| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 84.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1576 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.93% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1576 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "treacherous" | | 3 | "measured" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "pristine" | | 9 | "velvet" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 62 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 50 | | totalWords | 1566 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Stay cool," | | 1 | "Observe. Assess. Don't panic." | | 2 | "Midnight. Isolde’s grove. Bring the stone if you want to know who sent it." | | 3 | "Snap." | | 4 | "It only does that near a portal," | | 5 | "Not a Fae boundary. A Hel portal." | | 6 | "Think," | | 7 | "The layout hasn't changed. It's an illusion. Fae glamour plays with sight and sound." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1548 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Rory | 15 | | Richmond | 4 | | Park | 4 | | London | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | November | 3 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 4 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Evan | 2 | | Silas | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 3 | | Isolde | 2 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Earth" |
| | places | | 0 | "Yu-Fei" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Tuesday" | | 5 | "November" | | 6 | "Fae" | | 7 | "Grove" | | 8 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like blots of ink in the grass" | | 1 | "looked like brambles or not" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1566 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 33.32 | | std | 22.28 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 79 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 74 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 64 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 64 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 56 | | 42 | 59 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 50 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 43 |
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| 96.19% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was pressed" | | 3 | "being dragged" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 233 | | matches | | 0 | "was rubbing" | | 1 | "were speaking" | | 2 | "was heating" | | 3 | "was pulsing" | | 4 | "were swaying" | | 5 | "was coming" | | 6 | "was burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones—petrified wood turned hard and grey as granite over centuries—rose on either side of her like jagged teeth." | | 1 | "It didn’t fade; it simply severed, as if someone had taken a pair of shears to the fabric of the night." | | 2 | "Rory reached up with her left hand, her thumb automatically finding the small, crescent-shaped scar on her right wrist—no, she was rubbing her left wrist with her right thumb, an old nervous habit from her days in Cardiff when her father would cross-examine her over the dinner table, and later, when Evan’s keys would rattle in the front lock." | | 3 | "Not dead—the little backlight still worked when she pressed the side button, glowing a sickly green—but the numbers themselves were gone." | | 4 | "The two realms didn't mix; the Fae guarded their pockets of Earth with vicious territoriality." | | 5 | "They were swaying now—violently, as if something large had just barrelled through them—though the bluebells two feet to the left remained carved out of stone." | | 6 | "Evan had taught her that nobody was coming; she had gotten herself out of Cardiff, and she would get herself out of here." | | 7 | "Whatever had made the tracks didn't have feet; the grass was pressed down in a wide, continuous trough, as if a heavy sack of wet sand were being dragged across the meadow." | | 8 | "Right beside her left ear—so close she felt the displacement of stagnant air against her cheek—something exhaled." | | 9 | "Wait—not empty." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1569 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "faint, rhythmic inner glow" | | 2 | "ancient, grey-petrified oak" |
| | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.032504780114722756 | | lyAdverbCount | 27 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017208413001912046 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 13.38 | | std | 9.63 | | cv | 0.719 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 72.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.452991452991453 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, the thumbnail-sized crimson gem" | | 1 | "Slowly, keeping her breathing shallow," | | 2 | "Then, just at the very" | | 3 | "Instead, a trail of flattened," |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She wished she had it" | | 1 | "She wished she had anything" | | 2 | "It didn’t fade; it simply" | | 3 | "She swept the beam of" | | 4 | "Her straight black hair stirred" | | 5 | "She had come here because" | | 6 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 7 | "She checked her cheap digital" | | 8 | "She took ten measured paces" | | 9 | "It was the sharp crack" | | 10 | "It wasn't a deer." | | 11 | "Her breastbone grew suddenly warm." | | 12 | "She pulled the silver chain" | | 13 | "*It only does that near" | | 14 | "It was a laugh, high" | | 15 | "They were swaying now—violently, as" | | 16 | "She backed up a step," | | 17 | "Her mind raced, cataloguing options," | | 18 | "She glanced over her shoulder" | | 19 | "She shone the light directly" |
| | ratio | 0.255 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The last delivery bag of" | | 1 | "She wished she had it" | | 2 | "She wished she had anything" | | 3 | "Rory paused between two of" | | 4 | "The ancient oak standing stones—petrified" | | 5 | "The moment she stepped past" | | 6 | "It didn’t fade; it simply" | | 7 | "She swept the beam of" | | 8 | "The Fae Grove was wide," | | 9 | "Bluebells, foxgloves, and blood-red poppies" | | 10 | "Her straight black hair stirred" | | 11 | "That was the first wrong" | | 12 | "Rory reached up with her" | | 13 | "She had come here because" | | 14 | "Tonight, it felt heavy, like" | | 15 | "Rory said aloud" | | 16 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 17 | "The air swallowed the syllables" | | 18 | "She checked her cheap digital" | | 19 | "The LCD screen was blank." |
| | ratio | 0.698 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "If she ran straight back" | | 1 | "If she couldn't trust her" | | 2 | "If she walked ten paces" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 74.36% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove was wide, a bowl of lush grass carpeted in wildflowers that had no business blooming in late autumn." | | 1 | "Her straight black hair stirred against her collarbones, lifted by a wind that didn't touch the flowers at her feet." | | 2 | "The air swallowed the syllables instantly, deadening the sound as if she were speaking inside a padded box." | | 3 | "They were swaying now—violently, as if something large had just barrelled through them—though the bluebells two feet to the left remained carved out of stone." | | 4 | "Whatever had made the tracks didn't have feet; the grass was pressed down in a wide, continuous trough, as if a heavy sack of wet sand were being dragged across…" | | 5 | "A vertical seam of darkness, darker than the night around it, hung suspended above the wildflowers, weeping a thin, oily vapour that curled into the grass and t…" | | 6 | "Rory wrapped her fingers tightly around the burning gem, hiding its glow inside her fist, and began to crawl backward through the unmoving flowers, guided only …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |