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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPAWKN9CJ2BJFPD62413S6
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Model:
Rocinante 12B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
23.7s
Cost:
$0.000890
Provider:
NextBit
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Rory pushed through the heavy green door marked with the peculiar bird logo, stepping into The Raven's Nest for the first time since she was 17. The ambience hit her like nostalgia: the same worn wooden bar top, the same Wellies on the shelf, even the same godforsaken neon sign buzzing outside. She didn't know what made her come back. Curiosity. Recklessness. Or just plain loneliness. The place was dimly lit, even more so than she remembered. A dozen regulars hunched over pints at splintered tables, trading idle chatter around the fried bits of bullshit on their plates. Front and center, nursing a tumbler of something amber - was that actually Silas? Silver-haired Silas, who'd given her a pocket knife on her 18th birthday and chuckled when she fumbled with the steel. The man
was clocking
toward 60 now, joints probably stiffening up like his lame-ass sense of humor. Rory
started to
ward the bar, then stopped. There he was, at that old wooden table by the window where they'd plotted their adolescence. Cameron. Her
jaw clenched
. She almost turned around right then. But something kept her feet planted and her eyes glued to that window table, watching his hands fiddle absently with a coaster. The night played it forward in slow motion. Rory found herself cheated into a pivot, into a stride, into a chair across from Cameron. Siting. Sliding her pint glass to center, leaving the empty table between them a goddamn wasteland. "Been hide n' seek for a spell, have we?" Her voice cracked. This was more confrontation than she'd anticipated. "Haven't seen you in ages. CCTV assumed you vanished off the face of the earth." "Nope." Cameron said with a chuckle, popping the P for punctuation. "Just pursuing some pipes and other psychic exertions." He swiveled back into bar code. Said nothing. Waited. Rory drank deeply from her glass. Tasted only regret. "No cigarettes tonight?" Cameron finally asked, his hazel eyes bright in the shadowed room. "Haven't had 'nem lately." Rory cottonmouthed. This bar was definitely the same. Silence stretched between them again. It'd always been this way, when they were younger. They were each both scorpions and frogs, bucking at getting pinned down, at having to divulge even the tiniest peek across the veil of their identities. Sticking to surface-level sass, like salt that failed to disguise the dirt. Cameron looked older than his 40 years. For the first time since they'd crossed paths again, Rory noticed age lines parenthesesing his mouth. Newer, not deeper slabs of steel that barbed his strong jawline. He still dyed his short hair a raven black, the same monochrome cut he rocked in high school. There'd been a time when they were kids that she almost called Cameron by his given name -
Marcus
. That's what the flurry of church ladies called him back then. But she'd stopped using it after they'd long drifted apart, after she'd become an adult, after the world had broken her. Something about seeing that secret smile, that cheeky scruff, that same old dapper magic in his eyes reminded her of Silly, the boy she grew up with, not the marked-up paper pusher's pawn she'd heard lean security types draw as the Spymaster's main apprentice. Rory tried again, from a better angle this time. "So how's the straight life treat ya?" She
tried to
keep her tone light, her delivery spiked similarly to when she used to tease him about his "fancy pants." But her voice crackled with resentment. You've become just another tool of the Crown, was what she
really
meant. While I'm ached on the edges of the underworld. Cameron responded, of course, with a smug quirk of the smirk. "Not bad, not bad at all. Unlike some people..." The inference dripped like blood from the barbed end of a rust-eaten hook. "What about ye? Still chaslat about? What that Welsh blood be tellin' you to do out there, running streets, insurgent lasses abusing country mods?" "Aye, like that. Yeah, I'm still me, luv." Rory elbow to jaw, unfurling the hey-what's-up banner of bravado over their non-starter conversation. "Just wearing muck on muck out there, that's alright. Life's all fine. delivery-truck, 20-year olds a'mσκε. Some big plans with Em inerding catching up and whatnot." Her lie felt heavy, and seeing him - this him, now older, quieter,
being delivered
in hasty, evocative snapshots in her mind that were just flashbacks of the past. Seeing him and
seeing that place
- two things for one, two pillars of once-known extremes standing
stark
comparison to what and who they've become. Her mind raced. There was too much backlog, too many years to process. What had sum up? What missing chunks to cut from the core to fit in their allotted catching-up time? Rory cleared her glass in one swift, heavy motion. Purposeful, but bordering on desperate. "Look, luv, I gotta 'ead out. You..." She paused. Part of her wanted to kick him out, to banish this reel of the past from her mind, never to be stacked with flannel clothes in the back of her brain's closet ever again. She couldn't allow this to progress beyond today. She couldn't turn back into the same her/his, the we/here. Not after the road she'd walked alone for so long now. But this was Cameron, the same arrogantly smirking face used to leer back at her through young sarcasm and middle school frustration. "I gotta 'ead out. You..." repeat. Then a pause, the hanging space of her brutal decision. "Wanna grab a cab or something? Catch up more?" Maybe she wanted to know. Maybe she was too curious. Or maybe, just maybe, she was ready to trade the fight for a truce. Tonight, British Summer's windblown night was heavy with Kettlehead's smoke and ale, but it felt almost logical, breathing approximately into the same space as Cameron. Maybe it was the booze talking. The way the booze makes each person breathe, in roughly
calculated
beats. One inhale per speech, instant turnaround between tenses. Maybe it was the booze making them drink their words in grande, ghosting from past to present, as if a decade of extra skin pinned down their old movement of fancy flames. "Sure." Cameron's reply came out smooth, measured, all in the same tone as Jimmy's BandAM. "Let's
take that cab
." Rory left the pint on the table, nodding to go. Her mind clouded over as thick as CCTV's bars. She was drunk, but she figured if he was game, so be it. Cameron was still the game, and she was back in it to win it. Buhjeez, she was back in the game. What's this nostalgia? These déjà vu's that littered her life, that followed her around like old ghosts threatening to smother up her space? Or just little moments, little touches, yesterday's memory bleeding into this phase of her life? "Cause they are in each other's minds, now more than ever. Not just her thoughts, but his. What he did that led here. So
ended that day
. And then... Well, here in, here now - the future - though unseen in advance-her talk is in the now, translated through booze, for her and him both. "And so, to her surprise, Rory found herself sipping and noshing tales of past and present in draught-and-bite fashion, face to face with that old devil Cameron, marveling at the ebb and flow of life that only seems to make any sense through the lens of cold hard ale comps."
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:20:06.407138+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:20:06 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
92.0698%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1261
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"really"
80.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
0
"Marcus"
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
76.2094%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1261
totalAiIsms
3
found
0
word
"calculated"
count
1
1
word
"stark"
count
1
2
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
highlights
0
"calculated"
1
"stark"
2
"jaw clenched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
highlights
0
"jaw clenched"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
85
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
85
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
1
"tried to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
90
matches
0
"seeing that place "
1
"take that cab"
2
"ended that day"
50.9154%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
18
mean
69.56
std
22.83
cv
0.328
sampleLengths
0
66
1
83
2
55
3
111
4
78
5
103
6
44
7
66
8
57
9
48
10
86
11
108
12
74
13
58
14
19
15
53
16
67
17
76
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"being delivered"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
175
matches
0
"was clocking"
74.5258%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1065
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"same worn wooden bar"
1
"same old dapper magic"
adverbCount
59
adverbRatio
0.05539906103286385
lyAdverbCount
15
lyAdverbRatio
0.014084507042253521
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
90
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
90
mean
13.91
std
12.98
cv
0.933
sampleLengths
0
26
1
26
2
8
3
1
4
1
5
4
6
11
7
21
8
14
9
20
10
17
11
7
12
16
13
1
14
3
15
6
16
22
17
8
18
16
19
1
20
15
21
12
22
7
23
15
24
11
25
14
26
2
27
1
28
6
29
3
30
14
31
6
32
6
33
5
34
9
35
26
36
12
37
7
38
16
39
11
40
18
41
19
42
11
43
21
44
44
45
9
46
35
47
13
48
9
49
11
97.7778%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.6
totalSentences
90
uniqueOpeners
54
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
92.4411%