Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AVSYGN4FXCB279RE7R9WDB

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Duration:
21.2s
Cost:
$0.019152
Provider:
Mistral

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered once, twice, before settling into its steady glow as Rory pushed through the door. The familiar scent of aged wood and whiskey wrapped around her, thick as the London fog outside. She exhaled, shaking rain from her black hair, and scanned the dimly lit bar. The walls were still plastered with the same yellowed maps and black-and-white photographs—Silas’ collection of half-remembered histories. A few regulars hunched over their drinks, their murmurs blending with the low hum of jazz from the corner speakers. She slid onto a stool near the end of the bar, where the light was weakest, and tapped her fingers against the polished mahogany. Silas would be in the back, probably counting stock or pretending to. The man had a sixth sense for when she needed a drink before she even asked. The door swung open again, letting in a gust of cold air. Rory didn’t look up—until the scent of bergamot and sandalwood cut through the usual stale beer and citrus. Her fingers stilled. *No. It couldn’t be.* But the voice that followed was unmistakable, smooth as aged bourbon, with that same dry edge. “Silas, you old bastard, I’d ask if you’ve missed me, but we both know you haven’t.” Rory’s pulse spiked. She kept her back to the door, her breath shallow. *Evan.* The name slithered through her mind before she could stop it. Not *Evan*, not anymore. *Evan was the past.* But the voice was his, and the way it carried—confident, amused—was the same. “Missed you like a migraine,” Silas replied, his voice warm but laced with something sharper. “What brings you slumming, Daniel?” *Daniel.* Of course. Daniel Mercer. Evan’s older brother. The one who’d always been there, lurking in the background of her memories like a shadow she couldn’t shake. She exhaled, her shoulders loosening. Not Evan. Just Daniel. She turned slowly, as if moving too fast might shatter the moment. He was leaning against the bar, his dark overcoat dusted with rain, one hand in his pocket. The years had carved lines into his face—deep grooves around his mouth, a silver thread through his temples that hadn’t been there before. His jaw was sharper, his frame leaner, as if life had whittled him down to the essentials. But his eyes were the same: sharp, assessing, the color of storm clouds over the Bristol Channel. Their gazes locked. For a heartbeat, neither moved. Then Daniel’s expression shifted—something flickered behind his eyes, a spark of recognition. “Rory?” Her name on his lips was a question, a challenge. She hadn’t heard him say it in… God, how long? Five years? Six? The last time had been at Evan’s funeral, where she’d stood stiff and silent, her hand bandaged from the broken glass she’d punched through the night she’d learned Evan was dead. Daniel had tried to talk to her then. She’d walked away. Now, she lifted her chin. “Daniel.” He pushed off the bar, his movements deliberate, like a man stepping through a minefield. “Christ. I didn’t know you were in London.” “Neither did I, until a few years ago.” She kept her voice light, but her fingers curled into her palms. The scar on her left wrist itched. Silas appeared from the back, his limp more pronounced in the damp weather, his signet ring glinting as he wiped his hands on a towel. He took one look at the two of them and sighed. “Well. This is a right mess.” Daniel’s mouth quirked. “Still the charmer, Silas.” “And you’re still an arse.” Silas set a glass down in front of Rory without a word, her usual—whiskey, neat. Then he turned to Daniel. “What’ll it be?” “Same as always.” Silas nodded and reached for the Macallan. Rory watched the amber liquid splash into the glass, the way the light caught the edges. She took a sip, letting the burn ground her. Daniel picked up his drink but didn’t raise it. He was staring at her, really looking now. At the dark circles under her eyes, the way her hair had grown out from the pixie cut she’d had at twenty. At the scar on her wrist, pale against her skin. “You look… different,” he said. She laughed, a short, brittle sound. “You mean I don’t look like a girl who just ran away from her own life?” His jaw tightened. “That’s not what I meant.” “Then what did you mean?” He hesitated. “You look older.” “So do you.” A beat of silence. The jazz track shifted to something slower, a saxophone mourning into the quiet. Daniel took a drink, his throat working. “I heard about your dad. I’m sorry.” Rory’s chest tightened. Brendan Carter had died two years ago, a heart attack in his study, surrounded by case files. She’d been in London by then, and she hadn’t gone back for the funeral. Another thing she couldn’t face. “Thanks,” she said, because what else was there to say? Daniel set his glass down. “And your mum?” “Retired. Moved to Tenby.” Rory traced a finger along the rim of her glass. “She writes me letters. I don’t always answer them.” He nodded, as if that made sense. Maybe it did. Maybe to him, it was just another piece of the puzzle that was her life now—scattered, half-finished. “What about you?” she asked. “Still playing the hero?” His smile was thin. “Someone’s got to.” She remembered him like that—always the one to step in, to fix things. Even when the things that needed fixing were Evan’s messes. Even when the mess was her. Silas slid a bowl of peanuts between them, as if food could bridge the gap. Rory picked one out, rolled it between her fingers. “How long are you in town?” “Couple of days. Business.” “MI6 still sending you to the interesting places?” His eyes flicked to Silas, then back to her. “Something like that.” She wondered if he was lying. Daniel had always been good at it. Not like Evan, who’d lied with his fists and his silence. Daniel lied with words, with half-truths, with the things he didn’t say. “You ever think about Cardiff?” he asked suddenly. The question hit her like a punch to the sternum. She took a long sip of whiskey, let it sit on her tongue. “No.” “Liar.” She met his gaze. “What do you want me to say, Daniel? That I miss it? That I miss *him*?” His expression darkened. “I wasn’t going to ask that.” “Good. Because the answer’s no.” He looked away, his fingers tightening around his glass. “He wouldn’t have wanted this. For you to just… disappear.” “He didn’t get a say.” “No,” he said quietly. “I suppose he didn’t.” The air between them was thick, charged with all the things they weren’t saying. *I’m sorry. I should’ve done more. I should’ve stopped him. I should’ve stopped you.* But those were words for ghosts, and Evan was long gone. Silas broke the silence, his voice gruff. “You two going to sit here glaring at each other all night, or are you going to talk like civilized people?” Rory shot him a look. He shrugged, unfazed. Daniel exhaled, long and slow. “I’m not here to fight, Rory.” “Then why *are* you here?” He hesitated, then reached into his coat. For a second, her body tensed—old instincts, old fears. But all he pulled out was a worn leather wallet. He slid a photograph across the bar. It was a picture of Evan, younger than she remembered. Maybe eighteen, nineteen. He was grinning, his arm slung around Daniel’s shoulders, both of them sunburnt and squinting into the camera. Behind them, the sea stretched out, endless and bright. Rory’s throat closed. She hadn’t seen a photo of Evan in years. Hadn’t *wanted* to. “Found it in Mum’s things,” Daniel said. “Thought you might… I don’t know. Want it.” She didn’t touch it. “Why?” “Because he loved you.” The words hung there, raw and ugly. She wanted to laugh. She wanted to scream. Evan hadn’t loved her. He’d loved the idea of her, maybe. Or he’d loved the way she made him feel—needed, wanted, in control. But love? Love didn’t leave bruises. Love didn’t lock doors. “He had a funny way of showing it,” she said. Daniel’s voice was low. “He was sick, Rory.” “So was I. For a long time after.” Silas made a noise in his throat, a warning. But Daniel didn’t back down. “I’m not making excuses for him. But he wasn’t… himself, at the end.” “No,” she agreed. “He wasn’t.” She finally picked up the photograph, her fingers trembling slightly. Evan’s face was so *alive* in it. So unbroken. She remembered that day, vaguely. A trip to Barry Island, the three of them—her, Evan, Daniel. Evan had been different then. Softer. Kinder. Or maybe she’d just been too young to see the cracks. “You kept this,” she said, not looking up. “All these years.” “Some things are worth keeping.” She set the photo down, slid it back toward him. “I can’t.” He didn’t take it. “You don’t have to decide now.” Silas cleared his throat. “I’ve got a room upstairs. You’re both welcome to it. Or you can keep sitting here, making my customers uncomfortable with your tragic reunions.” Rory almost smiled. Almost. Daniel drained his whiskey, set the glass down. “I should go.” She nodded, because what else was there? He stood, buttoned his coat. Then he paused, as if there was something else he wanted to say. But the moment passed. “It was good to see you, Rory,” he said finally. She didn’t answer. She couldn’t. He turned toward the door, then stopped again. “For what it’s worth… I’m glad you’re okay.” She watched him walk out, the door swinging shut behind him. The neon sign flickered once more, as if the bar itself was breathing. Silas sighed, picked up the photograph, and tucked it behind the bar. “You want another?” Rory stared at her empty glass. The whiskey had done its job—her edges were softer, the weight in her chest a little lighter. But the ghost of Evan, of Daniel, of the girl she’d been, still lingered. “Yeah,” she said. “I do.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he asked suddenly [suddenly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.092
88.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1720
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"suddenly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1720
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flickered"
count3
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"scanned"
3"pulse"
4"glinting"
5"silence"
6"traced"
7"flicked"
8"charged"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a spark of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences162
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences212
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords29
totalWords1707
ratio0.017
matches
0"No. It couldn’t be."
1"Evan."
2"Evan"
3"Evan was the past."
4"Daniel."
5"him"
6"I’m sorry. I should’ve done more. I should’ve stopped him. I should’ve stopped you."
7"are"
8"wanted"
9"alive"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1341
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Daniel"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory12
London2
Mercer1
Evan17
Daniel20
Bristol1
Channel1
God1
Macallan1
Carter1
Silas11
Barry1
Island1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Mercer"
4"Evan"
5"Daniel"
6"Carter"
7"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Bristol"
2"God"
3"Barry"
4"Island"
globalScore0.754
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1707
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences212
matches
0"remembered that day"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean20.32
std17.52
cv0.862
sampleLengths
091
152
233
34
432
546
620
736
812
974
103
1118
1265
136
1423
1527
1642
177
1828
193
2032
2149
225
2322
248
255
265
273
2831
2939
3010
318
3223
3327
349
357
3629
3730
384
398
4012
4136
428
4324
441
4520
469
475
4819
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
67.72% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs252
matches
0"was staring"
1"was lying"
2"weren’t saying"
3"was grinning"
4"was breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences212
ratio0.057
matches
0"The walls were still plastered with the same yellowed maps and black-and-white photographs—Silas’ collection of half-remembered histories."
1"Rory didn’t look up—until the scent of bergamot and sandalwood cut through the usual stale beer and citrus."
2"*Evan was the past.* But the voice was his, and the way it carried—confident, amused—was the same."
3"The years had carved lines into his face—deep grooves around his mouth, a silver thread through his temples that hadn’t been there before."
4"Then Daniel’s expression shifted—something flickered behind his eyes, a spark of recognition."
5"“And you’re still an arse.” Silas set a glass down in front of Rory without a word, her usual—whiskey, neat."
6"Maybe to him, it was just another piece of the puzzle that was her life now—scattered, half-finished."
7"She remembered him like that—always the one to step in, to fix things."
8"For a second, her body tensed—old instincts, old fears."
9"Or he’d loved the way she made him feel—needed, wanted, in control."
10"A trip to Barry Island, the three of them—her, Evan, Daniel."
11"The whiskey had done its job—her edges were softer, the weight in her chest a little lighter."
98.31% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount310
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.041935483870967745
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0032258064516129032
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences212
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences212
mean8.05
std5.78
cv0.718
sampleLengths
023
117
214
317
420
524
612
716
812
918
103
111
123
1316
1416
153
1610
1712
184
1917
2015
215
223
232
243
2519
265
272
282
2912
3017
3123
3217
3317
343
355
3612
371
3810
397
403
412
421
4331
448
453
465
471
4815
498
43.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.29245283018867924
totalSentences212
uniqueOpeners62
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences142
matches
0"Then Daniel’s expression shifted—something flickered"
1"Then he turned to Daniel."
2"Maybe it did."
3"Maybe to him, it was"
4"Maybe eighteen, nineteen."
5"Then he paused, as if"
ratio0.042
59.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences142
matches
0"She exhaled, shaking rain from"
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"Her fingers stilled."
3"It couldn’t be.*"
4"She kept her back to"
5"She exhaled, her shoulders loosening."
6"She turned slowly, as if"
7"He was leaning against the"
8"His jaw was sharper, his"
9"Their gazes locked."
10"Her name on his lips"
11"She hadn’t heard him say"
12"She’d walked away."
13"He pushed off the bar,"
14"She kept her voice light,"
15"He took one look at"
16"She took a sip, letting"
17"He was staring at her,"
18"She laughed, a short, brittle"
19"His jaw tightened."
ratio0.401
51.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences142
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"The familiar scent of aged"
2"She exhaled, shaking rain from"
3"The walls were still plastered"
4"She slid onto a stool"
5"Silas would be in the"
6"The man had a sixth"
7"The door swung open again,"
8"Rory didn’t look up—until the"
9"Her fingers stilled."
10"It couldn’t be.*"
11"Rory’s pulse spiked."
12"She kept her back to"
13"*Evan.* The name slithered through"
14"*Evan was the past.* But"
15"Silas replied, his voice warm"
16"*Daniel.* Of course."
17"Evan’s older brother."
18"The one who’d always been"
19"She exhaled, her shoulders loosening."
ratio0.817
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences142
matches
0"Now, she lifted her chin."
1"Even when the things that"
2"Even when the mess was"
ratio0.021
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"But the voice that followed was unmistakable, smooth as aged bourbon, with that same dry edge."
1"Maybe to him, it was just another piece of the puzzle that was her life now—scattered, half-finished."
2"Not like Evan, who’d lied with his fists and his silence."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Silas replied, his voice warm but laced with something sharper"
1"She kept, but her fingers curled into her palms"
2"Silas set, her usual—whiskey, neat"
3"she said, not looking up"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.369
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.031
84.4918%