| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" | | 1 | "the voice said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 81.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 807 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 75.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 807 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.77% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 807 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Come before the bells stop." | | 1 | "A portal," | | 2 | "Or near one." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 8 | | wordCount | 782 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 3 | | Night | 1 | | Bus | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Kingston | 1 | | Road | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Kingston" | | 2 | "Road" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like ten minutes and checked again" | | 1 | "not quite see into" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 807 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 29.89 | | std | 21.88 | | cv | 0.732 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 5 |
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| 76.97% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "been called" | | 1 | "was carpeted" | | 2 | "been interrupted" | | 3 | "was tired" | | 4 | "been seven" |
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| 90.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was walking" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 36 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.027777777777777776 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 12.42 | | std | 11.57 | | cv | 0.932 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 66.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.453125 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she'd pulled on her" | | 1 | "Then a second." | | 2 | "Then a ring of them," | | 3 | "Somewhere ahead a bird began" | | 4 | "Then, from the trees behind" |
| | ratio | 0.088 | |
| 72.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "She had stopped taking it" | | 1 | "She told herself the thought" | | 2 | "She walked away from it" | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "She walked for what felt" | | 5 | "she said aloud" | | 6 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 7 | "Their scent was thick and" | | 8 | "She saw the first stone" | | 9 | "She turned her head slowly." | | 10 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 11 | "She began walking toward the" | | 12 | "It was her own voice." | | 13 | "It was the exact way" | | 14 | "She did not turn around." | | 15 | "Her wrist throbbed along the" | | 16 | "Her hand had closed into" | | 17 | "She opened it, one finger" | | 18 | "She had never been here" | | 19 | "She was certain of that." |
| | ratio | 0.368 | |
| 91.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The message had arrived at" | | 1 | "The pendant lay against her" | | 2 | "She had stopped taking it" | | 3 | "Nobody had ever told her" | | 4 | "Tonight it was warm." | | 5 | "*A portal,* she thought." | | 6 | "She told herself the thought" | | 7 | "The grass inside was too" | | 8 | "Traffic from the A3 had" | | 9 | "She walked away from it" | | 10 | "She checked her phone." | | 11 | "The time read 11:52." | | 12 | "She walked for what felt" | | 13 | "she said aloud" | | 14 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 15 | "The trees grew closer together." | | 16 | "Their scent was thick and" | | 17 | "Rory's throat tightened around it." | | 18 | "She saw the first stone" | | 19 | "The pendant pulsed once against" |
| | ratio | 0.737 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the bus was a" | | 1 | "*Or near one.*" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She told herself the thought was absurd, and then she climbed the fence where the wire was loose, because she was twenty-five and had been called cool-headed by…" | | 1 | "Between them the ground was carpeted in flowers that had no business blooming in late autumn: primroses pale as candle wax, clusters of blue bells, clover heads…" | | 2 | "Somewhere ahead a bird began to sing, a long liquid run of notes, and then stopped mid-phrase, as though it had been interrupted." | | 3 | "Behind her, very close, the flowers began to bend, one after another, as if something was walking slowly through them, unhurried, in no particular rush to reach…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |