| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 91.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1168 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1168 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "wavering" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "glint" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "beacon" | | 15 | "roaring" | | 16 | "throbbed" | | 17 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 168 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 168 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 34 | | totalWords | 1161 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "Only if you believe in fairy tales, Rory." | | 1 | "You’re imagining things." | | 2 | "Just a trick of the light." | | 3 | "Not alone. Not alone. Not alone." | | 4 | "This is just a place. Just trees and flowers and—" | | 5 | "Run." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1157 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 7 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 6 | | Grove | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 | | December | 1 | | Like | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 94.44% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like one—sibilant, liquid" | | 1 | "It was as if the world had paused, holding its breath" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 31.38 | | std | 24.81 | | cv | 0.791 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 81 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "were walking" | | 1 | "were shifting" |
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| 40.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 168 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "The path twisted, and then—there it was." | | 1 | "The wildflowers were everywhere, a riot of color in the dimness—blues, purples, golds." | | 2 | "It was a word, or something like one—sibilant, liquid." | | 3 | "The symbols—were they moving?" | | 4 | "Just trees and flowers and—*" | | 5 | "A hand—cold, smooth—brushed her wrist." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 94 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 2 | | adverbRatio | 0.02127659574468085 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 168 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 168 | | mean | 6.91 | | std | 4.94 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 35.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.26785714285714285 | | totalSentences | 168 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "*Only if you believe in" | | 1 | "Then she froze." | | 2 | "Only the trees, the flowers," | | 3 | "Then she saw it." | | 4 | "Just the trunk of an" | | 5 | "*Just a trick of the" | | 6 | "Just grooves in the bark." | | 7 | "Just her mind playing tricks." | | 8 | "Definitely a rustle." | | 9 | "Then, a glint." | | 10 | "Just trees and flowers and—*" | | 11 | "Then she was through." | | 12 | "Just the wind in the" |
| | ratio | 0.095 | |
| 76.93% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated, her breath curling" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 2 | "It had led her here," | | 3 | "She stepped through, the gate" | | 4 | "They bloom year-round in the" | | 5 | "Its crimson glow was faint," | | 6 | "She moved forward, her trainers" | | 7 | "They formed a perfect circle," | | 8 | "They shouldn’t be blooming in" | | 9 | "She took a breath, steadying" | | 10 | "She’d come for answers." | | 11 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 12 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 13 | "It was a word, or" | | 14 | "It slithered past her ear," | | 15 | "She spun, heart hammering, but" | | 16 | "*You’re imagining things.*" | | 17 | "She forced herself forward, into" | | 18 | "She knelt, pressing her palm" | | 19 | "She whipped her head around," |
| | ratio | 0.358 | |
| 73.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 106 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate groaned as" | | 1 | "She hesitated, her breath curling" | | 2 | "The path ahead was a" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t be here." | | 4 | "It had led her here," | | 5 | "She stepped through, the gate" | | 6 | "The sound echoed, but the" | | 7 | "The trees loomed, their branches" | | 8 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 9 | "Wildflowers, Eva had said." | | 10 | "They bloom year-round in the" | | 11 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around the" | | 12 | "Its crimson glow was faint," | | 13 | "She moved forward, her trainers" | | 14 | "The path twisted, and then—there" | | 15 | "The standing stones." | | 16 | "They formed a perfect circle," | | 17 | "Moonlight spilled through the canopy," | | 18 | "The wildflowers were everywhere, a" | | 19 | "They shouldn’t be blooming in" |
| | ratio | 0.774 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The grass beneath her feet was impossibly soft, as if she were walking on velvet." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |