| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 90.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1542 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1542 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 21 | | totalWords | 1534 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Right," | | 1 | "Get the soil sample, leave the silver coin by the center root, and get out." | | 2 | "Thump. Thump." | | 3 | "Time to leave," |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1534 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 0.85 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Rory | 13 | | October | 2 | | London | 3 | | Otherwise | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Thursday | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 3 | | Hel | 6 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Grove | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Tuesday" | | 4 | "Golden" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Fae" | | 7 | "Hel" | | 8 | "Fae-touched" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 93.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a woven ceiling of dark, fibr" | | 1 | "quite work right" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1534 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 34.09 | | std | 21.45 | | cv | 0.629 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 55 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 79 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 60 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 67 | | 35 | 81 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 15 |
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| 98.88% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "was compromised" | | 1 | "being drawn" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 14 | | totalVerbs | 241 | | matches | | 0 | "was radiating" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "were trembling" | | 3 | "was bleeding" | | 4 | "was getting" | | 5 | "wasn't walking" | | 6 | "was skipping" | | 7 | "was burning" | | 8 | "was warping" | | 9 | "were closing" | | 10 | "was flattening" | | 11 | "were shuddering" | | 12 | "was tumbling" | | 13 | "was ticking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "The canopy above didn't look like branches anymore; it looked like a woven ceiling of dark, fibrous bone." | | 1 | "She had been to Isolde’s grove twice before, always with someone else, and it had always hummed with a low, drowsy vitality—cricket song, the rustle of unseen wings, the trickle of a hidden spring." | | 2 | "Her father, the barrister, had taught her how to hold a silence until the other person broke, and Evan had taught her—the hard way—how to stay still when someone was looking for a reason to strike." | | 3 | "A long, rattling inhalation that went on far too long—five seconds, ten, fifteen—without an exhale." | | 4 | "Another wet snap echoed, right behind her left ear—inside the solid oak stone she was pressed against." | | 5 | "She didn't run toward the outer stones; they were closing in, shrinking the clearing like a tightening noose." | | 6 | "She saw the suggestion of limbs in the periphery—too many joints, bending backward, twitching in the dark whenever she didn't look directly at them." | | 7 | "Something brushed the fabric of her jacket—not grabbing, just testing the texture." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1551 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "against rough, ancient bark." |
| | adverbCount | 61 | | adverbRatio | 0.039329464861379754 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009671179883945842 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 13.95 | | std | 8.85 | | cv | 0.635 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 61.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4090909090909091 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wildflowers, usually swaying" | | 1 | "Just a cluster of white" | | 2 | "Simultaneously, to her right, the" | | 3 | "Then another patch flattened, three" | | 4 | "Instead, she pulled the Heartstone" | | 5 | "Just behind her shoulder, the" | | 6 | "Then she was tumbling onto" |
| | ratio | 0.069 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled of bruised bluebells" | | 1 | "She checked her wristwatch." | | 2 | "She had been to Isolde’s" | | 3 | "It pressed against her eardrums" | | 4 | "Her fingers brushed the silver" | | 5 | "It was radiating a distinct," | | 6 | "It only did that near" | | 7 | "It had been wet, heavy," | | 8 | "She waited for a count" | | 9 | "Her father, the barrister, had" | | 10 | "She didn't breathe through her" | | 11 | "She didn't shift her weight." | | 12 | "She took a slow step" | | 13 | "Her heel came down on" | | 14 | "She didn't look back." | | 15 | "She reached behind her with" | | 16 | "Her heart gave a hard" | | 17 | "It was a whisper, dry" | | 18 | "She snapped her gaze toward" | | 19 | "It wasn't walking." |
| | ratio | 0.255 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "The autumn air of Richmond" | | 1 | "Here, inside the boundary, the" | | 2 | "It smelled of bruised bluebells" | | 3 | "Rory stopped, her boots sinking" | | 4 | "The canopy above didn't look" | | 5 | "She checked her wristwatch." | | 6 | "The hands read 11:42 PM." | | 7 | "Something was wrong, though." | | 8 | "She had been to Isolde’s" | | 9 | "Tonight, the silence was absolute." | | 10 | "It pressed against her eardrums" | | 11 | "Rory reached up with her" | | 12 | "Her fingers brushed the silver" | | 13 | "It was radiating a distinct," | | 14 | "Rory hooked a finger under" | | 15 | "The deep crimson gem held" | | 16 | "It only did that near" | | 17 | "A twig snapped to her" | | 18 | "Rory dropped the pendant back" | | 19 | "The sound hadn't been the" |
| | ratio | 0.657 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "If a Hel tear was" | | 1 | "Now, the stones were touching," | | 2 | "If the northern stones had" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 42.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "One pace back, the October wind had been biting through her jacket, carrying the distant hum of London traffic and the smell of damp, rotting leaves." | | 1 | "Rory stopped, her boots sinking into plush grass that had no business growing this late in the year." | | 2 | "Even the wildflowers, usually swaying in some phantom Fae breeze, stood completely rigid, as if cast in wax." | | 3 | "Rory reached up with her left hand, her thumb automatically finding the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, rubbing the raised skin the way she always did …" | | 4 | "The deep crimson gem held a faint inner glow that bled through her fingers, casting the straight, black strands of her hair in a dull red light." | | 5 | "Yet the flowers nearest the stone were trembling, their bells nodding frantically in the dead air, as though something long and trailing had just brushed past t…" | | 6 | "Simultaneously, to her right, the grass flattened in a wide, circular patch, as if an immense weight had just dropped from the sky without making a sound." | | 7 | "Instead, she pulled the Heartstone Pendant out of her shirt, wrapping her fist around the silver chain and holding the crimson gem out in front of her like a do…" | | 8 | "Shadows stretched across the ash-gray flowers from angles that made no sense, converging on her boots." | | 9 | "Something lunged in the dark behind her, hitting the interior of the stones with a dull, meaty thud that shook the earth." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |