| 23.53% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "she replied softly [softly]" | | 2 | "The glass glowed like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.895 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.176 | | effectiveRatio | 0.176 | |
| 89.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 984 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 984 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoes" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "testament" | | 4 | "furrowed" | | 5 | "processed" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "unspoken" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "flicked" | | 11 | "glint" | | 12 | "reminder" | | 13 | "tantalizing" | | 14 | "charged" | | 15 | "fleeting" | | 16 | "tension" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 92.84% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 989 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 851 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 2.23 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Muted | 1 | | Echoes | 1 | | Old | 1 | | Lovers | 1 | | February | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Eva | 8 | | Eyes | 1 | | Adventurous | 1 | | Silas | 11 | | Stateful | 1 | | Common | 1 | | Roryonce | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Muted" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Eyes" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Roryonce" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.384 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.89% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.011 | | wordCount | 989 | | matches | | 0 | "not from comfort but atonement" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 70.88% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 36.63 | | std | 14.58 | | cv | 0.398 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 45 |
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| 99.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "was asoothing" | | 1 | "was walking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "It was an old haunt, a place she and Eva used to frequent in the before - before theworld tipped on its axis and sent them careening in opposite directions." | | 1 | "But there was no time to dwell - the bar buzzed around them and therealms waiting to be breached between them yawned on the horizon like a chasm." | | 2 | "Rory sensed it too - the tug of once shared passions, the myriad of memories that threadedbetween them." | | 3 | "He poured himself a drink, ch receiver - an act born not from comfort but atonement." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 460 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.02608695652173913 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006521739130434782 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 15.22 | | std | 7.25 | | cv | 0.476 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 84.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5230769230769231 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she was walking out" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 82.30% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Her name was Aurora, but" | | 1 | "She stepped further into the" | | 2 | "It was an old haunt," | | 3 | "His hair was tufted with" | | 4 | "he drawled, his voice smooth" | | 5 | "She leaned onto the bar," | | 6 | "He gestured vaguely toward the" | | 7 | "he said,his voice mellow as" | | 8 | "She was about to speak" | | 9 | "Her name was Eva breve," | | 10 | "She'd changed somehow, becoming harder-edged," | | 11 | "Their eyes met, awash in" | | 12 | "Her voicecarried the ache of" | | 13 | "she replied softly, liking the" | | 14 | "Her gaze flicked to Silas," | | 15 | "Her eyes crinkled at the" | | 16 | "She glanced at Silas for" | | 17 | "she said, the words falling" | | 18 | "It was a fleeting touch," | | 19 | "Her gaze flicked at Silas," |
| | ratio | 0.344 | |
| 17.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The Muted Echoes of Old" | | 1 | "The warmth of the room" | | 2 | "The woman entered, shoulders hunched" | | 3 | "Her name was Aurora, but" | | 4 | "She stepped further into the" | | 5 | "It was an old haunt," | | 6 | "Silas, the barkeep, looked up" | | 7 | "His hair was tufted with" | | 8 | "he drawled, his voice smooth" | | 9 | "Rory replied with a wry" | | 10 | "She leaned onto the bar," | | 11 | "Silas brow furrowed briefly as" | | 12 | "Silas laughed , the sound" | | 13 | "He gestured vaguely toward the" | | 14 | "Rory nodded knowingly,even as a" | | 15 | "Silas reached for the bottle" | | 16 | "Evenafter years apart, some habits" | | 17 | "he said,his voice mellow as" | | 18 | "Rory's fingers circled the glass," | | 19 | "The whiskey sloshed,smooth and golden" |
| | ratio | 0.885 | |
| 81.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Even he felt the undercurrent" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory finishing her whiskey, setting the glass down with a decisive click that severed the chains ofsentiment." | | 1 | "Silas watched the real-time exchange, wishing somehow he could protect Rory from the pain that stretched between themlike a long-forgotten scar." |
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| 7.35% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "he drawled, his voice smooth and rich" | | 1 | "She leaned, her elbows a testament to her casual, Adventurous nature" | | 2 | "he said, his voice mellow as an aged wood" | | 3 | "she said, the words falling flat in the charged air" |
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| 13.64% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he drawled (drawl)" | | 1 | "Silas laughed (laugh)" | | 2 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.579 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.273 | | effectiveRatio | 0.273 | |