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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPC53Q50E3639YXM1Q12VC
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Model:
Rocinante 12B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
15.8s
Cost:
$0.000869
Provider:
Infermatic
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
Aurora made her way down the narrow, neon-lit streets of Soho, her breath creating soft clouds in the chill London air. The night was young, but she was tired. Being on her feet all day, running errands for Yu-Fei, had taken more out of her than she cared to admit. Lost in thought, she barely noticed the distinctive green sign above the entrance until she was nearly past it. "The Raven's Nest?" she whispered, surprised. She hadn't set foot in this place since she fell out with Silas nearly three years ago. But it was warm, inviting even, and the prospect of sinking into a booth and losing herself for a while
seemed to
o good to pass up. The door creaked open, and the warmth enveloped her as she stepped inside. It was just as she remembered - dim lighting, the smell of aged whiskey and pipe tobacco, the low murmur of voices. And there, behind the bar, was Silas himself, his grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard barely longer than she recalled. He
was polishing
a glass, his movements slow and precise. He looked up, and their eyes met. For a moment, he just stared. Then,
slowly
, a smile spread across his face. "Rory," he said
softly
, almost reverently. She felt herself flush. "Si," she replied, surprised at the stew of emotions his presence evoked - joy, longing, regret, anger. She looked away,
suddenly
unsure. "Mind if I...?" "Of course not," he said, gesturing to an empty booth. "Can I get you anything? Usual?" She nodded, sinking into the worn leather. She watched him pour her a double shot of Pappy Van Winkle, the amber liquid catching the dim light. He set it down in front of her, his hand lingering on the glass for just a moment. "You're a sight for sore eyes," he said, sliding into the booth across from her. "What brings you here after all this time?" Aurora took a sip, savoring the warmth as it spread through her. "Long story," she said, and smiled wryly. "How have you been? I always... I always meant to come by, but... well, you know." He shrugged, but she noticed the way his eyes clouded. "I've been alright," he said. "The bar keeps me busy. Ah, basic indisposed." He made a small gesture with his hands, the universal sign of "working." Aurora nodded, looking down at her glass. "Yeah, me too," she said. "Just temping, but it pays the bills, I guess." There was a beat of silence. Then Silas cleared his throat. "I heard you and Eva had a falling out," he said, his eyes searching her face. Aurora stiffened. "Yeah," she said, her voice tight. "She... she betrayed me. Used me to get what she wanted, just like everyone else." Silas nodded, his face sympathetic. "I'm sorry, Rory," he said. "I know how much she meant to you." "Is that why you didn't reach out?" she asked, her voice quavering
slightly
. "Because you thought I was still with her?" He looked away, his hand tightening on his glass. "No," he said, his voice low. "No, that's not why." Aurora felt her heart sink. "Then why?" she asked, her voice barely a whisper. He sighed, running a hand through his hair. "I don't know, Rory," he said, his voice heavy with regret. "I just... I didn't know what to say. I messed up, and I knew it. I thought... I thought maybe it was better to just let you go." Aurora felt the tears pricking at the corners of her eyes. She blinked them back, looking down at her glass. "You could have tried," she said, her voice low and thick with emotion. "You could have picked up the phone, sent a message, anything." Silas was silent for a long moment. Then,
slowly
, he reached out and covered her hand with his own. "I'm sorry, Rory," he said, his voice raw. "I was a fool. I should have tried harder to make things right." Aurora looked up at him, her blue eyes bright with unshed tears. She squeezed his hand, a small, bittersweet smile playing at the corners of her mouth. "It's alright," she said, her voice soft. "We've both made mistakes. We're here now." Silas nodded, his own eyes
glistening
. He raised his glass, and she raised hers to clink against it. "To new beginnings," he said. "And old friends," she replied, and they drank. And there, in that dimly lit booth, surrounded by the warmth and the noise and the ghosts of the past, Aurora felt something like hope kindling in her chest. If she and Silas could find their way back to each other after all this time, maybe there was still hope for her, for her future, for everything. Maybe it wasn't too late to make things right, to start over, to become who she was always meant to be. Silas looked at her, his hazel eyes searching her face. "So," he said, his voice gentle. "What do you say we start again? Fresh slate, clean page, all that?" Aurora smiled, and it felt like the sun breaking through the clouds. "I'd
like that," she
said. "I'd like that a lot." And so they talked, and laughed, and reminisced long into the night, the ghosts of the past drifting away like smoke on the London air. They were never going to be the same people they were before, but maybe that was okay. Maybe it was time to start again, to write a new story, one where they could be better, braver, kinder. And as the night wore on, and the fire burned low, Aurora felt something ease inside her, a tension she hadn't even realized she
was carrying
. Silas was here, and she was here, and together, they could face anything. Anything at all.
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2/17/2026, 2:20:39 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
22
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"he said softly, almost reverently [softly, almost reverently]"
1
"she said, and smiled wryly [wryly]"
48.6653%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
974
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
2
adverb
"softly"
count
1
3
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"slowly"
2
"softly"
3
"suddenly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
89.7331%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
974
totalAiIsms
1
found
0
word
"glistening"
count
1
highlights
0
"glistening"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
70
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
70
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"like that,\" she"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
34.75
std
18.11
cv
0.521
sampleLengths
0
50
1
68
2
73
3
20
4
29
5
16
6
44
7
23
8
35
9
36
10
21
11
27
12
23
13
18
14
21
15
19
16
14
17
47
18
44
19
40
20
41
21
23
22
8
23
78
24
29
25
22
26
62
27
42
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
70
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
143
matches
0
"was polishing"
1
"was carrying"
86.6043%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
743
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"narrow, neon-lit streets"
adverbCount
36
adverbRatio
0.04845222072678331
lyAdverbCount
14
lyAdverbRatio
0.018842530282637954
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
85
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
85
mean
11.45
std
6.63
cv
0.58
sampleLengths
0
21
1
8
2
21
3
19
4
6
5
17
6
26
7
13
8
22
9
21
10
10
11
7
12
6
13
8
14
6
15
4
16
17
17
5
18
3
19
10
20
6
21
7
22
19
23
18
24
15
25
8
26
12
27
7
28
16
29
10
30
5
31
21
32
7
33
5
34
9
35
6
36
5
37
16
38
2
39
6
40
15
41
5
42
5
43
8
44
13
45
8
46
9
47
6
48
4
49
5
58.0392%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.4117647058823529
totalSentences
85
uniqueOpeners
35
84.0909%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
22
fancyCount
8
fancyTags
0
"whispered (whisper)"
1
"he said softly, almost reverently (say softly)"
2
"she replied, surprised at the stew of emotions his presence evoked - joy, longing, regret, anger (reply, surprise evoke-long, regret, anger)"
3
"he said, gesturing to an empty booth (say, gesture)"
4
"he said, sliding into the booth across from her (say, slide)"
5
"she said, and smiled wryly (say, smile wryly)"
6
"he said, his eyes searching her face (say, search)"
7
"she replied, and they drank (reply, drink)"
92.1843%