Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADVW9WCGRM2VSCWZQDBR

Run Details

Duration:
7.7s
Cost:
$0.000350
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory's breath misted in the chilly night air as she trudged through the woods, heart pounding. The glow of her phone screen illuminated just enough to see the path ahead, but not nearly enough to ease the creeping sense of wrongness that had dogged her from the moment she stepped into these godforsaken woods. The directions had been crystal clear – follow the path to the standing stones, turn left, and keep going until you reach a grove with wildflowers that bloom year round. Piece of piss, really. Not even halfway in and already Rory wanted to be anywhere but here. But there was work to be done – Hel portals to close, and Riven to contain. Which meant easing the pendant from around her neck against the chill and pushing onward into the darkness. A twig snapped behind her and Rory froze, gripping the pendant tight. Whispering a string of ABBA curse words under her breath, she gingerly turned. Nothing. Just more trees, ninny, have a gander around. Which she did, slow as a snail and about as trusting. Bunch of empty woods is what it was. Yet still the skin prickled on the back of her neck like little ghoul crawling its way up her spine. Keep moving. Step by careful step away from the path, surrounded by shadow trees and mummer air. More than one small beast scurried out of her way, but still Rory couldn't relax. Couldn't even pretend. Not here, alone and in the near dark, prickling like the skin had gone bad. No bloke in his right sausage roll tramps out here roundabouts midnight for a bloody picnic. The trees seemed to thicken around her, their root-heavy trunks muscling in until Rory almost felt she could bounce a coin off their stony bark. She couldn't quite place it, but the more she trudged on, the more the trees felt cage-worn and specious. Like leering onlookers watching her bumble wordlessly deeper into their snug fold. Another few paces and the trees abruptly gave way. Rory nearly stumbled into the open space, one hand flying out to brace herself against the nearest trunk. And there in the middle of it all waited the bloody grove and a woman who could have been Rory herself, down to the small scar on her left wrist.
created_at"2026-02-17T02:19:34.912317+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:19:34 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
87.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount385
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount385
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"sense of"
count1
2
word"crystal"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"sense of"
2"crystal"
3"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences26
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences26
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences26
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords387
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount387
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Hel1
Riven1
persons
0"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.596
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences22
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place it, but the more she trudged on, the more the trees felt cage-worn and specious"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords2.584
wordCount387
matches
0"Not even halfway in and already Rory wanted to be anywhere but here"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
68.07% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs8
mean48.38
std18.78
cv0.388
sampleLengths
054
181
225
350
464
556
635
722
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences26
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs59
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences26
ratio0.077
matches
0"The directions had been crystal clear – follow the path to the standing stones, turn left, and keep going until you reach a grove with wildflowers that bloom year round."
1"But there was work to be done – Hel portals to close, and Riven to contain."
94.30% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount387
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.046511627906976744
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.01808785529715762
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences26
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences26
mean14.88
std8.65
cv0.581
sampleLengths
016
138
230
34
413
516
618
712
813
91
108
1111
128
1320
142
1515
1615
173
1815
1916
2025
2119
2212
239
2418
2530
96.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.8076923076923077
totalSentences26
uniqueOpeners21
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences24
matches
0"Just more trees, ninny, have"
1"More than one small beast"
ratio0.083
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount1
totalSentences24
matches
0"She couldn't quite place it,"
ratio0.042
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount10
totalSentences24
matches
0"Rory's breath misted in the"
1"The glow of her phone"
2"The directions had been crystal"
3"Piece of piss, really."
4"A twig snapped behind her"
5"Bunch of empty woods is"
6"The trees seemed to thicken"
7"She couldn't quite place it,"
8"Another few paces and the"
9"Rory nearly stumbled into the"
ratio0.417
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences24
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The glow of her phone screen illuminated just enough to see the path ahead, but not nearly enough to ease the creeping sense of wrongness that had dogged her fr…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.5809%