.01680672268907563 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 11.64 | | std | 9.64 | | cv | 0.828 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 53.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.375 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Only silence, dense and velvety," | | 1 | "Instead, she walked forward, her" | | 2 | "Only the dark between the" | | 3 | "Then behind her." | | 4 | "Always at the edge." |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 78.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the edge" | | 1 | "She had come because the" | | 2 | "She’d ignored it then, blaming" | | 3 | "She rubbed it absently, a" | | 4 | "They swayed without wind, their" | | 5 | "Her phone buzzed." | | 6 | "She fished it from her" | | 7 | "She’d been walking for two" | | 8 | "It pulsed in a pattern—three" | | 9 | "She looked up." | | 10 | "She should leave." | | 11 | "Her pre-law mind, trained to" | | 12 | "It came from her left—wet," | | 13 | "Her breath clouded in the" | | 14 | "It circled, a sound without" | | 15 | "Her voice cracked" | | 16 | "Their petals folded inward, one" | | 17 | "She looked down." | | 18 | "Her foot passed through it," | | 19 | "She screamed, the sound finally" |
| | ratio | 0.355 | |
| 62.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain of the Heartstone" | | 1 | "She stood at the edge" | | 2 | "The hour when even London’s" | | 3 | "She had come because the" | | 4 | "The delivery app on her" | | 5 | "She’d ignored it then, blaming" | | 6 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 8 | "She rubbed it absently, a" | | 9 | "The Grove swallowed her." | | 10 | "The transition was not violent" | | 11 | "The sounds of the city" | | 12 | "The path beneath her boots—trainers" | | 13 | "Wildflowers bloomed here year-round, a" | | 14 | "Bluebells and foxgloves and winter" | | 15 | "They swayed without wind, their" | | 16 | "Her phone buzzed." | | 17 | "She fished it from her" | | 18 | "She’d been walking for two" | | 19 | "The Heartstone flared." |
| | ratio | 0.796 | |
| 53.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 15.31% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain of the Heartstone Pendant lay heavy against Aurora’s sternum, the crimson stone pulsing in arrhythmic thumps that matched nothing in her chest." | | 1 | "She had come because the pendant had started screaming three days ago—a silent vibration that rattled her teeth, a heat that burned through the silver chain and…" | | 2 | "The standing stones marked the boundary, rough granite teeth jutting from the earth, draped in moss that glowed faintly silver in the moonlight." | | 3 | "On her left wrist, the crescent scar tingled, a phantom itch from the childhood accident that had nearly severed the tendon." | | 4 | "Bluebells and foxgloves and winter aconites crowded the undergrowth, their petals bruised purple and black, their centers weeping a sap that looked too much lik…" | | 5 | "They swayed without wind, their stems bending in a direction that made Aurora’s eyes water when she tried to track them." | | 6 | "Shadows detaching from the oak trunks, standing upright, watching with eyes that reflected no moonlight." | | 7 | "Aurora spun, her breath coming in ragged gasps, her logical mind shattering like porcelain." | | 8 | "The trees closed behind her, their branches weaving together to form a tunnel that breathed, that pulsed with the same rhythm as the Heartstone." | | 9 | "She ran faster, her lungs burning, the pendant hammering against her chest like a second heart demanding to be let out." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |