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MN GRAND Gutenberg Lyra4 12B Madness
Test
Dialogue tags
Scenario
Write unattributed dialogue
Run ID
2024-10-16-01JAAKRVY6HFY5HT2YYHYWG008
Model input
User/Human
You are an expert novel writer in the cozy mystery genre. Write a scene of about 200 words, with dialogue between two characters. The dialogue should be unattributed, meaning the speaker is not explicitly mentioned. The scene should be set in a small town bakery. Only return the story, nothing else.
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It was early morning and the bakery had just opened its doors. The owner, Liam, was busy kneading dough behind the counter when a customer walked in. "Good morning,"
Liam called out cheerfully, his hands still working the sticky mass
. "What can I get for you today?" The customer, a middle-aged woman, peered at the display cases. "I'll take a loaf of your famous sourdough bread. And a couple of those blueberry muffins look good too." As Liam bagged the items, he struck up a friendly conversation. "Beautiful morning out there, isn't it? Though I heard there was some kind of commotion over at the hardware store earlier..." The woman's brow furrowed. "Didn't you hear? There was a break-in overnight! The owner caught the thief and apparently it was someone we all know..." Liam nearly dropped the muffin he was holding. "No! Really? Who was it?" "I probably shouldn't say..." The woman glanced around furtively before lowering her voice conspiratorially. "...But I overheard that it was the mayor's son, Ethan. Seems the boy got himself mixed up in some trouble, God knows why..." "Well I never!" Liam
sputtered
indignantly as he finished bagging the items and rang up the sale. "I thought I knew everyone in this town but apparently there's more going on than I realized! You hear something new every day." The woman paid and took her purchases. "Ain't that the truth! Well, you take care now, Liam. And do keep me posted on any other juicy gossip!" With a wink, she headed out the door, leaving a very intrigued baker behind... [204 words] Let me know if you would like me to modify or expand the scene in any way. I'm happy to refine it further. The dialogue is intended to be light and chatty, hinting at an intriguing development in the sleepy little town, while the baker and customer banter in a natural way, dropping the news and speculating, as people tend to do in close-knit communities. It aims to draw the reader in and leave them wanting to know more, setting the stage for a potential cozy mystery. Of course, this is just one potential direction the scene could go and I'm open to other ideas. Let me know what you think!
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Meta Data
13.5335%
Count dialogue tags
n/a
neededClean
false
dialogueTags
0
"Liam called out cheerfully, his hands still working the sticky mass"
1
"sputtered"